Comments received on poems by Friendship
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
arqios said:
A language to be learnt and spoken fluently and effectively....🕊️🙏
May 31st, 2026 01:09
arqios said:
A language to be learnt and spoken fluently and effectively....🕊️🙏
May 31st, 2026 01:09
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing poem.Well costructed with perfect rhyme and cadence.A joy to read. The theme on the other hand is a capable person in doubt.The author is not happy with the efforts.From trying hard to plant seeds that grow tangled to watch others measure with golden scales while the author watches the wind fill the wrong sails.There is so much depth here I had to read it twice.An enjoyable read
May 30th, 2026 18:33
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing poem.Well costructed with perfect rhyme and cadence.A joy to read. The theme on the other hand is a capable person in doubt.The author is not happy with the efforts.From trying hard to plant seeds that grow tangled to watch others measure with golden scales while the author watches the wind fill the wrong sails.There is so much depth here I had to read it twice.An enjoyable read
May 30th, 2026 18:33
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
sorenbarrett said:
A well composed and rhymed poem that plants its meaning in crops that fail to thrive and course uncertain although one knows the directions. It to me reflects the uncertainties of life and the inability to depend on weather, soil, or seed as a farmer of life\'s needs for sustenance. I may well be wrong here but that is the feel I get. We are all farmers dependent on the weather, pests and our own labor. In that we have control only over the latter and that leaves us insecure and at times tired for all we did but got no compensation for. Loved it a fave
May 30th, 2026 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
A well composed and rhymed poem that plants its meaning in crops that fail to thrive and course uncertain although one knows the directions. It to me reflects the uncertainties of life and the inability to depend on weather, soil, or seed as a farmer of life\'s needs for sustenance. I may well be wrong here but that is the feel I get. We are all farmers dependent on the weather, pests and our own labor. In that we have control only over the latter and that leaves us insecure and at times tired for all we did but got no compensation for. Loved it a fave
May 30th, 2026 10:50
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this one hit me hard. The tension between knowing the path others expect and finding yourself unable to walk it feels painfully honest. There is no self-pity here...only exhaustion and truth. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this one hit me hard. The tension between knowing the path others expect and finding yourself unable to walk it feels painfully honest. There is no self-pity here...only exhaustion and truth. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:26
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
orchidee said:
Good write F. You\'ll get there - whatever good place you\'re trying to get to!
May 30th, 2026 09:00
orchidee said:
Good write F. You\'ll get there - whatever good place you\'re trying to get to!
May 30th, 2026 09:00
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
2781 said:
You writing is unbelievably good.
All that comes to mind: we all fall short of the glory...from glory to glory!
May 30th, 2026 08:30
2781 said:
You writing is unbelievably good.
All that comes to mind: we all fall short of the glory...from glory to glory!
May 30th, 2026 08:30
I fear you.
RSM0812 said:
An inyeresting poem about fear. Even fear has a purpose. Everyone has felt fear before and could easily relate to you prose.
May 30th, 2026 08:28
RSM0812 said:
An inyeresting poem about fear. Even fear has a purpose. Everyone has felt fear before and could easily relate to you prose.
May 30th, 2026 08:28
Aries is my soul.
mohammad ali said:
All your poems are so beautifully rhythmic, full of sense and imagery, carrying the soul to the sweet land of imagination, dear, honey and so near!
May 27th, 2026 14:34
mohammad ali said:
All your poems are so beautifully rhythmic, full of sense and imagery, carrying the soul to the sweet land of imagination, dear, honey and so near!
May 27th, 2026 14:34
He has only hate in his heart for me.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this hit me like a punch to the chest. The betrayal woven through this...someone entrusted to heal instead becoming the source of harm...is absolutely devastating. The controlled anger and grief in the poem make it even more powerful. Incredible work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this hit me like a punch to the chest. The betrayal woven through this...someone entrusted to heal instead becoming the source of harm...is absolutely devastating. The controlled anger and grief in the poem make it even more powerful. Incredible work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:26
He has only hate in his heart for me.
Neville said:
May I respectfully suggest you take a few deep breaths, sit back and write 500 times I will never make out with a narcissist ever again .. This is well crafted but dreadfully sad .. I additionally hope it is the product of a very gifted imagination and not autobiographical .. Neville
May 27th, 2026 01:45
Neville said:
May I respectfully suggest you take a few deep breaths, sit back and write 500 times I will never make out with a narcissist ever again .. This is well crafted but dreadfully sad .. I additionally hope it is the product of a very gifted imagination and not autobiographical .. Neville
May 27th, 2026 01:45
Tried.
NafisaSB said:
this poem is so heart rending and touching - it moved me with its beautiful depiction
May 27th, 2026 00:24
NafisaSB said:
this poem is so heart rending and touching - it moved me with its beautiful depiction
May 27th, 2026 00:24
He has only hate in his heart for me.
David Wakeling said:
Amazing.This is very well constructed.I like the rhyme.For me it is a sad reflection on a relationship that has a toxic partner.Really quite viscious.Very well written
May 27th, 2026 00:11
David Wakeling said:
Amazing.This is very well constructed.I like the rhyme.For me it is a sad reflection on a relationship that has a toxic partner.Really quite viscious.Very well written
May 27th, 2026 00:11
Lust
mohammad ali said:
So sweet the sleep;
And deep the creep
Of words on lip
Arranged to sip.
May 26th, 2026 12:27
mohammad ali said:
So sweet the sleep;
And deep the creep
Of words on lip
Arranged to sip.
May 26th, 2026 12:27
Lust
mohammad ali said:
So sweet the sleep;
And deep the creep
Of words on lip
Arranged to sip.
May 26th, 2026 12:24
mohammad ali said:
So sweet the sleep;
And deep the creep
Of words on lip
Arranged to sip.
May 26th, 2026 12:24
You are free.
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like a man stepping out of his own wreckage and finally letting someone else walk free too.
There’s a hard mercy in it—owning the damage, then closing the door without asking to be remembered.
May 26th, 2026 07:17
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like a man stepping out of his own wreckage and finally letting someone else walk free too.
There’s a hard mercy in it—owning the damage, then closing the door without asking to be remembered.
May 26th, 2026 07:17
I fear you.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, powerful poem, Friendship. This unfolds like a slow realization turning into horror…the kind that hurts because it comes from love and familiarity rather than strangers or shadows. “I do not fear the darkness anymore— / I only fear the monster you create” is an absolutely devastating close. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, powerful poem, Friendship. This unfolds like a slow realization turning into horror…the kind that hurts because it comes from love and familiarity rather than strangers or shadows. “I do not fear the darkness anymore— / I only fear the monster you create” is an absolutely devastating close. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 08:01
You are free.
David Wakeling said:
For me this reads like a divorce or some kind of breakup.It certainly is a civilised and beautiful attempt at moving on.Well constructed read here.Enjoyable
May 25th, 2026 06:51
David Wakeling said:
For me this reads like a divorce or some kind of breakup.It certainly is a civilised and beautiful attempt at moving on.Well constructed read here.Enjoyable
May 25th, 2026 06:51
You are free.
arqios said:
The depth of release is quite like an algebraic equation. Something significant happens on both sides of the equation🙏🕊️
May 25th, 2026 06:18
arqios said:
The depth of release is quite like an algebraic equation. Something significant happens on both sides of the equation🙏🕊️
May 25th, 2026 06:18
Tried.
mohammad ali said:
So nicely rhymic composition of aging leading to the final death. A well organized description, dear!
May 24th, 2026 21:44
mohammad ali said:
So nicely rhymic composition of aging leading to the final death. A well organized description, dear!
May 24th, 2026 21:44
I fear you.
David Wakeling said:
Wow wow wow.We can all elate to this .From a fear of death or a fear of old age or a fear of a partner.Fear takes many forms and none of them are pretty.The secret is to rise above.What a thoughtful poem.Excellent
May 24th, 2026 18:12
David Wakeling said:
Wow wow wow.We can all elate to this .From a fear of death or a fear of old age or a fear of a partner.Fear takes many forms and none of them are pretty.The secret is to rise above.What a thoughtful poem.Excellent
May 24th, 2026 18:12
Just a wish.
David Wakeling said:
Yes I think we all share that wish for a understanding companion.Beautifully expressed.I hope you find that person
May 23rd, 2026 18:17
David Wakeling said:
Yes I think we all share that wish for a understanding companion.Beautifully expressed.I hope you find that person
May 23rd, 2026 18:17
Just a wish.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish for what should be not too much to ask. Well written in clarity and good flow with good rhyme it seems a reasonable request. In an imperfect world it is as rare as hen\'s teeth. Very nicely written and a fave
May 23rd, 2026 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish for what should be not too much to ask. Well written in clarity and good flow with good rhyme it seems a reasonable request. In an imperfect world it is as rare as hen\'s teeth. Very nicely written and a fave
May 23rd, 2026 10:44
Tried.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this hit me hard. There’s no performance in this...just exhaustion finally speaking plainly after carrying too much for too long. The closing line lands like someone setting down a weight they’ve dragged for miles. Powerful and deeply human piece, my friend. On another note, is your profile picture a self-portrait or portrait of any kind you\'ve done. I know you\'\'re quite the artist, so I had to ask! ☺️ 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this hit me hard. There’s no performance in this...just exhaustion finally speaking plainly after carrying too much for too long. The closing line lands like someone setting down a weight they’ve dragged for miles. Powerful and deeply human piece, my friend. On another note, is your profile picture a self-portrait or portrait of any kind you\'ve done. I know you\'\'re quite the artist, so I had to ask! ☺️ 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:29
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