Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
WHAT MAKES YOUR DAY ?
Whimsical_1 said:
What a wonderful poem, I love the rhyme sceem and the message is on the modern side and up beat. Great proem keep writting :)
October 5th, 2016 11:48
Whimsical_1 said:
What a wonderful poem, I love the rhyme sceem and the message is on the modern side and up beat. Great proem keep writting :)
October 5th, 2016 11:48
MY FIVE SENSES - HAIKU
Jade_Jester said:
Sorry, this is not a haiku.
Too many verses
October 4th, 2016 22:31
Jade_Jester said:
Sorry, this is not a haiku.
Too many verses
October 4th, 2016 22:31
TREES ~ HAIKU
Jade_Jester said:
sorry, but this isn't a haiku.
A haiku is three verses, no more no less.
The key is to tell a story/set a scene in small and simple words.
October 4th, 2016 22:30
Jade_Jester said:
sorry, but this isn't a haiku.
A haiku is three verses, no more no less.
The key is to tell a story/set a scene in small and simple words.
October 4th, 2016 22:30
CHRISTMAS PRESENT
Augustus said:
A kingdom afar of poetry wrest,
Brightens Yule Tide's swollen breast.
Unknown numbers do readily sate,
Praise this fountain of steady faith.
October 3rd, 2016 11:36
Augustus said:
A kingdom afar of poetry wrest,
Brightens Yule Tide's swollen breast.
Unknown numbers do readily sate,
Praise this fountain of steady faith.
October 3rd, 2016 11:36
CHRISTMAS PRESENT
avigail said:
dear Brain there is always a "struggle" between the tradition and habits and - the new... yet giving attention,love and care, stays forever. well written, love and hugs
October 3rd, 2016 10:05
avigail said:
dear Brain there is always a "struggle" between the tradition and habits and - the new... yet giving attention,love and care, stays forever. well written, love and hugs
October 3rd, 2016 10:05
CHRISTMAS PRESENT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In the UK CHRISTMAS starts in OCTOBER because we don't have Thanksgiving ! The 21st C Christmas is very different from the Victorian One ! I have also posted a FUSION ~ FESTIVALS I LOVE ~ Click on FUNCTIONING ~ Please add a stanza ~ OK ~ Thanks BRIAN
October 3rd, 2016 04:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In the UK CHRISTMAS starts in OCTOBER because we don't have Thanksgiving ! The 21st C Christmas is very different from the Victorian One ! I have also posted a FUSION ~ FESTIVALS I LOVE ~ Click on FUNCTIONING ~ Please add a stanza ~ OK ~ Thanks BRIAN
October 3rd, 2016 04:40
MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM
DezyraSatyre said:
Vivid imagery, like it a lot thanks for sharing.
October 2nd, 2016 09:35
DezyraSatyre said:
Vivid imagery, like it a lot thanks for sharing.
October 2nd, 2016 09:35
MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM
P.X. Vexxus said:
Halloween is the BEST. Liked your poem greatly :)
October 1st, 2016 15:05
P.X. Vexxus said:
Halloween is the BEST. Liked your poem greatly :)
October 1st, 2016 15:05
MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM
avigail said:
lovely writing.
why do we need masks when we change our images nonstop...
October 1st, 2016 11:29
avigail said:
lovely writing.
why do we need masks when we change our images nonstop...
October 1st, 2016 11:29
MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM
Augustus said:
The last one I went to I went as Willie Nelson. Good write.
October 1st, 2016 09:38
Augustus said:
The last one I went to I went as Willie Nelson. Good write.
October 1st, 2016 09:38
MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM
Jeff said:
Very well done Brian....you are certainly a talented writer...great job
October 1st, 2016 06:10
Jeff said:
Very well done Brian....you are certainly a talented writer...great job
October 1st, 2016 06:10
MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I love MASQUERADE PARTIES because I can assume an ALTER EGO and be Elvis or Donald Duck for a night or completely incognito behind a mask ! My favorite is HARLEQUIN because it is so so colorful and like a technicolor ONESIE ! BRIAN XOX
October 1st, 2016 03:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I love MASQUERADE PARTIES because I can assume an ALTER EGO and be Elvis or Donald Duck for a night or completely incognito behind a mask ! My favorite is HARLEQUIN because it is so so colorful and like a technicolor ONESIE ! BRIAN XOX
October 1st, 2016 03:01
WHERE ARE YOU ? SUPASONNET
Augustus said:
If I can choose I pick the chick. ThanX.
September 30th, 2016 16:27
Augustus said:
If I can choose I pick the chick. ThanX.
September 30th, 2016 16:27
WHERE ARE YOU ? SUPASONNET
avigail said:
we are all in our xbubblex
keep shining Brian
September 30th, 2016 10:27
avigail said:
we are all in our xbubblex
keep shining Brian
September 30th, 2016 10:27
LOVINGLY ~ SLOWLY ~ GENTLY
Jeff said:
I really like this one Brian....very well done. Great write
September 29th, 2016 08:51
Jeff said:
I really like this one Brian....very well done. Great write
September 29th, 2016 08:51
G I R L OF MY D R E A M S
rainbowhalo1 said:
can i borrow your girlfriend for a weekend.PLEASE.
September 28th, 2016 13:40
rainbowhalo1 said:
can i borrow your girlfriend for a weekend.PLEASE.
September 28th, 2016 13:40
MOUNTAIN STREAM ~ A Flow Poem ~ Sonnet
Tony36 said:
Makes me think of the Great Smokey Mountains In West Virginia. Always a thrill to travel through those parts
September 28th, 2016 13:00
Tony36 said:
Makes me think of the Great Smokey Mountains In West Virginia. Always a thrill to travel through those parts
September 28th, 2016 13:00
MOUNTAIN STREAM ~ A Flow Poem ~ Sonnet
Vic E said:
Excellent poem.
Never heard of a Flow Poem before. It is a beautiful format. I have written a few sonnets - English and Italian versions. It is my favorite poetry format.
September 28th, 2016 12:04
Vic E said:
Excellent poem.
Never heard of a Flow Poem before. It is a beautiful format. I have written a few sonnets - English and Italian versions. It is my favorite poetry format.
September 28th, 2016 12:04
G I R L OF MY D R E A M S
willyweed said:
This one is great Brian, reminds me of a piece I once wrote called midnight garden. very well done and very enjoyable to read. ww
September 27th, 2016 15:59
willyweed said:
This one is great Brian, reminds me of a piece I once wrote called midnight garden. very well done and very enjoyable to read. ww
September 27th, 2016 15:59
G I R L OF MY D R E A M S
SirKnight said:
Its a good match of two individuals that are in love!
September 27th, 2016 14:00
SirKnight said:
Its a good match of two individuals that are in love!
September 27th, 2016 14:00
G I R L OF MY D R E A M S
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds good to me !
September 27th, 2016 13:23
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds good to me !
September 27th, 2016 13:23
G I R L OF MY D R E A M S
avigail said:
Dear Brain
some people say: vision it - achieve it.
with regards to love i suggest - be flexible and open minded - as the Creator has a sense of humor with who is best for us :))
love and hugs
avigail
September 27th, 2016 09:29
avigail said:
Dear Brain
some people say: vision it - achieve it.
with regards to love i suggest - be flexible and open minded - as the Creator has a sense of humor with who is best for us :))
love and hugs
avigail
September 27th, 2016 09:29
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