Comments received on poems by Friendship
Hanukkah to Me of the stories l was told
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is deeply moving…the family memory, the stubborn flame, the insistence that miracles continue through how we love and act. You honored tradition while speaking directly into the present. Beautiful work, Friendship. Happy Hanukkah. 🕎✡️ 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 09:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is deeply moving…the family memory, the stubborn flame, the insistence that miracles continue through how we love and act. You honored tradition while speaking directly into the present. Beautiful work, Friendship. Happy Hanukkah. 🕎✡️ 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 09:14
Hanukkah to Me of the stories l was told
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem of light, history and the present in hope and cheer for a new year. So well written and with a sense of warmth. Nicely written
December 14th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem of light, history and the present in hope and cheer for a new year. So well written and with a sense of warmth. Nicely written
December 14th, 2025 06:26
\"Woven of Earth and Heart\"
Paul Bell said:
The creation of life as we see it.
No mean feat, as every step meticulous as the last.
The hard bit for the creator or the artist is letting go, but let go they must.
December 14th, 2025 04:36
Paul Bell said:
The creation of life as we see it.
No mean feat, as every step meticulous as the last.
The hard bit for the creator or the artist is letting go, but let go they must.
December 14th, 2025 04:36
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
Thomas W Case said:
Very relatable. Great work.
December 13th, 2025 18:19
Thomas W Case said:
Very relatable. Great work.
December 13th, 2025 18:19
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh don\'t be like that - this medium has allowed improvement from a very bad start.
December 12th, 2025 17:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh don\'t be like that - this medium has allowed improvement from a very bad start.
December 12th, 2025 17:36
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
arqios said:
A lament of our present day. There be suicides because of internet interaction. And now you reveal another aspect of bein in each other’s knickers. It’s like a one night stand and strangers in the night, ships that don’t even signal each other. 8 billion possible connection but lucky for even one. How truly sad. 🕊🙏🏻🌷
December 12th, 2025 16:57
arqios said:
A lament of our present day. There be suicides because of internet interaction. And now you reveal another aspect of bein in each other’s knickers. It’s like a one night stand and strangers in the night, ships that don’t even signal each other. 8 billion possible connection but lucky for even one. How truly sad. 🕊🙏🏻🌷
December 12th, 2025 16:57
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
NinjaGirl said:
There is promise of so much greatness on the internet! But it stands on the suffering of others, and coy deception of its users. Well written my friend!
December 12th, 2025 14:05
NinjaGirl said:
There is promise of so much greatness on the internet! But it stands on the suffering of others, and coy deception of its users. Well written my friend!
December 12th, 2025 14:05
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
Demar Desu said:
I said the Oh! Part in a Italian voice
December 12th, 2025 12:34
Demar Desu said:
I said the Oh! Part in a Italian voice
December 12th, 2025 12:34
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
Paul Bell said:
Ah, the faithful friend, the computer, I let you into my life, gave you my time, and how did you reward me.
Well, the world isn\'t mine for a start, that was supposed to be the easy task.
As for Attila the Hun, I mean, what the hell.
December 12th, 2025 12:26
Paul Bell said:
Ah, the faithful friend, the computer, I let you into my life, gave you my time, and how did you reward me.
Well, the world isn\'t mine for a start, that was supposed to be the easy task.
As for Attila the Hun, I mean, what the hell.
December 12th, 2025 12:26
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this resonates deeply…the disappointment, the grief, the way promise turned into fracture. It feels honest and lived-in, not abstract. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 12th, 2025 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this resonates deeply…the disappointment, the grief, the way promise turned into fracture. It feels honest and lived-in, not abstract. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 12th, 2025 09:51
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
orchidee said:
Yes, we may have typed out a whole poem, then get a blip - a 404 error or something - then have to do it all over again. Doh!
December 12th, 2025 09:43
orchidee said:
Yes, we may have typed out a whole poem, then get a blip - a 404 error or something - then have to do it all over again. Doh!
December 12th, 2025 09:43
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about our dependency upon the Internet and modern technology. How dependent we have grown that a mirror breakdown leaves a stranded. Nicely written.
December 12th, 2025 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about our dependency upon the Internet and modern technology. How dependent we have grown that a mirror breakdown leaves a stranded. Nicely written.
December 12th, 2025 08:54
Christmas.
NafisaSB said:
nostalgia at its best...the yearning seems so true...
December 12th, 2025 01:38
NafisaSB said:
nostalgia at its best...the yearning seems so true...
December 12th, 2025 01:38
\"Woven of Earth and Heart\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is gorgeous…the tenderness in every material, every gesture, every stroke. It reads like building a soul from the earth itself. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is gorgeous…the tenderness in every material, every gesture, every stroke. It reads like building a soul from the earth itself. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:16
\"Woven of Earth and Heart\"
sorenbarrett said:
A truly lovely poem that applies to the art but more so to the act of creation itself. Your use of images of nature woven into a creation mimics that of God, whether literal or in mythology creates man from dust of the earth. Very nicely done and a fave
December 11th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
A truly lovely poem that applies to the art but more so to the act of creation itself. Your use of images of nature woven into a creation mimics that of God, whether literal or in mythology creates man from dust of the earth. Very nicely done and a fave
December 11th, 2025 08:48
Ode to the Wild Tresses
Paul Bell said:
Strangely enough, I was at the hairdressers today.
The stories you get there are brilliant.
I once cut my hair myself, a sort of emergency cut, you might say, to impress this girl.
She sure was impressed as she backed out the bar at a rate of knots.
December 10th, 2025 13:20
Paul Bell said:
Strangely enough, I was at the hairdressers today.
The stories you get there are brilliant.
I once cut my hair myself, a sort of emergency cut, you might say, to impress this girl.
She sure was impressed as she backed out the bar at a rate of knots.
December 10th, 2025 13:20
Ode to the Wild Tresses
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful…the wild tresses as forest, fire, storm, and starlit map of who you’ve been. The poem holds both softness and defiance, ending with that radiant image of a galaxy that refuses to dim. Truly beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful…the wild tresses as forest, fire, storm, and starlit map of who you’ve been. The poem holds both softness and defiance, ending with that radiant image of a galaxy that refuses to dim. Truly beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:53
Ode to the Wild Tresses
sorenbarrett said:
Memories in locks, remembrances in curls, tresses of the past, a history in hair. Lovely write my friend
December 10th, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Memories in locks, remembrances in curls, tresses of the past, a history in hair. Lovely write my friend
December 10th, 2025 07:33
Ode to the Wild Tresses
Katie B. said:
Enjoyable read, clever write. We women are particular about our hair.
December 10th, 2025 05:54
Katie B. said:
Enjoyable read, clever write. We women are particular about our hair.
December 10th, 2025 05:54
True Tenderness,
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this whole piece breathes in that soft, unrushed way…the hand like mist…the candle burning because darkness welcomes its light. You captured the kind of tenderness that heals without trying. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 9th, 2025 11:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this whole piece breathes in that soft, unrushed way…the hand like mist…the candle burning because darkness welcomes its light. You captured the kind of tenderness that heals without trying. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 9th, 2025 11:30
True Tenderness,
Evie Baker said:
absolutely beautiful! I love the gentle personification. The calm, genuine care that radiates from this poem is incredible!
December 9th, 2025 08:22
Evie Baker said:
absolutely beautiful! I love the gentle personification. The calm, genuine care that radiates from this poem is incredible!
December 9th, 2025 08:22
True Tenderness,
Paul Bell said:
Epic poem with a lot of dimensions running through it.
Could even be a trip through life.
When darkness becomes light we awaken.
Great poem.
December 9th, 2025 08:22
Paul Bell said:
Epic poem with a lot of dimensions running through it.
Could even be a trip through life.
When darkness becomes light we awaken.
Great poem.
December 9th, 2025 08:22
True Tenderness,
Katie B. said:
Truly amazing poem on tenderness! You are so well written and an inspiration to me. I want to write like you!!
December 9th, 2025 07:42
Katie B. said:
Truly amazing poem on tenderness! You are so well written and an inspiration to me. I want to write like you!!
December 9th, 2025 07:42
True Tenderness,
sorenbarrett said:
I think this is my favorite of your poems. It speaks with great depth of understanding to the point of not assuming but just observing. The metaphors are wonderful and give great strength to the piece. It speaks with a calmness and the very tenderness of its title. A definite fave
December 9th, 2025 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
I think this is my favorite of your poems. It speaks with great depth of understanding to the point of not assuming but just observing. The metaphors are wonderful and give great strength to the piece. It speaks with a calmness and the very tenderness of its title. A definite fave
December 9th, 2025 07:19
Mama\'s nasal hair,
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the blend of playfulness and reverence hits just right…it reads like a love note wrapped in a grin. A quirky subject with a heartfelt pulse. Loved it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 20:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the blend of playfulness and reverence hits just right…it reads like a love note wrapped in a grin. A quirky subject with a heartfelt pulse. Loved it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 20:52
Mama\'s nasal hair,
arqios said:
For me it was Nan’s. Mum’s were an inordinate number of moles which she one day had cauterised. 🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 08:24
arqios said:
For me it was Nan’s. Mum’s were an inordinate number of moles which she one day had cauterised. 🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 08:24
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