Comments received on poems by LP2187
Ruben
Cassie58 said:
You know I am so pleased you have still got Ruben. My grandkids are all in their twenties. I couldn’t bear to throw out their soft toy friends. We still have Charlie mouse, Peter rabbit and little Ted. I think I love them as much as my grandkids do. I enjoyed reading you. I can remember when Beth lost Charlie mouse. She was distraught. We had to order another one prompto off the internet.
September 19th, 2024 11:33
Cassie58 said:
You know I am so pleased you have still got Ruben. My grandkids are all in their twenties. I couldn’t bear to throw out their soft toy friends. We still have Charlie mouse, Peter rabbit and little Ted. I think I love them as much as my grandkids do. I enjoyed reading you. I can remember when Beth lost Charlie mouse. She was distraught. We had to order another one prompto off the internet.
September 19th, 2024 11:33
This is how it feels
Cassie58 said:
An outpouring of words. A good way to release those pent up emotions, to let off steam. There’s a lot of anger and hurt in them LP2187. Conveyed with much feeling.
September 18th, 2024 02:38
Cassie58 said:
An outpouring of words. A good way to release those pent up emotions, to let off steam. There’s a lot of anger and hurt in them LP2187. Conveyed with much feeling.
September 18th, 2024 02:38
This is how it feels
Dan Williams said:
Wow. There is a whole lot of anger here. Chill out. Listen to music.
September 18th, 2024 00:36
Dan Williams said:
Wow. There is a whole lot of anger here. Chill out. Listen to music.
September 18th, 2024 00:36
Should’ve walked away
Cassie58 said:
Yes, best walk away, particularly when you are outnumbered. A lesson to be remembered. I sincerely hope you weren’t hurt. A short poem of experience.
September 17th, 2024 08:05
Cassie58 said:
Yes, best walk away, particularly when you are outnumbered. A lesson to be remembered. I sincerely hope you weren’t hurt. A short poem of experience.
September 17th, 2024 08:05
This is how it feels
NafisaSB said:
would hat to be at the receiving end..what a powerful display of emotions
September 17th, 2024 01:28
NafisaSB said:
would hat to be at the receiving end..what a powerful display of emotions
September 17th, 2024 01:28
This is how it feels
orchidee said:
Ooh, not today, thank you! (heehee).
But cuddles and hugs - yes please!
September 16th, 2024 13:07
orchidee said:
Ooh, not today, thank you! (heehee).
But cuddles and hugs - yes please!
September 16th, 2024 13:07
Voiceless
NinjaGirl said:
preyed upon because they thought we were quiet...but they made us quiet now...who would believe us when he\'s louder?
September 15th, 2024 09:45
NinjaGirl said:
preyed upon because they thought we were quiet...but they made us quiet now...who would believe us when he\'s louder?
September 15th, 2024 09:45
The Monster Within
orchidee said:
Several want to kill me when I begin to (so-called) sing! heehee. Or at least silence me. Doh!
September 14th, 2024 09:30
orchidee said:
Several want to kill me when I begin to (so-called) sing! heehee. Or at least silence me. Doh!
September 14th, 2024 09:30
Killer
MR.apocalypse said:
I was just like you when I started writing you should look at some of my earlier work then look at my new stuff that\'s going to be you one day lol ❤️
September 13th, 2024 21:14
MR.apocalypse said:
I was just like you when I started writing you should look at some of my earlier work then look at my new stuff that\'s going to be you one day lol ❤️
September 13th, 2024 21:14
Killer
NinjaGirl said:
Instead of seeing a murderous psychopath I see someone who had their life flipped upside down and is angry about it. I see someone who wants control again, and who doesn\'t want the things in her head to eat her alive.
September 13th, 2024 16:58
NinjaGirl said:
Instead of seeing a murderous psychopath I see someone who had their life flipped upside down and is angry about it. I see someone who wants control again, and who doesn\'t want the things in her head to eat her alive.
September 13th, 2024 16:58
Mute
Poetic Dan said:
Wow I\'m nearly 43 and this took me back! It\'s why my 3rd and 4th children are homeschooling and I become a dog behaviourist!
This was such a powerful write on many levels but know that your not a failure when unable to find words to communicate with others who are incoherent! It\'s makes you wise, as you can\'t argue with those that will never listen.
Keep on your path, you\'ll find your strength that\'s always been there. One day you\'ll see all this training is what makes you amazingly you!
Much peace and respect
September 11th, 2024 02:26
Poetic Dan said:
Wow I\'m nearly 43 and this took me back! It\'s why my 3rd and 4th children are homeschooling and I become a dog behaviourist!
This was such a powerful write on many levels but know that your not a failure when unable to find words to communicate with others who are incoherent! It\'s makes you wise, as you can\'t argue with those that will never listen.
Keep on your path, you\'ll find your strength that\'s always been there. One day you\'ll see all this training is what makes you amazingly you!
Much peace and respect
September 11th, 2024 02:26
Life and Death
orchidee said:
Death is not good - not usually. Except maybe for an end to painful illness, etc.
Meanwhile, dark humour - me being daft - \'Ooohh, not suicide; it will be bad for your health!\' (heehee). And so will my corny jokes.
September 9th, 2024 13:04
orchidee said:
Death is not good - not usually. Except maybe for an end to painful illness, etc.
Meanwhile, dark humour - me being daft - \'Ooohh, not suicide; it will be bad for your health!\' (heehee). And so will my corny jokes.
September 9th, 2024 13:04
Purpose
Cheeky Missy said:
Mean, nasty classmates! This is beautifully rendered with tasteful rhyming and a haunting poignancy. I frankly don\'t know what my purpose is but hope I\'m not naughty for trying to have fun. Thank you very much for sharing. On the hand the scriptures do declare something along the lines of, \"...Let us hear the conclusion of the whole matter: Fear God, and keep his commandments: for this is the whole duty of man.
14 For God shall bring every work into judgment, with every secret thing, whether it be good, or whether it be evil.\" (Ecclesiastes 12: 13-14)
September 8th, 2024 19:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Mean, nasty classmates! This is beautifully rendered with tasteful rhyming and a haunting poignancy. I frankly don\'t know what my purpose is but hope I\'m not naughty for trying to have fun. Thank you very much for sharing. On the hand the scriptures do declare something along the lines of, \"...Let us hear the conclusion of the whole matter: Fear God, and keep his commandments: for this is the whole duty of man.
14 For God shall bring every work into judgment, with every secret thing, whether it be good, or whether it be evil.\" (Ecclesiastes 12: 13-14)
September 8th, 2024 19:15
Purpose
Neilton said:
I believe we all have a purpose in this world! It might be early to find yours but you certainly have you\'ll see it when you least expect it. But you have to look for it and be open to new ideas and other opinions ! For me it was God and how he helped me those dark days ! Great poem with a deep meaning!!!
September 8th, 2024 04:23
Neilton said:
I believe we all have a purpose in this world! It might be early to find yours but you certainly have you\'ll see it when you least expect it. But you have to look for it and be open to new ideas and other opinions ! For me it was God and how he helped me those dark days ! Great poem with a deep meaning!!!
September 8th, 2024 04:23
PTSD
Dan Williams said:
You sound like someone in real distress. I was, for years, a wonderful lady therapist saved me. Ask for help!
September 8th, 2024 00:48
Dan Williams said:
You sound like someone in real distress. I was, for years, a wonderful lady therapist saved me. Ask for help!
September 8th, 2024 00:48
An Ideal World
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Everyone that was blessed with the gift of life deserves to live. Although we\'re sinful, boastful and pieces of sht, Jesus still loves us. Its a Good poem LP2187, To bad the world you described in your poem isn\'t reality.
September 7th, 2024 20:09
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Everyone that was blessed with the gift of life deserves to live. Although we\'re sinful, boastful and pieces of sht, Jesus still loves us. Its a Good poem LP2187, To bad the world you described in your poem isn\'t reality.
September 7th, 2024 20:09
PTSD
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I don\'t have PTSD. But a good poem gets into the bloodstream. I felt like being present in the room - my formless body watching, trying to reach out and comfort the person. Loved it
September 7th, 2024 04:43
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I don\'t have PTSD. But a good poem gets into the bloodstream. I felt like being present in the room - my formless body watching, trying to reach out and comfort the person. Loved it
September 7th, 2024 04:43
An Ideal World
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It filled me with positivity. Reminded me of how I used to be in the past. Perhaps, someday I will revert to my former self. Thank you for sharing
September 7th, 2024 04:33
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It filled me with positivity. Reminded me of how I used to be in the past. Perhaps, someday I will revert to my former self. Thank you for sharing
September 7th, 2024 04:33
PTSD
NinjaGirl said:
Hi there
I have ptsd and this is what it feels like. I also for a while thought I had it before I was diagnosed. One of the scariest things I did was to do something about it.
The healing journey is long--and hard. Full of bad days and good days. Thanks for this poem about it.
I\'m proud of you for finding your words.
September 6th, 2024 17:56
NinjaGirl said:
Hi there
I have ptsd and this is what it feels like. I also for a while thought I had it before I was diagnosed. One of the scariest things I did was to do something about it.
The healing journey is long--and hard. Full of bad days and good days. Thanks for this poem about it.
I\'m proud of you for finding your words.
September 6th, 2024 17:56
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