Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



OUR TOWN CENTRES ? A Nostalgic Acrostic Sonnet !
Christina8 said:

I know exactly what you mean! Much of my little town seems like a ghost town, it\'s really quite sad. Great write!

June 8th, 2018 18:05

OUR TOWN CENTRES ? A Nostalgic Acrostic Sonnet !
orchidee said:

Oohh Petula is feisty! Now, now Orchi, you will bring on a swoon! lol. A fine write Brian.
I might have been downtown in 1967 - well, a bit young to be out at night then - but a classical \'nice\' sort of song. I gave up following the pop charts about 1985 I reckon!

June 8th, 2018 11:24

OUR TOWN CENTRES ? A Nostalgic Acrostic Sonnet !
Heartwriter said:

I do shop a little on line. But mostly in store. Because people need jobs. I appreciate your attention to this subject. Also, I hate the self serve registers. I never use them.

June 8th, 2018 08:57

OUR TOWN CENTRES ? A Nostalgic Acrostic Sonnet !
Lorna said:

And at least in the States, the closed shops represent a lot of misery behind the scenes for the people now out of work........

June 8th, 2018 08:10

OUR TOWN CENTRES ? A Nostalgic Acrostic Sonnet !
Michael Edwards said:

A sad reflection of the times. Shops are continually closing in my town but we are lucky in that they seem to be snapped up fairly quickly - it is a bit of a tourist town with mostly privately owned shops of the arty farty variety and very vibrant. Pity this isn\'t the case everywhere.

June 8th, 2018 03:05

OUR TOWN CENTRES ? A Nostalgic Acrostic Sonnet !
Fay Slimm. said:

Agree wholeheartedly Brian - how sad to see city and even small-town shops all boarded up. An apt and well written acrostic.

June 8th, 2018 01:50

FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving write Brian. Time will soon pass and you will be together again.

June 8th, 2018 00:14

FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

CIAO LAURA ~ Nostra Bella Amica ~ Pleased you enjoyed il CANTO e la CANTORE d\' Amore ! Yes that beautiful rendition of \"I will always Love You\" is the 1999 version by Witney and is considered her BEST ! Abbracci e Baci di BRIAN (UK) ed ANGELA (NZ) XOXOX

June 7th, 2018 10:48

FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY
Heartwriter said:

Beautifully written.

June 7th, 2018 10:19

FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY
Fay Slimm. said:

By the way that number you chose has been my favourite for ages.She knew how to appeal eh ?

June 7th, 2018 05:35

FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - a sweet and romantic tale of love when separated - your words echo clearly the depth of affection true love achieves. Thanks dear Brian for sharing this special dedication and hugs to your both .

June 7th, 2018 05:33

FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Bellissime quatrains dā€™amore!
Beautiful love quatrains!
I enjoyed all five...
and a perfect selection
of song! Whitney Houston
was an incredible singer! This particular rendition of ā€œI Will Always Love Youā€ is phenomenal!
I remember the VH-1 broadcast of the production DIVAS LIVE in 1999 at the Beacon theater where Whitney sang that unforgettable rendition of the song!
Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
~Laura~

June 7th, 2018 03:54

FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY
Michael Edwards said:

Great write Brian - hope BJ talk went well

Anne Dye will always love you
so tell my please do
exactly who
Is Anne dye who will always love you.


June 7th, 2018 02:53

FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY
orchidee said:

Ahh, it\'s so far for you both! Yes, what some need is a hug. Not that we\'re in love with everyone we may hug! Swoon! Oh dear, I\'ve brought on my swoons now. heehee.

June 7th, 2018 01:54

JOAN HUNTER DUNN ~ JOHN BETJEMAN (1941)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Un bel regalo di poesia!
A beautiful gift of a write!
Loved it! Definitely another
poetā€™s name for my reading
list! Thatā€™s a great pic!
Thank you! Grazie!

~Laura~



June 6th, 2018 16:44

JOAN HUNTER DUNN ~ JOHN BETJEMAN (1941)
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - - one of my all time favs of John Betjeman\'s talent for writing fun-poetry is this cleverly rhymed ode to a favoured young lady. I have often read this out loud just for the perfection of tone and metre. Thanks for sharing it Brian and all the best for your lecture this evening.

June 6th, 2018 10:47

JOAN HUNTER DUNN ~ JOHN BETJEMAN (1941)
Michael Edwards said:

Oh yes - and I\'ve walked past that statue many times - it\'s become an old friend.

June 6th, 2018 04:15

JOAN HUNTER DUNN ~ JOHN BETJEMAN (1941)
Michael Edwards said:

One of my favourite poets as well. Whren I read his work I can hear his voice - I have an anthology of his works on disc which I often put on in the studio. Just one comment to make - whilst he was excellent his work is nearly all in the same vein - I wish he had explored different form more often.

June 6th, 2018 04:13

JOAN HUNTER DUNN ~ JOHN BETJEMAN (1941)
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian. I wondered what he was doing at that station. I thought he had been waiting hours for a train, until I realised it was a statue! (??? lol).

June 6th, 2018 02:57

JOAN HUNTER DUNN ~ JOHN BETJEMAN (1941)
Goldfinch60 said:

Spelling now fine.

June 6th, 2018 02:27

JOAN HUNTER DUNN ~ JOHN BETJEMAN (1941)
Goldfinch60 said:

John Betjeman is my favourite poet.
A few years ago I was given a challenge to write a poem with only twenty words with a literary inspiration, this is what I wrote:

At last I was married
To Miss Joan Hunter Dunn.
And a little while later
She bore us a son.

Check the spelling of Betjeman it is spelt in three different ways on your write, the one in the penultimate line is the correct spelling

June 6th, 2018 02:24

COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG ~ A RESPONSE !
Goldfinch60 said:

I was brought up in the Medway Towns in Kent and now here in the Midlands people say I have a cockney accent.

June 6th, 2018 00:33

COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG ~ A RESPONSE !
Jane Frye said:

Fun! There is a little town in Northern California called Boonville. When I was a child, the town\'s people had their own word system for similar reasons. The language was called, \"Boontling\".

June 5th, 2018 19:13

COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG ~ A RESPONSE !
Christina8 said:

This write is very interesting, I never knew about this. Thanks for sharing! I love it when you teach me something new! Sister Christina

June 5th, 2018 17:26

COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG ~ A RESPONSE !
Fay Slimm. said:

A very rich and clever language is Cockney-speak Brian and thanks for the amusing examples you gave in this tale of rhyming for the reason of hiding what traders were saying in the days back when. A good video too.

June 5th, 2018 15:52

COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG ~ A RESPONSE !
Michael Edwards said:

Brill stuff Brian - actually enjoyed the video even though it was by a non-cockney - an American at that - but why not?

June 5th, 2018 12:34

COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS !
FineB said:

Thank you Brian.

I really enjoyed that. A beautiful poem.

Keep writing
FineB

June 5th, 2018 07:23

COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG ~ A RESPONSE !
orchidee said:

Ohh, not heard that lesson in church before! heehee.

June 5th, 2018 03:07

COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG ~ A RESPONSE !
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Grazie per la lezione!
Thank you for the lesson!
I truly enjoyed it as I did Michaelā€™s!
My husband and I were hysterical as I tried to read them with an Italian-American accent! Too funny!šŸ¤£šŸ¤£
Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
~Laura~

June 5th, 2018 02:48

COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG ~ A RESPONSE !
HangingbyaHalo said:

Very clever Brian, I enjoyed this

June 5th, 2018 02:46



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