Comments received on poems by satishverma
Beyond Infinity
2781 said:
We are having similar thoughts.
I only know of the promises.
October 3rd, 2023 23:44
2781 said:
We are having similar thoughts.
I only know of the promises.
October 3rd, 2023 23:44
Unmaking Love
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but I have no idea what it is about.I think its about moths and butterflies.
July 30th, 2023 00:25
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but I have no idea what it is about.I think its about moths and butterflies.
July 30th, 2023 00:25
My Commitment
Bobby O said:
It seems like I like it, I just don’t think I’m clear on “brave robbery “ and where it should take me?
May 9th, 2023 23:17
Bobby O said:
It seems like I like it, I just don’t think I’m clear on “brave robbery “ and where it should take me?
May 9th, 2023 23:17
Increasing Angst
Bobby O said:
I got lost. Stratosphere laughs andThe moon to touch in inclement weather ? The imagery seems arbitrary and not connected . I’m sure it’s me as am still learning to stretch my mind to catch metaphors.
May 5th, 2023 20:40
Bobby O said:
I got lost. Stratosphere laughs andThe moon to touch in inclement weather ? The imagery seems arbitrary and not connected . I’m sure it’s me as am still learning to stretch my mind to catch metaphors.
May 5th, 2023 20:40
Flutey Silence
Bobby O said:
I feel a certain gravitas embodied by a well executed plan and my faith is well earned by your authors verite yet, humbly I must admit, earned accolades aside, my grasp of the last line is not exactly clear and hear by request you enhance my straining incite?
April 30th, 2023 21:05
Bobby O said:
I feel a certain gravitas embodied by a well executed plan and my faith is well earned by your authors verite yet, humbly I must admit, earned accolades aside, my grasp of the last line is not exactly clear and hear by request you enhance my straining incite?
April 30th, 2023 21:05
When The Rains Stop
Bobby O said:
To stitch again my gaze
Really clever ways to express ideas w creative phrase and tapping into metaphors without bending to cliche’
April 9th, 2023 21:21
Bobby O said:
To stitch again my gaze
Really clever ways to express ideas w creative phrase and tapping into metaphors without bending to cliche’
April 9th, 2023 21:21
Crucifixion
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but cannot understand a single word.To be meaningful you have to explain what you mean.Words are missing
March 20th, 2023 21:40
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but cannot understand a single word.To be meaningful you have to explain what you mean.Words are missing
March 20th, 2023 21:40
Defining Equation
charles69 said:
I read this poem several times and saw more, I think, of what you meant to communicate with each reading. However, I don\'t think I grasped the full meaning. This does not by any means diminish the power and literary skill of your work. The great poet Wallace Stevens wrote many such somewhat obscure poems, even more so than this, and is yet acclaimed to be one of the 20th century\'s best.Keep up the good work.
If you get a chance, read Stevens\' \"Anecdote Of The Jar\" or \"Sunday Morning\"
March 17th, 2023 22:01
charles69 said:
I read this poem several times and saw more, I think, of what you meant to communicate with each reading. However, I don\'t think I grasped the full meaning. This does not by any means diminish the power and literary skill of your work. The great poet Wallace Stevens wrote many such somewhat obscure poems, even more so than this, and is yet acclaimed to be one of the 20th century\'s best.Keep up the good work.
If you get a chance, read Stevens\' \"Anecdote Of The Jar\" or \"Sunday Morning\"
March 17th, 2023 22:01
Impeccable
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but the metaphors drown the meaning so I really have no idea what it is about.
March 6th, 2023 20:58
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but the metaphors drown the meaning so I really have no idea what it is about.
March 6th, 2023 20:58
What You Didn\'t Say
Laura🌻 said:
Yes, Satish Verma…waiting for the Angels!
As always, exceptional writing.
Laura 🌻
February 25th, 2023 20:42
Laura🌻 said:
Yes, Satish Verma…waiting for the Angels!
As always, exceptional writing.
Laura 🌻
February 25th, 2023 20:42
Don\'t Tell The Truth
mvvenkataraman said:
I am not criticizing, but tell the fact,
I can\'t understand any of his poems,
As my small mind can never grasp it,
I blame my little brain, not his poems!
January 6th, 2023 22:22
mvvenkataraman said:
I am not criticizing, but tell the fact,
I can\'t understand any of his poems,
As my small mind can never grasp it,
I blame my little brain, not his poems!
January 6th, 2023 22:22
Crossing Death Zone
L. B. Mek said:
(is this that same wasteland of Eliot\'s divorce
mirroring our world of warmongering woes
inking that personal, in that poetic universal...?)
Happy New Year!
January 6th, 2023 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
(is this that same wasteland of Eliot\'s divorce
mirroring our world of warmongering woes
inking that personal, in that poetic universal...?)
Happy New Year!
January 6th, 2023 06:07
Artist And Puppets
jarcher54 said:
Thee past and future always connect at the present... a fine observation to close with.
December 11th, 2022 23:01
jarcher54 said:
Thee past and future always connect at the present... a fine observation to close with.
December 11th, 2022 23:01
Exiting Fog
E Naughton said:
Mysterious, beautifully written, I\'d love to know the story behind this one?
November 7th, 2022 05:23
E Naughton said:
Mysterious, beautifully written, I\'d love to know the story behind this one?
November 7th, 2022 05:23
An Awareness
Hakikur Rahman said:
Some deep thoughts about life. Liked the last stanza.
September 16th, 2022 04:14
Hakikur Rahman said:
Some deep thoughts about life. Liked the last stanza.
September 16th, 2022 04:14
Loneliness
lalalaEulalie said:
Haunting and sad. As poetry is meant to be. Thank you for sharing.
July 17th, 2022 02:02
lalalaEulalie said:
Haunting and sad. As poetry is meant to be. Thank you for sharing.
July 17th, 2022 02:02
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