Comments received on poems by satishverma
Persecution
L. B. Mek said:
\'At peace in temple of
flagellation. I am catching
blue butterflies.\'
Pure, distilled Genius!!!
thank you: Guru
(how unattainably rare
those blue butterflies...)
February 21st, 2022 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'At peace in temple of
flagellation. I am catching
blue butterflies.\'
Pure, distilled Genius!!!
thank you: Guru
(how unattainably rare
those blue butterflies...)
February 21st, 2022 06:09
After Rumi
L. B. Mek said:
\'You and I unselfed, will be together,
indifferent to idle speculation, you and I.
The parrots of heaven will be cracking sugar
as we laugh together, you and I.
In one form upon this earth,
and in another form in a timeless sweet land.\'
from \'A moment of Happiness\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-24374 )
February 18th, 2022 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'You and I unselfed, will be together,
indifferent to idle speculation, you and I.
The parrots of heaven will be cracking sugar
as we laugh together, you and I.
In one form upon this earth,
and in another form in a timeless sweet land.\'
from \'A moment of Happiness\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-24374 )
February 18th, 2022 04:06
On My Self
L. B. Mek said:
when our external, becomes intimidating
we oft
turn towards our most intimate, internal
to curate our monologs and lean, on our hidden treasures..
(a contemplative theme and an intriguing read,
thanks for sharing, Guru)
February 17th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
when our external, becomes intimidating
we oft
turn towards our most intimate, internal
to curate our monologs and lean, on our hidden treasures..
(a contemplative theme and an intriguing read,
thanks for sharing, Guru)
February 17th, 2022 04:26
Paradoxical
L. B. Mek said:
\'in the country of the blind
the one eyed person, reigns\'..
(why do you think
those in power
encourage us, to swipe away
at each others eyes...)
February 15th, 2022 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'in the country of the blind
the one eyed person, reigns\'..
(why do you think
those in power
encourage us, to swipe away
at each others eyes...)
February 15th, 2022 05:05
Abduction
L. B. Mek said:
\'what else is imagination
to be used for
but those fantastical myth\'s
gifting us
an ounce of sweet, make-believe
abducting us
from reality\'s all-consuming, drear..\'
(thanks for sharing, Guru
intriguing wording
\'of human- nest
of tender embrace\'
a lovely internal rhyme)
February 14th, 2022 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'what else is imagination
to be used for
but those fantastical myth\'s
gifting us
an ounce of sweet, make-believe
abducting us
from reality\'s all-consuming, drear..\'
(thanks for sharing, Guru
intriguing wording
\'of human- nest
of tender embrace\'
a lovely internal rhyme)
February 14th, 2022 04:59
Two Vistas
L. B. Mek said:
\'white flag\'s, as salvation
to life\'s incessant onslaught
of decaying hope
and splintered horizons
for us
to clamber towards\'..
(this hit home, at least for me
as-ever
your exquisite wording, sparkles
even on a write, so bleak
in theme..
thank you! Guru)
February 10th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'white flag\'s, as salvation
to life\'s incessant onslaught
of decaying hope
and splintered horizons
for us
to clamber towards\'..
(this hit home, at least for me
as-ever
your exquisite wording, sparkles
even on a write, so bleak
in theme..
thank you! Guru)
February 10th, 2022 04:26
Moonset
L. B. Mek said:
\'to retrieve footprints\'
what a wonderful poem of longing
thank you! Guru
February 7th, 2022 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'to retrieve footprints\'
what a wonderful poem of longing
thank you! Guru
February 7th, 2022 05:33
Stings Go Deep
L. B. Mek said:
\'How green
was my love, O Almighty
Why
to walk on the tightrope
to prove my integrity.\'
(these Profound words
encapsulate
the jagged relationship and dialogue
so many of our generation, have
with the very notion
of a deity: dependant
faith based system, of belief
in a greater power, acting
in existence..
how well
you\'ve captured those once
innocently childlike
ideological certainties, perspective\'s
and
the questions that denoted a gradual dismay
acting
to inquisitively enlighten and distance, us
from them...)
the very proof we need
that the world has lost its capacity
to find tangible reason
for how things are, can be found
in the reality, where
wisdom like yours, is allowed
to to flow, freely
like Nature\'s waterfalls
but
all people, can glean
is
an Instagram worthy, photo opportunity...
(in modernity\'s all-things, aesthetic
obsessed
hollowed-out, marrowless society)
February 3rd, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'How green
was my love, O Almighty
Why
to walk on the tightrope
to prove my integrity.\'
(these Profound words
encapsulate
the jagged relationship and dialogue
so many of our generation, have
with the very notion
of a deity: dependant
faith based system, of belief
in a greater power, acting
in existence..
how well
you\'ve captured those once
innocently childlike
ideological certainties, perspective\'s
and
the questions that denoted a gradual dismay
acting
to inquisitively enlighten and distance, us
from them...)
the very proof we need
that the world has lost its capacity
to find tangible reason
for how things are, can be found
in the reality, where
wisdom like yours, is allowed
to to flow, freely
like Nature\'s waterfalls
but
all people, can glean
is
an Instagram worthy, photo opportunity...
(in modernity\'s all-things, aesthetic
obsessed
hollowed-out, marrowless society)
February 3rd, 2022 05:43
Faces Of God
Buzz Bray said:
\"They turn to ashes\" and we are the products of that process. As Carl Sagan said, \"we are starstuff.\"
January 27th, 2022 21:23
Buzz Bray said:
\"They turn to ashes\" and we are the products of that process. As Carl Sagan said, \"we are starstuff.\"
January 27th, 2022 21:23
Why Complain
L. B. Mek said:
even straining, on our tippy toes
we invariably, tend to fall short...
ergo, all that intense introspection
yields, a warped sense of self
since we\'re always looking
at a distorted reflection, to begin with...
January 27th, 2022 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
even straining, on our tippy toes
we invariably, tend to fall short...
ergo, all that intense introspection
yields, a warped sense of self
since we\'re always looking
at a distorted reflection, to begin with...
January 27th, 2022 04:55
In Amnesias
L. B. Mek said:
\'No prosthesis will work
I will run, run
after
the fading sun, for the last
kiss.
The raw wounds
don\'t need any bandages.\'
\'Let us sip, subtly
upon our love\'s: pseudo nectar
of everlasting\'s, dreams
then part, before
our awareness
awakens, my dear...\'
(forgive me, dear Poet
I couldn\'t help
but try and scribble a few lines
to accompany your beautiful, Poetry,
I meant no disrespect, by doing-so)
thank you for choosing to share, Guru!
January 24th, 2022 06:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'No prosthesis will work
I will run, run
after
the fading sun, for the last
kiss.
The raw wounds
don\'t need any bandages.\'
\'Let us sip, subtly
upon our love\'s: pseudo nectar
of everlasting\'s, dreams
then part, before
our awareness
awakens, my dear...\'
(forgive me, dear Poet
I couldn\'t help
but try and scribble a few lines
to accompany your beautiful, Poetry,
I meant no disrespect, by doing-so)
thank you for choosing to share, Guru!
January 24th, 2022 06:42
On Fiery Path
James Michael said:
The puppet and no to answer the questions. The future is unanswerable.
Thanks for making us all think, again.
January 22nd, 2022 22:36
James Michael said:
The puppet and no to answer the questions. The future is unanswerable.
Thanks for making us all think, again.
January 22nd, 2022 22:36
In Anguish
L. B. Mek said:
\'My goblet
remained, full of
black holes.
A cloud
will cross the line. Unrepentant
my poems
would lie on hot rocks, for baking.
Never
made it. The two small feet
home.\'
Brilliant imagery, this
is what Artistry of Poetry feels like
to experience and be overwhelmed-by.
thank you, Guru!
January 21st, 2022 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'My goblet
remained, full of
black holes.
A cloud
will cross the line. Unrepentant
my poems
would lie on hot rocks, for baking.
Never
made it. The two small feet
home.\'
Brilliant imagery, this
is what Artistry of Poetry feels like
to experience and be overwhelmed-by.
thank you, Guru!
January 21st, 2022 05:44
In Anguish
sophin said:
beautiful and powerful words, s. \"Never made it. The
two small feet home. \"
January 20th, 2022 22:55
sophin said:
beautiful and powerful words, s. \"Never made it. The
two small feet home. \"
January 20th, 2022 22:55
Deity Speaks
L. B. Mek said:
\'that quietude of No
to greet
our expectancy of want
over Need...\'
(\'know thyself\': to glean
all, that you Need
accepting, all the rest
are just optional, extra\'s
in this
our one glimpsed, scene
of existence\'s
unsurpassably finite: fear)
January 17th, 2022 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'that quietude of No
to greet
our expectancy of want
over Need...\'
(\'know thyself\': to glean
all, that you Need
accepting, all the rest
are just optional, extra\'s
in this
our one glimpsed, scene
of existence\'s
unsurpassably finite: fear)
January 17th, 2022 06:49
Trampled Dreams
L. B. Mek said:
profound words, that express
such raw incredulity, at the sheer
diabolic status, of our society\'s morally bankrupt hypocrisy..
a great write!
thank you, Guru
January 14th, 2022 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
profound words, that express
such raw incredulity, at the sheer
diabolic status, of our society\'s morally bankrupt hypocrisy..
a great write!
thank you, Guru
January 14th, 2022 05:33
Trampled Dreams
C E Thomas said:
This conveys emotions I can\'t really pin down. I like it a lot. Thank you
January 13th, 2022 22:58
C E Thomas said:
This conveys emotions I can\'t really pin down. I like it a lot. Thank you
January 13th, 2022 22:58
Light Luggage
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ah, the terror
to remain alive, under
the water of mercy.\'
just pure poetic genius!
thank you, Guru
January 13th, 2022 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ah, the terror
to remain alive, under
the water of mercy.\'
just pure poetic genius!
thank you, Guru
January 13th, 2022 04:24
Not A Punishment
L. B. Mek said:
\'The wild pursuit
of your footprints brings bliss.
Fight was on, for not
to be or isness. I cannot
turn away from my
inner voice,\'
(great wordplay and effortless flow
a brilliant read, thanks for sharing)
January 6th, 2022 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'The wild pursuit
of your footprints brings bliss.
Fight was on, for not
to be or isness. I cannot
turn away from my
inner voice,\'
(great wordplay and effortless flow
a brilliant read, thanks for sharing)
January 6th, 2022 04:45
Not A Punishment
sophin said:
Incredible write. I can\'t put into words how I adored this work.
January 5th, 2022 23:19
sophin said:
Incredible write. I can\'t put into words how I adored this work.
January 5th, 2022 23:19
An Abstract End
L. B. Mek said:
what imagery, what poetic brevity
I could bring my entire toolbox
and never reveal the depths
your artistry reaches, dear Poet
simply a great poem, even devoid of context
thank you, Guru
December 23rd, 2021 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
what imagery, what poetic brevity
I could bring my entire toolbox
and never reveal the depths
your artistry reaches, dear Poet
simply a great poem, even devoid of context
thank you, Guru
December 23rd, 2021 04:50
Standing In Queue
L. B. Mek said:
\'It was the carnage of moment.
The brutality of its strength
casts spell.
There was a quick about-face.
Dark night
will paint your face, with stars.\'
(a great write
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
December 21st, 2021 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'It was the carnage of moment.
The brutality of its strength
casts spell.
There was a quick about-face.
Dark night
will paint your face, with stars.\'
(a great write
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
December 21st, 2021 04:55
The Meaning Tremble
L. B. Mek said:
sheer Poetic, sublime
I\'m in love!
with that last stanza..
how very kind of you
to choose to share
your poetic genius, Guru!
thank you
December 20th, 2021 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
sheer Poetic, sublime
I\'m in love!
with that last stanza..
how very kind of you
to choose to share
your poetic genius, Guru!
thank you
December 20th, 2021 05:25
Travesty Of Stars
L. B. Mek said:
Daybreak, awakens
to shade our nightmares
into reality\'s scenes..
Moon hides, till our eyes
can be blanketed in stardust, dreams
we the pinnacle of Earthly evolution
merely, tadpoles on fishhooks
in the face
of a universe\'s, true might..
(a brilliant write!
thanks for sharing, Guru)
December 16th, 2021 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
Daybreak, awakens
to shade our nightmares
into reality\'s scenes..
Moon hides, till our eyes
can be blanketed in stardust, dreams
we the pinnacle of Earthly evolution
merely, tadpoles on fishhooks
in the face
of a universe\'s, true might..
(a brilliant write!
thanks for sharing, Guru)
December 16th, 2021 05:22
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