Comments received on poems by LP2187
Parted the dark curtains
NinjaGirl said:
I love this, \"wise words with LP2187!\" I also love the fact that it rhymes, and is so long at the same time! super impressive!
January 8th, 2025 19:49
NinjaGirl said:
I love this, \"wise words with LP2187!\" I also love the fact that it rhymes, and is so long at the same time! super impressive!
January 8th, 2025 19:49
Parted the dark curtains
Poetic Licence said:
A great ;piece of work, written with honesty and positivity, a really good read, Thank you
January 8th, 2025 07:42
Poetic Licence said:
A great ;piece of work, written with honesty and positivity, a really good read, Thank you
January 8th, 2025 07:42
Parted the dark curtains
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, three years of wisdom wrapped up in a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing! Really enjoyed this. ❤️🙏
January 8th, 2025 07:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, three years of wisdom wrapped up in a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing! Really enjoyed this. ❤️🙏
January 8th, 2025 07:33
Parted the dark curtains
arqios said:
A compendium of life wisdom! Thanks for sharing.🙏🏻🕊
January 8th, 2025 07:10
arqios said:
A compendium of life wisdom! Thanks for sharing.🙏🏻🕊
January 8th, 2025 07:10
I\'m looking back on the year
jim56 said:
hi like this poem says a lot
words you haved used expresses the poem well
nice flow well written keep it up
you have a talent for writing
January 7th, 2025 16:53
jim56 said:
hi like this poem says a lot
words you haved used expresses the poem well
nice flow well written keep it up
you have a talent for writing
January 7th, 2025 16:53
Eternal blight
NinjaGirl said:
I really really like the imagery in this poem...the rusted and burnt cage shows what they\'ve done to us, they don\'t trust us even when they hold us captive
January 7th, 2025 12:09
NinjaGirl said:
I really really like the imagery in this poem...the rusted and burnt cage shows what they\'ve done to us, they don\'t trust us even when they hold us captive
January 7th, 2025 12:09
Eternal blight
arqios said:
The poem\'s exploration of the character\'s malevolent thoughts and the curse they place on the virtuous adds a layer of complexity to their identity. It effectively conveys the torment and isolation of a character struggling with their own darkness; made me wonder how dissimilar or paralleled are the thoughts of the mass shooters that have proliferated in the last century.
January 7th, 2025 06:35
arqios said:
The poem\'s exploration of the character\'s malevolent thoughts and the curse they place on the virtuous adds a layer of complexity to their identity. It effectively conveys the torment and isolation of a character struggling with their own darkness; made me wonder how dissimilar or paralleled are the thoughts of the mass shooters that have proliferated in the last century.
January 7th, 2025 06:35
Eternal blight
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a touch of anger and questioning in this piece, not just about why am i but who am i, enjoyed the read.
January 7th, 2025 04:27
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a touch of anger and questioning in this piece, not just about why am i but who am i, enjoyed the read.
January 7th, 2025 04:27
Eternal blight
rin said:
Why am I alive? Of course God doesn\'t answer, so I have no choice but to explore on my own. This is my favorite poem that makes me think about many things.
January 7th, 2025 03:21
rin said:
Why am I alive? Of course God doesn\'t answer, so I have no choice but to explore on my own. This is my favorite poem that makes me think about many things.
January 7th, 2025 03:21
Found myself
NinjaGirl said:
we all love a good moody poem...but I\'m so glad we can find pieces of ourselves in the writing we express.
January 6th, 2025 21:03
NinjaGirl said:
we all love a good moody poem...but I\'m so glad we can find pieces of ourselves in the writing we express.
January 6th, 2025 21:03
Found myself
arqios said:
Life is a mixed basket and that should reflect in our poetry; at least that the way my thoughts go! Makes for a well-rounded existence. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 6th, 2025 07:44
arqios said:
Life is a mixed basket and that should reflect in our poetry; at least that the way my thoughts go! Makes for a well-rounded existence. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 6th, 2025 07:44
Found myself
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes the best things are found by accident, reading and writing does alter your mood for the better in the long run, and is it negativity or reality?, enjoyed the read. My own writing code is, do not write to please, write what you believe.
January 6th, 2025 05:04
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes the best things are found by accident, reading and writing does alter your mood for the better in the long run, and is it negativity or reality?, enjoyed the read. My own writing code is, do not write to please, write what you believe.
January 6th, 2025 05:04
Found myself
sorenbarrett said:
The evolution of ones poems reflects the growth of the poet and his or her mood. Nicely done
January 6th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
The evolution of ones poems reflects the growth of the poet and his or her mood. Nicely done
January 6th, 2025 04:43
Found myself
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s found it! I\'m having a spot of trouble. I don\'t know what I\'m looking for, so how will I know when I\'ve found it?! heehee. Do shut up, Orchi, says Fido.
Yet we do that - not knowing what we\'re looking for sometimes, but when we find it, we say \'Ah, that\'s what I was looking for\'.
January 6th, 2025 03:20
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s found it! I\'m having a spot of trouble. I don\'t know what I\'m looking for, so how will I know when I\'ve found it?! heehee. Do shut up, Orchi, says Fido.
Yet we do that - not knowing what we\'re looking for sometimes, but when we find it, we say \'Ah, that\'s what I was looking for\'.
January 6th, 2025 03:20
Wilderness under a hood
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautifully rendered with a subtle intrigue haunting its trail down the page, superb imagery tricking out the drama unfolding darkly to an almost heinous close whose poignancy grapples for the soul. Thank you very much for sharing!
January 5th, 2025 20:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautifully rendered with a subtle intrigue haunting its trail down the page, superb imagery tricking out the drama unfolding darkly to an almost heinous close whose poignancy grapples for the soul. Thank you very much for sharing!
January 5th, 2025 20:05
Wilderness under a hood
Poetic Licence said:
It comes across to me as the contrasts of some one mind in that the day brings hope and sunshine, but the night brings the demons and fear, whatever it meant i really enjoyed the read, it is a lovely poem
January 5th, 2025 15:46
Poetic Licence said:
It comes across to me as the contrasts of some one mind in that the day brings hope and sunshine, but the night brings the demons and fear, whatever it meant i really enjoyed the read, it is a lovely poem
January 5th, 2025 15:46
Wilderness under a hood
Lorenz said:
The disembarkation of a horde of vikings ! I love this landscape !
January 5th, 2025 14:16
Lorenz said:
The disembarkation of a horde of vikings ! I love this landscape !
January 5th, 2025 14:16
Wilderness under a hood
RSM0812 said:
Sounds depressing. People can go to dark places sometimes.
January 5th, 2025 13:58
RSM0812 said:
Sounds depressing. People can go to dark places sometimes.
January 5th, 2025 13:58
Trapped In the Sea
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that water can be seen as a metaphor for our psychological condition. I’m sure you know who walked on water and thereby demonstrated their psychological mastery!
January 4th, 2025 20:44
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that water can be seen as a metaphor for our psychological condition. I’m sure you know who walked on water and thereby demonstrated their psychological mastery!
January 4th, 2025 20:44
Trapped In the Sea
arqios said:
That drew me in and was drowned along with the poetic persona! Marvellous 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊Liked and Faved!
January 4th, 2025 17:07
arqios said:
That drew me in and was drowned along with the poetic persona! Marvellous 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊Liked and Faved!
January 4th, 2025 17:07
Trapped In the Sea
Cassie58 said:
An overwhelming dream to have. A change from being in the shallows to being engulfed by the power of the sea. A most frightening situation. The sea can be calm as calm and change into a monster so easily. Good poem.
January 4th, 2025 09:42
Cassie58 said:
An overwhelming dream to have. A change from being in the shallows to being engulfed by the power of the sea. A most frightening situation. The sea can be calm as calm and change into a monster so easily. Good poem.
January 4th, 2025 09:42
Trapped In the Sea
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of some one feeling overwhelmed, fighting to make there mark in the world. Very well written
January 4th, 2025 06:39
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of some one feeling overwhelmed, fighting to make there mark in the world. Very well written
January 4th, 2025 06:39
Trapped In the Sea
rin said:
It was interesting to read. What particularly struck me was how the story ended without the main character doing anything wrong.
January 4th, 2025 05:24
rin said:
It was interesting to read. What particularly struck me was how the story ended without the main character doing anything wrong.
January 4th, 2025 05:24
The Magic of Childhood
NinjaGirl said:
growing up is way way way overrated, very beautifully said.
January 3rd, 2025 21:12
NinjaGirl said:
growing up is way way way overrated, very beautifully said.
January 3rd, 2025 21:12
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