Comments received on poems by Kevin Hulme
Rambo and Cash
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this gave me a good laugh. I never saw the punchline coming, and that\'s what made it work so well. Sometimes a silly poem is exactly what the day calls for. Nicely done, my friend! ππΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 27th, 2026 10:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this gave me a good laugh. I never saw the punchline coming, and that\'s what made it work so well. Sometimes a silly poem is exactly what the day calls for. Nicely done, my friend! ππΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 27th, 2026 10:44
Joyce Kilmer: A Reply
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve been busy while I\'ve been AWOL, haven\'t You? And buried deep among the short funnies I happen upon this. The name Kilmer provoked no flash of recognition, until I found the poem, when I realised I\'d known it nearly all my life. I enjoyed this worthy plus to his idea, not to forget the twist in your tale... or tail, take your pick.
June 27th, 2026 01:32
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve been busy while I\'ve been AWOL, haven\'t You? And buried deep among the short funnies I happen upon this. The name Kilmer provoked no flash of recognition, until I found the poem, when I realised I\'d known it nearly all my life. I enjoyed this worthy plus to his idea, not to forget the twist in your tale... or tail, take your pick.
June 27th, 2026 01:32
Rambo and Cash
Doggerel Dave said:
Silly poems are very easy to digest. Keep up the good work.
June 26th, 2026 19:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Silly poems are very easy to digest. Keep up the good work.
June 26th, 2026 19:37
Rambo and Cash
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with a play on words with the films he is know for. Clever and well done Kevin
June 26th, 2026 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with a play on words with the films he is know for. Clever and well done Kevin
June 26th, 2026 19:21
Babys \'Dry\' Out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this is great fun. The whole thing rolls along so naturally, then that last line sneaks up and delivers the laugh. I thoroughly enjoyed this one, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 26th, 2026 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this is great fun. The whole thing rolls along so naturally, then that last line sneaks up and delivers the laugh. I thoroughly enjoyed this one, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 26th, 2026 09:24
Babys \'Dry\' Out
Doggerel Dave said:
To think I once drank that stuff: I have more sophisticated, and dare I say safer, tastes now....
June 26th, 2026 01:48
Doggerel Dave said:
To think I once drank that stuff: I have more sophisticated, and dare I say safer, tastes now....
June 26th, 2026 01:48
Babys \'Dry\' Out
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of words and their play to make the poem work. Well done
June 25th, 2026 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of words and their play to make the poem work. Well done
June 25th, 2026 20:11
Elevate and Irony
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this gave me a good laugh! π€£ The steady build-up makes the final line pop beautifully, and the play on \"inflation\" is delightfully cheeky. A fun little piece, my friend. πΉπ€π
June 25th, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this gave me a good laugh! π€£ The steady build-up makes the final line pop beautifully, and the play on \"inflation\" is delightfully cheeky. A fun little piece, my friend. πΉπ€π
June 25th, 2026 10:37
Elevate and Irony
Doggerel Dave said:
Your warning is a tad too late, mate - the balloon went up a good while back...
June 24th, 2026 19:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Your warning is a tad too late, mate - the balloon went up a good while back...
June 24th, 2026 19:51
Elevate and Irony
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with word play better than deflation I guess.
June 24th, 2026 19:22
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with word play better than deflation I guess.
June 24th, 2026 19:22
Hic Jacet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, what I admire here is the way the poem presents a life seemingly free of regret, rich in joy and satisfaction, only to reveal one enduring ache at the very end. That final confession reshapes everything that came before it. A beautiful and moving piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 24th, 2026 12:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, what I admire here is the way the poem presents a life seemingly free of regret, rich in joy and satisfaction, only to reveal one enduring ache at the very end. That final confession reshapes everything that came before it. A beautiful and moving piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 24th, 2026 12:45
Hic Jacet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, what a turn at the end, my friend. The poem spends so much time celebrating a life well lived that those final lines land with tremendous force. That last lingering thought speaks volumes. Beautiful work. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 23rd, 2026 22:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, what a turn at the end, my friend. The poem spends so much time celebrating a life well lived that those final lines land with tremendous force. That last lingering thought speaks volumes. Beautiful work. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 23rd, 2026 22:44
Hic Jacet
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and I loved the except part. Well written with the reversal and twist
June 23rd, 2026 19:15
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and I loved the except part. Well written with the reversal and twist
June 23rd, 2026 19:15
Two Bee or Not ...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, you got me with this one. I read the last line and immediately groaned...which, of course, is exactly the reaction a good bee pun deserves. π€£ Nicely done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 22nd, 2026 10:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, you got me with this one. I read the last line and immediately groaned...which, of course, is exactly the reaction a good bee pun deserves. π€£ Nicely done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 22nd, 2026 10:12
Two Bee or Not ...
arqios said:
Don\'t get too many freebies these days. And the ones that are advertised are all wrapped up in T&Cs
June 21st, 2026 23:25
arqios said:
Don\'t get too many freebies these days. And the ones that are advertised are all wrapped up in T&Cs
June 21st, 2026 23:25
Two Bee or Not ...
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with clever word play. Well done
June 21st, 2026 19:11
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with clever word play. Well done
June 21st, 2026 19:11
Living La \'Doric\' Vita
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this gave me a chuckle and a wince at the same time. The humor is right there on the surface, but there\'s also that familiar feeling of looking around and wondering whether all the effort is leading where you hoped it would. Nicely done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 20th, 2026 08:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this gave me a chuckle and a wince at the same time. The humor is right there on the surface, but there\'s also that familiar feeling of looking around and wondering whether all the effort is leading where you hoped it would. Nicely done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 20th, 2026 08:57
Living La \'Doric\' Vita
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording of pairing Archeology with ruins. A clever write
June 19th, 2026 18:50
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording of pairing Archeology with ruins. A clever write
June 19th, 2026 18:50
One for the Road
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, haha, you got me with this one. I spent the first half wondering where on earth it was going, only to arrive at the punchline and immediately grin. Nicely played, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 18th, 2026 20:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, haha, you got me with this one. I spent the first half wondering where on earth it was going, only to arrive at the punchline and immediately grin. Nicely played, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 18th, 2026 20:59
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