Comments received on poems by Friendship
The majestic images in a fire.
sorenbarrett said:
Fire for seeing things like smoke or water is constantly changing and a good medium. A nice picture for the season as well. Very nicely done
October 16th, 2025 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Fire for seeing things like smoke or water is constantly changing and a good medium. A nice picture for the season as well. Very nicely done
October 16th, 2025 10:53
The Fierce Decree
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is powerful, my friend...a manifesto of endurance. You blend strength with reflection so well…every stanza like ironwork, every rhyme a strike of will. Absolutely inspiring. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 15th, 2025 13:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is powerful, my friend...a manifesto of endurance. You blend strength with reflection so well…every stanza like ironwork, every rhyme a strike of will. Absolutely inspiring. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 15th, 2025 13:53
The Fierce Decree
Bella Shepard said:
This is a poem of strength, resiliance and determination with a beautiful rhyming pattern and graphic that really drives it home. Excellent!
October 15th, 2025 12:28
Bella Shepard said:
This is a poem of strength, resiliance and determination with a beautiful rhyming pattern and graphic that really drives it home. Excellent!
October 15th, 2025 12:28
The Fierce Decree
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of resolution and strength vowing to rely on one\'s own intuition and power in a world of deception and falseness. Very nicely written in rhyme and good flow it rolls off the tongue. Very nicely done my friend
October 15th, 2025 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of resolution and strength vowing to rely on one\'s own intuition and power in a world of deception and falseness. Very nicely written in rhyme and good flow it rolls off the tongue. Very nicely done my friend
October 15th, 2025 06:58
It stole my breath.
Neville said:
Absolutely & utterly beautiful and in every possible way .. Neville ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻😎👍
October 14th, 2025 02:44
Neville said:
Absolutely & utterly beautiful and in every possible way .. Neville ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻😎👍
October 14th, 2025 02:44
It stole my breath.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is breathtaking…a painting that turns itself inside out. The sea starts as cradle, ends as captor, and love runs through both. Such control, such ache...beautifully rendered. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2025 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is breathtaking…a painting that turns itself inside out. The sea starts as cradle, ends as captor, and love runs through both. Such control, such ache...beautifully rendered. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2025 09:34
It stole my breath.
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written in very good rhyme and meter a story of a happy childhood turned to night. Well written
October 12th, 2025 20:46
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written in very good rhyme and meter a story of a happy childhood turned to night. Well written
October 12th, 2025 20:46
My tools speak to me.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this piece shines with gratitude and devotion...the artist, the tools, the divine spark all meeting in quiet harmony. Your story and poem together form the truest portrait of creation. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this piece shines with gratitude and devotion...the artist, the tools, the divine spark all meeting in quiet harmony. Your story and poem together form the truest portrait of creation. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:40
My tools speak to me.
NinjaGirl said:
That is so cool! Are those your brushes? What a beautiful way to describe them.
October 10th, 2025 20:06
NinjaGirl said:
That is so cool! Are those your brushes? What a beautiful way to describe them.
October 10th, 2025 20:06
My tools speak to me.
Poetic Licence said:
The beautiful things that can be created from what other people have discarded. I understand the artist feeling there work talks to them, so pictures I see I feel talk to me, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 16:13
Poetic Licence said:
The beautiful things that can be created from what other people have discarded. I understand the artist feeling there work talks to them, so pictures I see I feel talk to me, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 16:13
My tools speak to me.
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of what one loves to do and the treasure one creates from raw materials found. A mine from people\'s discards. Artfully done.
October 10th, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of what one loves to do and the treasure one creates from raw materials found. A mine from people\'s discards. Artfully done.
October 10th, 2025 10:55
I couldn’t save you.
Neville said:
This reads like a mourning song .. a very good mourning song I might add .. and filled to the point of overflow with regret .. Neville 👍👍
October 10th, 2025 06:23
Neville said:
This reads like a mourning song .. a very good mourning song I might add .. and filled to the point of overflow with regret .. Neville 👍👍
October 10th, 2025 06:23
I couldn’t save you.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one cuts deep…the grief is palpable, the love unhealed but eternal. You’ve turned heartbreak into something sacred. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️ Very well done!
October 8th, 2025 14:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one cuts deep…the grief is palpable, the love unhealed but eternal. You’ve turned heartbreak into something sacred. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️ Very well done!
October 8th, 2025 14:34
I couldn’t save you.
sorenbarrett said:
I could see deep emotion and pain in this poem of loss. A sense of despair and continued regret even a sense of blame. It cries with remorse of a most helpless nature where one questions if they had done something different would things have been different. An after the fact questioning that only serves to fuel the fire of self condemnation the (what if) question we all ask ourselves afterwards. But a question that serves no purpose and keeps us in this never ending circle of thought. Very nicely composed and felt.
October 8th, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
I could see deep emotion and pain in this poem of loss. A sense of despair and continued regret even a sense of blame. It cries with remorse of a most helpless nature where one questions if they had done something different would things have been different. An after the fact questioning that only serves to fuel the fire of self condemnation the (what if) question we all ask ourselves afterwards. But a question that serves no purpose and keeps us in this never ending circle of thought. Very nicely composed and felt.
October 8th, 2025 09:40
Thankyou for understanding.
Doggerel Dave said:
If you need a \"loyal, true, unwavering friend.\" that involves a requirement to reveal yourself to them, I\'m afraid...
Smooth read.
October 6th, 2025 18:25
Doggerel Dave said:
If you need a \"loyal, true, unwavering friend.\" that involves a requirement to reveal yourself to them, I\'m afraid...
Smooth read.
October 6th, 2025 18:25
Halloween is in the air and if you dare!
Paul Bell said:
You won\'t be saying that when I chap your door demanding KitKats.
The costumes are getting better mind you, I never recoginise any of the kids who chap my door demanding goodies now.
October 6th, 2025 13:28
Paul Bell said:
You won\'t be saying that when I chap your door demanding KitKats.
The costumes are getting better mind you, I never recoginise any of the kids who chap my door demanding goodies now.
October 6th, 2025 13:28
Thankyou for understanding.
Neville said:
What an absolutely delightful poem you have given us today .. The depiction of love, trust and associated unconditionality permeate throughout .. exquisite aint just a word .. this whole page is a fine example of it .. Neville 😎🌻🌹🥀👍
October 6th, 2025 10:50
Neville said:
What an absolutely delightful poem you have given us today .. The depiction of love, trust and associated unconditionality permeate throughout .. exquisite aint just a word .. this whole page is a fine example of it .. Neville 😎🌻🌹🥀👍
October 6th, 2025 10:50
Thankyou for understanding.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of friendship and reliance. When one is small or weak when relies on someone big or strong, but as we grow, we learn to rely upon our self and then no matter how many leave us or if we are alone, we always have our own company For that will never leave us a lovely poem
October 6th, 2025 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of friendship and reliance. When one is small or weak when relies on someone big or strong, but as we grow, we learn to rely upon our self and then no matter how many leave us or if we are alone, we always have our own company For that will never leave us a lovely poem
October 6th, 2025 09:48
The Church of depopulation,
Doggerel Dave said:
So far your central proposition has not been addressed by anyone above (Too Hard?)
With limited resources this Earth cannot sustain a healthy population where every child born has the chance to develop their full potential….at least under current economic arrangements where too much wealth is accumulated into too few hands.
Your fanciful church (which is not a church at all) Is a straw man argument positing some authoritarian form of depopulation, which would under current social circumstances prove impossible to achieve.
October 5th, 2025 17:04
Doggerel Dave said:
So far your central proposition has not been addressed by anyone above (Too Hard?)
With limited resources this Earth cannot sustain a healthy population where every child born has the chance to develop their full potential….at least under current economic arrangements where too much wealth is accumulated into too few hands.
Your fanciful church (which is not a church at all) Is a straw man argument positing some authoritarian form of depopulation, which would under current social circumstances prove impossible to achieve.
October 5th, 2025 17:04
Halloween is in the air and if you dare!
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful energetic, fun packed nostalgic write of the scary day.a very enjoyable read for a lazy Sunday, thank you
October 5th, 2025 13:06
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful energetic, fun packed nostalgic write of the scary day.a very enjoyable read for a lazy Sunday, thank you
October 5th, 2025 13:06
The Church of depopulation,
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is revelation through shadow...ritual and ruin intertwined. Every line feels carved in marble and bone. A masterful, haunting piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2025 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is revelation through shadow...ritual and ruin intertwined. Every line feels carved in marble and bone. A masterful, haunting piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2025 08:01
The Church of depopulation,
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the write Friendship where churches already preach of salvation only in a life beyond, where the only thing that matters is the life after this why not take the short cut and get there first. Well done my friend
October 5th, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the write Friendship where churches already preach of salvation only in a life beyond, where the only thing that matters is the life after this why not take the short cut and get there first. Well done my friend
October 5th, 2025 07:33
The Church of depopulation,
Paul Bell said:
Why don\'t people go to church, does the church not offer anything anymore.
Does religion get a bad rap with all the negativity that surrounds it.
Is there room for religion in the 21st century, or has hell taken us all.
October 5th, 2025 06:34
Paul Bell said:
Why don\'t people go to church, does the church not offer anything anymore.
Does religion get a bad rap with all the negativity that surrounds it.
Is there room for religion in the 21st century, or has hell taken us all.
October 5th, 2025 06:34
Halloween is in the air and if you dare!
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem about the season and the day. With good rhyme it rides the broomstick of terror for children. I find it most interesting how children love to be scared and then we pair terror with candy to sweeten the pot. A fun read of memories and manipulation.
October 4th, 2025 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem about the season and the day. With good rhyme it rides the broomstick of terror for children. I find it most interesting how children love to be scared and then we pair terror with candy to sweeten the pot. A fun read of memories and manipulation.
October 4th, 2025 09:30
Halloween is in the air and if you dare!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a ride of memory and mayhem. That counter stacked high…the masks…the cobwebs. All of it captures the thrill of chaos and the sweetness of fear and the season of Halloween. Nostalgic and alive. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2025 09:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a ride of memory and mayhem. That counter stacked high…the masks…the cobwebs. All of it captures the thrill of chaos and the sweetness of fear and the season of Halloween. Nostalgic and alive. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2025 09:02
Words define your actions.
Poetic Licence said:
This was a lovely inspiring write to read, many wise words handed over. Foundations of anything worthwhile is trust, and if you give your word do your upmost to honour it, thank you for sharing
October 4th, 2025 08:44
Poetic Licence said:
This was a lovely inspiring write to read, many wise words handed over. Foundations of anything worthwhile is trust, and if you give your word do your upmost to honour it, thank you for sharing
October 4th, 2025 08:44
Words define your actions.
Mike Prestridge said:
Great writing. This is a quality thats very rare and hard to find. To keep one\'s word is essential.
October 3rd, 2025 09:13
Mike Prestridge said:
Great writing. This is a quality thats very rare and hard to find. To keep one\'s word is essential.
October 3rd, 2025 09:13
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