Comments received on poems by Friendship
Farts 🤣
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, hahaha...you took something utterly ridiculous and somehow made it genuinely poetic. The playful seriousness of the tone all the way through absolutely got me. “The quiet ghost of belly craft” is one heck of an opening. This made me laugh out loud, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, hahaha...you took something utterly ridiculous and somehow made it genuinely poetic. The playful seriousness of the tone all the way through absolutely got me. “The quiet ghost of belly craft” is one heck of an opening. This made me laugh out loud, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:11
Tried.
Neville said:
This is pretty much perfect in my book .. well in any book if you ask me .. Neville 🌻
May 23rd, 2026 03:04
Neville said:
This is pretty much perfect in my book .. well in any book if you ask me .. Neville 🌻
May 23rd, 2026 03:04
Tried.
David Wakeling said:
Wow for me this is someone struggling to climb a mountain.It is so much more however.A lot to unpack here trembling hands to I can\'t try anymore.Very masterly done.Enjoyable read
May 22nd, 2026 20:18
David Wakeling said:
Wow for me this is someone struggling to climb a mountain.It is so much more however.A lot to unpack here trembling hands to I can\'t try anymore.Very masterly done.Enjoyable read
May 22nd, 2026 20:18
Tried.
Fränz Müller said:
I felt this poem in the marrow of my bones. Excellent!
May 22nd, 2026 19:22
Fränz Müller said:
I felt this poem in the marrow of my bones. Excellent!
May 22nd, 2026 19:22
Tried.
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of giving in and throwing in the towel after a life of strife. Some simply wonderful lines in this poem \"I poured the river’s weight into a glass,
And watched the steady hours turn to sand\" The next two lines equally good, as is the next stanza. So I come close to citing the whole poem. Very nicely done my friend
May 22nd, 2026 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of giving in and throwing in the towel after a life of strife. Some simply wonderful lines in this poem \"I poured the river’s weight into a glass,
And watched the steady hours turn to sand\" The next two lines equally good, as is the next stanza. So I come close to citing the whole poem. Very nicely done my friend
May 22nd, 2026 12:18
Farts 🤣
David Wakeling said:
This was a fun read. Well written to lighten the tension
May 21st, 2026 19:20
David Wakeling said:
This was a fun read. Well written to lighten the tension
May 21st, 2026 19:20
Farts 🤣
sorenbarrett said:
Well written on a forbidden subject is a good start to a fave. Well rhymed and made me smile that childish smile of such a topic. It gets a fave from me. Andre the Giant used to like to get in an elevator loaded with people and let one rip suffocating all inside.
May 21st, 2026 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
Well written on a forbidden subject is a good start to a fave. Well rhymed and made me smile that childish smile of such a topic. It gets a fave from me. Andre the Giant used to like to get in an elevator loaded with people and let one rip suffocating all inside.
May 21st, 2026 14:21
What to paint?
RSM0812 said:
You kept me captivated from beginning to end. Blame is can be a dangerous shadow in a persons psyche. Blame of our selves. Blame of others. It keeps a person battling like a huntman after the prey. Genius.
May 21st, 2026 12:48
RSM0812 said:
You kept me captivated from beginning to end. Blame is can be a dangerous shadow in a persons psyche. Blame of our selves. Blame of others. It keeps a person battling like a huntman after the prey. Genius.
May 21st, 2026 12:48
What to paint?
RSM0812 said:
Kept me captivated from beginning to end. You kept the message fluent in style with every word choice. Loved it. :)
May 21st, 2026 12:44
RSM0812 said:
Kept me captivated from beginning to end. You kept the message fluent in style with every word choice. Loved it. :)
May 21st, 2026 12:44
What to paint?
RSM0812 said:
Kept me captivated from beginning to end. You kept the message fluent in style with every word choice. Loved it. :)
May 21st, 2026 12:44
RSM0812 said:
Kept me captivated from beginning to end. You kept the message fluent in style with every word choice. Loved it. :)
May 21st, 2026 12:44
Happy Birthday, my brother from another mother.❤️
David Wakeling said:
What a beautiful tribute to a lasting friendship on the Birthday. An enlightened and enjoyable read
May 20th, 2026 18:32
David Wakeling said:
What a beautiful tribute to a lasting friendship on the Birthday. An enlightened and enjoyable read
May 20th, 2026 18:32
Happy Birthday, my brother from another mother.❤️
Neville said:
Sounds to me like you are both very lucky .. Neville
May 20th, 2026 11:27
Neville said:
Sounds to me like you are both very lucky .. Neville
May 20th, 2026 11:27
Happy Birthday, my brother from another mother.❤️
Fränz Müller said:
What a lovely poem and tribute!
May 20th, 2026 10:42
Fränz Müller said:
What a lovely poem and tribute!
May 20th, 2026 10:42
Happy Birthday, my brother from another mother.❤️
sorenbarrett said:
A well written tribute to a long lasting friendship. Nicely written and in good rhyme and flow. I hope it reaches his eyes
May 20th, 2026 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
A well written tribute to a long lasting friendship. Nicely written and in good rhyme and flow. I hope it reaches his eyes
May 20th, 2026 10:12
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
2781 said:
That was hilarious! Problem is, I was imagining Triffids. Enjoyed it anyway.
May 20th, 2026 09:14
2781 said:
That was hilarious! Problem is, I was imagining Triffids. Enjoyed it anyway.
May 20th, 2026 09:14
Happy Birthday, my brother from another mother.❤️
2781 said:
That\'s a great present.
May 20th, 2026 08:46
2781 said:
That\'s a great present.
May 20th, 2026 08:46
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, sorry, me and my family will move out right away! 🤣
Okay…just kidding. This genuinely creeped me out, my friend. The way the invasion slowly shifts from invasive plants into something sentient and aware is incredibly effective. By the end, it feels less like a garden and more like a living siege. Powerful horror piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 19:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, sorry, me and my family will move out right away! 🤣
Okay…just kidding. This genuinely creeped me out, my friend. The way the invasion slowly shifts from invasive plants into something sentient and aware is incredibly effective. By the end, it feels less like a garden and more like a living siege. Powerful horror piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 19:53
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah is your yard infested with the lizard in picture? Looks small unless too many then may seem a problem. Do they harm or bite? My dad has lizard phobia, i dont. I have roach phobia big time.
Your poem is fantastic haunting! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:15
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah is your yard infested with the lizard in picture? Looks small unless too many then may seem a problem. Do they harm or bite? My dad has lizard phobia, i dont. I have roach phobia big time.
Your poem is fantastic haunting! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:15
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
Paul Bell said:
I like the way golfers in Florida work their way around the aligators.
Lizards I forgot about. We just get the ferals in Britain, and we can\'t even shoot them.
I take it you\'re a careful gardener.
May 19th, 2026 11:01
Paul Bell said:
I like the way golfers in Florida work their way around the aligators.
Lizards I forgot about. We just get the ferals in Britain, and we can\'t even shoot them.
I take it you\'re a careful gardener.
May 19th, 2026 11:01
What to paint?
NafisaSB said:
Beautifully captured how we seek the flaws in others and keep bruising others and sometimes ourselves rather than accepting people as they are.
May 19th, 2026 09:23
NafisaSB said:
Beautifully captured how we seek the flaws in others and keep bruising others and sometimes ourselves rather than accepting people as they are.
May 19th, 2026 09:23
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
David Wakeling said:
Yes reptiles can be scary. An amazing description of the fear and the damage.Had me hiding under the covers.Excellent
May 18th, 2026 17:56
David Wakeling said:
Yes reptiles can be scary. An amazing description of the fear and the damage.Had me hiding under the covers.Excellent
May 18th, 2026 17:56
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read where a lizard becomes a monster in the mind. So well written it carries the reader along.
May 18th, 2026 16:39
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read where a lizard becomes a monster in the mind. So well written it carries the reader along.
May 18th, 2026 16:39
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
Fränz Müller said:
It sounds like you’re describing my yard! Quite enjoyed this!
May 18th, 2026 16:38
Fränz Müller said:
It sounds like you’re describing my yard! Quite enjoyed this!
May 18th, 2026 16:38
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