Comments received on poems by Friendship
I am done.
mylastwrites said:
We reach a point, where we just get too tired to care anymore. In so many ways I relate to this poem. Great write. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2026 14:39
mylastwrites said:
We reach a point, where we just get too tired to care anymore. In so many ways I relate to this poem. Great write. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2026 14:39
I am done.
sorenbarrett said:
I hear exhaustion in this write where good rhyme reinforces the feeling of having spent all one\'s energy and reserves to get to where one is and one is simply spent. Very well written.
July 16th, 2026 14:30
sorenbarrett said:
I hear exhaustion in this write where good rhyme reinforces the feeling of having spent all one\'s energy and reserves to get to where one is and one is simply spent. Very well written.
July 16th, 2026 14:30
Forgiveness
soheil khodaparasti said:
Insightful: Forgiveness as an act of self-protection while recognizing that the pain still remains.
July 16th, 2026 10:53
soheil khodaparasti said:
Insightful: Forgiveness as an act of self-protection while recognizing that the pain still remains.
July 16th, 2026 10:53
Forgiveness
cellinic said:
Deep and integrally penned lyrics with overtones of both conflict and harmony in its meaningful basics. Best wishes, my fave.
July 16th, 2026 06:18
cellinic said:
Deep and integrally penned lyrics with overtones of both conflict and harmony in its meaningful basics. Best wishes, my fave.
July 16th, 2026 06:18
Forgiveness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a compelling piece, Friendship. I appreciate how you explore forgiveness through the lens of self-preservation rather than easy resolution. The emotional honesty carries the poem, and the closing leaves the reader lingering in that unresolved space. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a compelling piece, Friendship. I appreciate how you explore forgiveness through the lens of self-preservation rather than easy resolution. The emotional honesty carries the poem, and the closing leaves the reader lingering in that unresolved space. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:44
Forgiveness
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a lot of truth in what you say.
A good Write.
July 15th, 2026 20:20
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a lot of truth in what you say.
A good Write.
July 15th, 2026 20:20
Forgiveness
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting point of view Friendship. Well written
July 15th, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting point of view Friendship. Well written
July 15th, 2026 13:40
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
mylastwrites said:
I related to your poem very deeply. Losing someone I loved after 18 years together. The one thing I learned, the loving doesn’t stop with their passing. You wrote an absolutely beautiful poem. Thank you.
July 13th, 2026 12:11
mylastwrites said:
I related to your poem very deeply. Losing someone I loved after 18 years together. The one thing I learned, the loving doesn’t stop with their passing. You wrote an absolutely beautiful poem. Thank you.
July 13th, 2026 12:11
Just Bullshit.
NafisaSB said:
Good decision spelt out in clear terms. Never let anyone take advantage if you are right✌️
July 12th, 2026 21:42
NafisaSB said:
Good decision spelt out in clear terms. Never let anyone take advantage if you are right✌️
July 12th, 2026 21:42
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
Paul Bell said:
Great epitaph, maybe open a bottle and drink a toast to a fine fellow.
Thoughts with you.
July 7th, 2026 13:51
Paul Bell said:
Great epitaph, maybe open a bottle and drink a toast to a fine fellow.
Thoughts with you.
July 7th, 2026 13:51
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
Syd said:
Such a personal heartfelt piece.
Very well written 👏
- Syd 🍄
July 7th, 2026 13:32
Syd said:
Such a personal heartfelt piece.
Very well written 👏
- Syd 🍄
July 7th, 2026 13:32
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
Kevin Hulme said:
I read this on what would have been my Mother\'s 98th Birthday. Yes we still miss our Loved Ones that have gone . And think of them every day.
A touching Poem.
July 7th, 2026 08:26
Kevin Hulme said:
I read this on what would have been my Mother\'s 98th Birthday. Yes we still miss our Loved Ones that have gone . And think of them every day.
A touching Poem.
July 7th, 2026 08:26
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a deep tenderness here, a love that refuses to end even when someone is gone.
The birthday candles become a beautiful symbol of memory, carrying warmth across the distance between two hearts.
July 7th, 2026 07:57
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a deep tenderness here, a love that refuses to end even when someone is gone.
The birthday candles become a beautiful symbol of memory, carrying warmth across the distance between two hearts.
July 7th, 2026 07:57
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a heartfelt tribute, Friendship. You honor both the life you shared and the love that still remains, and that balance gives this such quiet strength. It\'s tender without ever feeling sentimental, and it left me sitting with it long after I finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 16:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a heartfelt tribute, Friendship. You honor both the life you shared and the love that still remains, and that balance gives this such quiet strength. It\'s tender without ever feeling sentimental, and it left me sitting with it long after I finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 16:42
If there is a god, my question to God is why?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what a powerful piece. I appreciate that you let the questions remain questions instead of rushing toward resolution...and especially college-aged. The contrast between being told you carry a divine spark and then being wounded by those claiming to defend that same light is deeply affecting. This one stayed with me. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 15:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what a powerful piece. I appreciate that you let the questions remain questions instead of rushing toward resolution...and especially college-aged. The contrast between being told you carry a divine spark and then being wounded by those claiming to defend that same light is deeply affecting. This one stayed with me. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 15:05
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the emotion shines through
July 6th, 2026 13:27
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the emotion shines through
July 6th, 2026 13:27
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice commemorative poem of one loved and lost. Very nicely done I can feel the missing of them in the words.
July 6th, 2026 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice commemorative poem of one loved and lost. Very nicely done I can feel the missing of them in the words.
July 6th, 2026 13:04
A broken mirror.
NafisaSB said:
Heartbreaking and heart rending😔sometimes the very people one trusts implicitly are the ones who betray and hurt us.
July 6th, 2026 11:37
NafisaSB said:
Heartbreaking and heart rending😔sometimes the very people one trusts implicitly are the ones who betray and hurt us.
July 6th, 2026 11:37
If there is a god, my question to God is why?
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, if there is a god he must have one twisted sense of humour
July 6th, 2026 05:04
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, if there is a god he must have one twisted sense of humour
July 6th, 2026 05:04
If there is a god, my question to God is why?
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this write. It\'s quite relatable and asks some good questions. It also flows really well.
Well written - Syd 🍄
July 6th, 2026 04:58
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this write. It\'s quite relatable and asks some good questions. It also flows really well.
Well written - Syd 🍄
July 6th, 2026 04:58
If there is a god, my question to God is why?
sorenbarrett said:
A most powerful poem with a question that many ask and that leads to a division of faith from mind where one can not fathom a god that would destroy or allow to be destroyed what he created. Well written with great rhyme and wonderful flow in good meter. A fave
July 5th, 2026 19:19
sorenbarrett said:
A most powerful poem with a question that many ask and that leads to a division of faith from mind where one can not fathom a god that would destroy or allow to be destroyed what he created. Well written with great rhyme and wonderful flow in good meter. A fave
July 5th, 2026 19:19
A strong woman.🌹
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautifully well written I have a few that I\'ve written too
July 5th, 2026 15:59
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautifully well written I have a few that I\'ve written too
July 5th, 2026 15:59
A broken mirror.
RSM0812 said:
Her long straight dark hair, at her shoulder it hung,
Like strings of an angel, quiet in song.
Her eyes were transfixed on the quiet still dark. She peered at the pain of my breaking cold heart.
He beauty was fixed, like dust to a star.
The shade of the night, her shadow bide far.
A stranger she was, a stranger she is, a rose lost in stone, her grace all alone.
I dare not to look, our eyes can not meet, for mine would fall hard, and hers would just leap.
Her hand i would take, and walk to a door,
Neither of us have either entered before.
Both of us enter, eyes wide to see.
The wonder inside, the brilliance to be.
This is where God goes when he idles and dies.
Angels come here to weep and to cry.
Me and my dame, were sent here to find.
Each other in temperment, a lost loves abide.
For now i know why this child i met.
And walked in the night, our hearts barley kept.
To show each other us, as us to ourselves. And stay in this place where pain does not dwell.. At long last my quelled heart, it beats for her breast. And her want is my want together we rest. Her beauty is pure, like embers of stars. And my need is as dire as the miles they are far. Unfortunate be to me is the truth yet untold. The beauty she is my life it but soothed. My heart yet still empty as a bottemless pit. I hope that my angel finds peace wherever she is. For when im with her, peace in my soul, my temperment quelled, my mind is but full. She holds both my hands, she cradles my heart, her touch is softer then feathers in the flight of her art. Her voice is so soothing it turns darkness to light. The day still but day, the night dark its flight. If i was the man she deserves to call hers. My pride and humility will vex all my tears. This is the creasture men simply to die. For her touch, for her love, i nought make her cry. Although we wont meet and make life our own. I hope she finds heaven right here at her home. I still have her image, beauty and true. I still have her silhouette dark and anew. Her soul like a poem, written with ink. By poets of love, or so they bethink.
This is one of my best and yours is still way better.
July 5th, 2026 13:52
RSM0812 said:
Her long straight dark hair, at her shoulder it hung,
Like strings of an angel, quiet in song.
Her eyes were transfixed on the quiet still dark. She peered at the pain of my breaking cold heart.
He beauty was fixed, like dust to a star.
The shade of the night, her shadow bide far.
A stranger she was, a stranger she is, a rose lost in stone, her grace all alone.
I dare not to look, our eyes can not meet, for mine would fall hard, and hers would just leap.
Her hand i would take, and walk to a door,
Neither of us have either entered before.
Both of us enter, eyes wide to see.
The wonder inside, the brilliance to be.
This is where God goes when he idles and dies.
Angels come here to weep and to cry.
Me and my dame, were sent here to find.
Each other in temperment, a lost loves abide.
For now i know why this child i met.
And walked in the night, our hearts barley kept.
To show each other us, as us to ourselves. And stay in this place where pain does not dwell.. At long last my quelled heart, it beats for her breast. And her want is my want together we rest. Her beauty is pure, like embers of stars. And my need is as dire as the miles they are far. Unfortunate be to me is the truth yet untold. The beauty she is my life it but soothed. My heart yet still empty as a bottemless pit. I hope that my angel finds peace wherever she is. For when im with her, peace in my soul, my temperment quelled, my mind is but full. She holds both my hands, she cradles my heart, her touch is softer then feathers in the flight of her art. Her voice is so soothing it turns darkness to light. The day still but day, the night dark its flight. If i was the man she deserves to call hers. My pride and humility will vex all my tears. This is the creasture men simply to die. For her touch, for her love, i nought make her cry. Although we wont meet and make life our own. I hope she finds heaven right here at her home. I still have her image, beauty and true. I still have her silhouette dark and anew. Her soul like a poem, written with ink. By poets of love, or so they bethink.
This is one of my best and yours is still way better.
July 5th, 2026 13:52
A strong woman.🌹
RSM0812 said:
I like how you used the word fail when i would have used the word frail. Your pen rhymes with perfection.
July 4th, 2026 14:58
RSM0812 said:
I like how you used the word fail when i would have used the word frail. Your pen rhymes with perfection.
July 4th, 2026 14:58
Low self-esteem can literally destroy a human being.
RSM0812 said:
I wish i could write like you. My work is dribble compared. Your poems are going to rhyme forever in time.
July 4th, 2026 14:56
RSM0812 said:
I wish i could write like you. My work is dribble compared. Your poems are going to rhyme forever in time.
July 4th, 2026 14:56
A broken mirror.
RSM0812 said:
An angel crying is a great pic to represent this write as well.
July 4th, 2026 13:47
RSM0812 said:
An angel crying is a great pic to represent this write as well.
July 4th, 2026 13:47
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