Comments received on poems by LP2187
I\'m looking back on the year
Poetic Licence said:
A really uplifting and positive read, i hope you enjoy your venture, enjoyed the read
January 1st, 2025 04:53
Poetic Licence said:
A really uplifting and positive read, i hope you enjoy your venture, enjoyed the read
January 1st, 2025 04:53
I\'m looking back on the year
arqios said:
Like a slingshot, pulling back to stretch forward, Beautiful! 🙏🏻
January 1st, 2025 04:32
arqios said:
Like a slingshot, pulling back to stretch forward, Beautiful! 🙏🏻
January 1st, 2025 04:32
I\'m looking back on the year
rin said:
I\'m always surprised by how different poets think and see from each other.
January 1st, 2025 04:11
rin said:
I\'m always surprised by how different poets think and see from each other.
January 1st, 2025 04:11
The Magic of Childhood
Poetic Licence said:
How we long back to times gone by when things always appear nicer, those type of memories are what make us feel safe and secure, but we all have to move on at some point, enjoyed the read.
December 31st, 2024 11:09
Poetic Licence said:
How we long back to times gone by when things always appear nicer, those type of memories are what make us feel safe and secure, but we all have to move on at some point, enjoyed the read.
December 31st, 2024 11:09
The Facts in the Case...
arqios said:
You have given us a pure sense of crime in cold blood. Gripping stuff!
December 31st, 2024 05:11
arqios said:
You have given us a pure sense of crime in cold blood. Gripping stuff!
December 31st, 2024 05:11
The Facts in the Case...
Cassie58 said:
Scary reading. Gave me the chills. There always has been and always will be evil around us. Shocking to know that. Well penned LP 2187.
December 30th, 2024 14:00
Cassie58 said:
Scary reading. Gave me the chills. There always has been and always will be evil around us. Shocking to know that. Well penned LP 2187.
December 30th, 2024 14:00
The Facts in the Case...
Poetic Licence said:
Quite chilling reading this piece of work, you get clear images as you read through it, Very well written, i really enjoyed it.
December 30th, 2024 10:03
Poetic Licence said:
Quite chilling reading this piece of work, you get clear images as you read through it, Very well written, i really enjoyed it.
December 30th, 2024 10:03
Alchemy
Poetic Licence said:
The battle between Love and Pain that is a constant in our lives, very well written
December 29th, 2024 07:28
Poetic Licence said:
The battle between Love and Pain that is a constant in our lives, very well written
December 29th, 2024 07:28
Myself
Poetic Licence said:
Although at times it is very difficult to do, you have to be you. The only thing any of us can really be in control is who we are as people, it`s hard but stick with it. A sad poem but i am glad i read it, Take Care
December 20th, 2024 08:03
Poetic Licence said:
Although at times it is very difficult to do, you have to be you. The only thing any of us can really be in control is who we are as people, it`s hard but stick with it. A sad poem but i am glad i read it, Take Care
December 20th, 2024 08:03
Myself
Cassie58 said:
A classic case of beating yourself up. I find that really sad. Even when you are yourself, others don’t always accept you. That’s the way the cookie crumbles. Have a beautiful day. I enjoyed reading you.
December 20th, 2024 06:48
Cassie58 said:
A classic case of beating yourself up. I find that really sad. Even when you are yourself, others don’t always accept you. That’s the way the cookie crumbles. Have a beautiful day. I enjoyed reading you.
December 20th, 2024 06:48
Mistakes
Poetic Licence said:
Acknowledging your mistakes from the past and correcting them, (which you are doing in this poem)is the way to help obtain a better future, well written poem
December 19th, 2024 22:33
Poetic Licence said:
Acknowledging your mistakes from the past and correcting them, (which you are doing in this poem)is the way to help obtain a better future, well written poem
December 19th, 2024 22:33
Feeling
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and emotional poem, well written, be Strong
December 8th, 2024 17:14
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and emotional poem, well written, be Strong
December 8th, 2024 17:14
Earth
2781 said:
The earth abides forever, like ourselves it has everything set up for self healing.
Rest is always the best medicine and time heals.
Problem is, she doesn\'t get any rest just raped and pillaged.
So unfortunately humans either have to change or die.
November 28th, 2024 11:41
2781 said:
The earth abides forever, like ourselves it has everything set up for self healing.
Rest is always the best medicine and time heals.
Problem is, she doesn\'t get any rest just raped and pillaged.
So unfortunately humans either have to change or die.
November 28th, 2024 11:41
Feeding
2781 said:
Out of this world everything is backwards. The lower we get the higher he takes us.
November 28th, 2024 11:33
2781 said:
Out of this world everything is backwards. The lower we get the higher he takes us.
November 28th, 2024 11:33
Down, to the ground
Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu said:
So nice. I like the direct address; 2nd person point of view.
I like the diction too. \"Unless you like to make me feel
Everything that you’ve once felt
When I had no part in your misery
You just want me to feel your pain\"
Wow❤️
November 4th, 2024 23:58
Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu said:
So nice. I like the direct address; 2nd person point of view.
I like the diction too. \"Unless you like to make me feel
Everything that you’ve once felt
When I had no part in your misery
You just want me to feel your pain\"
Wow❤️
November 4th, 2024 23:58
Down, to the ground
sorenbarrett said:
Taking another down with you so you can feel better about yourself and have company is a cowardly act and a sign of insecurity and poor self esteem. This poem tells well the feeling of those around such a person. Nicely done
October 21st, 2024 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Taking another down with you so you can feel better about yourself and have company is a cowardly act and a sign of insecurity and poor self esteem. This poem tells well the feeling of those around such a person. Nicely done
October 21st, 2024 04:46
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