Comments received on poems by Maplespal
last nights end
Dan Williams said:
Dare I add \"easily read\"? Clever and even amusing.
September 22nd, 2024 01:23
Dan Williams said:
Dare I add \"easily read\"? Clever and even amusing.
September 22nd, 2024 01:23
last nights end
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! This is so charming and verily quite beautiful, so much so it nearly takes away my breath! How winsomely rendered with a warming poignancy which takes away all reservations in the glow of sweet rest. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 21st, 2024 16:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! This is so charming and verily quite beautiful, so much so it nearly takes away my breath! How winsomely rendered with a warming poignancy which takes away all reservations in the glow of sweet rest. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 21st, 2024 16:11
Where you belong
Doggerel Dave said:
Colonialism and the big carve up. Africa never stood a chance.
September 19th, 2024 17:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Colonialism and the big carve up. Africa never stood a chance.
September 19th, 2024 17:31
A feeling to write
arial said:
Don\'t need to make it pretty and that\'s the hidden beauty of poetry ..just write your mind..and you will see a masterpiece yourself presents to you..as an intellectual being..
September 13th, 2024 12:15
arial said:
Don\'t need to make it pretty and that\'s the hidden beauty of poetry ..just write your mind..and you will see a masterpiece yourself presents to you..as an intellectual being..
September 13th, 2024 12:15
A feeling to write
sorenbarrett said:
I too feel compelled to write things and it doesn\'t matter if they mean anything to others as long as they do to you.
September 13th, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
I too feel compelled to write things and it doesn\'t matter if they mean anything to others as long as they do to you.
September 13th, 2024 06:02
Me described by-way-of “in & out”
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun thus delineated to effect, this ramble through the years and days of your life in such a fashion delightful. Thank you very much for sharing! Beautifully rendered with excellent details and a subtle poignancy.
September 11th, 2024 08:47
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun thus delineated to effect, this ramble through the years and days of your life in such a fashion delightful. Thank you very much for sharing! Beautifully rendered with excellent details and a subtle poignancy.
September 11th, 2024 08:47
Me described by-way-of “in & out”
Doggerel Dave said:
After that I would have felt better, but how do you feel? (In monorhyme please🙃)
Enjoyed.
September 11th, 2024 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
After that I would have felt better, but how do you feel? (In monorhyme please🙃)
Enjoyed.
September 11th, 2024 07:20
Me described by-way-of “in & out”
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s a lot of ins and outs. A most fun read
September 11th, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s a lot of ins and outs. A most fun read
September 11th, 2024 06:13
The power of belief & They are only painted
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many taking it all
Literally
Not looking at it
Symbolically
September 10th, 2024 18:49
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many taking it all
Literally
Not looking at it
Symbolically
September 10th, 2024 18:49
99 Red balloons
2781 said:
I heard that in Ukraine the fighters are now in their 50\'s.
They\'ve lost their youth.
September 9th, 2024 07:48
2781 said:
I heard that in Ukraine the fighters are now in their 50\'s.
They\'ve lost their youth.
September 9th, 2024 07:48
99 Red balloons
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful commemoration of the madness of war. Wars fought for misplaced religious beliefs, greed, and power. All illusions and lies. Very nicely written.
September 9th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful commemoration of the madness of war. Wars fought for misplaced religious beliefs, greed, and power. All illusions and lies. Very nicely written.
September 9th, 2024 06:48
Your calming song
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I am at a loss for words! This is so heartbreaking! You\'re killing me! I cannot go there with my father or my mother, for it kills me. Oh, how gently you frame a heartwrenching reality which haunts hour after hour interminably, the subtly growing poignancy driving the facts into place with that perfect conclusion. Thank si very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 18:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I am at a loss for words! This is so heartbreaking! You\'re killing me! I cannot go there with my father or my mother, for it kills me. Oh, how gently you frame a heartwrenching reality which haunts hour after hour interminably, the subtly growing poignancy driving the facts into place with that perfect conclusion. Thank si very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 18:58
Your calming song
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and missing the departed remains the theme in this poem. Nicely written
September 8th, 2024 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and missing the departed remains the theme in this poem. Nicely written
September 8th, 2024 06:29
I have to wait
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read. It has a somewhat nihilistic or I don’t care approach which I like. Dialogue type form fits this well. Nicely done.
September 6th, 2024 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read. It has a somewhat nihilistic or I don’t care approach which I like. Dialogue type form fits this well. Nicely done.
September 6th, 2024 04:44
What is the word?
Dan Williams said:
Damned if I know. Gets a person thinking though.
September 6th, 2024 01:08
Dan Williams said:
Damned if I know. Gets a person thinking though.
September 6th, 2024 01:08
How do I speak to you?
orchidee said:
Good write M.
Meanwhile in cuckoo land - I\'m horrible - don\'t speak to me. I only say \'Go away!\' (heehee).
September 5th, 2024 08:54
orchidee said:
Good write M.
Meanwhile in cuckoo land - I\'m horrible - don\'t speak to me. I only say \'Go away!\' (heehee).
September 5th, 2024 08:54
How do I speak to you?
sorenbarrett said:
A very poignant question. What do we say to one who is gone? What words can make a difference very nicely written
September 5th, 2024 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
A very poignant question. What do we say to one who is gone? What words can make a difference very nicely written
September 5th, 2024 06:10
What is the word?
sorenbarrett said:
I search for the same word. It seems somehow buried deep inside, but my memory cannot retrieve it. Weather in poems or in conversation I often search for it.. I think it sometimes is generosity charity love but no word can express it. Nicely done.
September 5th, 2024 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
I search for the same word. It seems somehow buried deep inside, but my memory cannot retrieve it. Weather in poems or in conversation I often search for it.. I think it sometimes is generosity charity love but no word can express it. Nicely done.
September 5th, 2024 05:56
What is the word?
Cheeky Missy said:
It was on the tip of my tongue until you asked. Um, just give me...an eternity. I\'ll get back to you.
September 4th, 2024 19:18
Cheeky Missy said:
It was on the tip of my tongue until you asked. Um, just give me...an eternity. I\'ll get back to you.
September 4th, 2024 19:18
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