Comments received on poems by Friendship
Oh God ,I tried.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How did I miss this yesterday?!? My apologies. My friend, this one fucking hurt. I know this contradiction personally...when continuing to function convinces everyone that you require nothing from them. The isolation in that is brutal, and you have expressed it with devastating clarity. An incredibly powerful poem, Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How did I miss this yesterday?!? My apologies. My friend, this one fucking hurt. I know this contradiction personally...when continuing to function convinces everyone that you require nothing from them. The isolation in that is brutal, and you have expressed it with devastating clarity. An incredibly powerful poem, Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:39
Oh God ,I tried.
peto said:
Ah I\'m running out of words
Fantastic writing
A joy to read
Thank you for sharing it
Brilliant
July 29th, 2026 13:03
peto said:
Ah I\'m running out of words
Fantastic writing
A joy to read
Thank you for sharing it
Brilliant
July 29th, 2026 13:03
Oh God ,I tried.
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem captures how often people mistake survival for strength, assuming that someone who keeps going does not need help.
July 29th, 2026 08:47
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem captures how often people mistake survival for strength, assuming that someone who keeps going does not need help.
July 29th, 2026 08:47
Oh God ,I tried.
arqios said:
Relatable and a common result that is regrettable 🙏🏻🕊️
July 29th, 2026 08:39
arqios said:
Relatable and a common result that is regrettable 🙏🏻🕊️
July 29th, 2026 08:39
Oh God ,I tried.
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed and metered this poem speaks of others not perceiving the agony within. Nicely constructed it tells its tale well.
July 29th, 2026 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed and metered this poem speaks of others not perceiving the agony within. Nicely constructed it tells its tale well.
July 29th, 2026 08:15
Come, walk in my shoes
Neville said:
to walk a mile in another\'s shoes takes more than just guts and compassion .. and it more than just hints at the desire or intention to feel another\'s pain .. I guess that\'s why not many folk volunteer to do it these days .. sadly we have a deficit of role models .. still I hope some of the old values may return eventually .. this by the way is an incredibly well composed poem that not only reads well but looks pretty on the page .. Bravo .. Neville
July 28th, 2026 23:36
Neville said:
to walk a mile in another\'s shoes takes more than just guts and compassion .. and it more than just hints at the desire or intention to feel another\'s pain .. I guess that\'s why not many folk volunteer to do it these days .. sadly we have a deficit of role models .. still I hope some of the old values may return eventually .. this by the way is an incredibly well composed poem that not only reads well but looks pretty on the page .. Bravo .. Neville
July 28th, 2026 23:36
Come, walk in my shoes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, I know what it is to have others interpret your survival from the comfort of their distance. Compassion begins when judgment ends…and this speaks that truth powerfully. Wonderful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, I know what it is to have others interpret your survival from the comfort of their distance. Compassion begins when judgment ends…and this speaks that truth powerfully. Wonderful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:13
I am done.
mohammad ali said:
So beautifully described as usual and so sadly felt a similar story! Yet, never remember, dear:
O’ Joseph lost will sure return to Lone Home, grieve it not!
The hut of grief will once be flower garden, grieve it not!
O grieved the heart, you’ll soon be well,
yourself to lose, so what?
Distraught this head will once be set in order, grieve it not!
On throne of grass if spring of life is long enough, you’ll spread
The flower shade ov’r head, O sweet-voiced bird, so grieve it not!
Though turn of wheel against our wish, some two days kindly not,
The state of time will not be all the same, so grieve it not!
Of world of secrets not aware, beware and hopeless not!
Behind the scene are always hidden games, O\' grieve it not!
O heart, if flood of doom uproots the whole existence but
Yours love and hope in heart, for
storm of loneness, grieve it not!
In desert, eager if you step toward your love and much
Reproof the thorny bushes make against you, grieve it not!
The way to home though much of danger, end of path so far,
No path is there that hath no end, be hot and grieve it not!
Separated now from sweetheart, mood
against the rivals, but
Our mood-revolving God would wholly
know, O’ grieve it not!
A corner poor, alone at dim nights, Friendship! Yet, until
Your whispers lovely poems for pretty sweetheart, grieve it not!
July 26th, 2026 16:03
mohammad ali said:
So beautifully described as usual and so sadly felt a similar story! Yet, never remember, dear:
O’ Joseph lost will sure return to Lone Home, grieve it not!
The hut of grief will once be flower garden, grieve it not!
O grieved the heart, you’ll soon be well,
yourself to lose, so what?
Distraught this head will once be set in order, grieve it not!
On throne of grass if spring of life is long enough, you’ll spread
The flower shade ov’r head, O sweet-voiced bird, so grieve it not!
Though turn of wheel against our wish, some two days kindly not,
The state of time will not be all the same, so grieve it not!
Of world of secrets not aware, beware and hopeless not!
Behind the scene are always hidden games, O\' grieve it not!
O heart, if flood of doom uproots the whole existence but
Yours love and hope in heart, for
storm of loneness, grieve it not!
In desert, eager if you step toward your love and much
Reproof the thorny bushes make against you, grieve it not!
The way to home though much of danger, end of path so far,
No path is there that hath no end, be hot and grieve it not!
Separated now from sweetheart, mood
against the rivals, but
Our mood-revolving God would wholly
know, O’ grieve it not!
A corner poor, alone at dim nights, Friendship! Yet, until
Your whispers lovely poems for pretty sweetheart, grieve it not!
July 26th, 2026 16:03
Come, walk in my shoes
Paul Bell said:
Plenty out there who think they can walk the walk, talk the talk.
Then the time comes to actually do it, and they\'re left wanting.
July 26th, 2026 14:39
Paul Bell said:
Plenty out there who think they can walk the walk, talk the talk.
Then the time comes to actually do it, and they\'re left wanting.
July 26th, 2026 14:39
Come, walk in my shoes
soheil khodaparasti said:
An able poet can beautifully express the profound truth that genuine understanding begins when we stop judging others from afar and try to walk in another person’s shoes.
July 26th, 2026 11:57
soheil khodaparasti said:
An able poet can beautifully express the profound truth that genuine understanding begins when we stop judging others from afar and try to walk in another person’s shoes.
July 26th, 2026 11:57
Come, walk in my shoes
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem wet with good rhyme of one that feels that no one can feel what they feel since no one wears their shoes. Well done my friend
July 26th, 2026 11:08
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem wet with good rhyme of one that feels that no one can feel what they feel since no one wears their shoes. Well done my friend
July 26th, 2026 11:08
You can\'t help me!
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way this is written draws a story in my mind and somebody who\'s trying so hard but still coming undone and fighting whether it\'s real or in the mind very well worded very good I\'m glad you\'re my friend
July 25th, 2026 19:40
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way this is written draws a story in my mind and somebody who\'s trying so hard but still coming undone and fighting whether it\'s real or in the mind very well worded very good I\'m glad you\'re my friend
July 25th, 2026 19:40
You can\'t help me!
Thomas W Case said:
No explosion—just a woman coming apart grain by grain, feeling every inch of the fall.
That’s the real terror: not the end, but the long, quiet collapse you can’t outrun.
July 21st, 2026 08:11
Thomas W Case said:
No explosion—just a woman coming apart grain by grain, feeling every inch of the fall.
That’s the real terror: not the end, but the long, quiet collapse you can’t outrun.
July 21st, 2026 08:11
You can\'t help me!
NafisaSB said:
The slow but inevitable decline is well brought out in this poem. Great work 👌
July 21st, 2026 06:51
NafisaSB said:
The slow but inevitable decline is well brought out in this poem. Great work 👌
July 21st, 2026 06:51
You can\'t help me!
Neville said:
This is by far .. far more than just a little bit extra special .. & then some .. Neville 😎🌻💛👍
July 20th, 2026 07:35
Neville said:
This is by far .. far more than just a little bit extra special .. & then some .. Neville 😎🌻💛👍
July 20th, 2026 07:35
You can\'t help me!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard...the slow disintegration of a life and identity is somehow more terrifying than one sudden collapse. Absolutely devastating work. Keeping you in my prayers, dearest Friendship. If you ever need to talk, there\'s a Tristan who will listen! 👂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 07:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard...the slow disintegration of a life and identity is somehow more terrifying than one sudden collapse. Absolutely devastating work. Keeping you in my prayers, dearest Friendship. If you ever need to talk, there\'s a Tristan who will listen! 👂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 07:16
You can\'t help me!
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a slow decline can often lead a slow rise again
July 19th, 2026 11:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a slow decline can often lead a slow rise again
July 19th, 2026 11:41
You can\'t help me!
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem reminds us that we may feel fragile, but we are stronger than the despair it describes. The very fact that you could express such vulnerability with such beauty is proof that your humanity is enduring, not broken.
July 19th, 2026 11:21
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem reminds us that we may feel fragile, but we are stronger than the despair it describes. The very fact that you could express such vulnerability with such beauty is proof that your humanity is enduring, not broken.
July 19th, 2026 11:21
You can\'t help me!
peto said:
I can\'t help you
Wish I could
Your writing is phenomenal friendship
I always feel like I\'ve learned something of YOU when I read
The:deliberate \" in the last line really caught my eye.
Emotional and brilliant
July 19th, 2026 11:18
peto said:
I can\'t help you
Wish I could
Your writing is phenomenal friendship
I always feel like I\'ve learned something of YOU when I read
The:deliberate \" in the last line really caught my eye.
Emotional and brilliant
July 19th, 2026 11:18
You can\'t help me!
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a personal entropy that they feel beyond the help of others to stay. Well written with good rhyme and flow it sends its sad message of demise.
July 19th, 2026 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a personal entropy that they feel beyond the help of others to stay. Well written with good rhyme and flow it sends its sad message of demise.
July 19th, 2026 11:16
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