Comments received on poems by LP2187
Hopeless tears
Poetic Licence said:
Crying is better than bottling up, working out what the tears are for is a lot harder, Hope you have a good day
January 23rd, 2025 03:24
Poetic Licence said:
Crying is better than bottling up, working out what the tears are for is a lot harder, Hope you have a good day
January 23rd, 2025 03:24
I am not myself
Poetic Licence said:
Fear is no ones friend yet it is a very powerful feeling. When we learn to control fear it allows other feelings to come forward, A few words written that say so much in this piece of poetry, enjoyed the read.
January 22nd, 2025 22:05
Poetic Licence said:
Fear is no ones friend yet it is a very powerful feeling. When we learn to control fear it allows other feelings to come forward, A few words written that say so much in this piece of poetry, enjoyed the read.
January 22nd, 2025 22:05
Destruction
LP2187 said:
Thank you very much for your thoughtful comment, means a lot to me. No matter how hard you try you can still reach disappointment, unfortunately.
January 22nd, 2025 15:56
LP2187 said:
Thank you very much for your thoughtful comment, means a lot to me. No matter how hard you try you can still reach disappointment, unfortunately.
January 22nd, 2025 15:56
Destruction
Cheeky Missy said:
Welcome to the club. I\'ve bemoaned repeatedly to little or no avail my utter lack of the Midas\' touch but rather a horribly haunting destructive touch. You\'ve excellently rendered the reality with perfect imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy in tasteful brevity. Thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Welcome to the club. I\'ve bemoaned repeatedly to little or no avail my utter lack of the Midas\' touch but rather a horribly haunting destructive touch. You\'ve excellently rendered the reality with perfect imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy in tasteful brevity. Thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:15
Destruction
Cassie58 said:
Not a good place to be. Such a negative way to think about yourself, so sad. Excellent brevity LP2187.
January 22nd, 2025 13:11
Cassie58 said:
Not a good place to be. Such a negative way to think about yourself, so sad. Excellent brevity LP2187.
January 22nd, 2025 13:11
Destruction
NinjaGirl said:
because our beauty faults us, and nobody can see the truth
January 22nd, 2025 12:51
NinjaGirl said:
because our beauty faults us, and nobody can see the truth
January 22nd, 2025 12:51
Destruction
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Unfortunately, I do relate. Destruction might be a strong word currently...but at points in my life, I have even felt that. A senryu that, sadly, will find a number of people relating. But that is not sad, actually. It is only sad that people experience those emotions, but beautiful your words are able to make them feel less alone. Well done on this, my friend! 🌹👏
January 22nd, 2025 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Unfortunately, I do relate. Destruction might be a strong word currently...but at points in my life, I have even felt that. A senryu that, sadly, will find a number of people relating. But that is not sad, actually. It is only sad that people experience those emotions, but beautiful your words are able to make them feel less alone. Well done on this, my friend! 🌹👏
January 22nd, 2025 09:05
Destruction
Poetic Licence said:
I think this can relate to a lot people at some stage, hopefully not you at this point. Enjoyed the read (poetically)
January 22nd, 2025 07:23
Poetic Licence said:
I think this can relate to a lot people at some stage, hopefully not you at this point. Enjoyed the read (poetically)
January 22nd, 2025 07:23
Destruction
arqios said:
It can feel like that sometimes. Last week has bled into this one and 5he flow hasn’t stemmed yet. Totally relate to this 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 22nd, 2025 04:08
arqios said:
It can feel like that sometimes. Last week has bled into this one and 5he flow hasn’t stemmed yet. Totally relate to this 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 22nd, 2025 04:08
I am not myself
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful, you will see that with time you will be writing completely the opposite. 🌹 A wonderful powerful senryu full to the rim with emotion ❤️
January 22nd, 2025 02:41
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful, you will see that with time you will be writing completely the opposite. 🌹 A wonderful powerful senryu full to the rim with emotion ❤️
January 22nd, 2025 02:41
I am not myself
Cassie58 said:
Excellent brevity. Fear is not a friend by any means. Nicely penned LP2187.
January 21st, 2025 17:23
Cassie58 said:
Excellent brevity. Fear is not a friend by any means. Nicely penned LP2187.
January 21st, 2025 17:23
I am not myself
Your Girlfriend said:
I feel this some days!! Good job I like it!!!!!!
January 21st, 2025 16:18
Your Girlfriend said:
I feel this some days!! Good job I like it!!!!!!
January 21st, 2025 16:18
I am all alone
NafisaSB said:
yes, even in the midst of a crowd, this does happen
let\'s hope it does not overstay, but gives way to serenity and peace soon
enjoyed it
January 21st, 2025 11:33
NafisaSB said:
yes, even in the midst of a crowd, this does happen
let\'s hope it does not overstay, but gives way to serenity and peace soon
enjoyed it
January 21st, 2025 11:33
I am not myself
Tristan Robert Lange said:
RELATABLE to the 1000th degree. A powerful senryu, my friend! ❤️🙏
January 21st, 2025 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
RELATABLE to the 1000th degree. A powerful senryu, my friend! ❤️🙏
January 21st, 2025 08:25
I am not myself
Mutley Ravishes said:
Bullseye!
These days I challenge it with non-identification, transmutation, and so on. It’s a tenacious bloodsucker!
Great work.
January 21st, 2025 07:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Bullseye!
These days I challenge it with non-identification, transmutation, and so on. It’s a tenacious bloodsucker!
Great work.
January 21st, 2025 07:42
I am not myself
arqios said:
That is so true, until equilibrium is found anew 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 21st, 2025 06:47
arqios said:
That is so true, until equilibrium is found anew 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 21st, 2025 06:47
I am not myself
sorenbarrett said:
A good senryu full of feeling it is sad that it is fearful.
January 21st, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A good senryu full of feeling it is sad that it is fearful.
January 21st, 2025 04:18
I am not myself
orchidee said:
Are you Me, Myself, or I? That\'s three persons!
January 21st, 2025 03:52
orchidee said:
Are you Me, Myself, or I? That\'s three persons!
January 21st, 2025 03:52
Vendetta sharp as steel
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing. Very well crafted. Excellent.
January 20th, 2025 22:50
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing. Very well crafted. Excellent.
January 20th, 2025 22:50
Vendetta sharp as steel
arqios said:
Back to back! An accomplishment indeed without losing momentum or rising action 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 20th, 2025 22:25
arqios said:
Back to back! An accomplishment indeed without losing momentum or rising action 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 20th, 2025 22:25
Vendetta sharp as steel
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done following meter and with rhyme a heavy chore. A great message as well.
January 20th, 2025 16:59
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done following meter and with rhyme a heavy chore. A great message as well.
January 20th, 2025 16:59
Vendetta sharp as steel
NinjaGirl said:
I tell you, I felt this one deep in my veins...the anger, the grief, the passion...it\'s everything. I love this one so much, and I really feel it
January 20th, 2025 10:30
NinjaGirl said:
I tell you, I felt this one deep in my veins...the anger, the grief, the passion...it\'s everything. I love this one so much, and I really feel it
January 20th, 2025 10:30
Vendetta sharp as steel
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Love the blending of meters. Wonderfully connected ballads, my friend! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 09:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Love the blending of meters. Wonderfully connected ballads, my friend! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 09:44
Chasing light
Dan Williams said:
Edgy and articulate. \"Adventure calls with an irresistible lure\" surely defines this. Nice work.
January 20th, 2025 01:16
Dan Williams said:
Edgy and articulate. \"Adventure calls with an irresistible lure\" surely defines this. Nice work.
January 20th, 2025 01:16
I am all alone
Dan Williams said:
Maybe not. We see this, read this, are closer to you.
January 20th, 2025 01:13
Dan Williams said:
Maybe not. We see this, read this, are closer to you.
January 20th, 2025 01:13
I am all alone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Me too! Well done, my friend. An exquisite senryu that I can relate to. I am sure not to be the only one. 🌹👏
January 19th, 2025 16:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Me too! Well done, my friend. An exquisite senryu that I can relate to. I am sure not to be the only one. 🌹👏
January 19th, 2025 16:21
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