Comments received on poems by Moonstruck_1310
Whispers In My Head
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a demon in and of itself and despair as well. The feeling of nothing being of value another. Too many demons to fight all at once. Take them on one at a time. Well written
August 21st, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a demon in and of itself and despair as well. The feeling of nothing being of value another. Too many demons to fight all at once. Take them on one at a time. Well written
August 21st, 2026 06:10
Poetry & Me
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry a means of expression and therapy. Nicely written
August 20th, 2026 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry a means of expression and therapy. Nicely written
August 20th, 2026 05:38
Beast That Lives Inside Me
sorenbarrett said:
There is a beast in all of us. Nicely done
August 17th, 2026 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
There is a beast in all of us. Nicely done
August 17th, 2026 10:06
Sinking Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of loosing control. Nicely stated it gives a feeling of depression and helpless ness. Well done
August 10th, 2026 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of loosing control. Nicely stated it gives a feeling of depression and helpless ness. Well done
August 10th, 2026 12:49
Holograms In My Mind
ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ said:
So well written, when your only comfort is your mind but even that doesn\'t let you forget the truth 😔
August 8th, 2026 04:46
ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ said:
So well written, when your only comfort is your mind but even that doesn\'t let you forget the truth 😔
August 8th, 2026 04:46
Sadness Follows Me
Moonstruck_1310 said:
@Lorenz yeah probably but lately it\'s not been working and here we are 🙃
August 6th, 2026 14:47
Moonstruck_1310 said:
@Lorenz yeah probably but lately it\'s not been working and here we are 🙃
August 6th, 2026 14:47
Sadness Follows Me
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling here of lack of control and it feels a bit dystopian. Well done
August 6th, 2026 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling here of lack of control and it feels a bit dystopian. Well done
August 6th, 2026 12:12
Holograms In My Mind
sorenbarrett said:
The inability to face reality a factor in insanity. Well put.
August 4th, 2026 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
The inability to face reality a factor in insanity. Well put.
August 4th, 2026 15:10
Duct - Taped Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that goes from pain and feelings of isolation to joy and healing feeling bright. Nicely done
July 26th, 2026 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that goes from pain and feelings of isolation to joy and healing feeling bright. Nicely done
July 26th, 2026 14:34
\"Everything Is Fine\"
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m male, born in England now live in Australia, retired. But I remember vividly the trouble I had, the lengths I went to, to individuate from my parents and family in my teens.
You bought it all back to me, but well beyond that, I hope you find a way.
July 1st, 2026 02:20
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m male, born in England now live in Australia, retired. But I remember vividly the trouble I had, the lengths I went to, to individuate from my parents and family in my teens.
You bought it all back to me, but well beyond that, I hope you find a way.
July 1st, 2026 02:20
\"Everything Is Fine\"
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to hiding the bad and putting on a false face of everything is fine. This hiding of the ill leaves the person behind the mask with their problems without support or aid due to no one knowing the pain. Well written
June 30th, 2026 20:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to hiding the bad and putting on a false face of everything is fine. This hiding of the ill leaves the person behind the mask with their problems without support or aid due to no one knowing the pain. Well written
June 30th, 2026 20:44
Loneliness
sorenbarrett said:
Isolation grows in this poem there is a development that leads to a depleted sapped feel at the end. Well expressed
June 13th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Isolation grows in this poem there is a development that leads to a depleted sapped feel at the end. Well expressed
June 13th, 2026 04:38
I Hate It Here
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of problems but refusal to admit them to others. A lovely write of attempted strength in the midst of weakness. Well done
May 16th, 2026 13:32
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of problems but refusal to admit them to others. A lovely write of attempted strength in the midst of weakness. Well done
May 16th, 2026 13:32
Muses Giving Up
sorenbarrett said:
Emptying ones dregs cleans the vessel and frees it for new use. A wonderful write of finding a new muse
May 3rd, 2026 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Emptying ones dregs cleans the vessel and frees it for new use. A wonderful write of finding a new muse
May 3rd, 2026 06:21
Muses Giving Up
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem captures the bittersweet nature of this change, illustrating how the poet continues to write while acknowledging the loss of previous sources of inspiration.
May 3rd, 2026 06:03
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem captures the bittersweet nature of this change, illustrating how the poet continues to write while acknowledging the loss of previous sources of inspiration.
May 3rd, 2026 06:03
Cursed Nectar
sorenbarrett said:
Nectar comes in many forms sometimes it is poisoned by the betrayal of a relationship the temptation to take what is not yours a lie and all result eventually in the same illness of insanity. Nicely done
May 2nd, 2026 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
Nectar comes in many forms sometimes it is poisoned by the betrayal of a relationship the temptation to take what is not yours a lie and all result eventually in the same illness of insanity. Nicely done
May 2nd, 2026 12:29
Cursed Nectar
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem explores the duality of pleasure and pain, particularly in the context of temptation and its consequences.
May 2nd, 2026 07:36
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem explores the duality of pleasure and pain, particularly in the context of temptation and its consequences.
May 2nd, 2026 07:36
Unheard Metaphors
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds as though two people are not understanding each other and are as different as two seasons
May 1st, 2026 15:04
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds as though two people are not understanding each other and are as different as two seasons
May 1st, 2026 15:04
City of Angels
Friendship said:
Well written.Your poem communicates a sense of entrapment—both physically in a haunted house and mentally by guilt.
April 30th, 2026 06:23
Friendship said:
Well written.Your poem communicates a sense of entrapment—both physically in a haunted house and mentally by guilt.
April 30th, 2026 06:23
City of Angels
sorenbarrett said:
There is deep darkness in this poem in feelings of guilt as well as a sense of damnation. Well written
April 30th, 2026 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
There is deep darkness in this poem in feelings of guilt as well as a sense of damnation. Well written
April 30th, 2026 05:00
City of Angels
Soman Ragavan said:
You make this poem sound so realistic that it instills worry in the reader. It\'s your writing skills...
April 30th, 2026 04:44
Soman Ragavan said:
You make this poem sound so realistic that it instills worry in the reader. It\'s your writing skills...
April 30th, 2026 04:44
Help Is Available
Soman Ragavan said:
Do keep away from those thoughts, please. You are too precious to leave. You have value and you are loved on this site. It all starts in the mind. Stay positive and tell yourself that not all people can be wicked on earth. Stay with us !
March 22nd, 2026 21:13
Soman Ragavan said:
Do keep away from those thoughts, please. You are too precious to leave. You have value and you are loved on this site. It all starts in the mind. Stay positive and tell yourself that not all people can be wicked on earth. Stay with us !
March 22nd, 2026 21:13
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