Comments received on poems by Kevin Hulme
Drill Baby Drill
sorenbarrett said:
This write has great word play. A fun read.
September 28th, 2026 18:57
sorenbarrett said:
This write has great word play. A fun read.
September 28th, 2026 18:57
Herb your Enthusiasm
arqios said:
Yup, my battle with triglycerides and company have me in a quandary.
September 26th, 2026 06:35
arqios said:
Yup, my battle with triglycerides and company have me in a quandary.
September 26th, 2026 06:35
Herb your Enthusiasm
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories and a big laugh as a bonus, Kevin.
School meals in fifties London. Further, fed James Hilton as reading matter too.
September 26th, 2026 02:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories and a big laugh as a bonus, Kevin.
School meals in fifties London. Further, fed James Hilton as reading matter too.
September 26th, 2026 02:39
Herb your Enthusiasm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this is wonderfully silly. Healthy eating has rarely sounded this much like a hostile takeover. 😂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this is wonderfully silly. Healthy eating has rarely sounded this much like a hostile takeover. 😂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:30
Herb your Enthusiasm
sorenbarrett said:
I have heard that many children do not eat their nutritious meals because they are not used to them and don\'t like them. Well written
September 25th, 2026 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
I have heard that many children do not eat their nutritious meals because they are not used to them and don\'t like them. Well written
September 25th, 2026 19:00
Said Juliet One Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, this is fun, Kevin. By the end I was imagining an entire anti-leaping society forming around Newton. 😂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 23:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, this is fun, Kevin. By the end I was imagining an entire anti-leaping society forming around Newton. 😂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 23:30
Said Juliet One Day
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Tis a terrible worry, with all the trouble in the world today it would only take a bunch of insurgents to all jump together. Could impart a negative tilt to the world and christmas could be cold for me and hot for you. Wot then?
A good fun write I could understand fully, as is evidenced by the coherence of my response...
September 24th, 2026 22:17
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Tis a terrible worry, with all the trouble in the world today it would only take a bunch of insurgents to all jump together. Could impart a negative tilt to the world and christmas could be cold for me and hot for you. Wot then?
A good fun write I could understand fully, as is evidenced by the coherence of my response...
September 24th, 2026 22:17
Said Juliet One Day
sorenbarrett said:
There is no such thing as air travel, the airplane was never invented and no one has been to the moon. Oh by the way the earth is flat. A fun read my friend with good rhyme.
September 24th, 2026 20:21
sorenbarrett said:
There is no such thing as air travel, the airplane was never invented and no one has been to the moon. Oh by the way the earth is flat. A fun read my friend with good rhyme.
September 24th, 2026 20:21
As No one Came Back
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, you went straight into one of the hardest questions any of us faces...and left it open, where faith so often has to live. Impactfuly, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 00:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, you went straight into one of the hardest questions any of us faces...and left it open, where faith so often has to live. Impactfuly, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 00:55
As No one Came Back
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of is there a life after or not a God or not. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2026 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of is there a life after or not a God or not. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2026 19:40
Another Suitcase Another Bawl
Jabberwocky said:
I\'ve not always been a saint myself, but I have more kids than Ive left broken hearts... I have a lot of kids though!
Enjoyed your poem. Clever wrap up!
September 23rd, 2026 07:53
Jabberwocky said:
I\'ve not always been a saint myself, but I have more kids than Ive left broken hearts... I have a lot of kids though!
Enjoyed your poem. Clever wrap up!
September 23rd, 2026 07:53
Another Suitcase Another Bawl
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn wonderfully cheeky old-school music-hall quality here, with the exaggerated cad, cantina, Argentine setting, and melodramatic weeping all playing together like a comic little stage number. The final “Don’t Cry for me - Marge and Tina” is the killer, because the whole poem has been marching toward that gloriously shameless parody of Evita.
September 22nd, 2026 07:20
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn wonderfully cheeky old-school music-hall quality here, with the exaggerated cad, cantina, Argentine setting, and melodramatic weeping all playing together like a comic little stage number. The final “Don’t Cry for me - Marge and Tina” is the killer, because the whole poem has been marching toward that gloriously shameless parody of Evita.
September 22nd, 2026 07:20
Another Suitcase Another Bawl
arqios said:
Nice play on Evita’s ‘Argentina’ and the journey that brings on the waterworks.
September 22nd, 2026 07:05
arqios said:
Nice play on Evita’s ‘Argentina’ and the journey that brings on the waterworks.
September 22nd, 2026 07:05
Another Suitcase Another Bawl
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems both Sorren and Tristan have pinched my commentary here, so I\'ve nothing left to add but \'Gertcha\'---
\'And: \'Oh that was a funny one; tell me anothery ******************* tell me anothrey do\'
September 21st, 2026 23:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems both Sorren and Tristan have pinched my commentary here, so I\'ve nothing left to add but \'Gertcha\'---
\'And: \'Oh that was a funny one; tell me anothery ******************* tell me anothrey do\'
September 21st, 2026 23:26
Another Suitcase Another Bawl
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I groaned, laughed, then groaned again, Kevin. Exactly as intended. Loved it my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2026 20:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I groaned, laughed, then groaned again, Kevin. Exactly as intended. Loved it my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2026 20:34
Another Suitcase Another Bawl
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is what i call word play with a rhyme and a funny story. Well done
September 21st, 2026 20:15
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is what i call word play with a rhyme and a funny story. Well done
September 21st, 2026 20:15
Price Busters
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤣🤣🤣 Kevin! Okay, that was terrible...which is precisely why I loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 14:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤣🤣🤣 Kevin! Okay, that was terrible...which is precisely why I loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 14:20
Price Busters
Doggerel Dave said:
A Moral Tale, if ever I heard one. Good always triumphs over evil, don\'t it?
September 18th, 2026 21:47
Doggerel Dave said:
A Moral Tale, if ever I heard one. Good always triumphs over evil, don\'t it?
September 18th, 2026 21:47
Was it something I did 2: This time it\'s Personal
Friendship said:
Nicely written
September 16th, 2026 09:48
Friendship said:
Nicely written
September 16th, 2026 09:48
Was it something I did 2: This time it\'s Personal
Paul Bell said:
Lesbian lust 2, granted not as good as lesbian lust 1, but still good family viewing in some countries.
I would like to think the old guy died happy, but even if he didn\'t, doesn\'t mean you shouldn\'t have a drink or ten in his honour.
September 16th, 2026 04:18
Paul Bell said:
Lesbian lust 2, granted not as good as lesbian lust 1, but still good family viewing in some countries.
I would like to think the old guy died happy, but even if he didn\'t, doesn\'t mean you shouldn\'t have a drink or ten in his honour.
September 16th, 2026 04:18
Was it something I did 2: This time it\'s Personal
sorenbarrett said:
An interplay here between the author and another well done as a reflection.
September 15th, 2026 19:09
sorenbarrett said:
An interplay here between the author and another well done as a reflection.
September 15th, 2026 19:09
They say I\'m still in Love with you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a clever piece, Kevin. Each new excuse is more incriminating than the last, while the humor keeps revealing the ache beneath all that stubborn denial. Funny, tender, and beautifully constructed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2026 19:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a clever piece, Kevin. Each new excuse is more incriminating than the last, while the humor keeps revealing the ache beneath all that stubborn denial. Funny, tender, and beautifully constructed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2026 19:02
They say I\'m still in Love with you
Doggerel Dave said:
As I wandered slowly down (should in all conscience wander up) today’s listings, I almost passed you by. Any poem with ‘love’ in the title usually gets short shrift from me. Now I just wanted to warn yer not to take no notice of wot others might think. You do her your way… (really meant ‘it’ in the just preceding, but it somehow got confused with the lady in question… and so on…. )
September 13th, 2026 16:40
Doggerel Dave said:
As I wandered slowly down (should in all conscience wander up) today’s listings, I almost passed you by. Any poem with ‘love’ in the title usually gets short shrift from me. Now I just wanted to warn yer not to take no notice of wot others might think. You do her your way… (really meant ‘it’ in the just preceding, but it somehow got confused with the lady in question… and so on…. )
September 13th, 2026 16:40
They say I\'m still in Love with you
sorenbarrett said:
Denial written in beautiful verse and rhyme. Very clever and nicely done a fave my friend
September 13th, 2026 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
Denial written in beautiful verse and rhyme. Very clever and nicely done a fave my friend
September 13th, 2026 14:45
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