Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING
Augustus said:
Yes, always so positive. And, instructive.
October 7th, 2016 21:47
Augustus said:
Yes, always so positive. And, instructive.
October 7th, 2016 21:47
CHRISTMAS FUTURE ?
vanabba3 said:
Hi Brian,
Ok, it's only fair, if I get Halloween, you get Christmas... lol I SO agree with what you have written and I love the acronym! I work at a college, and before that in a classroom setting in Early Childhood, it is very sad how we can't read the stories around the holidays that we used to because someone might get offended... You are so true, and even in cartoons we are seeing more X-mas than ever... Great work here!
October 7th, 2016 21:00
vanabba3 said:
Hi Brian,
Ok, it's only fair, if I get Halloween, you get Christmas... lol I SO agree with what you have written and I love the acronym! I work at a college, and before that in a classroom setting in Early Childhood, it is very sad how we can't read the stories around the holidays that we used to because someone might get offended... You are so true, and even in cartoons we are seeing more X-mas than ever... Great work here!
October 7th, 2016 21:00
THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING
avigail said:
lovely Brian good meditation of positive attitude
October 7th, 2016 19:26
avigail said:
lovely Brian good meditation of positive attitude
October 7th, 2016 19:26
THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING
Tony36 said:
Wonderful poem, count your blessings one by one
October 7th, 2016 13:58
Tony36 said:
Wonderful poem, count your blessings one by one
October 7th, 2016 13:58
WHAT MAKES YOUR DAY ?
alanis98 said:
Well done Briansodes its a very good poem I only hope my poems are as good as that one day. I have only just started really, and so far really enjoying it. But I wanted to say how good you are.
October 7th, 2016 10:52
alanis98 said:
Well done Briansodes its a very good poem I only hope my poems are as good as that one day. I have only just started really, and so far really enjoying it. But I wanted to say how good you are.
October 7th, 2016 10:52
REJOICE ~ TODAY IS POETRY DAY !
Tony36 said:
Speaks many truths my friend. Great write
October 6th, 2016 09:22
Tony36 said:
Speaks many truths my friend. Great write
October 6th, 2016 09:22
WHAT MAKES YOUR DAY ?
DD. said:
This is a very simplistic seeming poem, with a deeper underling tone, that hides the message of the poem. It simplifies our life, and makees us recognise what we have, and how we should be thankful for it.
Brilliant Work !!!!
October 6th, 2016 09:17
DD. said:
This is a very simplistic seeming poem, with a deeper underling tone, that hides the message of the poem. It simplifies our life, and makees us recognise what we have, and how we should be thankful for it.
Brilliant Work !!!!
October 6th, 2016 09:17
WHAT MAKES YOUR DAY ?
Augustus said:
Thanks for explaining the rhyme scheme. It has been > 50 years since I studied poetry composition. Also it appears that Wi Fi goes out at times in your neck of the woods. Enjoyed.
October 5th, 2016 17:17
Augustus said:
Thanks for explaining the rhyme scheme. It has been > 50 years since I studied poetry composition. Also it appears that Wi Fi goes out at times in your neck of the woods. Enjoyed.
October 5th, 2016 17:17
WHAT MAKES YOUR DAY ?
JustABird said:
This was a bright spot in my day, Brian. Great job.
October 5th, 2016 15:19
JustABird said:
This was a bright spot in my day, Brian. Great job.
October 5th, 2016 15:19
WHAT MAKES YOUR DAY ?
Whimsical_1 said:
What a wonderful poem, I love the rhyme sceem and the message is on the modern side and up beat. Great proem keep writting :)
October 5th, 2016 11:48
Whimsical_1 said:
What a wonderful poem, I love the rhyme sceem and the message is on the modern side and up beat. Great proem keep writting :)
October 5th, 2016 11:48
MY FIVE SENSES - HAIKU
Jade_Jester said:
Sorry, this is not a haiku.
Too many verses
October 4th, 2016 22:31
Jade_Jester said:
Sorry, this is not a haiku.
Too many verses
October 4th, 2016 22:31
TREES ~ HAIKU
Jade_Jester said:
sorry, but this isn't a haiku.
A haiku is three verses, no more no less.
The key is to tell a story/set a scene in small and simple words.
October 4th, 2016 22:30
Jade_Jester said:
sorry, but this isn't a haiku.
A haiku is three verses, no more no less.
The key is to tell a story/set a scene in small and simple words.
October 4th, 2016 22:30
CHRISTMAS PRESENT
Augustus said:
A kingdom afar of poetry wrest,
Brightens Yule Tide's swollen breast.
Unknown numbers do readily sate,
Praise this fountain of steady faith.
October 3rd, 2016 11:36
Augustus said:
A kingdom afar of poetry wrest,
Brightens Yule Tide's swollen breast.
Unknown numbers do readily sate,
Praise this fountain of steady faith.
October 3rd, 2016 11:36
CHRISTMAS PRESENT
avigail said:
dear Brain there is always a "struggle" between the tradition and habits and - the new... yet giving attention,love and care, stays forever. well written, love and hugs
October 3rd, 2016 10:05
avigail said:
dear Brain there is always a "struggle" between the tradition and habits and - the new... yet giving attention,love and care, stays forever. well written, love and hugs
October 3rd, 2016 10:05
CHRISTMAS PRESENT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In the UK CHRISTMAS starts in OCTOBER because we don't have Thanksgiving ! The 21st C Christmas is very different from the Victorian One ! I have also posted a FUSION ~ FESTIVALS I LOVE ~ Click on FUNCTIONING ~ Please add a stanza ~ OK ~ Thanks BRIAN
October 3rd, 2016 04:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In the UK CHRISTMAS starts in OCTOBER because we don't have Thanksgiving ! The 21st C Christmas is very different from the Victorian One ! I have also posted a FUSION ~ FESTIVALS I LOVE ~ Click on FUNCTIONING ~ Please add a stanza ~ OK ~ Thanks BRIAN
October 3rd, 2016 04:40
MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM
DezyraSatyre said:
Vivid imagery, like it a lot thanks for sharing.
October 2nd, 2016 09:35
DezyraSatyre said:
Vivid imagery, like it a lot thanks for sharing.
October 2nd, 2016 09:35
MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM
P.X. Vexxus said:
Halloween is the BEST. Liked your poem greatly :)
October 1st, 2016 15:05
P.X. Vexxus said:
Halloween is the BEST. Liked your poem greatly :)
October 1st, 2016 15:05
MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM
avigail said:
lovely writing.
why do we need masks when we change our images nonstop...
October 1st, 2016 11:29
avigail said:
lovely writing.
why do we need masks when we change our images nonstop...
October 1st, 2016 11:29
MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM
Augustus said:
The last one I went to I went as Willie Nelson. Good write.
October 1st, 2016 09:38
Augustus said:
The last one I went to I went as Willie Nelson. Good write.
October 1st, 2016 09:38
MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM
Jeff said:
Very well done Brian....you are certainly a talented writer...great job
October 1st, 2016 06:10
Jeff said:
Very well done Brian....you are certainly a talented writer...great job
October 1st, 2016 06:10
MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I love MASQUERADE PARTIES because I can assume an ALTER EGO and be Elvis or Donald Duck for a night or completely incognito behind a mask ! My favorite is HARLEQUIN because it is so so colorful and like a technicolor ONESIE ! BRIAN XOX
October 1st, 2016 03:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I love MASQUERADE PARTIES because I can assume an ALTER EGO and be Elvis or Donald Duck for a night or completely incognito behind a mask ! My favorite is HARLEQUIN because it is so so colorful and like a technicolor ONESIE ! BRIAN XOX
October 1st, 2016 03:01
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