Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
DESOLATION TWO ~ A Sonnet
Augustus said:
No rug rats, ladies boudoir. Where do I sign on? Heh. Heh. Until tomorrow. Hugs.
November 18th, 2016 16:08
Augustus said:
No rug rats, ladies boudoir. Where do I sign on? Heh. Heh. Until tomorrow. Hugs.
November 18th, 2016 16:08
DESOLATION TWO ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Very well written! Now if you found your sisters they would be adults 52 and 54, and life in the middle ages besides the plague was so harsh you might not find them alive. During the plague I wonder if you\'d find the laughter of children at all. Oh, I can\'t wait to see what it is that you saw!!! Waiting on tomorrow....
November 18th, 2016 10:06
Christina8 said:
Very well written! Now if you found your sisters they would be adults 52 and 54, and life in the middle ages besides the plague was so harsh you might not find them alive. During the plague I wonder if you\'d find the laughter of children at all. Oh, I can\'t wait to see what it is that you saw!!! Waiting on tomorrow....
November 18th, 2016 10:06
DESOLATION TWO ~ A Sonnet
Tony36 said:
Awesome Awesome write just like part one
November 18th, 2016 08:29
Tony36 said:
Awesome Awesome write just like part one
November 18th, 2016 08:29
DESOLATION ONE ~ A Sonnet
willyweed said:
they say you can never go home, again. so far so good I like this Brian, bring it! ww
November 17th, 2016 21:50
willyweed said:
they say you can never go home, again. so far so good I like this Brian, bring it! ww
November 17th, 2016 21:50
DESOLATION ONE ~ A Sonnet
Augustus said:
If this is Mithras from 100-400 AD it signifies one thing. If not I\'m lost. Can\'t wait for second installment.
November 17th, 2016 19:16
Augustus said:
If this is Mithras from 100-400 AD it signifies one thing. If not I\'m lost. Can\'t wait for second installment.
November 17th, 2016 19:16
DESOLATION ONE ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Great job, Brian!!Your hopes were up with the looks of an idyllic looking city that you remembered only to be greeted with cavernous darkness & desolation. Often in life our hopes are up only to come crashing down. Can\'t wait for your post tomorrow! Hugs-Christina
November 17th, 2016 10:35
Christina8 said:
Great job, Brian!!Your hopes were up with the looks of an idyllic looking city that you remembered only to be greeted with cavernous darkness & desolation. Often in life our hopes are up only to come crashing down. Can\'t wait for your post tomorrow! Hugs-Christina
November 17th, 2016 10:35
C O M M U N I T Y
JustABird said:
Ooh. I really like this one. It\'s always nice to have a place you feel like you belong. Thanks for always being so welcoming and encouraging. Brian!
November 16th, 2016 17:05
JustABird said:
Ooh. I really like this one. It\'s always nice to have a place you feel like you belong. Thanks for always being so welcoming and encouraging. Brian!
November 16th, 2016 17:05
C O M M U N I T Y
Augustus said:
I always enjoyed working on teams.Nicely done.
November 16th, 2016 17:01
Augustus said:
I always enjoyed working on teams.Nicely done.
November 16th, 2016 17:01
C O M M U N I T Y
willyweed said:
your poem/message flows from the river of truth!
well done as per usual! peace ww
November 16th, 2016 11:19
willyweed said:
your poem/message flows from the river of truth!
well done as per usual! peace ww
November 16th, 2016 11:19
C O M M U N I T Y
Christina8 said:
I really like this rhymed acrostic! It makes you feel like we are in a community here and that whether happy or sad it\'s nice to leave a comment of encouragement.. Very well done! I like your note at the bottom! Hugs in spirit-Christina
November 16th, 2016 10:09
Christina8 said:
I really like this rhymed acrostic! It makes you feel like we are in a community here and that whether happy or sad it\'s nice to leave a comment of encouragement.. Very well done! I like your note at the bottom! Hugs in spirit-Christina
November 16th, 2016 10:09
C O M M U N I T Y
Tony36 said:
Great write, and I agree MPS is an awesome community to be a part of
November 16th, 2016 09:12
Tony36 said:
Great write, and I agree MPS is an awesome community to be a part of
November 16th, 2016 09:12
I LOVE YOU HONEY ~ A Sonnet
Augustus said:
I bet Honey is proud. P.S. Gave my first try at a sonnet today. Will publish soon.
November 15th, 2016 19:50
Augustus said:
I bet Honey is proud. P.S. Gave my first try at a sonnet today. Will publish soon.
November 15th, 2016 19:50
I LOVE YOU HONEY ~ A Sonnet
willyweed said:
Sounds like the perfect woman, nice poem and a joy to read. peace ww.
November 15th, 2016 16:12
willyweed said:
Sounds like the perfect woman, nice poem and a joy to read. peace ww.
November 15th, 2016 16:12
I LOVE YOU HONEY ~ A Sonnet
Stephanie Showers said:
LOVE it - what a wonderful declaration of love.
November 15th, 2016 12:35
Stephanie Showers said:
LOVE it - what a wonderful declaration of love.
November 15th, 2016 12:35
I LOVE YOU HONEY ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Well, if that\'s a picture of HONEY and she\'s spiritual and fit and wants to have your kids--whats not to love? She is gorgeous!---Well done sonnet -Hugs in the spirit--Christina (And if that not her, your poem still says it all, sounds like she\'s the one for you!)
November 15th, 2016 09:29
Christina8 said:
Well, if that\'s a picture of HONEY and she\'s spiritual and fit and wants to have your kids--whats not to love? She is gorgeous!---Well done sonnet -Hugs in the spirit--Christina (And if that not her, your poem still says it all, sounds like she\'s the one for you!)
November 15th, 2016 09:29
W O M A N ~ An Acrostic
Augustus said:
Personally I think this is flagrant pandering to the ladies. And, i wish I had written it. Heh. Heh.
November 14th, 2016 18:23
Augustus said:
Personally I think this is flagrant pandering to the ladies. And, i wish I had written it. Heh. Heh.
November 14th, 2016 18:23
W O M A N ~ An Acrostic
JustABird said:
Another great one, Brian. I don\'t necessarily think the last line is true, but I appreciate the humor. ;)
November 14th, 2016 13:56
JustABird said:
Another great one, Brian. I don\'t necessarily think the last line is true, but I appreciate the humor. ;)
November 14th, 2016 13:56
W O M A N ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:
wonderful acrostic, brian! The first line is my favorite! So complimentary! It was nice to read your authors notes too. the whole thing made me smile! Hugs in the spirit--Christina
November 14th, 2016 12:05
Christina8 said:
wonderful acrostic, brian! The first line is my favorite! So complimentary! It was nice to read your authors notes too. the whole thing made me smile! Hugs in the spirit--Christina
November 14th, 2016 12:05
W O M A N ~ An Acrostic
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Ha ha this enhances my feminine pride which is always bursting at the seams unlike those tomboyish women who regret being born women. It\'s a lovely super cool acrostic and humoured swell. And the author notes are even more hilarious and fun ha ha. Thanx for uplifting women\'s egos.
Is that u n yor family, the lady looks indianish though.
Do pls comment my latest too,
November 14th, 2016 08:14
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Ha ha this enhances my feminine pride which is always bursting at the seams unlike those tomboyish women who regret being born women. It\'s a lovely super cool acrostic and humoured swell. And the author notes are even more hilarious and fun ha ha. Thanx for uplifting women\'s egos.
Is that u n yor family, the lady looks indianish though.
Do pls comment my latest too,
November 14th, 2016 08:14
LET JESUS CHRIST BE PRAISED !
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful song! Love the sunset picture too! Thanks for sharing! Hugs in the spirit
November 13th, 2016 09:38
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful song! Love the sunset picture too! Thanks for sharing! Hugs in the spirit
November 13th, 2016 09:38
LET JESUS CHRIST BE PRAISED !
Tony36 said:
Great write a wonderful praise to God
November 13th, 2016 09:22
Tony36 said:
Great write a wonderful praise to God
November 13th, 2016 09:22
COLOR OF LIFE & LOVE ~ A Sonnet
Tony36 said:
Sad to see the colors go, great write
November 12th, 2016 09:14
Tony36 said:
Sad to see the colors go, great write
November 12th, 2016 09:14
COLOR OF LIFE & LOVE ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:
very interesting and well done!! I love your reference to fifty shades of grey (the book trilogy--my fav) Interesting on the color scheme. I dress in violet a lot! Thanks for sharing. Hugs in spirit-Christina
November 12th, 2016 08:22
Christina8 said:
very interesting and well done!! I love your reference to fifty shades of grey (the book trilogy--my fav) Interesting on the color scheme. I dress in violet a lot! Thanks for sharing. Hugs in spirit-Christina
November 12th, 2016 08:22
REMEMBRANCE DAY ~ An Acrostic
Augustus said:
It is almost 11 as I am reading. Great read.
November 11th, 2016 12:20
Augustus said:
It is almost 11 as I am reading. Great read.
November 11th, 2016 12:20
REMEMBRANCE DAY ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:
Very well done acrostic. In america, we celebrate Veterans day which is similiar, just to celebrate all those who have served our country. Thanks for sharing! Christina
November 11th, 2016 09:49
Christina8 said:
Very well done acrostic. In america, we celebrate Veterans day which is similiar, just to celebrate all those who have served our country. Thanks for sharing! Christina
November 11th, 2016 09:49
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