Comments received on poems by Friendship
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mohammad ali said:
So nicely rhymic composition of aging leading to the final death. A well organized description, dear!
May 24th, 2026 21:44
mohammad ali said:
So nicely rhymic composition of aging leading to the final death. A well organized description, dear!
May 24th, 2026 21:44
I fear you.
David Wakeling said:
Wow wow wow.We can all elate to this .From a fear of death or a fear of old age or a fear of a partner.Fear takes many forms and none of them are pretty.The secret is to rise above.What a thoughtful poem.Excellent
May 24th, 2026 18:12
David Wakeling said:
Wow wow wow.We can all elate to this .From a fear of death or a fear of old age or a fear of a partner.Fear takes many forms and none of them are pretty.The secret is to rise above.What a thoughtful poem.Excellent
May 24th, 2026 18:12
Just a wish.
David Wakeling said:
Yes I think we all share that wish for a understanding companion.Beautifully expressed.I hope you find that person
May 23rd, 2026 18:17
David Wakeling said:
Yes I think we all share that wish for a understanding companion.Beautifully expressed.I hope you find that person
May 23rd, 2026 18:17
Just a wish.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish for what should be not too much to ask. Well written in clarity and good flow with good rhyme it seems a reasonable request. In an imperfect world it is as rare as hen\'s teeth. Very nicely written and a fave
May 23rd, 2026 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish for what should be not too much to ask. Well written in clarity and good flow with good rhyme it seems a reasonable request. In an imperfect world it is as rare as hen\'s teeth. Very nicely written and a fave
May 23rd, 2026 10:44
Tried.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this hit me hard. There’s no performance in this...just exhaustion finally speaking plainly after carrying too much for too long. The closing line lands like someone setting down a weight they’ve dragged for miles. Powerful and deeply human piece, my friend. On another note, is your profile picture a self-portrait or portrait of any kind you\'ve done. I know you\'\'re quite the artist, so I had to ask! ☺️ 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this hit me hard. There’s no performance in this...just exhaustion finally speaking plainly after carrying too much for too long. The closing line lands like someone setting down a weight they’ve dragged for miles. Powerful and deeply human piece, my friend. On another note, is your profile picture a self-portrait or portrait of any kind you\'ve done. I know you\'\'re quite the artist, so I had to ask! ☺️ 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:29
Farts 🤣
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, hahaha...you took something utterly ridiculous and somehow made it genuinely poetic. The playful seriousness of the tone all the way through absolutely got me. “The quiet ghost of belly craft” is one heck of an opening. This made me laugh out loud, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, hahaha...you took something utterly ridiculous and somehow made it genuinely poetic. The playful seriousness of the tone all the way through absolutely got me. “The quiet ghost of belly craft” is one heck of an opening. This made me laugh out loud, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:11
Tried.
Neville said:
This is pretty much perfect in my book .. well in any book if you ask me .. Neville 🌻
May 23rd, 2026 03:04
Neville said:
This is pretty much perfect in my book .. well in any book if you ask me .. Neville 🌻
May 23rd, 2026 03:04
Tried.
David Wakeling said:
Wow for me this is someone struggling to climb a mountain.It is so much more however.A lot to unpack here trembling hands to I can\'t try anymore.Very masterly done.Enjoyable read
May 22nd, 2026 20:18
David Wakeling said:
Wow for me this is someone struggling to climb a mountain.It is so much more however.A lot to unpack here trembling hands to I can\'t try anymore.Very masterly done.Enjoyable read
May 22nd, 2026 20:18
Tried.
Fränz Müller said:
I felt this poem in the marrow of my bones. Excellent!
May 22nd, 2026 19:22
Fränz Müller said:
I felt this poem in the marrow of my bones. Excellent!
May 22nd, 2026 19:22
Tried.
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of giving in and throwing in the towel after a life of strife. Some simply wonderful lines in this poem \"I poured the river’s weight into a glass,
And watched the steady hours turn to sand\" The next two lines equally good, as is the next stanza. So I come close to citing the whole poem. Very nicely done my friend
May 22nd, 2026 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of giving in and throwing in the towel after a life of strife. Some simply wonderful lines in this poem \"I poured the river’s weight into a glass,
And watched the steady hours turn to sand\" The next two lines equally good, as is the next stanza. So I come close to citing the whole poem. Very nicely done my friend
May 22nd, 2026 12:18
Farts 🤣
David Wakeling said:
This was a fun read. Well written to lighten the tension
May 21st, 2026 19:20
David Wakeling said:
This was a fun read. Well written to lighten the tension
May 21st, 2026 19:20
Farts 🤣
sorenbarrett said:
Well written on a forbidden subject is a good start to a fave. Well rhymed and made me smile that childish smile of such a topic. It gets a fave from me. Andre the Giant used to like to get in an elevator loaded with people and let one rip suffocating all inside.
May 21st, 2026 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
Well written on a forbidden subject is a good start to a fave. Well rhymed and made me smile that childish smile of such a topic. It gets a fave from me. Andre the Giant used to like to get in an elevator loaded with people and let one rip suffocating all inside.
May 21st, 2026 14:21
What to paint?
RSM0812 said:
You kept me captivated from beginning to end. Blame is can be a dangerous shadow in a persons psyche. Blame of our selves. Blame of others. It keeps a person battling like a huntman after the prey. Genius.
May 21st, 2026 12:48
RSM0812 said:
You kept me captivated from beginning to end. Blame is can be a dangerous shadow in a persons psyche. Blame of our selves. Blame of others. It keeps a person battling like a huntman after the prey. Genius.
May 21st, 2026 12:48
What to paint?
RSM0812 said:
Kept me captivated from beginning to end. You kept the message fluent in style with every word choice. Loved it. :)
May 21st, 2026 12:44
RSM0812 said:
Kept me captivated from beginning to end. You kept the message fluent in style with every word choice. Loved it. :)
May 21st, 2026 12:44
What to paint?
RSM0812 said:
Kept me captivated from beginning to end. You kept the message fluent in style with every word choice. Loved it. :)
May 21st, 2026 12:44
RSM0812 said:
Kept me captivated from beginning to end. You kept the message fluent in style with every word choice. Loved it. :)
May 21st, 2026 12:44
Happy Birthday, my brother from another mother.❤️
David Wakeling said:
What a beautiful tribute to a lasting friendship on the Birthday. An enlightened and enjoyable read
May 20th, 2026 18:32
David Wakeling said:
What a beautiful tribute to a lasting friendship on the Birthday. An enlightened and enjoyable read
May 20th, 2026 18:32
Happy Birthday, my brother from another mother.❤️
Neville said:
Sounds to me like you are both very lucky .. Neville
May 20th, 2026 11:27
Neville said:
Sounds to me like you are both very lucky .. Neville
May 20th, 2026 11:27
Happy Birthday, my brother from another mother.❤️
Fränz Müller said:
What a lovely poem and tribute!
May 20th, 2026 10:42
Fränz Müller said:
What a lovely poem and tribute!
May 20th, 2026 10:42
Happy Birthday, my brother from another mother.❤️
sorenbarrett said:
A well written tribute to a long lasting friendship. Nicely written and in good rhyme and flow. I hope it reaches his eyes
May 20th, 2026 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
A well written tribute to a long lasting friendship. Nicely written and in good rhyme and flow. I hope it reaches his eyes
May 20th, 2026 10:12
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
2781 said:
That was hilarious! Problem is, I was imagining Triffids. Enjoyed it anyway.
May 20th, 2026 09:14
2781 said:
That was hilarious! Problem is, I was imagining Triffids. Enjoyed it anyway.
May 20th, 2026 09:14
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