Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
LIVING A LIFE THAT MATTERS ~ A Sonnet
SabreLi said:
A very sobering message which all should heed. The words are so true and yet, sadly, many people still live their lives along lines that will be forgotten when they depart. Well done on a very good piece which I have enjoyed reading and which I hope will have a positive impact on others :D xx
November 24th, 2016 16:19
SabreLi said:
A very sobering message which all should heed. The words are so true and yet, sadly, many people still live their lives along lines that will be forgotten when they depart. Well done on a very good piece which I have enjoyed reading and which I hope will have a positive impact on others :D xx
November 24th, 2016 16:19
LIVING A LIFE THAT MATTERS ~ A Sonnet
Augustus said:
Since my diagnosis my wife and I have a saying ---do what really matters. Helps put things in perspective. Nicely done. P.S. Was looking forward to one of Britain\'s finest on my poem yesterday, Pound Sterling? Thanks.
November 24th, 2016 10:29
Augustus said:
Since my diagnosis my wife and I have a saying ---do what really matters. Helps put things in perspective. Nicely done. P.S. Was looking forward to one of Britain\'s finest on my poem yesterday, Pound Sterling? Thanks.
November 24th, 2016 10:29
LIVING A LIFE THAT MATTERS ~ A Sonnet
Tony36 said:
Awesome and powerful write
November 24th, 2016 09:29
Tony36 said:
Awesome and powerful write
November 24th, 2016 09:29
LIVING A LIFE THAT MATTERS ~ A Sonnet
WriteBeLight said:
I lost a relative recently. This is very appropriate. I can relate and was reminded of her. Excellent tribute to what is really important.
November 24th, 2016 06:23
WriteBeLight said:
I lost a relative recently. This is very appropriate. I can relate and was reminded of her. Excellent tribute to what is really important.
November 24th, 2016 06:23
I LOVE TO DANCE
kalliefleur said:
your saucy poem is dazzling and filled with razzmatazz/loved font color, too!
That\'s what we are at core--dancing particles...
November 23rd, 2016 17:38
kalliefleur said:
your saucy poem is dazzling and filled with razzmatazz/loved font color, too!
That\'s what we are at core--dancing particles...
November 23rd, 2016 17:38
HOW GREAT IS OUR GOD ! A Sonnet
Mari said:
\'Like a snow capped mountain above a desert
He scatters the profound theories of Wise Men\'
Thinking that from the throne of God springs \' the river of life\', this comparison between the \'theories of Wise Men \' and the snow scattered in the desert leads to the idea that any thought is sterile in the absence of love. The idea of \'frozen thought\' is only suggested here - these unwritten epithets belong to your poem and make it be amazing.
November 23rd, 2016 15:53
Mari said:
\'Like a snow capped mountain above a desert
He scatters the profound theories of Wise Men\'
Thinking that from the throne of God springs \' the river of life\', this comparison between the \'theories of Wise Men \' and the snow scattered in the desert leads to the idea that any thought is sterile in the absence of love. The idea of \'frozen thought\' is only suggested here - these unwritten epithets belong to your poem and make it be amazing.
November 23rd, 2016 15:53
T H A N K S G I V I N G D A Y ~ An Acrostic
Elegant_Style said:
:) so happy that someone else is ready to shine a light on thanksgiving!! It\'s one of my fav holidays and not a lot of people think it\'s important anymore....
November 23rd, 2016 12:28
Elegant_Style said:
:) so happy that someone else is ready to shine a light on thanksgiving!! It\'s one of my fav holidays and not a lot of people think it\'s important anymore....
November 23rd, 2016 12:28
T H A N K S G I V I N G D A Y ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:
You must have worked very hard on this because its amazing! Thanksgiving acrostic is all in rhyme and the authors notes alone are remarkable. I didn\'t know what they ate at the White house in 1887! I always love your acrostics but I especially love this one! hugs in spirit--Christina
November 23rd, 2016 10:54
Christina8 said:
You must have worked very hard on this because its amazing! Thanksgiving acrostic is all in rhyme and the authors notes alone are remarkable. I didn\'t know what they ate at the White house in 1887! I always love your acrostics but I especially love this one! hugs in spirit--Christina
November 23rd, 2016 10:54
T H A N K S G I V I N G D A Y ~ An Acrostic
Gothic_Girl said:
I love this its amazing! you must have put a lot of work into it! this is awesome! *^^*
November 23rd, 2016 07:34
Gothic_Girl said:
I love this its amazing! you must have put a lot of work into it! this is awesome! *^^*
November 23rd, 2016 07:34
I LOVE TO DANCE
iRonnie said:
I looovvveed it. WriteBeLight said you were kicking up a storm, and that\'s exactly how I feel! It got me moving 🙃👍
November 23rd, 2016 02:51
iRonnie said:
I looovvveed it. WriteBeLight said you were kicking up a storm, and that\'s exactly how I feel! It got me moving 🙃👍
November 23rd, 2016 02:51
ZIP ~ ZIP ~ HURRAH
Elegant_Style said:
This is funny but also makes you think.... huh, everyday objects deserve some love
November 22nd, 2016 18:24
Elegant_Style said:
This is funny but also makes you think.... huh, everyday objects deserve some love
November 22nd, 2016 18:24
ZIP ~ ZIP ~ HURRAH
Christina8 said:
Thank goodness for the zipper! Very well crafted rhyming poem. And funny! Don\'t catch your willy in your zipper! lol And I can\'t imagine having to fumble with buttons-poor things! This is really well done! Hugs in the spirit-Christina
November 22nd, 2016 09:58
Christina8 said:
Thank goodness for the zipper! Very well crafted rhyming poem. And funny! Don\'t catch your willy in your zipper! lol And I can\'t imagine having to fumble with buttons-poor things! This is really well done! Hugs in the spirit-Christina
November 22nd, 2016 09:58
ZIP ~ ZIP ~ HURRAH
SabreLi said:
It\'s nice to see some light hearted work :) A vey good piece with an appropriate amount of humour and nice rhymes, I like the nod to Elias Howe as well, it brings realism into such a simple daily object that we take for granted. Well done, and thanks for the great read :D xx
November 22nd, 2016 09:52
SabreLi said:
It\'s nice to see some light hearted work :) A vey good piece with an appropriate amount of humour and nice rhymes, I like the nod to Elias Howe as well, it brings realism into such a simple daily object that we take for granted. Well done, and thanks for the great read :D xx
November 22nd, 2016 09:52
I LOVE TO DANCE
Augustus said:
Fred Astaire was phenomenal. I met my wife out Cajun dancing in anew Orleans. Went every Thursday and Saturday nites for years. Enjoyed.
November 21st, 2016 17:03
Augustus said:
Fred Astaire was phenomenal. I met my wife out Cajun dancing in anew Orleans. Went every Thursday and Saturday nites for years. Enjoyed.
November 21st, 2016 17:03
I LOVE TO DANCE
Tony36 said:
Great write, I love to dance as well. A short little jig, or a nice long stride. I dance when ever I can. It is so much fun
November 21st, 2016 14:27
Tony36 said:
Great write, I love to dance as well. A short little jig, or a nice long stride. I dance when ever I can. It is so much fun
November 21st, 2016 14:27
I LOVE TO DANCE
Christina8 said:
This is a FANTASTIC poem! Love your rhyming style-aab. And I love to dance! A wonderful ode to dancing! I like all the cultural references too. Great job, Brian! Hugs in spirit--Christina
November 21st, 2016 12:37
Christina8 said:
This is a FANTASTIC poem! Love your rhyming style-aab. And I love to dance! A wonderful ode to dancing! I like all the cultural references too. Great job, Brian! Hugs in spirit--Christina
November 21st, 2016 12:37
I LOVE TO DANCE
WriteBeLight said:
You were really kicking up a storm! Liked it!
November 21st, 2016 07:02
WriteBeLight said:
You were really kicking up a storm! Liked it!
November 21st, 2016 07:02
HOW GREAT IS OUR GOD ! A Sonnet
Christina8 said:
I thought your sonnet was beautfiul , liked the metaphors of the first paragraph a lot! Job well done! Hugs in the spirit--Christina
November 20th, 2016 11:20
Christina8 said:
I thought your sonnet was beautfiul , liked the metaphors of the first paragraph a lot! Job well done! Hugs in the spirit--Christina
November 20th, 2016 11:20
HOW GREAT IS OUR GOD ! A Sonnet
Augustus said:
We need the wise men to help fix the world.
November 20th, 2016 10:30
Augustus said:
We need the wise men to help fix the world.
November 20th, 2016 10:30
HOW GREAT IS OUR GOD ! A Sonnet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS TONY ~ I knoiiw you always appreciate anything that brings GLORY to OUR GOD ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
November 20th, 2016 10:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS TONY ~ I knoiiw you always appreciate anything that brings GLORY to OUR GOD ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
November 20th, 2016 10:12
HOW GREAT IS OUR GOD ! A Sonnet
Tony36 said:
Great write really enjoyed reading it
November 20th, 2016 09:09
Tony36 said:
Great write really enjoyed reading it
November 20th, 2016 09:09
DESOLATION THREE ~ A Sonnet
Augustus said:
Glad there was a happy ending, I read that over 400 of these caves have been found with incredible stonework and statuary.
November 19th, 2016 11:24
Augustus said:
Glad there was a happy ending, I read that over 400 of these caves have been found with incredible stonework and statuary.
November 19th, 2016 11:24
DESOLATION THREE ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:
You did an awesome job on your saga. Glad you and your sisters made it out alive! Your sisters had to take some pretty gharish measures, but oddly made it to a very old age for the middle ages. glad to see it had a happy ending! Agape hugs--Christina
November 19th, 2016 10:40
Christina8 said:
You did an awesome job on your saga. Glad you and your sisters made it out alive! Your sisters had to take some pretty gharish measures, but oddly made it to a very old age for the middle ages. glad to see it had a happy ending! Agape hugs--Christina
November 19th, 2016 10:40
DESOLATION THREE ~ A Sonnet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS TONY ~ Pleased you liked it ~ Alls well that ends well ! BRIAN
November 19th, 2016 09:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS TONY ~ Pleased you liked it ~ Alls well that ends well ! BRIAN
November 19th, 2016 09:35
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