Comments received on poems by Sami Mulaj
The sea of dreams
sorenbarrett said:
I like the metaphor that applies so well to many things in this poem, how the very mythical nature of the stories is like the mythical nature of remembered relationships, how the mythical heroes of past stories are the mythical memories of oneself in one\'s own story, Some good lines as well (wings of memories broken, and feathers of old hopes blown away) go well together. The footprints in sand is such a wonderful metaphor for a first love where it erodes away with the waves of time sometimes quickly and sometimes slowly awaiting the raising tide. Overall a splendid use of metaphor and a fave
August 21st, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
I like the metaphor that applies so well to many things in this poem, how the very mythical nature of the stories is like the mythical nature of remembered relationships, how the mythical heroes of past stories are the mythical memories of oneself in one\'s own story, Some good lines as well (wings of memories broken, and feathers of old hopes blown away) go well together. The footprints in sand is such a wonderful metaphor for a first love where it erodes away with the waves of time sometimes quickly and sometimes slowly awaiting the raising tide. Overall a splendid use of metaphor and a fave
August 21st, 2025 04:22
The fifth season
sorenbarrett said:
I really like the last two lines of this poem that ground it and give it depth. Most lovely
August 20th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
I really like the last two lines of this poem that ground it and give it depth. Most lovely
August 20th, 2025 03:58
Little Bird
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, but quite sad to read, well written
August 18th, 2025 20:36
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, but quite sad to read, well written
August 18th, 2025 20:36
Little Bird
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem with allegorical and nicely formed story
August 18th, 2025 20:20
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem with allegorical and nicely formed story
August 18th, 2025 20:20
Departure
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write of a town, no births or deaths, but only burials, one to make you think on, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 17:55
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write of a town, no births or deaths, but only burials, one to make you think on, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 17:55
Departure
sorenbarrett said:
A town an allegory or metaphor a town that only people leave from. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 17:15
sorenbarrett said:
A town an allegory or metaphor a town that only people leave from. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 17:15
Friendship
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor that is well worded and with images that make sense. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor that is well worded and with images that make sense. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2025 04:35
Friendship
Poetic Licence said:
That is a beautiful write, total friendship, enjoyed the read
May 22nd, 2025 02:21
Poetic Licence said:
That is a beautiful write, total friendship, enjoyed the read
May 22nd, 2025 02:21
Tree blocked my path
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with deeper meaning than first appears, enjoyed the read
May 21st, 2025 02:28
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with deeper meaning than first appears, enjoyed the read
May 21st, 2025 02:28
Tree blocked my path
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem with such metaphor meaning. Well done.
May 20th, 2025 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem with such metaphor meaning. Well done.
May 20th, 2025 18:36
Mother’s Secret
sorenbarrett said:
Embers burn under the disguise of ashes in life as well as fire. Very nicely written
May 18th, 2025 18:11
sorenbarrett said:
Embers burn under the disguise of ashes in life as well as fire. Very nicely written
May 18th, 2025 18:11
Mountain Silence
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece around people exiled from their homelands, sometimes never to return, and question the reasons why, enjoyed the read
May 16th, 2025 05:08
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece around people exiled from their homelands, sometimes never to return, and question the reasons why, enjoyed the read
May 16th, 2025 05:08
Mountain Silence
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to be about exiles that die far from their place of birth. A lovely write about what is home and what leads us to leave it. I ask myself are we not all exiles? Loved the poem
May 16th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to be about exiles that die far from their place of birth. A lovely write about what is home and what leads us to leave it. I ask myself are we not all exiles? Loved the poem
May 16th, 2025 04:37
I wanted to have coffee with the heroes…?!
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of the meaning is we are all heroes in some form, enjoyed the read
April 7th, 2025 02:33
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of the meaning is we are all heroes in some form, enjoyed the read
April 7th, 2025 02:33
I wanted to have coffee with the heroes…?!
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that I take of metaphor. We are all heroes in one way or another. Their addresses are hard to find. Welcom to MPS
April 6th, 2025 16:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that I take of metaphor. We are all heroes in one way or another. Their addresses are hard to find. Welcom to MPS
April 6th, 2025 16:47
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