Comments received on poems by PerpetualFlowers
I hate it here
Severus Alexander said:
We possess the capability to play well, despite the hand that we are dealt in life... Take pride in your resolve.
August 2nd, 2016 20:12
Severus Alexander said:
We possess the capability to play well, despite the hand that we are dealt in life... Take pride in your resolve.
August 2nd, 2016 20:12
Another One Shot
Severus Alexander said:
It brings me great joy to know that this terrible tragedy has been lent recognition by your words.. perhaps, in time, we may rise above issues of race..
August 2nd, 2016 20:10
Severus Alexander said:
It brings me great joy to know that this terrible tragedy has been lent recognition by your words.. perhaps, in time, we may rise above issues of race..
August 2nd, 2016 20:10
To the next person who cares
Severus Alexander said:
Melancholy.. passionate, and engaging. A heartfelt poem on the edge of the precipice of emptiness.
August 2nd, 2016 20:05
Severus Alexander said:
Melancholy.. passionate, and engaging. A heartfelt poem on the edge of the precipice of emptiness.
August 2nd, 2016 20:05
Another One Shot
thatsilentgirl said:
That's totally fucked up. I hate racism. But this poem is deep.
July 22nd, 2016 23:30
thatsilentgirl said:
That's totally fucked up. I hate racism. But this poem is deep.
July 22nd, 2016 23:30
To the next person who cares
Justsomegeeze said:
Seems I'm not alone in feeling personally attached to this poem! Encapsulates the emotions and thoughts so accurately it's hard not to relate
July 21st, 2016 23:00
Justsomegeeze said:
Seems I'm not alone in feeling personally attached to this poem! Encapsulates the emotions and thoughts so accurately it's hard not to relate
July 21st, 2016 23:00
To the next person who cares
willyweed said:
very nice poem in structure and flow. ww
July 19th, 2016 19:32
willyweed said:
very nice poem in structure and flow. ww
July 19th, 2016 19:32
The struggle called sleep
AlitaOpal said:
I love this poem so much!
How are you describing the way I've been feeling..
Both literally and metaphorically I resonate with this..
Thank you so much..
Really emotional right now..
July 9th, 2016 01:05
AlitaOpal said:
I love this poem so much!
How are you describing the way I've been feeling..
Both literally and metaphorically I resonate with this..
Thank you so much..
Really emotional right now..
July 9th, 2016 01:05
Melancholy Disposition
Izzi Lynn said:
This is beautiful. I was looking through your poetry because you mentioned it on my poem, and your writing is just beautiful.
July 8th, 2016 12:22
Izzi Lynn said:
This is beautiful. I was looking through your poetry because you mentioned it on my poem, and your writing is just beautiful.
July 8th, 2016 12:22
To the next person who cares
AlitaOpal said:
This master piece described a time in my life..
I'm so touched, it's Beautiful..
Thank you
~ Alita
July 8th, 2016 12:14
AlitaOpal said:
This master piece described a time in my life..
I'm so touched, it's Beautiful..
Thank you
~ Alita
July 8th, 2016 12:14
To the next person who cares
The 2 A.M Writer said:
Very emotional! This is almost exactly how I am. Good work!
July 7th, 2016 22:46
The 2 A.M Writer said:
Very emotional! This is almost exactly how I am. Good work!
July 7th, 2016 22:46
To the next person who cares
Just.Dev said:
This is so good! alot like what i write about! we should write one together?! good job!!!!
July 7th, 2016 18:45
Just.Dev said:
This is so good! alot like what i write about! we should write one together?! good job!!!!
July 7th, 2016 18:45
Sometimes I\'m Happy
monipoeta29 said:
I like this piece, sometimes I feel this way myself. I could tell your heart was in your hands, while you wrote it .
April 14th, 2016 22:20
monipoeta29 said:
I like this piece, sometimes I feel this way myself. I could tell your heart was in your hands, while you wrote it .
April 14th, 2016 22:20
Sometimes I\'m Happy
Severus Alexander said:
Although we tend to think of emotions as an external response, they're actually more of an ongoing, internal process... all emotions come from inside. We never really stop feeling angry, or sad, or even happy... it's just that most of the time we don't notice them, because they cancel each other out. However, when there's an external imbalance of some kind, it can often destabilize things on the inside. This inequality is usually the direct result of some form of turmoil, and although it can be either personal or professional, (i.e. work stress vs. relationship stress) it can almost always be tied back to some form of personal anxiety. (The different types of which are far too numerous to list here.)
Hope is funny; it's one of those things in life that's really, really good in medium-sized quantities, but can be harmful in large quantities. (Let's be realistic, folks.)
However, it's probably not a very good idea to run too low on it, either.
I know that I'm being a little technical.. (I mean, come on, our feelings aren't exactly rocket science) and I know that it's probably not going to make my long, rambling response any more sensible... (lol!) but I'm going to finish with the opposite extreme.
"The thing that we really have to remember... is that we're never alone."
And as long as we can still see the sun, no matter whether it's rising or setting, and disregarding all the yucky clouds and water vapor... I'd say that we've all got a pretty good shot at being happy.
April 13th, 2016 19:23
Severus Alexander said:
Although we tend to think of emotions as an external response, they're actually more of an ongoing, internal process... all emotions come from inside. We never really stop feeling angry, or sad, or even happy... it's just that most of the time we don't notice them, because they cancel each other out. However, when there's an external imbalance of some kind, it can often destabilize things on the inside. This inequality is usually the direct result of some form of turmoil, and although it can be either personal or professional, (i.e. work stress vs. relationship stress) it can almost always be tied back to some form of personal anxiety. (The different types of which are far too numerous to list here.)
Hope is funny; it's one of those things in life that's really, really good in medium-sized quantities, but can be harmful in large quantities. (Let's be realistic, folks.)
However, it's probably not a very good idea to run too low on it, either.
I know that I'm being a little technical.. (I mean, come on, our feelings aren't exactly rocket science) and I know that it's probably not going to make my long, rambling response any more sensible... (lol!) but I'm going to finish with the opposite extreme.
"The thing that we really have to remember... is that we're never alone."
And as long as we can still see the sun, no matter whether it's rising or setting, and disregarding all the yucky clouds and water vapor... I'd say that we've all got a pretty good shot at being happy.
April 13th, 2016 19:23
The struggle called sleep
Severus Alexander said:
Touching!
Freedom has its perks, but it also carries a great deal of responsibility...
But, you know, its freedom, and that goes a long way. : )
April 11th, 2016 21:30
Severus Alexander said:
Touching!
Freedom has its perks, but it also carries a great deal of responsibility...
But, you know, its freedom, and that goes a long way. : )
April 11th, 2016 21:30
Melancholy Disposition
Severus Alexander said:
A glimpse of the other side... where we find ourselves all to often.
April 10th, 2016 20:29
Severus Alexander said:
A glimpse of the other side... where we find ourselves all to often.
April 10th, 2016 20:29
Melancholy Disposition
loveandsuicide1 said:
this poem is great, ive also been in hospital-many times and i too am young, i look forward to reading more of your writing
April 10th, 2016 15:24
loveandsuicide1 said:
this poem is great, ive also been in hospital-many times and i too am young, i look forward to reading more of your writing
April 10th, 2016 15:24
Depressive Cocktail
recoverypoetry9 said:
it's good well done, sorry to see you aren't feeling too good, stay strong xx
April 10th, 2016 15:23
recoverypoetry9 said:
it's good well done, sorry to see you aren't feeling too good, stay strong xx
April 10th, 2016 15:23
Depressive Cocktail
loveandsuicide1 said:
wow, this has just realised the words i couldnt write. its really good and i hope you do feel better soon
April 10th, 2016 15:18
loveandsuicide1 said:
wow, this has just realised the words i couldnt write. its really good and i hope you do feel better soon
April 10th, 2016 15:18
Melancholy Disposition
sickmind666 said:
I found this to be a very great poem, I hate it when people claim they understand . I feel as tho the most upsetting thing some one can say is that they understand, I always say to people I can relate to a degree, but I never say I understand. Everyone has their own perception of life, no matter the case no one will share the exact experience as some one else. I hope all goes well for you in the days ahead, and I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.
April 9th, 2016 22:57
sickmind666 said:
I found this to be a very great poem, I hate it when people claim they understand . I feel as tho the most upsetting thing some one can say is that they understand, I always say to people I can relate to a degree, but I never say I understand. Everyone has their own perception of life, no matter the case no one will share the exact experience as some one else. I hope all goes well for you in the days ahead, and I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.
April 9th, 2016 22:57
Melancholy Disposition
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI PF - The nice positive comment from Forlorn Dreams should lift you up ! We all feel SAD from time to time (even me) but we can always lift ourselves up again ! I do it through prayer and reading the Psalms etc and talking and sharing with positive people ! You are unique and you need to live to fulfil the purpose God created you for. Cutting - alcohol - cough syrup is NOT the answer ! The answer is POWER OF POSITIVE THINKING and counting all your Blessings. I'm praying for you and posting positive poems for you - keep looking up and keep reading my poems and the LIGHT will come ! I love the USA - what US State are you living in ? Your positive Friend - BRIAN :o) Smiling just for you ! :o)
April 9th, 2016 17:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI PF - The nice positive comment from Forlorn Dreams should lift you up ! We all feel SAD from time to time (even me) but we can always lift ourselves up again ! I do it through prayer and reading the Psalms etc and talking and sharing with positive people ! You are unique and you need to live to fulfil the purpose God created you for. Cutting - alcohol - cough syrup is NOT the answer ! The answer is POWER OF POSITIVE THINKING and counting all your Blessings. I'm praying for you and posting positive poems for you - keep looking up and keep reading my poems and the LIGHT will come ! I love the USA - what US State are you living in ? Your positive Friend - BRIAN :o) Smiling just for you ! :o)
April 9th, 2016 17:46
Melancholy Disposition
ForlornDreams said:
Hey! Nice poem.I don't see anything big that stick ls out as wrong, but if you wanted to make it more interesting think of an experience you had at a hospital, but no one really saw or felt. Something you went through, and so did others and they could relate, but that no one really knowsnor understands. Overall, I did enjoy your poem (:
April 9th, 2016 15:45
ForlornDreams said:
Hey! Nice poem.I don't see anything big that stick ls out as wrong, but if you wanted to make it more interesting think of an experience you had at a hospital, but no one really saw or felt. Something you went through, and so did others and they could relate, but that no one really knowsnor understands. Overall, I did enjoy your poem (:
April 9th, 2016 15:45
My future?
LaRose said:
Good advice Brian to PerpetualFlowers. I have many more years behind me than i do in front and when i look at the balance, my greatest time (read as happy) was when i set my own value, held to my dream and let others just see the whisp of passing. Ode to be young again, even if it was without what i know now. PerpetualFlowers, you will make it.
April 9th, 2016 06:18
LaRose said:
Good advice Brian to PerpetualFlowers. I have many more years behind me than i do in front and when i look at the balance, my greatest time (read as happy) was when i set my own value, held to my dream and let others just see the whisp of passing. Ode to be young again, even if it was without what i know now. PerpetualFlowers, you will make it.
April 9th, 2016 06:18
My future?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI PF - Welcome to My Poetic Side - Great site - awesome poems - great people. Love you poem - full of teenage angst. But it does not have to be like that ! Be a free spirit - make your own choices -m choose a career you like. Don't be dictated to by others. For me Satisfaction in a job is more important than Salary ! For many people in jobs they hate (to earn a crust) it is as you say STRESS - SADNESS - UNFAIRNESS - but it has never been like that for me. I chose to study Science and become a Tutor - not much money but lots and lots of satisfaction ! Best wishes - BRIAN
April 8th, 2016 16:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI PF - Welcome to My Poetic Side - Great site - awesome poems - great people. Love you poem - full of teenage angst. But it does not have to be like that ! Be a free spirit - make your own choices -m choose a career you like. Don't be dictated to by others. For me Satisfaction in a job is more important than Salary ! For many people in jobs they hate (to earn a crust) it is as you say STRESS - SADNESS - UNFAIRNESS - but it has never been like that for me. I chose to study Science and become a Tutor - not much money but lots and lots of satisfaction ! Best wishes - BRIAN
April 8th, 2016 16:55
