Comments received on poems by Friendship
Mama\'s nasal hair,
sorenbarrett said:
Ah so true what one attempts to extricate, or hide is often the marker of who one is and the strengths of a life well lived. Nicely written my friend
December 8th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Ah so true what one attempts to extricate, or hide is often the marker of who one is and the strengths of a life well lived. Nicely written my friend
December 8th, 2025 06:26
Mama\'s nasal hair,
Paul Bell said:
Here\'s to mama\'s nasal hair, she\'s done her time and deserves to show it off.
Plus, she\'s got to a time in her life when she\'s thought to herself, Brad Pitt isn\'t coming.
December 8th, 2025 06:23
Paul Bell said:
Here\'s to mama\'s nasal hair, she\'s done her time and deserves to show it off.
Plus, she\'s got to a time in her life when she\'s thought to herself, Brad Pitt isn\'t coming.
December 8th, 2025 06:23
Ass liquor both ways.
NinjaGirl said:
Funny visual haha but great message. I don\'t consume alcohol either, anything that messes up your system I believe to be dangerous. Well done my friend
December 7th, 2025 20:41
NinjaGirl said:
Funny visual haha but great message. I don\'t consume alcohol either, anything that messes up your system I believe to be dangerous. Well done my friend
December 7th, 2025 20:41
Ass liquor both ways.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write full of images and metaphor that enriches the meaning. I congratulate you on the write so well done. A fave
December 7th, 2025 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write full of images and metaphor that enriches the meaning. I congratulate you on the write so well done. A fave
December 7th, 2025 09:23
Ass liquor both ways.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is fierce, lyrical, and painfully honest. First, I love the title! Indeed! Also, the way you frame the act as a sacrament gone wrong… it lands with real weight. A remarkable piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is fierce, lyrical, and painfully honest. First, I love the title! Indeed! Also, the way you frame the act as a sacrament gone wrong… it lands with real weight. A remarkable piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 08:16
Christmas.
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I drift back in time to wamest memories of the Christmases you describe. Thank you for these beautiful, happy rememberances!
December 6th, 2025 12:08
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I drift back in time to wamest memories of the Christmases you describe. Thank you for these beautiful, happy rememberances!
December 6th, 2025 12:08
Christmas.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this whole piece carries the hush and glow of winter… the longing, the warmth, the memory of light. You make Christmas feel like a place the heart returns to. Lovely work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 6th, 2025 10:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this whole piece carries the hush and glow of winter… the longing, the warmth, the memory of light. You make Christmas feel like a place the heart returns to. Lovely work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 6th, 2025 10:55
Christmas.
orchidee said:
Good write F. A couple of Carols are a bit daft. They seem to worship the Christmas tree itself. A bit of idolatry there!
December 6th, 2025 07:48
orchidee said:
Good write F. A couple of Carols are a bit daft. They seem to worship the Christmas tree itself. A bit of idolatry there!
December 6th, 2025 07:48
Christmas.
sorenbarrett said:
Such a nostalgic poem of fond memories. Christmas literally and symbolically a marker of all that is good about family, friends and mankind. It is an archetype of peace and harmony a safe and secure place to withdraw from a violent, cold and rejecting world. You set this so well and the picture is perfect an idealized memory. Loved it and it has such a sense of longing just as does a childhood fairytale
December 6th, 2025 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Such a nostalgic poem of fond memories. Christmas literally and symbolically a marker of all that is good about family, friends and mankind. It is an archetype of peace and harmony a safe and secure place to withdraw from a violent, cold and rejecting world. You set this so well and the picture is perfect an idealized memory. Loved it and it has such a sense of longing just as does a childhood fairytale
December 6th, 2025 07:03
Christmas.
Paul Bell said:
Oh, Christmas, why am I in this women\'s shop trying to remember what size, what colour, what style she said.
What is wrong with a big flowery dress, every woman should have one. Okay, underwear department, why does she need underwear, she has millions.
Okay, my task is done, I deserve a drink.
December 6th, 2025 06:47
Paul Bell said:
Oh, Christmas, why am I in this women\'s shop trying to remember what size, what colour, what style she said.
What is wrong with a big flowery dress, every woman should have one. Okay, underwear department, why does she need underwear, she has millions.
Okay, my task is done, I deserve a drink.
December 6th, 2025 06:47
Recognize.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, the whole poem carries this gentle grief…the way memory and reality drift apart until the voice becomes the anchor. It is tender, honest, and full of lived truth. So very well penned, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 5th, 2025 11:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, the whole poem carries this gentle grief…the way memory and reality drift apart until the voice becomes the anchor. It is tender, honest, and full of lived truth. So very well penned, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 5th, 2025 11:09
Recognize.
orchidee said:
A daft comment from me - Ahh, so you recognise me?! And a note to self: Do shut up sometimes Orchi. heehee.
December 5th, 2025 09:04
orchidee said:
A daft comment from me - Ahh, so you recognise me?! And a note to self: Do shut up sometimes Orchi. heehee.
December 5th, 2025 09:04
Recognize.
Paul Bell said:
Telling piece, the voice may stay the same, but time sometimes does you no favours.
Sadly we\'re all getting older, leaving the young behind us.
December 5th, 2025 08:53
Paul Bell said:
Telling piece, the voice may stay the same, but time sometimes does you no favours.
Sadly we\'re all getting older, leaving the young behind us.
December 5th, 2025 08:53
Recognize.
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem that encapsulates our difficulty dealing with the ravages of time and the decay that changes the map. Written in a most wonderful rhyme that is subtle and to some hidden. It evokes a sense of sadness and melancholy that is nostalgic at the same time. Very well done
December 5th, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem that encapsulates our difficulty dealing with the ravages of time and the decay that changes the map. Written in a most wonderful rhyme that is subtle and to some hidden. It evokes a sense of sadness and melancholy that is nostalgic at the same time. Very well done
December 5th, 2025 08:41
You\'re just not worth it.
Paul Bell said:
When you bring someone into your confidence, and they betray it, you must never hesitate to get rid of them.
Trust is everything in life. Old bones out, new bones in.
December 4th, 2025 04:11
Paul Bell said:
When you bring someone into your confidence, and they betray it, you must never hesitate to get rid of them.
Trust is everything in life. Old bones out, new bones in.
December 4th, 2025 04:11
You\'re just not worth it.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the strength here is quiet but undeniable…the reclaiming of identity, the naming of harm, the final choice to walk toward kinder ground. It’s tender, fierce, and steady all at once. A powerful piece. And OMG, I love the image tons! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 3rd, 2025 18:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the strength here is quiet but undeniable…the reclaiming of identity, the naming of harm, the final choice to walk toward kinder ground. It’s tender, fierce, and steady all at once. A powerful piece. And OMG, I love the image tons! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 3rd, 2025 18:42
You\'re just not worth it.
orchidee said:
You know that one in the picture there?! lol.
December 3rd, 2025 11:24
orchidee said:
You know that one in the picture there?! lol.
December 3rd, 2025 11:24
You\'re just not worth it.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where pulling in and withdrawal are a protection from great pain and hurt. It is at times easier to fly than confront. So well worded and constructed it speaks to the perceived attacks of an unaccepting world. Fragile enough that two words can breach the inner doors and leave one exposed. A raw expression of hurt and pain so profound that building barriers is one\'s only defense. Very nicely composed and rhymed.
December 3rd, 2025 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where pulling in and withdrawal are a protection from great pain and hurt. It is at times easier to fly than confront. So well worded and constructed it speaks to the perceived attacks of an unaccepting world. Fragile enough that two words can breach the inner doors and leave one exposed. A raw expression of hurt and pain so profound that building barriers is one\'s only defense. Very nicely composed and rhymed.
December 3rd, 2025 08:04
Ignorance!
Dan Williams said:
I have read that idiots are often happier people than geniuses, with room between for the rest of us. Nice work.
December 3rd, 2025 01:58
Dan Williams said:
I have read that idiots are often happier people than geniuses, with room between for the rest of us. Nice work.
December 3rd, 2025 01:58
Ignorance!
Paul Bell said:
Ignorance is bliss, or at least for a while.
For some it might be days, others years.
It\'s the avalanche when the truth does surface, and we\'ve seen this in real life when people walkaway, never to return.
December 2nd, 2025 10:55
Paul Bell said:
Ignorance is bliss, or at least for a while.
For some it might be days, others years.
It\'s the avalanche when the truth does surface, and we\'ve seen this in real life when people walkaway, never to return.
December 2nd, 2025 10:55
Ignorance!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is beautifully crafted…the velvet dark, the planned hypocrisy, the truth arriving with “chilling grace.” You traced the whole journey from false shelter to necessary awakening. Stunning work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is beautifully crafted…the velvet dark, the planned hypocrisy, the truth arriving with “chilling grace.” You traced the whole journey from false shelter to necessary awakening. Stunning work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:47
Ignorance!
sorenbarrett said:
Bravo! This poem expresses deep feelings peeled away from a core of anger. So well expressed in good rhyme as well that seems to hold the very bulging boundaries of rage from bursting forth. A lovely write of emotion contained with mere words. it pulses and lives under the surface. Very nicely done a fave
December 2nd, 2025 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
Bravo! This poem expresses deep feelings peeled away from a core of anger. So well expressed in good rhyme as well that seems to hold the very bulging boundaries of rage from bursting forth. A lovely write of emotion contained with mere words. it pulses and lives under the surface. Very nicely done a fave
December 2nd, 2025 06:37
Change
NafisaSB said:
definitely time for a change, and a move forward..
lovely poem
December 2nd, 2025 00:11
NafisaSB said:
definitely time for a change, and a move forward..
lovely poem
December 2nd, 2025 00:11
Quieting stress
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is soothing in the deepest way…the frantic hum settling into slow breath, the world softening into quiet. You wrote a calm we can step into. A fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 18:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is soothing in the deepest way…the frantic hum settling into slow breath, the world softening into quiet. You wrote a calm we can step into. A fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 18:10
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