Comments received on poems by Moonstruck_1310
Pig Farm
sorenbarrett said:
This has a flavor of George Orwell\'s Animal Farm. Nicely done
September 29th, 2026 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
This has a flavor of George Orwell\'s Animal Farm. Nicely done
September 29th, 2026 12:21
Probing Pills
sorenbarrett said:
A second in a series of these doll poems that has a dystopian dark deviate feel to them. They are surreal and metaphoric of a controlling, objectifying, sexualizing abusive world. Nicely written
September 27th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A second in a series of these doll poems that has a dystopian dark deviate feel to them. They are surreal and metaphoric of a controlling, objectifying, sexualizing abusive world. Nicely written
September 27th, 2026 04:16
Tongue - Tied
sorenbarrett said:
Silence of the lambs, Preditor, Xipe Totec, trophy takers, serial killers, hunters all in one here. Nicely done gothic and dark.
September 26th, 2026 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
Silence of the lambs, Preditor, Xipe Totec, trophy takers, serial killers, hunters all in one here. Nicely done gothic and dark.
September 26th, 2026 09:56
Choking On Cellphones
sorenbarrett said:
It began with the book Frankenstein by Mary Shelly went through the movie I Robot and others has turned into AI now reality and soon there will be no need for humans that will be phased out destroyed by their own creation Just as God who supposedly created man is destroyed by man that no longer need or believe in such a mythical being. A great drama here.
September 25th, 2026 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
It began with the book Frankenstein by Mary Shelly went through the movie I Robot and others has turned into AI now reality and soon there will be no need for humans that will be phased out destroyed by their own creation Just as God who supposedly created man is destroyed by man that no longer need or believe in such a mythical being. A great drama here.
September 25th, 2026 05:14
Play Pretend
sorenbarrett said:
I take this a poem of abuse and directed against abuse of all types. Nicely said
September 23rd, 2026 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
I take this a poem of abuse and directed against abuse of all types. Nicely said
September 23rd, 2026 13:33
Dressing The Corpse
sorenbarrett said:
This is a bit spooky but then so is life, people, war, religion. Many wars fought over religion and wise men and the dead buried. Young men sent to die. Well written.
September 18th, 2026 16:40
sorenbarrett said:
This is a bit spooky but then so is life, people, war, religion. Many wars fought over religion and wise men and the dead buried. Young men sent to die. Well written.
September 18th, 2026 16:40
TV Anchor
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic, haunting, creepy and sad it speaks of a world we live in but ignore hidden behind the door and buried in the cellar of denial. Well written with stark and cold images
September 15th, 2026 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic, haunting, creepy and sad it speaks of a world we live in but ignore hidden behind the door and buried in the cellar of denial. Well written with stark and cold images
September 15th, 2026 09:10
Red Riding Hood
sorenbarrett said:
Little red riding hood is typically looked at as a sexual metaphor of preditor and prey. Nicely done with descriptive images well written
September 6th, 2026 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
Little red riding hood is typically looked at as a sexual metaphor of preditor and prey. Nicely done with descriptive images well written
September 6th, 2026 11:19
Swallow The Eyeball
sorenbarrett said:
This has a definite horror feel and reminds me of a movie but I believe it may well contain more metaphor than what initially appears.
September 5th, 2026 14:31
sorenbarrett said:
This has a definite horror feel and reminds me of a movie but I believe it may well contain more metaphor than what initially appears.
September 5th, 2026 14:31
We Are Puppets
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor in this poem that seems to deal with control. Well done
September 4th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor in this poem that seems to deal with control. Well done
September 4th, 2026 04:01
A Cult
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write where ex post facto explanations justify actions and beliefs. It is easy to concoct explanations to fit one\'s beliefs where they don\'t exist mystery is meant to be. Strong words well written.
September 3rd, 2026 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write where ex post facto explanations justify actions and beliefs. It is easy to concoct explanations to fit one\'s beliefs where they don\'t exist mystery is meant to be. Strong words well written.
September 3rd, 2026 09:30
Do You Believe In God?
thally mateu said:
It\'s incredible how real is this poem! Many man has disturbed the name of god by their own interests and failed a lot with the society. God is supposed to be a savior, not someone wich condemns or kills. What a amazing writing!
September 2nd, 2026 15:31
thally mateu said:
It\'s incredible how real is this poem! Many man has disturbed the name of god by their own interests and failed a lot with the society. God is supposed to be a savior, not someone wich condemns or kills. What a amazing writing!
September 2nd, 2026 15:31
Do You Believe In God?
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how we have designed our God with human attributes of love, anger, violence and sadness. If he were a father human services would take his children away. Good write
September 2nd, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how we have designed our God with human attributes of love, anger, violence and sadness. If he were a father human services would take his children away. Good write
September 2nd, 2026 13:40
Do You Believe In God?
Lorenz said:
the advantage of hav!ng a whole bunch of gods is that they spend their time bickering among themselves and forget about us !
September 2nd, 2026 13:16
Lorenz said:
the advantage of hav!ng a whole bunch of gods is that they spend their time bickering among themselves and forget about us !
September 2nd, 2026 13:16
Do You See Me , Mother?
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to a mother that does not seem to hear or understand. There is desperation in this poem and a feeling of not being understood or noticed. Well done.
August 30th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to a mother that does not seem to hear or understand. There is desperation in this poem and a feeling of not being understood or noticed. Well done.
August 30th, 2026 03:58
Whispers In My Head
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a demon in and of itself and despair as well. The feeling of nothing being of value another. Too many demons to fight all at once. Take them on one at a time. Well written
August 21st, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a demon in and of itself and despair as well. The feeling of nothing being of value another. Too many demons to fight all at once. Take them on one at a time. Well written
August 21st, 2026 06:10
Poetry & Me
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry a means of expression and therapy. Nicely written
August 20th, 2026 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry a means of expression and therapy. Nicely written
August 20th, 2026 05:38
Beast That Lives Inside Me
sorenbarrett said:
There is a beast in all of us. Nicely done
August 17th, 2026 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
There is a beast in all of us. Nicely done
August 17th, 2026 10:06
Sinking Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of loosing control. Nicely stated it gives a feeling of depression and helpless ness. Well done
August 10th, 2026 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of loosing control. Nicely stated it gives a feeling of depression and helpless ness. Well done
August 10th, 2026 12:49
Holograms In My Mind
ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ said:
So well written, when your only comfort is your mind but even that doesn\'t let you forget the truth 😔
August 8th, 2026 04:46
ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ said:
So well written, when your only comfort is your mind but even that doesn\'t let you forget the truth 😔
August 8th, 2026 04:46
Sadness Follows Me
Moonstruck_1310 said:
@Lorenz yeah probably but lately it\'s not been working and here we are 🙃
August 6th, 2026 14:47
Moonstruck_1310 said:
@Lorenz yeah probably but lately it\'s not been working and here we are 🙃
August 6th, 2026 14:47
Sadness Follows Me
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling here of lack of control and it feels a bit dystopian. Well done
August 6th, 2026 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling here of lack of control and it feels a bit dystopian. Well done
August 6th, 2026 12:12
Holograms In My Mind
sorenbarrett said:
The inability to face reality a factor in insanity. Well put.
August 4th, 2026 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
The inability to face reality a factor in insanity. Well put.
August 4th, 2026 15:10
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