Comments received on poems by Kevin Hulme



Tyler Brown
Cassie58 said:

A fun story about Tyler Brown and the demon drink. Loved the Keith Moon mention. Now he was something else. I knew his mother. Such a quiet soul. Enjoyed the write Kevin.

February 4th, 2025 09:14

Tyler Brown
sorenbarrett said:

Loved the poetic inventiveness and playfulness with the language in this poem. A fun story with a point that is told well in rhyme. For its poetic use of language it deserves a fave

February 4th, 2025 04:38

Tyler Brown
arqios said:

Quite the stark contrast between his choices and a more serene alternative. But recovery isn’t ever easy. Superbly moving poem πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•ŠπŸ™πŸ»

February 4th, 2025 01:44

Tyler Brown
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely tale of the daily jaunt of a alcoholic with a nice ending, but to have Keith Moon playing drums in your head just goes to show you are in a bad way ( it is a great line), really enjoyed the read.

February 3rd, 2025 21:26

In Praise of Mary Bennet
arqios said:

What’s that famous line about having to receive all the Bennetts in the country? Someone should really put to pen a spin off on Mary Bennet! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 2nd, 2025 03:50

Beatable Prices
arqios said:

Scary and hilarious at the same time. Waiting for the next load to be transported to the penal colony, but we no longer use Β£ in these here parts. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 31st, 2025 20:10

Beatable Prices
Tom Dylan said:

Absolutely brilliant! The last line just killed it! Really enjoyed!

January 31st, 2025 08:36

Beatable Prices
Poetic Licence said:

Very nicely done, Done with Humour yet with a good message, enjoyed the read

January 31st, 2025 02:36

Beatable Prices
Cassie58 said:

Nicely narrated with a great final line. The humour really comes through.

January 30th, 2025 22:56

Beatable Prices
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 30th, 2025 20:23

Along This Path
Poetic Licence said:

This lovely piece takes me back to a time of real communities, everyone worked in the same factory`s, lived in the same houses, looked after each other. When the pits and the factory`s closed the people lost so much, but also the nations fabric was broken. Great piece of writing

January 29th, 2025 03:49

Along This Path
Cassie58 said:

Walking to work, the factory gates, the camaraderie. You took me back sometime. Factory closures, redundancy and hardship. That certainly paints a sad picture. How difficult that must have been to navigate. Matchstick men. I am familiar with Lowry. A devastating time for many.

January 29th, 2025 03:03

The Selfie
arqios said:

Ah, platforms and modes change and so do situations and eras but wants and needs always remain. So much depth of insight. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 28th, 2025 05:39

The Selfie
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 27th, 2025 20:42

Once
Thomas W Case said:

Our lives tell stories. Great work.

January 27th, 2025 10:59

Once
Poetic Licence said:

I enjoyed this read, we often forget once people are buried, that they had a life and so much wisdom, knowledge, experience etc has been buried with them, lovely read

January 27th, 2025 03:11

Once
arqios said:

Oh I hope it is not the last, I see that there is some room and some use for free verse as well... but the Graveyard, yes. It is a place of honour and privilege, even intimacy; in stark contrast to its cold and often bare ambience. Much enjoyed this Kevin πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ•ŠοΈ

January 27th, 2025 03:10

Of Petrarchan Love (Triolet)
arqios said:

The repentant the rhyming scheme makes these exquisite lines pop out! πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 26th, 2025 04:43

Of Petrarchan Love (Triolet)
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds in many ways like a song.Very nice

January 25th, 2025 22:30

Only People
sorenbarrett said:

A most lovely poem that carries a powerful message in its words. Most lovely and deserving of a Fave

January 25th, 2025 04:12

Only People
Mutley Ravishes said:

For sure!


January 25th, 2025 00:56

Only People
Cassie58 said:

Your poem may have been written years ago, but the message still applies. We are all part of the human race. Nicely composed Kevin.

January 24th, 2025 20:48

Only People
arqios said:

Amen! To the people, that we are. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 24th, 2025 20:36

Arrival (Haiku)
Thomas W Case said:

Beauty.

January 24th, 2025 14:02

Arrival (Haiku)
Poetic Licence said:

And hoping for them it will a good world, enjoyed the read

January 24th, 2025 02:59

Arrival (Haiku)
Demar Desu said:

πŸ’•

January 24th, 2025 00:49

Arrival (Haiku)
Kevin Hulme said:

Thank you Arqios. Is there anything better in this World than a Beaming Baby’s Smile?

January 23rd, 2025 20:51

Arrival (Haiku)
arqios said:

If there is but one Daisy left… there is hope!

January 23rd, 2025 20:44

Box Hill
arqios said:

Oh the tension, wit, and underlying emotions of the characters involved. The structured rhyming pattern and rhythmic flow evoke the charm of the Regency era, while providing a fresh perspective on the social dynamics at play. Well done! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 23rd, 2025 04:35

Box Hill
Poetic Licence said:

A enjoyable and entertaining read, Thank you

January 22nd, 2025 22:17



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