Comments received on poems by Akshadha_Joshi1310
Dead Rose
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly like the second stanza worded so well in feelings that so many can identify with a kind of life of Walter Mitty most lovely
April 29th, 2025 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly like the second stanza worded so well in feelings that so many can identify with a kind of life of Walter Mitty most lovely
April 29th, 2025 09:08
Always The Artist, Never The Muse
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful poem from the heart of a poet. Many yearn for fame, others honor, some for recognition, yet others love. A poet is only the tool, so few reach fame, Homer, Shakespeare, Poe, Longfellow to mention a few but it is not our image or words that remain for posterity but the impressions we have left in their minds that they no longer identify with what was written or where it was heard. We are whispers forgotten of foot prints left. This poem echoes with this.
April 28th, 2025 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful poem from the heart of a poet. Many yearn for fame, others honor, some for recognition, yet others love. A poet is only the tool, so few reach fame, Homer, Shakespeare, Poe, Longfellow to mention a few but it is not our image or words that remain for posterity but the impressions we have left in their minds that they no longer identify with what was written or where it was heard. We are whispers forgotten of foot prints left. This poem echoes with this.
April 28th, 2025 09:55
This Isn\'t About You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of decision and goodbye. Well written
April 27th, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of decision and goodbye. Well written
April 27th, 2025 08:28
The Twist At The End
sorenbarrett said:
Anger hides in this poem and seeps out in the desire for vengeance. A poem of feeling mislabeled and scorned. Nicely done
April 26th, 2025 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
Anger hides in this poem and seeps out in the desire for vengeance. A poem of feeling mislabeled and scorned. Nicely done
April 26th, 2025 07:35
Alcestis
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a message and set to varying rhyme that keeps the reader on their toes. Easily identifiable either in oneself or someone that one knows. And some that are quiet have a short fuse after a while an unexpected explosion. Not understood it becomes a mine field. Nicely written
April 25th, 2025 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a message and set to varying rhyme that keeps the reader on their toes. Easily identifiable either in oneself or someone that one knows. And some that are quiet have a short fuse after a while an unexpected explosion. Not understood it becomes a mine field. Nicely written
April 25th, 2025 09:09
Until We Meet Again
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts and feelings in absence fill the mind and body. Well expressed in this poem
April 24th, 2025 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts and feelings in absence fill the mind and body. Well expressed in this poem
April 24th, 2025 08:56
Change of Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of growth and learning. It speaks of maturing in what one is doing and who one is. Very nicely written
April 23rd, 2025 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of growth and learning. It speaks of maturing in what one is doing and who one is. Very nicely written
April 23rd, 2025 07:19
Yearning For You
sorenbarrett said:
A sad longing pervades this poem with feelings of sadness and loss for something never possessed. Well expressed
April 22nd, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
A sad longing pervades this poem with feelings of sadness and loss for something never possessed. Well expressed
April 22nd, 2025 07:28
I Wish You Would Love Me , Mom
MinaH said:
Thank you for writing this. It really hits home.
April 19th, 2025 16:04
MinaH said:
Thank you for writing this. It really hits home.
April 19th, 2025 16:04
I Wish You Would Love Me , Mom
sorenbarrett said:
A cry for love that one does not see from the one that should love you most. A heartfelt poem
April 19th, 2025 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
A cry for love that one does not see from the one that should love you most. A heartfelt poem
April 19th, 2025 10:01
The Sun To My Moon
Poetic Licence said:
Looking like someone has had their heart captured!!!, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 12:56
Poetic Licence said:
Looking like someone has had their heart captured!!!, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 12:56
The Sun To My Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Nice combination of two needed pieces to make a whole just as two lovers join into one to make a unit. Lovely
March 17th, 2025 10:03
sorenbarrett said:
Nice combination of two needed pieces to make a whole just as two lovers join into one to make a unit. Lovely
March 17th, 2025 10:03
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