Comments received on poems by satishverma
Travesty Of Stars
L. B. Mek said:
Daybreak, awakens
to shade our nightmares
into reality\'s scenes..
Moon hides, till our eyes
can be blanketed in stardust, dreams
we the pinnacle of Earthly evolution
merely, tadpoles on fishhooks
in the face
of a universe\'s, true might..
(a brilliant write!
thanks for sharing, Guru)
December 16th, 2021 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
Daybreak, awakens
to shade our nightmares
into reality\'s scenes..
Moon hides, till our eyes
can be blanketed in stardust, dreams
we the pinnacle of Earthly evolution
merely, tadpoles on fishhooks
in the face
of a universe\'s, true might..
(a brilliant write!
thanks for sharing, Guru)
December 16th, 2021 05:22
Some Fairy Tale
L. B. Mek said:
so morbidly true,
there are so many who profit from other\'s pain
whilst complaining
about the stresses and strife, in their lives
December 14th, 2021 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
so morbidly true,
there are so many who profit from other\'s pain
whilst complaining
about the stresses and strife, in their lives
December 14th, 2021 04:53
Taking Sand Bath
L. B. Mek said:
but we still gather
either side, of that same locked door:
some who believe in miracles
others
who are adamant about merit...
(in the words of the great Li Bai:
\'Lifting my head I gaze at the bright moon
Bowing my head, thinking of home.\')
another brilliant write
thanks for sharing, Guru!
December 13th, 2021 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
but we still gather
either side, of that same locked door:
some who believe in miracles
others
who are adamant about merit...
(in the words of the great Li Bai:
\'Lifting my head I gaze at the bright moon
Bowing my head, thinking of home.\')
another brilliant write
thanks for sharing, Guru!
December 13th, 2021 04:04
Not Like Me
L. B. Mek said:
never go to sleep angry, we agreed
and so
we\'ve spent weeks, without sleep
so I\'ll hold the bell
you - pull the cord, we\'ll
ring-in our submission
at the same time;
and let the moon, spotlight
another\'s, stubborn romance...
December 10th, 2021 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
never go to sleep angry, we agreed
and so
we\'ve spent weeks, without sleep
so I\'ll hold the bell
you - pull the cord, we\'ll
ring-in our submission
at the same time;
and let the moon, spotlight
another\'s, stubborn romance...
December 10th, 2021 04:20
Not Like Me
woundedheart said:
Such powerful imagery and the second stanza so beautifully penned
December 10th, 2021 03:30
woundedheart said:
Such powerful imagery and the second stanza so beautifully penned
December 10th, 2021 03:30
Not Like Me
C E Thomas said:
Fantastic. I am very impressed. To say so much with so few words is a true talent. Please, keep it up.
December 9th, 2021 20:25
C E Thomas said:
Fantastic. I am very impressed. To say so much with so few words is a true talent. Please, keep it up.
December 9th, 2021 20:25
Trapped Wishes
L. B. Mek said:
you, at your subtle poetic best
poetry to meditate over
than merely read,
thank you, Guru
December 7th, 2021 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
you, at your subtle poetic best
poetry to meditate over
than merely read,
thank you, Guru
December 7th, 2021 05:45
Cosmetic Effect
L. B. Mek said:
when hypocrites, dare
to test limits
in their hypocritical faiths
then, pause - remembering
that taste of failure\'s regrets
\'to infinity and beyond: onwards
to indignation\'s, spatial nations\'
December 6th, 2021 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
when hypocrites, dare
to test limits
in their hypocritical faiths
then, pause - remembering
that taste of failure\'s regrets
\'to infinity and beyond: onwards
to indignation\'s, spatial nations\'
December 6th, 2021 05:14
Gordian Knot
L. B. Mek said:
\'The elected path
haunts us. Where the moon
sinks in dark sky\'..
and we ask, who - elected?
just so we have an answer
to lament over...
(sadly most of your context in this write was lost to me, but still
a wonderfully weaved poem,
thank you for sharing: Guru)
December 3rd, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'The elected path
haunts us. Where the moon
sinks in dark sky\'..
and we ask, who - elected?
just so we have an answer
to lament over...
(sadly most of your context in this write was lost to me, but still
a wonderfully weaved poem,
thank you for sharing: Guru)
December 3rd, 2021 05:42
Moonlight Through The Filters
L. B. Mek said:
no matter how bleak or macabre
its underlying, nihilistic content
when its written: this poetic
it can only be inspirational, as Art!
(another great write
thanks for sharing, Guru!)
\'In moment
of hubris, all chandeliers
will crash
and prehistoric dirt, will cling
to hairy legs.\'
brilliant imagery,
how deeply your metaphors
can be excavated, to mine
the treasure\'s in your wisdom
November 30th, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
no matter how bleak or macabre
its underlying, nihilistic content
when its written: this poetic
it can only be inspirational, as Art!
(another great write
thanks for sharing, Guru!)
\'In moment
of hubris, all chandeliers
will crash
and prehistoric dirt, will cling
to hairy legs.\'
brilliant imagery,
how deeply your metaphors
can be excavated, to mine
the treasure\'s in your wisdom
November 30th, 2021 05:03
All The Dreams
L. B. Mek said:
Poetry, depicting
the grapevine of outed: Trust
betrayal\'s whispers, in the dark
aiming for the moonlight
of ambition\'s thread marks;
voicing
our lacking capacity, to comprehend and empathise
with all the abundant suffering, that surrounds...
this be inking of poetic tears
a cry of despair
for the trajectory of humanity
in our perpetuated abyss of stagnated
\'black stones
globalised Angst
of Nothingness\'
(a great write
thanks for sharing
Guru!)
November 22nd, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
Poetry, depicting
the grapevine of outed: Trust
betrayal\'s whispers, in the dark
aiming for the moonlight
of ambition\'s thread marks;
voicing
our lacking capacity, to comprehend and empathise
with all the abundant suffering, that surrounds...
this be inking of poetic tears
a cry of despair
for the trajectory of humanity
in our perpetuated abyss of stagnated
\'black stones
globalised Angst
of Nothingness\'
(a great write
thanks for sharing
Guru!)
November 22nd, 2021 05:42
All The Dreams
Sharkylang said:
Grapevines don\'t grow in the dark. They need sunlight.
November 21st, 2021 21:58
Sharkylang said:
Grapevines don\'t grow in the dark. They need sunlight.
November 21st, 2021 21:58
Undressing
Paul Bell said:
What a great poem.
Sometimes we really should stop and just marvel at our world in splendor.
November 20th, 2021 08:10
Paul Bell said:
What a great poem.
Sometimes we really should stop and just marvel at our world in splendor.
November 20th, 2021 08:10
Beat The Clouds
L. B. Mek said:
\'It was waiting to
fall, the colossus under the
rains of silent eyes.\'
\'You cannot kill the
hunger, eating dry leaves
of beautiful scape.\'
(but we can use
the embittered salt
in the rain, streams
of our eyes
to soften, the dry leaves
of ill-fate - at least enough
to imbue them
with malleability, enough
to render them, comprehensible...)
November 18th, 2021 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'It was waiting to
fall, the colossus under the
rains of silent eyes.\'
\'You cannot kill the
hunger, eating dry leaves
of beautiful scape.\'
(but we can use
the embittered salt
in the rain, streams
of our eyes
to soften, the dry leaves
of ill-fate - at least enough
to imbue them
with malleability, enough
to render them, comprehensible...)
November 18th, 2021 04:48
Your Journey
L. B. Mek said:
\'Upgrading clock
was not a wise decision.
Who will read the past?\'
(fast forwarding your timing, a foolish mistake,
qualifying your future\'s timing, a silly decision...
trying to progress, without first
knowing yourself
a formula for failure,
aspiring for what you can become
without acknowledging, where
you came from
a choice, you\'re bound to regret...)
and all these, just trying to unfurl your first stanza...
A great write! Guru
November 16th, 2021 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'Upgrading clock
was not a wise decision.
Who will read the past?\'
(fast forwarding your timing, a foolish mistake,
qualifying your future\'s timing, a silly decision...
trying to progress, without first
knowing yourself
a formula for failure,
aspiring for what you can become
without acknowledging, where
you came from
a choice, you\'re bound to regret...)
and all these, just trying to unfurl your first stanza...
A great write! Guru
November 16th, 2021 05:19
My Story
L. B. Mek said:
some poetry, just surpasses
whatever praise we could - ever, come up with
and so, all we can do
is read and accept: gratefully
with the utmost sincerity..
thank you, Guru!
\'This, was exotic.
A single
drop, throbs
in space.
I walk on blades.
I think farther
from―
The relics of disasters.
You, love
to read palms, Talking
of slaughter
moon, bled to death
when, you left in dark.\'
November 15th, 2021 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
some poetry, just surpasses
whatever praise we could - ever, come up with
and so, all we can do
is read and accept: gratefully
with the utmost sincerity..
thank you, Guru!
\'This, was exotic.
A single
drop, throbs
in space.
I walk on blades.
I think farther
from―
The relics of disasters.
You, love
to read palms, Talking
of slaughter
moon, bled to death
when, you left in dark.\'
November 15th, 2021 05:58
I Speak
L. B. Mek said:
I only wish I had the ears
to glean even half of your wisdom...
thank you, for choosing to share:
Guru!
November 11th, 2021 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
I only wish I had the ears
to glean even half of your wisdom...
thank you, for choosing to share:
Guru!
November 11th, 2021 05:18
Gifted Pain
L. B. Mek said:
\'from the love
I entrusted
into, your once: forgiving hands\'..
(came, that much anticipated: reply)
November 8th, 2021 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'from the love
I entrusted
into, your once: forgiving hands\'..
(came, that much anticipated: reply)
November 8th, 2021 06:03
The Pain Outlives
L. B. Mek said:
the imagery and deep meaning in that last stanza, is just beautiful
thanks for sharing, Guru
November 4th, 2021 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
the imagery and deep meaning in that last stanza, is just beautiful
thanks for sharing, Guru
November 4th, 2021 04:19
Who Was Disappearing?
L. B. Mek said:
I don\'t know
in your choice imagery, that analogy of a black hole
could be easily swapped for that forever sleep
we know awaits us, eventually
and some, seek mercy in sleep
only
they seldom, align that same sleep
with its consequence of disappearance
and its compressively sans, promise
of non existence...
November 2nd, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
I don\'t know
in your choice imagery, that analogy of a black hole
could be easily swapped for that forever sleep
we know awaits us, eventually
and some, seek mercy in sleep
only
they seldom, align that same sleep
with its consequence of disappearance
and its compressively sans, promise
of non existence...
November 2nd, 2021 05:03
Question Of Existence
L. B. Mek said:
\'You cannot take your Life, without
the witness of water.\'
(even that waterfall, cascading
from your pleading - blinking
its all, witnessed
it all counts
and its Never too Late!
simply
search for that ounce of sincerity
you still have
to cling to,
and wage a path for your Truth
to be that,
which accompanies you
to the other side.
Burn, and shed
all your regret\'s and repentance
this side,
of that six feet divide
Never assume, its ever: too late!)
thank for sharing: Guru!
(I\'m sorry,
if I\'ve once again, hijacked
the meaning of your words)
November 1st, 2021 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'You cannot take your Life, without
the witness of water.\'
(even that waterfall, cascading
from your pleading - blinking
its all, witnessed
it all counts
and its Never too Late!
simply
search for that ounce of sincerity
you still have
to cling to,
and wage a path for your Truth
to be that,
which accompanies you
to the other side.
Burn, and shed
all your regret\'s and repentance
this side,
of that six feet divide
Never assume, its ever: too late!)
thank for sharing: Guru!
(I\'m sorry,
if I\'ve once again, hijacked
the meaning of your words)
November 1st, 2021 06:37
Bridge Collapses
L. B. Mek said:
milk of our Truth\'s
as sinew threads, bridging
our nightmares and realities
these: curdled Fear\'s
we Knowingly, surrender to...
(thanks for sharing, Guru!
and inspiring,
my little scribbled reply)
October 25th, 2021 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
milk of our Truth\'s
as sinew threads, bridging
our nightmares and realities
these: curdled Fear\'s
we Knowingly, surrender to...
(thanks for sharing, Guru!
and inspiring,
my little scribbled reply)
October 25th, 2021 04:42
Why Some Roses Are Black
L. B. Mek said:
maybe to survive, like Cleopatra?
A lady of power, at a Time
of sword gyrating: masculine oppression,
yeah, maybe it was just to survive...
October 21st, 2021 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
maybe to survive, like Cleopatra?
A lady of power, at a Time
of sword gyrating: masculine oppression,
yeah, maybe it was just to survive...
October 21st, 2021 05:17
You Were Within Me
L. B. Mek said:
flowers,
imbued with the love, of those plagued
by the fate
of the title \'meek\' - destined to inherit,
the \'Literal\' devastation
we\'ll still, stubbornly title
our dystopian remnant of Earth
with unshakeable, Pride!
(such a profound write,
thanks for choosing to share!)
October 19th, 2021 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
flowers,
imbued with the love, of those plagued
by the fate
of the title \'meek\' - destined to inherit,
the \'Literal\' devastation
we\'ll still, stubbornly title
our dystopian remnant of Earth
with unshakeable, Pride!
(such a profound write,
thanks for choosing to share!)
October 19th, 2021 05:33
From Thoughts To Thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
I read and learn: Guru
(the First Poet, was the first born
with the gift of sentient thought;
the First, Poem: is yet to be written)
\'in my humble opinion\'
(\'Do not avail
the sedition in this poor land.
Wheat color of the temples
want to follow
the burning sun, to take away
our differences.
The legacy of the moon
does not want
to flood the meanings.
A breathless call
was from white sky,
who was the first poet
of this wobbly world?\')
who indeed...
I doubt we\'ll find out,
even after we\'ve crossed
that six feet, divide
October 18th, 2021 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
I read and learn: Guru
(the First Poet, was the first born
with the gift of sentient thought;
the First, Poem: is yet to be written)
\'in my humble opinion\'
(\'Do not avail
the sedition in this poor land.
Wheat color of the temples
want to follow
the burning sun, to take away
our differences.
The legacy of the moon
does not want
to flood the meanings.
A breathless call
was from white sky,
who was the first poet
of this wobbly world?\')
who indeed...
I doubt we\'ll find out,
even after we\'ve crossed
that six feet, divide
October 18th, 2021 05:34
My Religion Sinks
L. B. Mek said:
lol
wrath, how addictive
your bitter taste on my tongue
that scarlet decoration of anger\'s, bitten lip;
I shall dismiss your existence
by dedicating my poetry to you,
I shall refute your influence
by counting-out my syllables to your name,
Sylvia was broken
and Nietzsche, announced our collective blasphemy - early...
So, I ask \'you\'? (that\'s a generic you)
and So, fckn what?
What exactly has changed?
What\'s \'gotten beta\'?
What does it matter if you
\'Worship\'
a misinterpreted Deity,
a progressively corrupted Science
or that Nihilistic Atheism?
What, does it all matter
when all we\'re doing is making up
new excuses
just to distract from the fallibility in our own Nature\'s reflections?
Fck, stereotypes
Fck, all the idolised - idols
Fck, the new Awakening \'wokeness\'
based on old texts and rusted philosophies
Keep your capitalism and your communism..
We should all build our own ships, for our own communities
and sail the rivers we Choose,
Leave the sea for those poetic \'Sharks\'...!
October 14th, 2021 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
lol
wrath, how addictive
your bitter taste on my tongue
that scarlet decoration of anger\'s, bitten lip;
I shall dismiss your existence
by dedicating my poetry to you,
I shall refute your influence
by counting-out my syllables to your name,
Sylvia was broken
and Nietzsche, announced our collective blasphemy - early...
So, I ask \'you\'? (that\'s a generic you)
and So, fckn what?
What exactly has changed?
What\'s \'gotten beta\'?
What does it matter if you
\'Worship\'
a misinterpreted Deity,
a progressively corrupted Science
or that Nihilistic Atheism?
What, does it all matter
when all we\'re doing is making up
new excuses
just to distract from the fallibility in our own Nature\'s reflections?
Fck, stereotypes
Fck, all the idolised - idols
Fck, the new Awakening \'wokeness\'
based on old texts and rusted philosophies
Keep your capitalism and your communism..
We should all build our own ships, for our own communities
and sail the rivers we Choose,
Leave the sea for those poetic \'Sharks\'...!
October 14th, 2021 04:47
I Select Limited
L. B. Mek said:
digging to learn form other\'s mistakes
maybe?
to insure we no longer repeat them, unknowingly
maybe?..
insightful words as-ever, thanks for sharing
October 12th, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
digging to learn form other\'s mistakes
maybe?
to insure we no longer repeat them, unknowingly
maybe?..
insightful words as-ever, thanks for sharing
October 12th, 2021 04:27
Not My Philosophy
L. B. Mek said:
\'How not to die
after becoming wiser than god.\'
and this is why I cling to humility!
so such notions will never present themselves to me...
that \'God complex\': of Entitlement
where All, is True
if you Will it - so: Tyrannically
as part
of your Warped sense of reality...
October 11th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'How not to die
after becoming wiser than god.\'
and this is why I cling to humility!
so such notions will never present themselves to me...
that \'God complex\': of Entitlement
where All, is True
if you Will it - so: Tyrannically
as part
of your Warped sense of reality...
October 11th, 2021 05:27
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