Comments received on poems by Kevin Hulme
Said Juliet One Day
sorenbarrett said:
There is no such thing as air travel, the airplane was never invented and no one has been to the moon. Oh by the way the earth is flat. A fun read my friend with good rhyme.
September 24th, 2026 20:21
sorenbarrett said:
There is no such thing as air travel, the airplane was never invented and no one has been to the moon. Oh by the way the earth is flat. A fun read my friend with good rhyme.
September 24th, 2026 20:21
As No one Came Back
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, you went straight into one of the hardest questions any of us faces...and left it open, where faith so often has to live. Impactfuly, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 00:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, you went straight into one of the hardest questions any of us faces...and left it open, where faith so often has to live. Impactfuly, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 00:55
As No one Came Back
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of is there a life after or not a God or not. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2026 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of is there a life after or not a God or not. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2026 19:40
Another Suitcase Another Bawl
Jabberwocky said:
I\'ve not always been a saint myself, but I have more kids than Ive left broken hearts... I have a lot of kids though!
Enjoyed your poem. Clever wrap up!
September 23rd, 2026 07:53
Jabberwocky said:
I\'ve not always been a saint myself, but I have more kids than Ive left broken hearts... I have a lot of kids though!
Enjoyed your poem. Clever wrap up!
September 23rd, 2026 07:53
Another Suitcase Another Bawl
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn wonderfully cheeky old-school music-hall quality here, with the exaggerated cad, cantina, Argentine setting, and melodramatic weeping all playing together like a comic little stage number. The final “Don’t Cry for me - Marge and Tina” is the killer, because the whole poem has been marching toward that gloriously shameless parody of Evita.
September 22nd, 2026 07:20
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn wonderfully cheeky old-school music-hall quality here, with the exaggerated cad, cantina, Argentine setting, and melodramatic weeping all playing together like a comic little stage number. The final “Don’t Cry for me - Marge and Tina” is the killer, because the whole poem has been marching toward that gloriously shameless parody of Evita.
September 22nd, 2026 07:20
Another Suitcase Another Bawl
arqios said:
Nice play on Evita’s ‘Argentina’ and the journey that brings on the waterworks.
September 22nd, 2026 07:05
arqios said:
Nice play on Evita’s ‘Argentina’ and the journey that brings on the waterworks.
September 22nd, 2026 07:05
Another Suitcase Another Bawl
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems both Sorren and Tristan have pinched my commentary here, so I\'ve nothing left to add but \'Gertcha\'---
\'And: \'Oh that was a funny one; tell me anothery ******************* tell me anothrey do\'
September 21st, 2026 23:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems both Sorren and Tristan have pinched my commentary here, so I\'ve nothing left to add but \'Gertcha\'---
\'And: \'Oh that was a funny one; tell me anothery ******************* tell me anothrey do\'
September 21st, 2026 23:26
Another Suitcase Another Bawl
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I groaned, laughed, then groaned again, Kevin. Exactly as intended. Loved it my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2026 20:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I groaned, laughed, then groaned again, Kevin. Exactly as intended. Loved it my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2026 20:34
Another Suitcase Another Bawl
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is what i call word play with a rhyme and a funny story. Well done
September 21st, 2026 20:15
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is what i call word play with a rhyme and a funny story. Well done
September 21st, 2026 20:15
Price Busters
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤣🤣🤣 Kevin! Okay, that was terrible...which is precisely why I loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 14:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤣🤣🤣 Kevin! Okay, that was terrible...which is precisely why I loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 14:20
Price Busters
Doggerel Dave said:
A Moral Tale, if ever I heard one. Good always triumphs over evil, don\'t it?
September 18th, 2026 21:47
Doggerel Dave said:
A Moral Tale, if ever I heard one. Good always triumphs over evil, don\'t it?
September 18th, 2026 21:47
Was it something I did 2: This time it\'s Personal
Friendship said:
Nicely written
September 16th, 2026 09:48
Friendship said:
Nicely written
September 16th, 2026 09:48
Was it something I did 2: This time it\'s Personal
Paul Bell said:
Lesbian lust 2, granted not as good as lesbian lust 1, but still good family viewing in some countries.
I would like to think the old guy died happy, but even if he didn\'t, doesn\'t mean you shouldn\'t have a drink or ten in his honour.
September 16th, 2026 04:18
Paul Bell said:
Lesbian lust 2, granted not as good as lesbian lust 1, but still good family viewing in some countries.
I would like to think the old guy died happy, but even if he didn\'t, doesn\'t mean you shouldn\'t have a drink or ten in his honour.
September 16th, 2026 04:18
Was it something I did 2: This time it\'s Personal
sorenbarrett said:
An interplay here between the author and another well done as a reflection.
September 15th, 2026 19:09
sorenbarrett said:
An interplay here between the author and another well done as a reflection.
September 15th, 2026 19:09
They say I\'m still in Love with you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a clever piece, Kevin. Each new excuse is more incriminating than the last, while the humor keeps revealing the ache beneath all that stubborn denial. Funny, tender, and beautifully constructed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2026 19:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a clever piece, Kevin. Each new excuse is more incriminating than the last, while the humor keeps revealing the ache beneath all that stubborn denial. Funny, tender, and beautifully constructed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2026 19:02
They say I\'m still in Love with you
Doggerel Dave said:
As I wandered slowly down (should in all conscience wander up) today’s listings, I almost passed you by. Any poem with ‘love’ in the title usually gets short shrift from me. Now I just wanted to warn yer not to take no notice of wot others might think. You do her your way… (really meant ‘it’ in the just preceding, but it somehow got confused with the lady in question… and so on…. )
September 13th, 2026 16:40
Doggerel Dave said:
As I wandered slowly down (should in all conscience wander up) today’s listings, I almost passed you by. Any poem with ‘love’ in the title usually gets short shrift from me. Now I just wanted to warn yer not to take no notice of wot others might think. You do her your way… (really meant ‘it’ in the just preceding, but it somehow got confused with the lady in question… and so on…. )
September 13th, 2026 16:40
They say I\'m still in Love with you
sorenbarrett said:
Denial written in beautiful verse and rhyme. Very clever and nicely done a fave my friend
September 13th, 2026 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
Denial written in beautiful verse and rhyme. Very clever and nicely done a fave my friend
September 13th, 2026 14:45
Blues Brothers
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn compact little descent into melancholy here, with “melancholic tsunami” giving the speaker’s Sunday sadness a wonderfully oversized, almost comic force. The final “Sadder day” is a neat little hook—it leaves you wanting to know what the hell happened on Saturday to make Sunday look like the better of the two.
September 13th, 2026 08:10
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn compact little descent into melancholy here, with “melancholic tsunami” giving the speaker’s Sunday sadness a wonderfully oversized, almost comic force. The final “Sadder day” is a neat little hook—it leaves you wanting to know what the hell happened on Saturday to make Sunday look like the better of the two.
September 13th, 2026 08:10
Blues Brothers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha, you got me good with this one, Kevin! I followed the misery right into that final turn...and then the title clicked. Clever, concise, and damn funny. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2026 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha, you got me good with this one, Kevin! I followed the misery right into that final turn...and then the title clicked. Clever, concise, and damn funny. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2026 08:12
Never disturb me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, what a wonderfully absurd ride! Each new disaster raises the stakes while the determination to remain unconscious never wavers...and by the end, I completely respect the commitment. Hilarious write, my friend! 😂🌪️😴🙏
September 10th, 2026 21:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, what a wonderfully absurd ride! Each new disaster raises the stakes while the determination to remain unconscious never wavers...and by the end, I completely respect the commitment. Hilarious write, my friend! 😂🌪️😴🙏
September 10th, 2026 21:26
Blues Brothers
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Kevin I loved it. Word play is always a favorite of mine. Good one
September 10th, 2026 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Kevin I loved it. Word play is always a favorite of mine. Good one
September 10th, 2026 16:14
Never disturb me
arqios said:
Must agree there! Feel that way too in such situations👍🏻🕊️
September 10th, 2026 07:52
arqios said:
Must agree there! Feel that way too in such situations👍🏻🕊️
September 10th, 2026 07:52
Never disturb me
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - the need for sleep can be overwhelming, but......
September 10th, 2026 07:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - the need for sleep can be overwhelming, but......
September 10th, 2026 07:17
Never disturb me
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that speaks to the need for rest. Well done
September 9th, 2026 21:00
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that speaks to the need for rest. Well done
September 9th, 2026 21:00
The Marx Sister
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this one got me! A clever setup, a wonderfully shameless punchline, and just enough absurdity to make the whole thing work. Nicely done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2026 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kevin, this one got me! A clever setup, a wonderfully shameless punchline, and just enough absurdity to make the whole thing work. Nicely done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2026 07:58
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