Comments received on poems by Friendship
Just Bullshit.
mylastwrites said:
Your words painted a very wonderful picture. Great write. Thank you for sharing.
June 25th, 2026 15:36
mylastwrites said:
Your words painted a very wonderful picture. Great write. Thank you for sharing.
June 25th, 2026 15:36
Just Bullshit.
sorenbarrett said:
I have heard the story many times from different people and myself as well. People wanting double pay for work not done. The audacity. Well written my friend and I would say the same \"I owe no debt to you\"
June 25th, 2026 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
I have heard the story many times from different people and myself as well. People wanting double pay for work not done. The audacity. Well written my friend and I would say the same \"I owe no debt to you\"
June 25th, 2026 14:22
Just Bullshit.
peto said:
Reminds me of an addict on the prowl
Almost make you feel obliged to cough up
The 1st verse suggests a legal agreement was reached
But now emotions seem to be at play
An artist with a pen
June 25th, 2026 13:28
peto said:
Reminds me of an addict on the prowl
Almost make you feel obliged to cough up
The 1st verse suggests a legal agreement was reached
But now emotions seem to be at play
An artist with a pen
June 25th, 2026 13:28
Just Bullshit.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what struck me most is how steadily the poem builds its case...from the settled ledger and paid debt to the repeated denial of reality, each stanza raises the emotional stakes without losing control. By the time the final line arrives, it feels earned, resolute, and deeply satisfying. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 25th, 2026 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what struck me most is how steadily the poem builds its case...from the settled ledger and paid debt to the repeated denial of reality, each stanza raises the emotional stakes without losing control. By the time the final line arrives, it feels earned, resolute, and deeply satisfying. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 25th, 2026 10:54
Low self-esteem can literally destroy a human being.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, you ain\'t kidding, my friend. What struck me most is how relentlessly the metaphors build upon one another. From whisper...to shadow...to anchor...to slow-burning house...to hollowed tree, each image deepens the emotional landscape without feeling repetitive. It\'s a sobering and beautifully crafted reflection on an often unseen struggle. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 25th, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, you ain\'t kidding, my friend. What struck me most is how relentlessly the metaphors build upon one another. From whisper...to shadow...to anchor...to slow-burning house...to hollowed tree, each image deepens the emotional landscape without feeling repetitive. It\'s a sobering and beautifully crafted reflection on an often unseen struggle. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 25th, 2026 10:38
Low self-esteem can literally destroy a human being.
orchidee said:
Good write F. There must be something of good, of use, in each of us, or else we would be completely useless, worthless, a waste of space. And probably more than one good thing, several in fact, for each person.
June 25th, 2026 02:45
orchidee said:
Good write F. There must be something of good, of use, in each of us, or else we would be completely useless, worthless, a waste of space. And probably more than one good thing, several in fact, for each person.
June 25th, 2026 02:45
Low self-esteem can literally destroy a human being.
sorenbarrett said:
A good description cast in allegory nicely written with rhyme. A fave
June 24th, 2026 21:00
sorenbarrett said:
A good description cast in allegory nicely written with rhyme. A fave
June 24th, 2026 21:00
Low self-esteem can literally destroy a human being.
arqios said:
It\'s only too easy and too comfortable to wallow. Know it all too well. 🙏🕊️
June 24th, 2026 20:20
arqios said:
It\'s only too easy and too comfortable to wallow. Know it all too well. 🙏🕊️
June 24th, 2026 20:20
I’m tired, Mama
rgm441 said:
I love it, especially the rhythm beautifully written, Thanks.
June 24th, 2026 06:40
rgm441 said:
I love it, especially the rhythm beautifully written, Thanks.
June 24th, 2026 06:40
You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be.
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent.
June 23rd, 2026 08:37
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent.
June 23rd, 2026 08:37
You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be.
arqios said:
How absolutely freeing. 🕊️🙏
June 23rd, 2026 05:40
arqios said:
How absolutely freeing. 🕊️🙏
June 23rd, 2026 05:40
You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be.
cellinic said:
A good write. thanks)
June 22nd, 2026 20:14
cellinic said:
A good write. thanks)
June 22nd, 2026 20:14
You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be.
Syd said:
Amen to that!
Brilliantly written 👏
- Syd
June 22nd, 2026 13:39
Syd said:
Amen to that!
Brilliantly written 👏
- Syd
June 22nd, 2026 13:39
I am conquering my fears this time, I\'m holding my head up high.
fanghuzhai said:
Highly spirited.
June 22nd, 2026 10:39
fanghuzhai said:
Highly spirited.
June 22nd, 2026 10:39
You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this really moved me. There is such a deep sense of permission and grace woven through it. So many people need to hear exactly this message at exactly the right moment. Beautiful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this really moved me. There is such a deep sense of permission and grace woven through it. So many people need to hear exactly this message at exactly the right moment. Beautiful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:29
Always proud to call you my Dad.❤️
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this really moved me. Reading your note alongside the poem made it hit even harder. What a beautiful tribute to a father whose lessons clearly continue to travel with you every day. Loved this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this really moved me. Reading your note alongside the poem made it hit even harder. What a beautiful tribute to a father whose lessons clearly continue to travel with you every day. Loved this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:06
You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of growth and recognition that change is a life thing. Nicely rhymed and with good flow it carries its message well.
June 22nd, 2026 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of growth and recognition that change is a life thing. Nicely rhymed and with good flow it carries its message well.
June 22nd, 2026 09:22
You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be.
Kevin Hulme said:
When I look at Photos of myself when young : It\'s like another Person. I like to think we become Wiser as we get older. Consider things more. A good Write here.
June 22nd, 2026 09:21
Kevin Hulme said:
When I look at Photos of myself when young : It\'s like another Person. I like to think we become Wiser as we get older. Consider things more. A good Write here.
June 22nd, 2026 09:21
You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be.
Ogunisjustice said:
Out growing your environment out growing ppl things is very peaceful and breath taking once u take those steps its the people that make it uncool to outgrow your environment they say you acting brand-new out of envy
June 22nd, 2026 09:18
Ogunisjustice said:
Out growing your environment out growing ppl things is very peaceful and breath taking once u take those steps its the people that make it uncool to outgrow your environment they say you acting brand-new out of envy
June 22nd, 2026 09:18
Tried.
fanghuzhai said:
impressive image in first stanza. pour river into a glass. Like the figure of speech in classical Chinese poetry
June 21st, 2026 19:26
fanghuzhai said:
impressive image in first stanza. pour river into a glass. Like the figure of speech in classical Chinese poetry
June 21st, 2026 19:26
Always proud to call you my Dad.❤️
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a tribute to a man that made a difference in a child\'s life. A role model and a pilar of strength. Nicely written and a fave
June 21st, 2026 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a tribute to a man that made a difference in a child\'s life. A role model and a pilar of strength. Nicely written and a fave
June 21st, 2026 12:44
Always proud to call you my Dad.❤️
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Beautiful write
June 21st, 2026 12:20
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Beautiful write
June 21st, 2026 12:20
Always proud to call you my Dad.❤️
madeline said:
A truly wonderful way to honour all fathers worldwide!
June 21st, 2026 12:12
madeline said:
A truly wonderful way to honour all fathers worldwide!
June 21st, 2026 12:12
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