Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



FOUR MEN IN A BOAT !
Tony36 said:

Funny yet with a message. Great write

December 16th, 2016 08:23

FOUR MEN IN A BOAT !
Christina8 said:

I found this story to be well written and so well rhymed. I agree it could be read to a child because it has a theme.The frog is my favorite~he \"started out as balls!\" \"He laughed as they faced oblivion....cos he\'s an amphibian\" But the moral as you say is that we truly can learn much from animals when it comes to survival. FANTASTIC! Hugs in spirit--Christina

December 16th, 2016 08:09

MY TREE FOR ALL SEASONS !
SabreLi said:

I always love a poem which takes me on a journey through the seasons; and one with such great imagery is a pleasure to read! Well done, Brian! :D xx

December 15th, 2016 09:14

CHRISTMAS JUMPERS ~ An Acrostic
Tony36 said:

Awesome and wonderful write

December 15th, 2016 09:12

CHRISTMAS JUMPERS ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:

Learned a new word today-jumper means sweater! Great poem Brian! I love how you make these acrostics rhyme! You did a fabulous job! Hugs in spirit--Christina

December 15th, 2016 06:35

S M I L I N G ~ An Acrostic
Faith_01 said:

This just made me smile:)

December 14th, 2016 17:31

CUDDLY TOYS ~ PERFECT
Faith_01 said:

This was really cute and it\'s making me buy a teddy bear:p XD

December 14th, 2016 17:30

C H R I S T M A S C A R D S ~ An Acrostic
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 14th, 2016 13:12

C H R I S T M A S C A R D S ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:

Excellent job, Brian! This was really well done! I always send out christmas cards but i hardly ever get but a handful back! Hugs in spirit--Christina

December 14th, 2016 10:39

MY TREE FOR ALL SEASONS !
JustABird said:

I think this may be my favorite of your poems, Brian. The personification of the trees is really great and makes me sympathetic to what they go through, whether it be playful little creatures hanging from their limbs or losing on of their prettiest features. Really great job.

December 13th, 2016 12:40

MY TREE FOR ALL SEASONS !
Tony36 said:

An awesome way to look at nature, great write

December 13th, 2016 10:14

MY TREE FOR ALL SEASONS !
Christina8 said:

i love your poems. I prefer a spring and summer tree myself. Very nice rhymes! Great job all around! Hugs in spirit--Christina

December 13th, 2016 05:31

ANTHROPOCENE PERIOD ~ THE AGE OF MAN
Christina8 said:

Very good acrostic. Extremely informative. Great authors notes too. Great job altogether! Hugs in spirit-Christina

December 12th, 2016 10:04

ANTHROPOCENE PERIOD ~ THE AGE OF MAN
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 12th, 2016 07:58

PRAISE THE LORD ~ IT\'S S U N D A Y A Sonnet
Tony36 said:

Excellent and well written

December 11th, 2016 10:08

PRAISE THE LORD ~ IT\'S S U N D A Y A Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Excellent poem Brian! I loved it! I also was intrigued about the part in your authors notes about singing giving you a longer life. Great job all around! Hugs in spirit--Christina

December 11th, 2016 09:42

C H R I S T M A S C R A C K E R S ~ An Acrostic
Augustus said:

Neat. Would love to experience.

December 10th, 2016 23:10

C H R I S T M A S C R A C K E R S ~ An Acrostic
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written poem

December 10th, 2016 18:40

C H R I S T M A S C R A C K E R S ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:

I have never heard of a christmas cracker so it was educational for me! Your poem was well done and funny and authors notes were very useful! Great job, Brian! Hugs in the spirit-Christina

December 10th, 2016 10:09

CUDDLY TOYS ~ PERFECT
Augustus said:

Best kind of toys. Thanks.

December 10th, 2016 00:05

CUDDLY TOYS ~ PERFECT
gelyn said:

Hi,

you\'ve done this effortlessly ...A double acrostic and the message still aligned with the words. ..

Critc:

Typo error with the title. ..

But all in all well done to this. .

Gel

December 9th, 2016 18:36

CUDDLY TOYS ~ PERFECT
Tony36 said:

Great write. Stuffed animals are the best

December 9th, 2016 14:44

CUDDLY TOYS ~ PERFECT
Christina8 said:

That was a really cute poem! Nice rhymes! You do very well with acrostics. Hugs in spirit--Christina

December 9th, 2016 11:48

S M I L I N G ~ An Acrostic
Quemis said:

haha!

Yes, this photo is a much better smile then the corporate stock one : )

: )

December 9th, 2016 10:18

CUDDLE ME ~ PLEASE !
Natalie Chew said:

I want to cuddle right now! I love your poem Brian. I also love the flow and the message.

December 9th, 2016 03:30

S M I L I N G ~ An Acrostic
Quemis said:

Is it ok that I read this as a horror story?

The stock photo is terrifying - so i read the whole thing as a kind of irony and in doing so liked it a heck of a lot. : )

December 9th, 2016 01:23

CUDDLE ME ~ PLEASE !
yellowskies said:

aww this is adorable

December 8th, 2016 18:09

S M I L I N G ~ An Acrostic
Augustus said:

It is amazing how receptive folks are when you change your attitude. Nice.

December 8th, 2016 16:34

S M I L I N G ~ An Acrostic
berdnt_victoria said:

Not all the time.. smiling doesn\'t work for me.. its just me hiding the pain inside of me.. something I always intend to do..

December 8th, 2016 12:12

S M I L I N G ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:

Nice poem, Brian! Wish you could see my smile! Yes, smiling certainly does make you feel better. Good one. Hugs in spirit--Christina

December 8th, 2016 11:56



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