Comments received on poems by Friendship
It was never done right!
Paul Bell said:
Knew I was related to the jellyfish.
Yes, a problem shared is a problem halved the caller said.
With the house falling down around me, I had to disagree.
June 21st, 2026 07:23
Paul Bell said:
Knew I was related to the jellyfish.
Yes, a problem shared is a problem halved the caller said.
With the house falling down around me, I had to disagree.
June 21st, 2026 07:23
It was never done right!
Syd said:
Brilliantly written 👏👏👏
The poem pairs very well with the jellyfish image.
- Syd
June 20th, 2026 11:22
Syd said:
Brilliantly written 👏👏👏
The poem pairs very well with the jellyfish image.
- Syd
June 20th, 2026 11:22
It was never done right!
sorenbarrett said:
Patience in the face of the unnecessary delay. It is a most frustrating world. Nicely written
June 20th, 2026 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Patience in the face of the unnecessary delay. It is a most frustrating world. Nicely written
June 20th, 2026 10:53
It was never done right!
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, loved the jellyfish, a master stroke
June 20th, 2026 09:55
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, loved the jellyfish, a master stroke
June 20th, 2026 09:55
Tried.
FrasMac said:
Super writing. Hops and skips, keeps the beat - but more, it says something meaningfully. I like poems that have a message that isn\'t twee or patronising.
June 20th, 2026 09:49
FrasMac said:
Super writing. Hops and skips, keeps the beat - but more, it says something meaningfully. I like poems that have a message that isn\'t twee or patronising.
June 20th, 2026 09:49
It was never done right!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what struck me most is how controlled this remains despite the obvious frustration beneath it. The focus never leaves the central issue...wanting to be heard, wanting expertise to be trusted, wanting a straightforward problem addressed straightforwardly. And paired with that jellyfish image? Let\'s just say it adds an extra layer of commentary. 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what struck me most is how controlled this remains despite the obvious frustration beneath it. The focus never leaves the central issue...wanting to be heard, wanting expertise to be trusted, wanting a straightforward problem addressed straightforwardly. And paired with that jellyfish image? Let\'s just say it adds an extra layer of commentary. 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:36
I did nothing wrong.
2781 said:
In this world you shall have tribulation: but be of good cheer; I have overcome the world.
June 20th, 2026 08:49
2781 said:
In this world you shall have tribulation: but be of good cheer; I have overcome the world.
June 20th, 2026 08:49
It\'s my nature not to keep hate in my heart.
NafisaSB said:
some people are too caustic, and never understand what the silence of the other person may mean - well expressed..
June 19th, 2026 07:03
NafisaSB said:
some people are too caustic, and never understand what the silence of the other person may mean - well expressed..
June 19th, 2026 07:03
I did nothing wrong.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what a powerful piece. The pain is evident throughout, but what stands out most to me is the clarity. The image feels like a perfect companion to that journey...scarred, reflective, yet still capable of holding onto beauty. By the end, there is no pleading, only recognition of what is. This one carries weight, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what a powerful piece. The pain is evident throughout, but what stands out most to me is the clarity. The image feels like a perfect companion to that journey...scarred, reflective, yet still capable of holding onto beauty. By the end, there is no pleading, only recognition of what is. This one carries weight, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:54
I did nothing wrong.
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of alienation and rejection in this poem are well expressed. Written in good rhyme and with good flow it sends its message with power.
June 18th, 2026 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of alienation and rejection in this poem are well expressed. Written in good rhyme and with good flow it sends its message with power.
June 18th, 2026 08:00
I did nothing wrong.
Paul Bell said:
Narcissists always blame others.
This is why they move onto others.
June 18th, 2026 07:29
Paul Bell said:
Narcissists always blame others.
This is why they move onto others.
June 18th, 2026 07:29
I did nothing wrong.
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, a well balanced piece
June 18th, 2026 07:05
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, a well balanced piece
June 18th, 2026 07:05
Refuse to let your heart dwell in darkness.
boot said:
That\'s pretty cool...I like the self directed scolding...
And it\'s relatable
June 16th, 2026 14:34
boot said:
That\'s pretty cool...I like the self directed scolding...
And it\'s relatable
June 16th, 2026 14:34
Mom\'s famous speech of life.
sorenbarrett said:
Here we have a poem that marks education as a simple certificate of going through the steps to membership. True intelligence may appear anywhere without acclaim or formal certification. Paper does not make a person smart or keep one from being so. A wonderful write with which I soundly agree.
June 16th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Here we have a poem that marks education as a simple certificate of going through the steps to membership. True intelligence may appear anywhere without acclaim or formal certification. Paper does not make a person smart or keep one from being so. A wonderful write with which I soundly agree.
June 16th, 2026 09:45
Mom\'s famous speech of life.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this gave me a smile, my friend. 😊 There is a confidence here that feels earned rather than boastful...a celebration of curiosity, creativity, and the many ways wisdom finds its way into the world. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this gave me a smile, my friend. 😊 There is a confidence here that feels earned rather than boastful...a celebration of curiosity, creativity, and the many ways wisdom finds its way into the world. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:29
How do you forgive someone After many years they taught you how to hate yourself ?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, wow...this hit me hard, my friend. There is a tremendous amount of strength in this. Not because it ignores the wound, but because it looks directly at it and keeps moving forward anyway. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, wow...this hit me hard, my friend. There is a tremendous amount of strength in this. Not because it ignores the wound, but because it looks directly at it and keeps moving forward anyway. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:26
How do you forgive someone After many years they taught you how to hate yourself ?
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiving is freeing oneself from the trap of anger and hate and it is so true it must begin with oneself. Very nicely said Friendship
June 15th, 2026 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiving is freeing oneself from the trap of anger and hate and it is so true it must begin with oneself. Very nicely said Friendship
June 15th, 2026 08:17
I am who I am, and that is that.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, amen indeed. 🙏 What I enjoy most here is the confidence running through it. Not arrogance...just a clear acceptance of who you are and who you are not. The line about wearing your thoughts like open seams particularly stood out to me. Strong, honest write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, amen indeed. 🙏 What I enjoy most here is the confidence running through it. Not arrogance...just a clear acceptance of who you are and who you are not. The line about wearing your thoughts like open seams particularly stood out to me. Strong, honest write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:16
When you have nothing left, they\'re done with you.
Michael A. McGuire said:
Very nice, great Imagery ....sounds like you might have been married a few times ~ LOL
June 15th, 2026 07:26
Michael A. McGuire said:
Very nice, great Imagery ....sounds like you might have been married a few times ~ LOL
June 15th, 2026 07:26
How do you forgive someone After many years they taught you how to hate yourself ?
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep write of discovery
June 15th, 2026 06:44
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep write of discovery
June 15th, 2026 06:44
I am who I am, and that is that.
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of one content with who one is and has no plans to change it or at least feels unable to do so. Well written my friend
June 14th, 2026 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of one content with who one is and has no plans to change it or at least feels unable to do so. Well written my friend
June 14th, 2026 14:59
It\'s my nature not to keep hate in my heart.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, I\'ve known that feeling of reaching for understanding and never quite finding it. Sometimes the unanswered \"why\" lingers longer than the hurt itself. This speaks to me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 13th, 2026 22:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, I\'ve known that feeling of reaching for understanding and never quite finding it. Sometimes the unanswered \"why\" lingers longer than the hurt itself. This speaks to me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 13th, 2026 22:06
It\'s my nature not to keep hate in my heart.
arqios said:
Kindness is an exemplary nature to have and keep. 🕊️🙏
June 12th, 2026 20:54
arqios said:
Kindness is an exemplary nature to have and keep. 🕊️🙏
June 12th, 2026 20:54
It\'s my nature not to keep hate in my heart.
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks of forgiveness that is far different than trust. Well written with wonderful rhyme and flow it speaks of not having the nature to hold hate but that past experience has taught one not to trust. Well written
June 12th, 2026 19:11
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks of forgiveness that is far different than trust. Well written with wonderful rhyme and flow it speaks of not having the nature to hold hate but that past experience has taught one not to trust. Well written
June 12th, 2026 19:11
Trapped in one\'s mind.
Jeannie said:
Suffering from bipolar depression, I can fully relate. Thank you for bringing mental health into poetry. I have found that creating poetry has been very cathartic.
June 12th, 2026 14:42
Jeannie said:
Suffering from bipolar depression, I can fully relate. Thank you for bringing mental health into poetry. I have found that creating poetry has been very cathartic.
June 12th, 2026 14:42
Grief
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is heartbreaking, my friend. The grief here feels layered...not only the loss of a loved one, but the complicated emotions that arise when someone reappears after years of absence. There is a great deal of compassion and understanding woven into these lines. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is heartbreaking, my friend. The grief here feels layered...not only the loss of a loved one, but the complicated emotions that arise when someone reappears after years of absence. There is a great deal of compassion and understanding woven into these lines. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:31
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