Comments received on poems by Akshadha_Joshi1310
My Mother
Poetic Licence said:
Sad, touching and very heartfelt write of the struggles of a relationship between mother and daughter and the daughter\'s fight for her mother\'s love , now even as an adult it still hurts and you sense that longing for the love is still there, brave and very honest
June 8th, 2025 19:49
Poetic Licence said:
Sad, touching and very heartfelt write of the struggles of a relationship between mother and daughter and the daughter\'s fight for her mother\'s love , now even as an adult it still hurts and you sense that longing for the love is still there, brave and very honest
June 8th, 2025 19:49
My Mother
sorenbarrett said:
So complicated, a poem from a child moving to adulthood with existential feelings of pain and feeling not understood, alone. Breaking of parental ties and being pulled into an adult world where continued child needs for nurturance and care have not yet left. The separation pain can be felt in this poem. Very nicely worded
June 8th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
So complicated, a poem from a child moving to adulthood with existential feelings of pain and feeling not understood, alone. Breaking of parental ties and being pulled into an adult world where continued child needs for nurturance and care have not yet left. The separation pain can be felt in this poem. Very nicely worded
June 8th, 2025 06:24
Soft Love 💗
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem about our need to be remembered, missed, wanted, acknowledged and important to someone else. Nicely done
June 6th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem about our need to be remembered, missed, wanted, acknowledged and important to someone else. Nicely done
June 6th, 2025 04:12
Kind of Cruel
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of different desires that leave one a looser. Power resides in the hands of the one that has nothing to loose. A sad poem of loss. Well done
June 5th, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of different desires that leave one a looser. Power resides in the hands of the one that has nothing to loose. A sad poem of loss. Well done
June 5th, 2025 08:28
Being Gay 🏳️🌈
Poetic Licence said:
I have never understood people with such strong preducise especially on this topic, there have been gay people all through history. I love this write for the strength it displays to be ones self and not succumb to other people\'s wishes and beliefs, although they should not have to do that, it\'s hard to except someone for who they really are, is it?, great week
June 4th, 2025 05:11
Poetic Licence said:
I have never understood people with such strong preducise especially on this topic, there have been gay people all through history. I love this write for the strength it displays to be ones self and not succumb to other people\'s wishes and beliefs, although they should not have to do that, it\'s hard to except someone for who they really are, is it?, great week
June 4th, 2025 05:11
Being Gay 🏳️🌈
sorenbarrett said:
I still have a hard time understanding why sexuality is an issue. It is no one\'s business and like skin color is not a choice but something we are born with. A poetic statement of who one is and how one is treated by the one person that should have unconditional love. Nicely said
June 4th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
I still have a hard time understanding why sexuality is an issue. It is no one\'s business and like skin color is not a choice but something we are born with. A poetic statement of who one is and how one is treated by the one person that should have unconditional love. Nicely said
June 4th, 2025 04:48
I Can\'t Save Her
sorenbarrett said:
There is anguish and yet hope in this poem. It speaks of pain past and present and the striving to prevent it. Lovely
May 26th, 2025 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
There is anguish and yet hope in this poem. It speaks of pain past and present and the striving to prevent it. Lovely
May 26th, 2025 14:24
I Can\'t Save Her
Poetic Licence said:
A strong write of long term impact abuse has on people and how hard it is to forget, the littlest trigger brings it all back and the cycle starts again, nicely expressed write
May 26th, 2025 10:04
Poetic Licence said:
A strong write of long term impact abuse has on people and how hard it is to forget, the littlest trigger brings it all back and the cycle starts again, nicely expressed write
May 26th, 2025 10:04
Perfect
sorenbarrett said:
Describing the infinite with the relative is incompatible a most lovely but impossible concept. Lovely poetry
May 25th, 2025 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
Describing the infinite with the relative is incompatible a most lovely but impossible concept. Lovely poetry
May 25th, 2025 08:33
My Anger Turned Into Sadness
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of a love lost and sadness that follows, but also a sense of refusing to believe it is over for good, nicely expressed and written
May 24th, 2025 02:19
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of a love lost and sadness that follows, but also a sense of refusing to believe it is over for good, nicely expressed and written
May 24th, 2025 02:19
My Anger Turned Into Sadness
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and sadness over it as well as some denial that it had happened. Nicely written
May 23rd, 2025 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and sadness over it as well as some denial that it had happened. Nicely written
May 23rd, 2025 13:12
Why Must It Be Like This
Poetic Licence said:
The difficult battle of what is right and what is wrong in relationships, conflicting and competing emotions and ramifications that always follow.i felt it was a heartfelt write, nicely expressed
May 22nd, 2025 08:53
Poetic Licence said:
The difficult battle of what is right and what is wrong in relationships, conflicting and competing emotions and ramifications that always follow.i felt it was a heartfelt write, nicely expressed
May 22nd, 2025 08:53
Why Must It Be Like This
sorenbarrett said:
Emotion so full of layers only to be found out later as they are peeled away in the aftermath of consequences. This poem delves with complexities of competing emotions and thought itself about what is right and wrong with relationships. Nicely written
May 22nd, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
Emotion so full of layers only to be found out later as they are peeled away in the aftermath of consequences. This poem delves with complexities of competing emotions and thought itself about what is right and wrong with relationships. Nicely written
May 22nd, 2025 08:28
Boredom
Poetic Licence said:
How often does that happen to us, a hundred things we could be doing but we can\'t decide what, so we end up restless and bored, an entertaining read
May 21st, 2025 05:14
Poetic Licence said:
How often does that happen to us, a hundred things we could be doing but we can\'t decide what, so we end up restless and bored, an entertaining read
May 21st, 2025 05:14
Boredom
sorenbarrett said:
I think that most of us have been there at one time or another when indecision runs the day and in its wake of procrastination we flounder. Fun read
May 21st, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
I think that most of us have been there at one time or another when indecision runs the day and in its wake of procrastination we flounder. Fun read
May 21st, 2025 04:45
My Person
RSM0812 said:
A message filled with warmth and love and knowing where your emotional boundaries lie. Great job. A fav.
May 20th, 2025 08:22
RSM0812 said:
A message filled with warmth and love and knowing where your emotional boundaries lie. Great job. A fav.
May 20th, 2025 08:22
My Person
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for unity and a declaration of love. Nicely written.
May 19th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for unity and a declaration of love. Nicely written.
May 19th, 2025 08:38
Starlit Night
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there is appreciation of nature near and far as if space is not a factor. A most lovely write.
May 18th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there is appreciation of nature near and far as if space is not a factor. A most lovely write.
May 18th, 2025 04:37
Starlit Night
Poetic Licence said:
Gazing at the stars for some reason allows the mind to free up and wonder, lovely write, enjoyed
May 18th, 2025 02:37
Poetic Licence said:
Gazing at the stars for some reason allows the mind to free up and wonder, lovely write, enjoyed
May 18th, 2025 02:37
Starlit Night
Soman Ragavan said:
(On the Indian poet)
\"..... in regard to external nature he has a refined sensibility and a feeling of communion.\"
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\"But in the main the sentiment of the Indian poet is not artificial or complex in the sense of nineteenth- or twentieth-century civilisation. Even his aesthetic theory, much more his philosophic mysticism, has deep emotional potency; if he nourishes devotion (bhakti) towards a personal divinity, that is a consuming passion; in regard to external nature he has a refined sensibility and a feeling of communion; (.....) (P : 199). -- F. W. THOMAS.
From : \"THE LEGACY OF INDIA.\" (Edited by G. T. Garratt). Introduction by the Marquess of Zetland. Oxford : The Clarendon Press, 1937.
This poem speaks of \"As I embrace all of its beauty.\" This is communion with nature.
(Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.)
Soman Ragavan
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May 17th, 2025 21:36
Soman Ragavan said:
(On the Indian poet)
\"..... in regard to external nature he has a refined sensibility and a feeling of communion.\"
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\"But in the main the sentiment of the Indian poet is not artificial or complex in the sense of nineteenth- or twentieth-century civilisation. Even his aesthetic theory, much more his philosophic mysticism, has deep emotional potency; if he nourishes devotion (bhakti) towards a personal divinity, that is a consuming passion; in regard to external nature he has a refined sensibility and a feeling of communion; (.....) (P : 199). -- F. W. THOMAS.
From : \"THE LEGACY OF INDIA.\" (Edited by G. T. Garratt). Introduction by the Marquess of Zetland. Oxford : The Clarendon Press, 1937.
This poem speaks of \"As I embrace all of its beauty.\" This is communion with nature.
(Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.)
Soman Ragavan
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May 17th, 2025 21:36
Secrets Within The Lake
sorenbarrett said:
It is of the unknown that we fear the most. A most intriguing and wonderful write of fear.
May 17th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
It is of the unknown that we fear the most. A most intriguing and wonderful write of fear.
May 17th, 2025 04:00
Give Me Back My Girlhood, It Was Mine First!
Soman Ragavan said:
Very touching poem. However, never abandon hope. Clouds have a silver lining.
May 16th, 2025 00:19
Soman Ragavan said:
Very touching poem. However, never abandon hope. Clouds have a silver lining.
May 16th, 2025 00:19
`Emerveiller
sorenbarrett said:
Solemn thoughts in a melancholic poem. Well written and with emotive sense it becomes thought provoking and philosophical. Lovely
May 14th, 2025 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
Solemn thoughts in a melancholic poem. Well written and with emotive sense it becomes thought provoking and philosophical. Lovely
May 14th, 2025 08:46
Things I\'d Never Say To You
sorenbarrett said:
Sad any child neglected deserves more. But then any person neglected deserves more. When you bring someone into this world you become responsible for them. It pulls at the heart strings and brings tears. Can any of us say that we have not neglected someone when we shouldn\'t? Instead of pointing fingers should we not look in a mirror and do better ourselves. A lovely powerful write.
May 12th, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Sad any child neglected deserves more. But then any person neglected deserves more. When you bring someone into this world you become responsible for them. It pulls at the heart strings and brings tears. Can any of us say that we have not neglected someone when we shouldn\'t? Instead of pointing fingers should we not look in a mirror and do better ourselves. A lovely powerful write.
May 12th, 2025 06:30
Space To Heal
Poetic Licence said:
A most positive and uplifting write, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 07:06
Poetic Licence said:
A most positive and uplifting write, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 07:06
Space To Heal
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice put in poetic terms and verse nicely said
May 11th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice put in poetic terms and verse nicely said
May 11th, 2025 05:04
The Beauty Within
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write about how people judge beauty on what they first see, not the real beauty that lays underneath, like the colour representing the hidden beauty, enjoyed the read
May 8th, 2025 10:55
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write about how people judge beauty on what they first see, not the real beauty that lays underneath, like the colour representing the hidden beauty, enjoyed the read
May 8th, 2025 10:55
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