Comments received on poems by Sami Mulaj
The self-obsessed he
sorenbarrett said:
This poem paints a picture in words of a person turned inward, self absorbed. Well written the image is vivid and concrete. Nicely done
February 20th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
This poem paints a picture in words of a person turned inward, self absorbed. Well written the image is vivid and concrete. Nicely done
February 20th, 2026 03:56
Without a father
sorenbarrett said:
This poem stretches the mind forcing it to go to sunshine and fair weather but also how a hose without a roof does not leak. It seems exposed for good and bad and somehow insecure. Nicely composed
February 18th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
This poem stretches the mind forcing it to go to sunshine and fair weather but also how a hose without a roof does not leak. It seems exposed for good and bad and somehow insecure. Nicely composed
February 18th, 2026 04:39
Without a father
Demar Desu said:
For me it was a house without flooring...but thankfully I had gentlemen in my life that taught me how to be a man, and that\'s where my carpeting began. Great poem
February 17th, 2026 23:38
Demar Desu said:
For me it was a house without flooring...but thankfully I had gentlemen in my life that taught me how to be a man, and that\'s where my carpeting began. Great poem
February 17th, 2026 23:38
I DIE FOR YOU
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks nobility, short and direct it comes with a positive twist at the end. And unmentioned humility to not recognize the beauty in oneself. Lovely.
February 16th, 2026 03:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks nobility, short and direct it comes with a positive twist at the end. And unmentioned humility to not recognize the beauty in oneself. Lovely.
February 16th, 2026 03:29
DO NOT
sorenbarrett said:
The poem is a wonderful expression of messages. Do not close my eyes when I die to me has different meanings (do not shut out the visions of this world) and (literal) also (do not take away my control) Let my eyes kiss the sky (such a poetic line) Two blues together ( A great line merging colors and existence) Now with the horizon line faded ( the blurring of life and death) Brilliant!! A fave
February 12th, 2026 21:01
sorenbarrett said:
The poem is a wonderful expression of messages. Do not close my eyes when I die to me has different meanings (do not shut out the visions of this world) and (literal) also (do not take away my control) Let my eyes kiss the sky (such a poetic line) Two blues together ( A great line merging colors and existence) Now with the horizon line faded ( the blurring of life and death) Brilliant!! A fave
February 12th, 2026 21:01
Our Antiquity
NinjaGirl said:
I love the idea of antiquity connecting to nature. Well done
February 11th, 2026 22:08
NinjaGirl said:
I love the idea of antiquity connecting to nature. Well done
February 11th, 2026 22:08
Our Antiquity
sorenbarrett said:
This one in its shortness made me think on more than one level. Nicely written it reads as scripture and yet is not. Very nice
February 11th, 2026 20:56
sorenbarrett said:
This one in its shortness made me think on more than one level. Nicely written it reads as scripture and yet is not. Very nice
February 11th, 2026 20:56
Give me a pencil
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem a portent and warning. Written in the sky and nature itself an omen. Nicely written
February 8th, 2026 03:17
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem a portent and warning. Written in the sky and nature itself an omen. Nicely written
February 8th, 2026 03:17
The unspoken
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and self defining this poem sends its message in what is not said rather that what is. Its message powerful and unspoken. There seem layers in this poem and clues for one I am not sure whether scent or sent were meant. Very nicely done a fave
February 6th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and self defining this poem sends its message in what is not said rather that what is. Its message powerful and unspoken. There seem layers in this poem and clues for one I am not sure whether scent or sent were meant. Very nicely done a fave
February 6th, 2026 03:45
Beauty
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor where we envy what we are not able to do. Beauty in the face of adversity. Most lovely
February 3rd, 2026 21:07
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor where we envy what we are not able to do. Beauty in the face of adversity. Most lovely
February 3rd, 2026 21:07
Springs
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds a sadness. The springs are alive and when they dry so does life. I have a spring that feeds the house and in over a hundred years it has not gone dry yet some day it might and I dread that day. And the nightingale will sing its song with a dry throat that day. A fave
February 1st, 2026 20:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds a sadness. The springs are alive and when they dry so does life. I have a spring that feeds the house and in over a hundred years it has not gone dry yet some day it might and I dread that day. And the nightingale will sing its song with a dry throat that day. A fave
February 1st, 2026 20:35
I don’t have time to judge others
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem in its concept that is philosophical and proposes the idea of why curse anything because all things give us experience and that is good. Very nicely done in poetic form
January 24th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem in its concept that is philosophical and proposes the idea of why curse anything because all things give us experience and that is good. Very nicely done in poetic form
January 24th, 2026 03:43
The soldier of longing
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely described the wages are poor for the poet of fortune. Very poetically worded this poem in metaphor tells the life of a poet
January 23rd, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely described the wages are poor for the poet of fortune. Very poetically worded this poem in metaphor tells the life of a poet
January 23rd, 2026 03:48
The missing justice
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful object lesson told in free verse. The strength of this piece is its buildup and surprise response by the professor. The psychological effect of group pressure is well know to the point that most people will agree white is black if the rest of the group calls it such. It is a very small minority of people that will stand up and say the group is wrong but a strange phenomena happens when one does blow the whistle on what is obviously wrong many more will join the cause. Your use of verse style to present this story gives it time to breath. Very nicely done. Since you asked, it might be even further strengthened with the use of some internal rhyme or near rhyme as emphasis and the use of meter for power in the read. I rate it overall a fave due to the story line and moral presented with a little polish it could be a classic
January 21st, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful object lesson told in free verse. The strength of this piece is its buildup and surprise response by the professor. The psychological effect of group pressure is well know to the point that most people will agree white is black if the rest of the group calls it such. It is a very small minority of people that will stand up and say the group is wrong but a strange phenomena happens when one does blow the whistle on what is obviously wrong many more will join the cause. Your use of verse style to present this story gives it time to breath. Very nicely done. Since you asked, it might be even further strengthened with the use of some internal rhyme or near rhyme as emphasis and the use of meter for power in the read. I rate it overall a fave due to the story line and moral presented with a little polish it could be a classic
January 21st, 2026 04:20
Brainwash
sorenbarrett said:
How much like religion this is looking up to god and down to the devil with nothing else mattering. A lovely write and a fave
January 20th, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
How much like religion this is looking up to god and down to the devil with nothing else mattering. A lovely write and a fave
January 20th, 2026 03:53
Wanderers
sorenbarrett said:
And so it should be with us all no need for passport control the world belongs to all. A lovely write in rhyme
January 17th, 2026 21:09
sorenbarrett said:
And so it should be with us all no need for passport control the world belongs to all. A lovely write in rhyme
January 17th, 2026 21:09
The Sniffer
sorenbarrett said:
A rude awakening and a sad outcome. Well done
January 16th, 2026 20:48
sorenbarrett said:
A rude awakening and a sad outcome. Well done
January 16th, 2026 20:48
Crossing the river
sorenbarrett said:
Well....well we know where the value lay and why they call them the family jewels.
January 14th, 2026 20:08
sorenbarrett said:
Well....well we know where the value lay and why they call them the family jewels.
January 14th, 2026 20:08
How will sleep tonight ?
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth in many cases the taste grows old when it passes the expiration date. Nicely written
January 14th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth in many cases the taste grows old when it passes the expiration date. Nicely written
January 14th, 2026 04:38
The song of the emigrant
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you Sami I too have two homes one in Brazil and another in the US when one is in one, then one thinks of the other. And so it must be between a man and two lovers. A great write
January 13th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you Sami I too have two homes one in Brazil and another in the US when one is in one, then one thinks of the other. And so it must be between a man and two lovers. A great write
January 13th, 2026 04:17
The song of the emigrant
Doggerel Dave said:
Well expressed. I can understand this, because to a much lesser degree (I\'m British/ Australian) I pine for both countries when I am in the other.
January 12th, 2026 23:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Well expressed. I can understand this, because to a much lesser degree (I\'m British/ Australian) I pine for both countries when I am in the other.
January 12th, 2026 23:52
Of Poets
sorenbarrett said:
I love the depth in the layers of this poem. Country vs City, roosters vs poets, what is vs what one wishes, nature/muse vs technology/man a fave
January 12th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
I love the depth in the layers of this poem. Country vs City, roosters vs poets, what is vs what one wishes, nature/muse vs technology/man a fave
January 12th, 2026 03:40
Friendship
sorenbarrett said:
You have shown in your images what is friendship a sharing of space and no fences. So metaphoric it needs no explanation and sets out the idea that as friends we share the land, weather and time itself. A fave
January 9th, 2026 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
You have shown in your images what is friendship a sharing of space and no fences. So metaphoric it needs no explanation and sets out the idea that as friends we share the land, weather and time itself. A fave
January 9th, 2026 16:45
Mountain Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Some what mystical it seems to float. well written
January 7th, 2026 20:03
sorenbarrett said:
Some what mystical it seems to float. well written
January 7th, 2026 20:03
The Wild Horses of Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of horses and rider in a fanciful poem
January 6th, 2026 19:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of horses and rider in a fanciful poem
January 6th, 2026 19:42
The noise of poets
sorenbarrett said:
Most poetically said. Beaten of trashed they still echo. A good write
January 5th, 2026 21:17
sorenbarrett said:
Most poetically said. Beaten of trashed they still echo. A good write
January 5th, 2026 21:17
You are beside me
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poetic statement of feeling close. Nicely done
October 18th, 2025 19:45
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poetic statement of feeling close. Nicely done
October 18th, 2025 19:45
Forgive me , my poetry
sorenbarrett said:
This indeed is a beautiful description of that elusive term. Very well written
October 16th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This indeed is a beautiful description of that elusive term. Very well written
October 16th, 2025 04:43
Greed
sorenbarrett said:
A story that is harsh and dark. It speaks of a one way love with feelings of revenge from the other side. Well written
October 11th, 2025 21:07
sorenbarrett said:
A story that is harsh and dark. It speaks of a one way love with feelings of revenge from the other side. Well written
October 11th, 2025 21:07
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