Comments received on poems by LP2187
The beauty of life
Poetic Licence said:
The real beauty we can all access, Nature, nice and positive write, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 06:35
Poetic Licence said:
The real beauty we can all access, Nature, nice and positive write, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 06:35
Falling
Poetic Licence said:
Very poignant piece, sometimes when we hit rock bottom we do self reflect and out of that reflection hopefully find a way out. Well written piece, with feeling
February 3rd, 2025 02:40
Poetic Licence said:
Very poignant piece, sometimes when we hit rock bottom we do self reflect and out of that reflection hopefully find a way out. Well written piece, with feeling
February 3rd, 2025 02:40
Falling
Mutley Ravishes said:
Once upon a time I came across something called \"Naikan.\" It\'s based on asking yourself these three questions:
What have I received from others?
What have I given others?
What troubles and difficulties have I caused others?
February 2nd, 2025 18:51
Mutley Ravishes said:
Once upon a time I came across something called \"Naikan.\" It\'s based on asking yourself these three questions:
What have I received from others?
What have I given others?
What troubles and difficulties have I caused others?
February 2nd, 2025 18:51
Falling
Cassie58 said:
Not a pleasant place to be. When you hit rock bottom, the only way is up. Most of us have been there and bounced back. Your brevity works well in this piece. Great description and conveyed with feeling.
February 2nd, 2025 12:14
Cassie58 said:
Not a pleasant place to be. When you hit rock bottom, the only way is up. Most of us have been there and bounced back. Your brevity works well in this piece. Great description and conveyed with feeling.
February 2nd, 2025 12:14
Falling
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done. I know this feeling too well. πΉπ
February 2nd, 2025 07:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done. I know this feeling too well. πΉπ
February 2nd, 2025 07:18
Falling
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that gives this poem a sense of instability that returns to the first lines. Very nice
February 2nd, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that gives this poem a sense of instability that returns to the first lines. Very nice
February 2nd, 2025 05:40
Grief is fire
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Grief is a raging fire for sure. Such a difficult and yet important process to go through. Well done, my friend. πΉπ
February 1st, 2025 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Grief is a raging fire for sure. Such a difficult and yet important process to go through. Well done, my friend. πΉπ
February 1st, 2025 09:09
Grief is fire
sorenbarrett said:
Raging emotions often taken for being crazy. After all what is crazy? Just a little further out on the continum maybe. People always judge those not like themselves as crazy. A thought provoking read
February 1st, 2025 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
Raging emotions often taken for being crazy. After all what is crazy? Just a little further out on the continum maybe. People always judge those not like themselves as crazy. A thought provoking read
February 1st, 2025 09:06
Grief is fire
arqios said:
Fear can scramble senses and awareness. Thatβs a tough spot to be in. Sometimes I kinda freeze. ππ»ππ»π
February 1st, 2025 08:56
arqios said:
Fear can scramble senses and awareness. Thatβs a tough spot to be in. Sometimes I kinda freeze. ππ»ππ»π
February 1st, 2025 08:56
Untouchable
sorenbarrett said:
You have touched on the untouchable those things that are not tangible. Yet in their intangibleness they are attainable and most important in our lives. Well written and worth a fave
January 31st, 2025 19:31
sorenbarrett said:
You have touched on the untouchable those things that are not tangible. Yet in their intangibleness they are attainable and most important in our lives. Well written and worth a fave
January 31st, 2025 19:31
Untouchable
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And how! They certainly do! Well done on this, friend! Very relatable. ππΉ
January 31st, 2025 17:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And how! They certainly do! Well done on this, friend! Very relatable. ππΉ
January 31st, 2025 17:42
Scars of life
Skally said:
What a good message. So short but has a lot to tell. Thank you for sharing. Have a good day and stay healthy
January 31st, 2025 17:00
Skally said:
What a good message. So short but has a lot to tell. Thank you for sharing. Have a good day and stay healthy
January 31st, 2025 17:00
Untouchable
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully crafted piece of piece, a pleasure to read
January 31st, 2025 13:42
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully crafted piece of piece, a pleasure to read
January 31st, 2025 13:42
Disappointment
arqios said:
Disappointment is indeed a diviner of tears ππ»π
January 31st, 2025 08:15
arqios said:
Disappointment is indeed a diviner of tears ππ»π
January 31st, 2025 08:15
Disappointment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Been there. Well said in brevity. Love the senryu, friend.
January 31st, 2025 08:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Been there. Well said in brevity. Love the senryu, friend.
January 31st, 2025 08:06
Disappointment
Poetic Licence said:
Very touching Poignant few words, that say so much. Good write
January 30th, 2025 16:11
Poetic Licence said:
Very touching Poignant few words, that say so much. Good write
January 30th, 2025 16:11
Shithole
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No apologies needed! This is a brilliant poem, my friend; I can relate and love the message! πΉπ Easy fave.
January 29th, 2025 22:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No apologies needed! This is a brilliant poem, my friend; I can relate and love the message! πΉπ Easy fave.
January 29th, 2025 22:11
Shithole
NinjaGirl said:
Hey, you can at least decorate your hole...even if its just by buying yourself a fun drink lol
January 29th, 2025 19:23
NinjaGirl said:
Hey, you can at least decorate your hole...even if its just by buying yourself a fun drink lol
January 29th, 2025 19:23
Shithole
Mutley Ravishes said:
Wherever we go
Our states of mind follow
Us
There\'s no escape
So let\'s face
Them!
January 29th, 2025 18:11
Mutley Ravishes said:
Wherever we go
Our states of mind follow
Us
There\'s no escape
So let\'s face
Them!
January 29th, 2025 18:11
Shithole
Cassie58 said:
If you have a roof over your head, itβs a start. Whatβs that saying - from little acorns grow huge oaks, or something like that. Keep focused. Have a better day tomorrow.
January 29th, 2025 17:35
Cassie58 said:
If you have a roof over your head, itβs a start. Whatβs that saying - from little acorns grow huge oaks, or something like that. Keep focused. Have a better day tomorrow.
January 29th, 2025 17:35
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