Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Twinkled
sorenbarrett said:
A rhyme with a message that comes through. Is it for fame or is it for the doing? Nicely said
April 28th, 2025 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
A rhyme with a message that comes through. Is it for fame or is it for the doing? Nicely said
April 28th, 2025 05:26
Reaching for sleep
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes the noise around us is overwhelming and silence is peace. Yet in this I sense a deeper metaphor where silence is not just of sound. Lovely
April 26th, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes the noise around us is overwhelming and silence is peace. Yet in this I sense a deeper metaphor where silence is not just of sound. Lovely
April 26th, 2025 07:33
Far amount
sorenbarrett said:
I used to love to watch the sky but with each passing year the visible stars grew fewer. The milky way that used to fill the sky has faded into city light and dimmed to just a few. This is a lovely write.
April 25th, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
I used to love to watch the sky but with each passing year the visible stars grew fewer. The milky way that used to fill the sky has faded into city light and dimmed to just a few. This is a lovely write.
April 25th, 2025 06:20
The way I be
sorenbarrett said:
We all are who we are and see though our eyes as long as we recognize that this is just who we are and not who others are is just fine. A wonderful write
April 24th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
We all are who we are and see though our eyes as long as we recognize that this is just who we are and not who others are is just fine. A wonderful write
April 24th, 2025 04:57
Rattled & Bored and waiting
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the first most original poem that depicts focus during times of boredom. The smallest things a drop or any type of noise can shift our focus. Very nicely depicted
April 23rd, 2025 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the first most original poem that depicts focus during times of boredom. The smallest things a drop or any type of noise can shift our focus. Very nicely depicted
April 23rd, 2025 05:35
Directing thought
sorenbarrett said:
With this comes thoughts of Carl Jung and his anima and animus both male and female parts of the individual\'s psyche. A most lovely write
April 22nd, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
With this comes thoughts of Carl Jung and his anima and animus both male and female parts of the individual\'s psyche. A most lovely write
April 22nd, 2025 05:40
Some Nights
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and missing the lost. Most people feel this at one time or another but to feel it constantly is a deep pain. A lonely poem
April 21st, 2025 15:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and missing the lost. Most people feel this at one time or another but to feel it constantly is a deep pain. A lonely poem
April 21st, 2025 15:22
Bones in a sac
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed I would agree in comparison to the others. A creative and interesting use of words to frame this poem that speaks to us in many ways. Physically, mentally, psychologically, socially and spiritually. There are many paths to pursue in this poem. A great metaphor and well written
April 20th, 2025 08:55
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed I would agree in comparison to the others. A creative and interesting use of words to frame this poem that speaks to us in many ways. Physically, mentally, psychologically, socially and spiritually. There are many paths to pursue in this poem. A great metaphor and well written
April 20th, 2025 08:55
Pointing pictures
sorenbarrett said:
I think I get the point lol. A most interesting form and rhyme in a poem that is pointedly sharp. Well done
April 19th, 2025 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
I think I get the point lol. A most interesting form and rhyme in a poem that is pointedly sharp. Well done
April 19th, 2025 07:58
A Colored Night
sorenbarrett said:
A very poetic description of fireworks that sparks memories and explodes in the mind as colorful as the actual display. Wonderful
April 18th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
A very poetic description of fireworks that sparks memories and explodes in the mind as colorful as the actual display. Wonderful
April 18th, 2025 09:19
Have fun, sell some words
sorenbarrett said:
A great technique and a fun poem all in one. I do that from time to time and in a poem as well. It can tell if anyone is really reading or just copying the remarks of someone else. A wonderful read and a fave
April 17th, 2025 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
A great technique and a fun poem all in one. I do that from time to time and in a poem as well. It can tell if anyone is really reading or just copying the remarks of someone else. A wonderful read and a fave
April 17th, 2025 16:06
For your review
Poetic Licence said:
A delicate write for and to the readers, very nicely done
April 17th, 2025 01:30
Poetic Licence said:
A delicate write for and to the readers, very nicely done
April 17th, 2025 01:30
For your review
sorenbarrett said:
A very personal poem offered to the readers. I would say thank your for your sharing.
April 16th, 2025 16:57
sorenbarrett said:
A very personal poem offered to the readers. I would say thank your for your sharing.
April 16th, 2025 16:57
Those people
sorenbarrett said:
A term one has to be careful using in these politically correct times. A poem about people that feel they are right and don\'t need to do the research or listen to reason. Nicely written
April 15th, 2025 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
A term one has to be careful using in these politically correct times. A poem about people that feel they are right and don\'t need to do the research or listen to reason. Nicely written
April 15th, 2025 05:21
Tormenting views
sorenbarrett said:
It is the contrast of a peaceful past with the violence of the present interspersed line between line that gives this poem its power and all set in good rhyme and meter nicely done
April 14th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
It is the contrast of a peaceful past with the violence of the present interspersed line between line that gives this poem its power and all set in good rhyme and meter nicely done
April 14th, 2025 05:12
I\'ve Lied
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness and regret that lives on in the absence of the other. We lie to ourselves at time about things that we want too much and force ourselves to believe and in believing others believe as well. Nicely written
April 13th, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness and regret that lives on in the absence of the other. We lie to ourselves at time about things that we want too much and force ourselves to believe and in believing others believe as well. Nicely written
April 13th, 2025 09:59
Listening to silence
sorenbarrett said:
So much in so little. As the noise diminishes the acuteness of hearing increases and so it is with many things. A lovely write
April 12th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
So much in so little. As the noise diminishes the acuteness of hearing increases and so it is with many things. A lovely write
April 12th, 2025 10:29
Shaking feeling
sorenbarrett said:
A traumatic loss is most difficult to overcome and putting the feelings on paper is sometimes the best way. Wishing you a mending day. Thank you for sharing.
April 11th, 2025 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
A traumatic loss is most difficult to overcome and putting the feelings on paper is sometimes the best way. Wishing you a mending day. Thank you for sharing.
April 11th, 2025 05:57
Shaking feeling
MDStone said:
I’m so sorry for the pain you feel. But I agree that we cannot avoid it. I only hope that in your pain are the good memories like old movies. Where we can sit and both cry and laugh at the same time. An excellent write. I’d say you played your hand well! Thanks for sharing.
April 11th, 2025 05:26
MDStone said:
I’m so sorry for the pain you feel. But I agree that we cannot avoid it. I only hope that in your pain are the good memories like old movies. Where we can sit and both cry and laugh at the same time. An excellent write. I’d say you played your hand well! Thanks for sharing.
April 11th, 2025 05:26
Shaking feeling
Libellule said:
Nicely done... the repetition works so well with this
April 11th, 2025 05:24
Libellule said:
Nicely done... the repetition works so well with this
April 11th, 2025 05:24
What are you thinking?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of drifting thoughts falling through a sifter. Well stated and penned
April 10th, 2025 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of drifting thoughts falling through a sifter. Well stated and penned
April 10th, 2025 13:53
Alone I think
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed and composed this poem speaks with quiet loneliness and brings feelings of melancholy. Beautifully penned
April 9th, 2025 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed and composed this poem speaks with quiet loneliness and brings feelings of melancholy. Beautifully penned
April 9th, 2025 08:33
Alone I think
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This poem has many different layers within it, there was a past present and eventually perhaps future part of this piece. I liked that you left it to the reader to fill in who it is or what that you are writing about. The ghost line can be a reference to the self also, meaning transformation. I enjoyed the read!
April 9th, 2025 06:59
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This poem has many different layers within it, there was a past present and eventually perhaps future part of this piece. I liked that you left it to the reader to fill in who it is or what that you are writing about. The ghost line can be a reference to the self also, meaning transformation. I enjoyed the read!
April 9th, 2025 06:59
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