Comments received on poems by Kevin Hulme



Spring
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful my friend

April 30th, 2026 21:40

Spring
arqios said:

And let\'s carry on! Need this right now as autumn tightens its grip here 🍂🍃🍁🕊️🙏

April 30th, 2026 20:33

Another Fine Mess
Teddy.15 said:

lol hilarious, kudos on your imagery and smells. 🌹

April 28th, 2026 10:42

Another Fine Mess
Thomas W Case said:

Dryly satirical and slightly apocalyptic—you compress environmental frustration into a tight, punchy image set.
The grit is in that blunt final warning: engineered progress and waste colliding, with consequences left looming just offshore.

April 28th, 2026 09:10

Cest la Vie
NafisaSB said:

beautiufl flight of imagination - hope the lonely person finds a soulmate..

April 27th, 2026 07:15

Another Fine Mess
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kevin, this hit me hard…there’s a sharp edge to it that doesn’t try to soften the warning. It reads like frustration that’s been building for a while, and it lands clean. Straight to the point. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 26th, 2026 21:15

Another Fine Mess
Doggerel Dave said:

My advice has always been to stand behind the fan...However I am subject to severe seasickness ...I may well be in the shit here...

April 26th, 2026 20:51

Another Fine Mess
sorenbarrett said:

Why is it that we dump our shit in someone else\'s yard and call it clean

April 26th, 2026 19:45

Another Fine Mess
arqios said:

A centrifugal trajectory of effluent projectiles! Not to take lightly the gravity of the message. 🕊️🙏

April 26th, 2026 19:35

Cest la Vie
Thomas W Case said:

Gentle and vivid—this builds a warm, pastoral dream with real sensory care, then quietly collapses it into absence.
The grit is in that final turn: beauty imagined fully, then revealed as loneliness still sitting in the room.

April 26th, 2026 09:49

Cest la Vie
Teddy.15 said:

You got me at the end, imagery superb, I wish you to find her someday. 💜

April 24th, 2026 04:15

Cest la Vie
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kevin, there’s something beautifully deceptive in this…you build this peaceful, lived-in world so naturally, detail by detail, that it feels settled and true…then that final turn pulls the ground out completely. It lingers in a quiet way that doesn’t let go. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 21st, 2026 09:03

Cest la Vie
Doggerel Dave said:

Great picture you paint there, Kevin. I almost felt I was in your place. But I hopped out fast when I hit the last line. It reminded me of several times in my past, and I definitely did not want to go back there. Happy where I am now. Where that last line situates you should be the motivation to rear up and do something about it - good luck and best wishes.

April 21st, 2026 00:23

Cest la Vie
sorenbarrett said:

This poem is most charming in its wording and rhyme it evokes a fanciful feeling so lovely. It is light and almost fairytale like and I can hear it as a song. It is musical in nature and a definite fave

April 20th, 2026 20:46

The Centre Fold
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kevin, this had me laughing right out the gate…there’s such a playful, self-aware charm running through it. You lean all the way into the idea and never let go. That makes it land. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 20th, 2026 10:27

The Centre Fold
arqios said:

Oh, paper cuts and staple punctures, all sorts of micro-mishaps working in offices, schools and printing places 🕊️🙏

April 20th, 2026 07:00

The Centre Fold
Doggerel Dave said:

Don\'t Show appreciation for the effort it took me to read it. Took no effort at all and got a bloody good laugh as a reward.

April 19th, 2026 22:28

The Centre Fold
sorenbarrett said:

I would never bend like that my arthritis would get in the way. A fun read

April 19th, 2026 19:52

It\'s Turf Luck
arqios said:

Oh dear and in the 21st century, to boot! 🙏🕊️

April 19th, 2026 06:11

It\'s Turf Luck
Doggerel Dave said:

What, not Nikes?

April 18th, 2026 20:59

It\'s Turf Luck
sorenbarrett said:



April 18th, 2026 19:11

It\'s Turf Luck
sorenbarrett said:

Prejudice takes all forms. Good one if you take it a little further than the direct idea.

April 18th, 2026 19:11

As in Life
Teddy.15 said:

Awe how beautiful. I can\'t help but be curious to know who this lady is, only because I am most intrigued. A gorgeous piece of poetry. When people come into dreams they are certainly there for a reason. 🌹

April 15th, 2026 22:43

Haiku of my Love
Teddy.15 said:

LOL so very clever 🤣 ....

April 14th, 2026 03:08

I saw Dante\'s Beatrice
Teddy.15 said:

Having lived and still do almost half my life in Florence Italy, where Dante was born and lived I find this exquisite, apparently they were never ever lovers, but I too think there was more to this pair. 🌹

April 13th, 2026 00:16

In Death
Teddy.15 said:

My father died just this Friday past, how this has touched me deeply, 🌹 wonderful imagery.

April 13th, 2026 00:13

Thoughts of Home
Teddy.15 said:

This is beautiful, may I be bold to ask where was your home dear Kevin? 🌹

April 13th, 2026 00:10

Artemis 11
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kevin, this lands with a quiet beauty…there’s something really calming about how you frame it, almost like watching stillness from a distance. Then that turn at the end hits…sharp and human. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 10th, 2026 08:47

Artemis 11
arqios said:

Nice. I was on the Apollo-Artemis space program mode so had to shift in the mind. Excellent read, Kevin🕊️🙏

April 9th, 2026 19:56

Artemis 11
Katie B. said:

Lovely, nice tribute to Artimis II

April 9th, 2026 19:29



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