Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
ZIP ~ ZIP ~ HURRAH
SabreLi said:
It\'s nice to see some light hearted work :) A vey good piece with an appropriate amount of humour and nice rhymes, I like the nod to Elias Howe as well, it brings realism into such a simple daily object that we take for granted. Well done, and thanks for the great read :D xx
November 22nd, 2016 09:52
SabreLi said:
It\'s nice to see some light hearted work :) A vey good piece with an appropriate amount of humour and nice rhymes, I like the nod to Elias Howe as well, it brings realism into such a simple daily object that we take for granted. Well done, and thanks for the great read :D xx
November 22nd, 2016 09:52
I LOVE TO DANCE
Augustus said:
Fred Astaire was phenomenal. I met my wife out Cajun dancing in anew Orleans. Went every Thursday and Saturday nites for years. Enjoyed.
November 21st, 2016 17:03
Augustus said:
Fred Astaire was phenomenal. I met my wife out Cajun dancing in anew Orleans. Went every Thursday and Saturday nites for years. Enjoyed.
November 21st, 2016 17:03
I LOVE TO DANCE
Tony36 said:
Great write, I love to dance as well. A short little jig, or a nice long stride. I dance when ever I can. It is so much fun
November 21st, 2016 14:27
Tony36 said:
Great write, I love to dance as well. A short little jig, or a nice long stride. I dance when ever I can. It is so much fun
November 21st, 2016 14:27
I LOVE TO DANCE
Christina8 said:
This is a FANTASTIC poem! Love your rhyming style-aab. And I love to dance! A wonderful ode to dancing! I like all the cultural references too. Great job, Brian! Hugs in spirit--Christina
November 21st, 2016 12:37
Christina8 said:
This is a FANTASTIC poem! Love your rhyming style-aab. And I love to dance! A wonderful ode to dancing! I like all the cultural references too. Great job, Brian! Hugs in spirit--Christina
November 21st, 2016 12:37
I LOVE TO DANCE
WriteBeLight said:
You were really kicking up a storm! Liked it!
November 21st, 2016 07:02
WriteBeLight said:
You were really kicking up a storm! Liked it!
November 21st, 2016 07:02
HOW GREAT IS OUR GOD ! A Sonnet
Christina8 said:
I thought your sonnet was beautfiul , liked the metaphors of the first paragraph a lot! Job well done! Hugs in the spirit--Christina
November 20th, 2016 11:20
Christina8 said:
I thought your sonnet was beautfiul , liked the metaphors of the first paragraph a lot! Job well done! Hugs in the spirit--Christina
November 20th, 2016 11:20
HOW GREAT IS OUR GOD ! A Sonnet
Augustus said:
We need the wise men to help fix the world.
November 20th, 2016 10:30
Augustus said:
We need the wise men to help fix the world.
November 20th, 2016 10:30
HOW GREAT IS OUR GOD ! A Sonnet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS TONY ~ I knoiiw you always appreciate anything that brings GLORY to OUR GOD ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
November 20th, 2016 10:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS TONY ~ I knoiiw you always appreciate anything that brings GLORY to OUR GOD ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
November 20th, 2016 10:12
HOW GREAT IS OUR GOD ! A Sonnet
Tony36 said:
Great write really enjoyed reading it
November 20th, 2016 09:09
Tony36 said:
Great write really enjoyed reading it
November 20th, 2016 09:09
DESOLATION THREE ~ A Sonnet
Augustus said:
Glad there was a happy ending, I read that over 400 of these caves have been found with incredible stonework and statuary.
November 19th, 2016 11:24
Augustus said:
Glad there was a happy ending, I read that over 400 of these caves have been found with incredible stonework and statuary.
November 19th, 2016 11:24
DESOLATION THREE ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:
You did an awesome job on your saga. Glad you and your sisters made it out alive! Your sisters had to take some pretty gharish measures, but oddly made it to a very old age for the middle ages. glad to see it had a happy ending! Agape hugs--Christina
November 19th, 2016 10:40
Christina8 said:
You did an awesome job on your saga. Glad you and your sisters made it out alive! Your sisters had to take some pretty gharish measures, but oddly made it to a very old age for the middle ages. glad to see it had a happy ending! Agape hugs--Christina
November 19th, 2016 10:40
DESOLATION THREE ~ A Sonnet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS TONY ~ Pleased you liked it ~ Alls well that ends well ! BRIAN
November 19th, 2016 09:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS TONY ~ Pleased you liked it ~ Alls well that ends well ! BRIAN
November 19th, 2016 09:35
DESOLATION TWO ~ A Sonnet
Augustus said:
No rug rats, ladies boudoir. Where do I sign on? Heh. Heh. Until tomorrow. Hugs.
November 18th, 2016 16:08
Augustus said:
No rug rats, ladies boudoir. Where do I sign on? Heh. Heh. Until tomorrow. Hugs.
November 18th, 2016 16:08
DESOLATION TWO ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Very well written! Now if you found your sisters they would be adults 52 and 54, and life in the middle ages besides the plague was so harsh you might not find them alive. During the plague I wonder if you\'d find the laughter of children at all. Oh, I can\'t wait to see what it is that you saw!!! Waiting on tomorrow....
November 18th, 2016 10:06
Christina8 said:
Very well written! Now if you found your sisters they would be adults 52 and 54, and life in the middle ages besides the plague was so harsh you might not find them alive. During the plague I wonder if you\'d find the laughter of children at all. Oh, I can\'t wait to see what it is that you saw!!! Waiting on tomorrow....
November 18th, 2016 10:06
DESOLATION TWO ~ A Sonnet
Tony36 said:
Awesome Awesome write just like part one
November 18th, 2016 08:29
Tony36 said:
Awesome Awesome write just like part one
November 18th, 2016 08:29
DESOLATION ONE ~ A Sonnet
willyweed said:
they say you can never go home, again. so far so good I like this Brian, bring it! ww
November 17th, 2016 21:50
willyweed said:
they say you can never go home, again. so far so good I like this Brian, bring it! ww
November 17th, 2016 21:50
DESOLATION ONE ~ A Sonnet
Augustus said:
If this is Mithras from 100-400 AD it signifies one thing. If not I\'m lost. Can\'t wait for second installment.
November 17th, 2016 19:16
Augustus said:
If this is Mithras from 100-400 AD it signifies one thing. If not I\'m lost. Can\'t wait for second installment.
November 17th, 2016 19:16
DESOLATION ONE ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Great job, Brian!!Your hopes were up with the looks of an idyllic looking city that you remembered only to be greeted with cavernous darkness & desolation. Often in life our hopes are up only to come crashing down. Can\'t wait for your post tomorrow! Hugs-Christina
November 17th, 2016 10:35
Christina8 said:
Great job, Brian!!Your hopes were up with the looks of an idyllic looking city that you remembered only to be greeted with cavernous darkness & desolation. Often in life our hopes are up only to come crashing down. Can\'t wait for your post tomorrow! Hugs-Christina
November 17th, 2016 10:35
C O M M U N I T Y
JustABird said:
Ooh. I really like this one. It\'s always nice to have a place you feel like you belong. Thanks for always being so welcoming and encouraging. Brian!
November 16th, 2016 17:05
JustABird said:
Ooh. I really like this one. It\'s always nice to have a place you feel like you belong. Thanks for always being so welcoming and encouraging. Brian!
November 16th, 2016 17:05
C O M M U N I T Y
Augustus said:
I always enjoyed working on teams.Nicely done.
November 16th, 2016 17:01
Augustus said:
I always enjoyed working on teams.Nicely done.
November 16th, 2016 17:01
C O M M U N I T Y
willyweed said:
your poem/message flows from the river of truth!
well done as per usual! peace ww
November 16th, 2016 11:19
willyweed said:
your poem/message flows from the river of truth!
well done as per usual! peace ww
November 16th, 2016 11:19
C O M M U N I T Y
Christina8 said:
I really like this rhymed acrostic! It makes you feel like we are in a community here and that whether happy or sad it\'s nice to leave a comment of encouragement.. Very well done! I like your note at the bottom! Hugs in spirit-Christina
November 16th, 2016 10:09
Christina8 said:
I really like this rhymed acrostic! It makes you feel like we are in a community here and that whether happy or sad it\'s nice to leave a comment of encouragement.. Very well done! I like your note at the bottom! Hugs in spirit-Christina
November 16th, 2016 10:09
C O M M U N I T Y
Tony36 said:
Great write, and I agree MPS is an awesome community to be a part of
November 16th, 2016 09:12
Tony36 said:
Great write, and I agree MPS is an awesome community to be a part of
November 16th, 2016 09:12
I LOVE YOU HONEY ~ A Sonnet
Augustus said:
I bet Honey is proud. P.S. Gave my first try at a sonnet today. Will publish soon.
November 15th, 2016 19:50
Augustus said:
I bet Honey is proud. P.S. Gave my first try at a sonnet today. Will publish soon.
November 15th, 2016 19:50
I LOVE YOU HONEY ~ A Sonnet
willyweed said:
Sounds like the perfect woman, nice poem and a joy to read. peace ww.
November 15th, 2016 16:12
willyweed said:
Sounds like the perfect woman, nice poem and a joy to read. peace ww.
November 15th, 2016 16:12
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