Comments received on poems by Moonstruck_1310
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sorenbarrett said:
Graphic, haunting, creepy and sad it speaks of a world we live in but ignore hidden behind the door and buried in the cellar of denial. Well written with stark and cold images
September 15th, 2026 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic, haunting, creepy and sad it speaks of a world we live in but ignore hidden behind the door and buried in the cellar of denial. Well written with stark and cold images
September 15th, 2026 09:10
Red Riding Hood
sorenbarrett said:
Little red riding hood is typically looked at as a sexual metaphor of preditor and prey. Nicely done with descriptive images well written
September 6th, 2026 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
Little red riding hood is typically looked at as a sexual metaphor of preditor and prey. Nicely done with descriptive images well written
September 6th, 2026 11:19
Swallow The Eyeball
sorenbarrett said:
This has a definite horror feel and reminds me of a movie but I believe it may well contain more metaphor than what initially appears.
September 5th, 2026 14:31
sorenbarrett said:
This has a definite horror feel and reminds me of a movie but I believe it may well contain more metaphor than what initially appears.
September 5th, 2026 14:31
We Are Puppets
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor in this poem that seems to deal with control. Well done
September 4th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor in this poem that seems to deal with control. Well done
September 4th, 2026 04:01
A Cult
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write where ex post facto explanations justify actions and beliefs. It is easy to concoct explanations to fit one\'s beliefs where they don\'t exist mystery is meant to be. Strong words well written.
September 3rd, 2026 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write where ex post facto explanations justify actions and beliefs. It is easy to concoct explanations to fit one\'s beliefs where they don\'t exist mystery is meant to be. Strong words well written.
September 3rd, 2026 09:30
Do You Believe In God?
thally mateu said:
It\'s incredible how real is this poem! Many man has disturbed the name of god by their own interests and failed a lot with the society. God is supposed to be a savior, not someone wich condemns or kills. What a amazing writing!
September 2nd, 2026 15:31
thally mateu said:
It\'s incredible how real is this poem! Many man has disturbed the name of god by their own interests and failed a lot with the society. God is supposed to be a savior, not someone wich condemns or kills. What a amazing writing!
September 2nd, 2026 15:31
Do You Believe In God?
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how we have designed our God with human attributes of love, anger, violence and sadness. If he were a father human services would take his children away. Good write
September 2nd, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how we have designed our God with human attributes of love, anger, violence and sadness. If he were a father human services would take his children away. Good write
September 2nd, 2026 13:40
Do You Believe In God?
Lorenz said:
the advantage of hav!ng a whole bunch of gods is that they spend their time bickering among themselves and forget about us !
September 2nd, 2026 13:16
Lorenz said:
the advantage of hav!ng a whole bunch of gods is that they spend their time bickering among themselves and forget about us !
September 2nd, 2026 13:16
Do You See Me , Mother?
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to a mother that does not seem to hear or understand. There is desperation in this poem and a feeling of not being understood or noticed. Well done.
August 30th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to a mother that does not seem to hear or understand. There is desperation in this poem and a feeling of not being understood or noticed. Well done.
August 30th, 2026 03:58
Whispers In My Head
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a demon in and of itself and despair as well. The feeling of nothing being of value another. Too many demons to fight all at once. Take them on one at a time. Well written
August 21st, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a demon in and of itself and despair as well. The feeling of nothing being of value another. Too many demons to fight all at once. Take them on one at a time. Well written
August 21st, 2026 06:10
Poetry & Me
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry a means of expression and therapy. Nicely written
August 20th, 2026 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry a means of expression and therapy. Nicely written
August 20th, 2026 05:38
Beast That Lives Inside Me
sorenbarrett said:
There is a beast in all of us. Nicely done
August 17th, 2026 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
There is a beast in all of us. Nicely done
August 17th, 2026 10:06
Sinking Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of loosing control. Nicely stated it gives a feeling of depression and helpless ness. Well done
August 10th, 2026 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of loosing control. Nicely stated it gives a feeling of depression and helpless ness. Well done
August 10th, 2026 12:49
Holograms In My Mind
ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ said:
So well written, when your only comfort is your mind but even that doesn\'t let you forget the truth 😔
August 8th, 2026 04:46
ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ said:
So well written, when your only comfort is your mind but even that doesn\'t let you forget the truth 😔
August 8th, 2026 04:46
Sadness Follows Me
Moonstruck_1310 said:
@Lorenz yeah probably but lately it\'s not been working and here we are 🙃
August 6th, 2026 14:47
Moonstruck_1310 said:
@Lorenz yeah probably but lately it\'s not been working and here we are 🙃
August 6th, 2026 14:47
Sadness Follows Me
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling here of lack of control and it feels a bit dystopian. Well done
August 6th, 2026 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling here of lack of control and it feels a bit dystopian. Well done
August 6th, 2026 12:12
Holograms In My Mind
sorenbarrett said:
The inability to face reality a factor in insanity. Well put.
August 4th, 2026 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
The inability to face reality a factor in insanity. Well put.
August 4th, 2026 15:10
Duct - Taped Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that goes from pain and feelings of isolation to joy and healing feeling bright. Nicely done
July 26th, 2026 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that goes from pain and feelings of isolation to joy and healing feeling bright. Nicely done
July 26th, 2026 14:34
\"Everything Is Fine\"
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m male, born in England now live in Australia, retired. But I remember vividly the trouble I had, the lengths I went to, to individuate from my parents and family in my teens.
You bought it all back to me, but well beyond that, I hope you find a way.
July 1st, 2026 02:20
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m male, born in England now live in Australia, retired. But I remember vividly the trouble I had, the lengths I went to, to individuate from my parents and family in my teens.
You bought it all back to me, but well beyond that, I hope you find a way.
July 1st, 2026 02:20
\"Everything Is Fine\"
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to hiding the bad and putting on a false face of everything is fine. This hiding of the ill leaves the person behind the mask with their problems without support or aid due to no one knowing the pain. Well written
June 30th, 2026 20:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to hiding the bad and putting on a false face of everything is fine. This hiding of the ill leaves the person behind the mask with their problems without support or aid due to no one knowing the pain. Well written
June 30th, 2026 20:44
Loneliness
sorenbarrett said:
Isolation grows in this poem there is a development that leads to a depleted sapped feel at the end. Well expressed
June 13th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Isolation grows in this poem there is a development that leads to a depleted sapped feel at the end. Well expressed
June 13th, 2026 04:38
I Hate It Here
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of problems but refusal to admit them to others. A lovely write of attempted strength in the midst of weakness. Well done
May 16th, 2026 13:32
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of problems but refusal to admit them to others. A lovely write of attempted strength in the midst of weakness. Well done
May 16th, 2026 13:32
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