Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Alone I think
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This poem has many different layers within it, there was a past present and eventually perhaps future part of this piece. I liked that you left it to the reader to fill in who it is or what that you are writing about. The ghost line can be a reference to the self also, meaning transformation. I enjoyed the read!
April 9th, 2025 06:59
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This poem has many different layers within it, there was a past present and eventually perhaps future part of this piece. I liked that you left it to the reader to fill in who it is or what that you are writing about. The ghost line can be a reference to the self also, meaning transformation. I enjoyed the read!
April 9th, 2025 06:59
A good life
sorenbarrett said:
Every one has their definition of what the good life is. A good write
April 8th, 2025 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
Every one has their definition of what the good life is. A good write
April 8th, 2025 12:59
Distantly heard
sorenbarrett said:
A fun story of which myths are woven and fanciful though it be more truth than one can see. A lovely write.
April 7th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
A fun story of which myths are woven and fanciful though it be more truth than one can see. A lovely write.
April 7th, 2025 06:49
Just a drink
sorenbarrett said:
Real and metaphoric my favorite type of poetry. The feeling is not just poverty but freedom, when you have nothing there is nothing to loose. A beautiful poem in its imagery and rhyme it seems to flow from the heart that is drained but still beats a fave
April 6th, 2025 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
Real and metaphoric my favorite type of poetry. The feeling is not just poverty but freedom, when you have nothing there is nothing to loose. A beautiful poem in its imagery and rhyme it seems to flow from the heart that is drained but still beats a fave
April 6th, 2025 07:59
Forgotten and lost
sorenbarrett said:
Some memories need a trigger to detonate others duds lay buried beneath time and never resurface. A thoughtful poem of loss
April 5th, 2025 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
Some memories need a trigger to detonate others duds lay buried beneath time and never resurface. A thoughtful poem of loss
April 5th, 2025 07:13
The angers burn
sorenbarrett said:
Lies burn both the sender and receiver like a hot iron grabbed by two people at both ends. This poem seeps with emotion making it poetic.
April 4th, 2025 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Lies burn both the sender and receiver like a hot iron grabbed by two people at both ends. This poem seeps with emotion making it poetic.
April 4th, 2025 05:56
Blinded
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely penned this poem speaks of darkness and the spark of truth can light the way. Nicely done.
April 3rd, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely penned this poem speaks of darkness and the spark of truth can light the way. Nicely done.
April 3rd, 2025 07:20
Painted
sorenbarrett said:
We see what we want to see let it be of love, charity, kindness to oneself and all around you. A wonderful poem
April 2nd, 2025 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
We see what we want to see let it be of love, charity, kindness to oneself and all around you. A wonderful poem
April 2nd, 2025 06:48
Arching death
sorenbarrett said:
In the war of life death falls indiscriminately on all. We kill without seeing and die without knowing. A sad and powerful poem
April 1st, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
In the war of life death falls indiscriminately on all. We kill without seeing and die without knowing. A sad and powerful poem
April 1st, 2025 05:42
With birds
Poetic Licence said:
The desire to be free, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:31
Poetic Licence said:
The desire to be free, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:31
With birds
sorenbarrett said:
I think that most people have dreamed of being birds whether in dreams or as pilots of planes we long to soar. A lovely poem
March 31st, 2025 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
I think that most people have dreamed of being birds whether in dreams or as pilots of planes we long to soar. A lovely poem
March 31st, 2025 07:54
3 for thee
sorenbarrett said:
Although disjointed these three poems seem related. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Although disjointed these three poems seem related. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 08:57
A thing I do
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination knows no bounds and with it one can rationalize almost anything. A fun write
March 29th, 2025 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination knows no bounds and with it one can rationalize almost anything. A fun write
March 29th, 2025 07:24
I will always
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate statement of their pride and dedication to their country, enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 20:43
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate statement of their pride and dedication to their country, enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 20:43
The day to come
Poetic Licence said:
That is simply a wonderful write, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 07:38
Poetic Licence said:
That is simply a wonderful write, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 07:38
The day to come
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poetic description of the cycle of light and day. Masterful!
March 27th, 2025 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poetic description of the cycle of light and day. Masterful!
March 27th, 2025 06:28
It peers
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor and so well penned in this magnificent poem a fave
March 26th, 2025 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor and so well penned in this magnificent poem a fave
March 26th, 2025 05:43
It peers
MDStone said:
Wow, well written with great expression and feeling… but not on the sleeve. Thanks for sharing.
March 26th, 2025 05:20
MDStone said:
Wow, well written with great expression and feeling… but not on the sleeve. Thanks for sharing.
March 26th, 2025 05:20
The label
sorenbarrett said:
A horrific image presented in how we look for the easy way out and find it is not the easy way. What we do to others when we take that path. A dark write that presents the consequences of artificial peace. Nicely written a fave
March 25th, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
A horrific image presented in how we look for the easy way out and find it is not the easy way. What we do to others when we take that path. A dark write that presents the consequences of artificial peace. Nicely written a fave
March 25th, 2025 05:34
It\'s too late
sorenbarrett said:
Some times one has to admit defeat to the clock of time and move on. A great poem of regret.
March 24th, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Some times one has to admit defeat to the clock of time and move on. A great poem of regret.
March 24th, 2025 06:50
Processing a thought
Poetic Licence said:
This is a great write, the progress of a poem and how it developes, loved the lay out, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 11:54
Poetic Licence said:
This is a great write, the progress of a poem and how it developes, loved the lay out, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 11:54
Processing a thought
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the evolution of a poem. Many times this process occurs to me in the writing and then the process of selection. Which will it be. This is the first time that I have seen this process laid out in sequential poems. Lovely
March 23rd, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the evolution of a poem. Many times this process occurs to me in the writing and then the process of selection. Which will it be. This is the first time that I have seen this process laid out in sequential poems. Lovely
March 23rd, 2025 06:44
Lost time
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write with an individual way of reflection, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 10:38
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write with an individual way of reflection, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 10:38
Lost time
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous reflection on things past and learned now neglected. A great insight. Very well written this poem encapsulates wisdom seldom thought of.
March 22nd, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous reflection on things past and learned now neglected. A great insight. Very well written this poem encapsulates wisdom seldom thought of.
March 22nd, 2025 06:39
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