Comments received on poems by Kevin Hulme
To Write of my Love : Haiku
sorenbarrett said:
This senryu is quite cleaver not only in its syllables but how the last line leaves an incomplete word that leaves the meaning emphasized as incompletion in expression just as explaining love must remain incomplete. A fave
January 11th, 2026 20:36
sorenbarrett said:
This senryu is quite cleaver not only in its syllables but how the last line leaves an incomplete word that leaves the meaning emphasized as incompletion in expression just as explaining love must remain incomplete. A fave
January 11th, 2026 20:36
It\'s as you were
Thomas W Case said:
Sharp-eyed, darkly festive—this doesn’t sugarcoat the world’s mess.
The last couplet hits like a cold wind down Thames Street.
January 11th, 2026 08:48
Thomas W Case said:
Sharp-eyed, darkly festive—this doesn’t sugarcoat the world’s mess.
The last couplet hits like a cold wind down Thames Street.
January 11th, 2026 08:48
It\'s as you were
Doggerel Dave said:
Cold reality after festive cheer. As in your piece it slides back into our lives effortlessly.
Well writ, Kevin.
January 11th, 2026 00:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Cold reality after festive cheer. As in your piece it slides back into our lives effortlessly.
Well writ, Kevin.
January 11th, 2026 00:10
It\'s as you were
sorenbarrett said:
Everything changes but nothing changes. A good write
January 10th, 2026 20:41
sorenbarrett said:
Everything changes but nothing changes. A good write
January 10th, 2026 20:41
Ogden Nash
Doggerel Dave said:
That is a piece on poetry/verse I can relate to. Seems I\'ve missed out on you for a while. Time Zones and all. Truly sorrowful
January 9th, 2026 17:51
Doggerel Dave said:
That is a piece on poetry/verse I can relate to. Seems I\'ve missed out on you for a while. Time Zones and all. Truly sorrowful
January 9th, 2026 17:51
The New Year
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this reads like a life seen from both ends at once. Youth, learning, fatigue, and acceptance move together with grace. It’s reflective, affectionate, and deeply human. A powerful piece. Happy New Year! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 8th, 2026 14:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this reads like a life seen from both ends at once. Youth, learning, fatigue, and acceptance move together with grace. It’s reflective, affectionate, and deeply human. A powerful piece. Happy New Year! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 8th, 2026 14:14
The New Year
sorenbarrett said:
A great greeting for the new year well painted. Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2025 20:57
sorenbarrett said:
A great greeting for the new year well painted. Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2025 20:57
I saw Dante\'s Beatrice
sorenbarrett said:
So classical in story with good rhyme and flow this poem is a fave
December 28th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
So classical in story with good rhyme and flow this poem is a fave
December 28th, 2025 03:50
Ogden Nash
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully written in good rhyme and meter it tells its tale well and is easily identifiable by any poet. Well done
December 26th, 2025 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully written in good rhyme and meter it tells its tale well and is easily identifiable by any poet. Well done
December 26th, 2025 20:25
Two Snowmen It\'s said
sorenbarrett said:
Cute, seasonal and also funny that should be enough for a fave
December 16th, 2025 03:26
sorenbarrett said:
Cute, seasonal and also funny that should be enough for a fave
December 16th, 2025 03:26
As in Life
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that seems to have walked out a Willis collection from two hundred years ago. It has such a vintage feel to it and seems a period piece. It flows marvelously and its rhyme and near rhyme give it that finishing touch. A lovely work and a fave
December 12th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that seems to have walked out a Willis collection from two hundred years ago. It has such a vintage feel to it and seems a period piece. It flows marvelously and its rhyme and near rhyme give it that finishing touch. A lovely work and a fave
December 12th, 2025 04:01
Rosebuds all Gathered in
Thomas W Case said:
Funny with a message. Excellent work.
December 4th, 2025 08:25
Thomas W Case said:
Funny with a message. Excellent work.
December 4th, 2025 08:25
Dirty Postcards
Doggerel Dave said:
This is hysterical...nah... I mean historical. The dirty postcard business wound up some time ago. He should try the internet.....
November 28th, 2025 21:15
Doggerel Dave said:
This is hysterical...nah... I mean historical. The dirty postcard business wound up some time ago. He should try the internet.....
November 28th, 2025 21:15
Dirty Postcards
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin… the humor, the pacing, the soft turn of heart at the end… you wove all of it together with such effortless storytelling. Loved this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 27th, 2025 07:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin… the humor, the pacing, the soft turn of heart at the end… you wove all of it together with such effortless storytelling. Loved this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 27th, 2025 07:10
Dirty Postcards
sorenbarrett said:
I just knew that they were going to be pictures of mud or something like that. A good read and chuckle loved it
November 26th, 2025 20:50
sorenbarrett said:
I just knew that they were going to be pictures of mud or something like that. A good read and chuckle loved it
November 26th, 2025 20:50
Rosebuds all Gathered in
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem with a message. Carpe diem I say get it while you can. Here a simple story turned a fun read by use of good rhyme and flow. Lovely
November 22nd, 2025 03:20
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem with a message. Carpe diem I say get it while you can. Here a simple story turned a fun read by use of good rhyme and flow. Lovely
November 22nd, 2025 03:20
A Light has Travelled
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of memories cast in light and distance. Reflections of past generations and younger years and their passing well depicted in this poem very nicely done.
November 17th, 2025 03:19
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of memories cast in light and distance. Reflections of past generations and younger years and their passing well depicted in this poem very nicely done.
November 17th, 2025 03:19
Should you\'re love wain , It\'s Violence less
sorenbarrett said:
The pain of love expressed in this poem. Well done
November 15th, 2025 20:12
sorenbarrett said:
The pain of love expressed in this poem. Well done
November 15th, 2025 20:12
The Blind date
Paul Bell said:
I like when people embellish themselves a little bit, or even a big bit.
Let\'s face it, we all have an alter ego, and sometimes we forget who is who.
Just off to the moon now.
November 14th, 2025 04:23
Paul Bell said:
I like when people embellish themselves a little bit, or even a big bit.
Let\'s face it, we all have an alter ego, and sometimes we forget who is who.
Just off to the moon now.
November 14th, 2025 04:23
The Blind date
Doggerel Dave said:
First meetings on the dating scene can be difficult, can’t they? I would advise that you give it a week to gain some perspective and then talk the matter over with a trusted friend. In essence you have two basic options: either pursue the relationship, or decide to move on ( swipe right – or is it left, I can never remember…)
Mightily entertained.
November 12th, 2025 21:15
Doggerel Dave said:
First meetings on the dating scene can be difficult, can’t they? I would advise that you give it a week to gain some perspective and then talk the matter over with a trusted friend. In essence you have two basic options: either pursue the relationship, or decide to move on ( swipe right – or is it left, I can never remember…)
Mightily entertained.
November 12th, 2025 21:15
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