Comments received on poems by Akshadha_Joshi1310
Little Moments
sorenbarrett said:
Thinking positive there are always choices to make. A lovely write that shines bright.
March 15th, 2026 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Thinking positive there are always choices to make. A lovely write that shines bright.
March 15th, 2026 11:30
College Is Scary
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem anxiety is stated about the future. The future is the unknown and that is what everyone fears. Once on the battlefield there is no room for fear it is do or do not and in doing not perish. There is nothing that defeats fears like facing them. A good write
March 9th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem anxiety is stated about the future. The future is the unknown and that is what everyone fears. Once on the battlefield there is no room for fear it is do or do not and in doing not perish. There is nothing that defeats fears like facing them. A good write
March 9th, 2026 03:48
Getting Older
lunarchloedip said:
felt. i\'m nearing twenty-two and still almost accidentally say i\'m sixteen sometimes! i don\'t think that feeling is ever something we really grow out of and there\'s beauty in that. enjoy it. thank you for sharing :)
March 8th, 2026 17:52
lunarchloedip said:
felt. i\'m nearing twenty-two and still almost accidentally say i\'m sixteen sometimes! i don\'t think that feeling is ever something we really grow out of and there\'s beauty in that. enjoy it. thank you for sharing :)
March 8th, 2026 17:52
Summers
sorenbarrett said:
Seasons lead to change and so too in this poem. Nicely crafted it speaks in such a natural tone feeling real. Well done
March 8th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Seasons lead to change and so too in this poem. Nicely crafted it speaks in such a natural tone feeling real. Well done
March 8th, 2026 04:41
Girl At The Shop
sorenbarrett said:
Moved by passion comes through in this poem and who has not had romantic thoughts when being struck by the view of someone fancied. Well written
February 28th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
Moved by passion comes through in this poem and who has not had romantic thoughts when being struck by the view of someone fancied. Well written
February 28th, 2026 05:03
My favourite heartache
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and haunting it pulls at the reader and holds on reticent to let go. Nicely written
February 26th, 2026 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and haunting it pulls at the reader and holds on reticent to let go. Nicely written
February 26th, 2026 09:53
A Cold Case
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and with a great twist as the narrator becomes the perpetrator. Well written.
February 25th, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and with a great twist as the narrator becomes the perpetrator. Well written.
February 25th, 2026 05:08
A Cold Case
Atticus_made said:
It\'s rather interesting to read through, especially since it\'s from the antagonists point of view, I usually avoid poetry revolving around this topic, however it is nicely written!
February 25th, 2026 03:19
Atticus_made said:
It\'s rather interesting to read through, especially since it\'s from the antagonists point of view, I usually avoid poetry revolving around this topic, however it is nicely written!
February 25th, 2026 03:19
Glowing Medallion & Silver Locket
Doggerel Dave said:
Sometimes? Some days? At all times, at all days you are open to those moments, otherwise you would miss them.
Enjoyed.
February 24th, 2026 17:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Sometimes? Some days? At all times, at all days you are open to those moments, otherwise you would miss them.
Enjoyed.
February 24th, 2026 17:27
Mirror
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep that mirror safe - it has much work to do yet.....
February 24th, 2026 17:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep that mirror safe - it has much work to do yet.....
February 24th, 2026 17:21
Glowing Medallion & Silver Locket
sorenbarrett said:
Whimsical and light hearted this poem has a carefree feel to it. Loved it
February 24th, 2026 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Whimsical and light hearted this poem has a carefree feel to it. Loved it
February 24th, 2026 05:30
Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely composed with one age following the other and the development of the character follows the poem. It is the last stanza that seals it so nicely rhymed and with the last word putting in place everything said before it gets a fave from me
February 23rd, 2026 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely composed with one age following the other and the development of the character follows the poem. It is the last stanza that seals it so nicely rhymed and with the last word putting in place everything said before it gets a fave from me
February 23rd, 2026 07:08
Getting Older
Doggerel Dave said:
Old at 16? Get real Son. You won\'t be a full adult until you are 25, and hopefully by that time you will be ready to sort out the world. 😊
Post Script: Subsequent to my commentary above, I explored your home page and discover that you classify yourself as female. Oh that makes all the difference! 😂
February 21st, 2026 19:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Old at 16? Get real Son. You won\'t be a full adult until you are 25, and hopefully by that time you will be ready to sort out the world. 😊
Post Script: Subsequent to my commentary above, I explored your home page and discover that you classify yourself as female. Oh that makes all the difference! 😂
February 21st, 2026 19:28
Getting Older
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects well the thoughts of times passage that gos unnoticed and how many of us stop at times to think where did time go and am I really this age. Well written
February 21st, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects well the thoughts of times passage that gos unnoticed and how many of us stop at times to think where did time go and am I really this age. Well written
February 21st, 2026 04:03
Getting Older
Soman Ragavan said:
Birthdays can be scary : they remind you of the inexorable march of time, something over which we have no control. The days and weeks chalk up. Little by little you find that you are shutting yourself out from new events, new trends. You will stick to previous fashions, clothes... Your friends are those you have known quite some time back...
February 21st, 2026 01:46
Soman Ragavan said:
Birthdays can be scary : they remind you of the inexorable march of time, something over which we have no control. The days and weeks chalk up. Little by little you find that you are shutting yourself out from new events, new trends. You will stick to previous fashions, clothes... Your friends are those you have known quite some time back...
February 21st, 2026 01:46
Getting Older
Allie561 said:
Getting older can be a pain, but you’ll grow into your skin. You’ll come to appreciate your birthdays although they are daunting and scary. I wish you the best, and wonderful poem.
February 21st, 2026 00:26
Allie561 said:
Getting older can be a pain, but you’ll grow into your skin. You’ll come to appreciate your birthdays although they are daunting and scary. I wish you the best, and wonderful poem.
February 21st, 2026 00:26
Louise My Cat 💗
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its declarations of attachment and love could easily be addressed to a lover as well as a beloved animal. Nicely composed.
February 20th, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its declarations of attachment and love could easily be addressed to a lover as well as a beloved animal. Nicely composed.
February 20th, 2026 04:31
Crayons
sorenbarrett said:
Mind provoking and metaphoric where we associate color with mode and other life issues. Nicely done
February 19th, 2026 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
Mind provoking and metaphoric where we associate color with mode and other life issues. Nicely done
February 19th, 2026 07:32
Love Cannot
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the creativity in this piece as it describes love as ideal not passion that wanes and dims over time. It is true love that is meant here. Nicely put to metaphor that demonstrates well the infinite properties of love
February 18th, 2026 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the creativity in this piece as it describes love as ideal not passion that wanes and dims over time. It is true love that is meant here. Nicely put to metaphor that demonstrates well the infinite properties of love
February 18th, 2026 05:11
Pretty Isn\'t Pretty Enough
sorenbarrett said:
We are our own worst judge. Harsher than most more critical. And here to the point that it affects life itself. A raw and good write
February 17th, 2026 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
We are our own worst judge. Harsher than most more critical. And here to the point that it affects life itself. A raw and good write
February 17th, 2026 05:52
My Mother
Soman Ragavan said:
Do not feel discouraged. Those nearest to us are in the best position to harm us. Stay positive. It is very sad not to be loved. However you have many friends on this site. Happy birthday !
February 13th, 2026 07:32
Soman Ragavan said:
Do not feel discouraged. Those nearest to us are in the best position to harm us. Stay positive. It is very sad not to be loved. However you have many friends on this site. Happy birthday !
February 13th, 2026 07:32
My Mother
Poetic Licence said:
Sad, touching and very heartfelt write of the struggles of a relationship between mother and daughter and the daughter\'s fight for her mother\'s love , now even as an adult it still hurts and you sense that longing for the love is still there, brave and very honest
June 8th, 2025 19:49
Poetic Licence said:
Sad, touching and very heartfelt write of the struggles of a relationship between mother and daughter and the daughter\'s fight for her mother\'s love , now even as an adult it still hurts and you sense that longing for the love is still there, brave and very honest
June 8th, 2025 19:49
My Mother
sorenbarrett said:
So complicated, a poem from a child moving to adulthood with existential feelings of pain and feeling not understood, alone. Breaking of parental ties and being pulled into an adult world where continued child needs for nurturance and care have not yet left. The separation pain can be felt in this poem. Very nicely worded
June 8th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
So complicated, a poem from a child moving to adulthood with existential feelings of pain and feeling not understood, alone. Breaking of parental ties and being pulled into an adult world where continued child needs for nurturance and care have not yet left. The separation pain can be felt in this poem. Very nicely worded
June 8th, 2025 06:24
Soft Love 💗
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem about our need to be remembered, missed, wanted, acknowledged and important to someone else. Nicely done
June 6th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem about our need to be remembered, missed, wanted, acknowledged and important to someone else. Nicely done
June 6th, 2025 04:12
Kind of Cruel
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of different desires that leave one a looser. Power resides in the hands of the one that has nothing to loose. A sad poem of loss. Well done
June 5th, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of different desires that leave one a looser. Power resides in the hands of the one that has nothing to loose. A sad poem of loss. Well done
June 5th, 2025 08:28
Being Gay 🏳️🌈
Poetic Licence said:
I have never understood people with such strong preducise especially on this topic, there have been gay people all through history. I love this write for the strength it displays to be ones self and not succumb to other people\'s wishes and beliefs, although they should not have to do that, it\'s hard to except someone for who they really are, is it?, great week
June 4th, 2025 05:11
Poetic Licence said:
I have never understood people with such strong preducise especially on this topic, there have been gay people all through history. I love this write for the strength it displays to be ones self and not succumb to other people\'s wishes and beliefs, although they should not have to do that, it\'s hard to except someone for who they really are, is it?, great week
June 4th, 2025 05:11
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