Comments received on poems by Allie561
Mr. Unknown
sorenbarrett said:
Creative this poem treats aspects of thought, emotion, the existential, time as a person and resolves it in the enjoyment of life itself. Nicely done
February 1st, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Creative this poem treats aspects of thought, emotion, the existential, time as a person and resolves it in the enjoyment of life itself. Nicely done
February 1st, 2026 03:41
Music
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem with good rhyme and meter blending fairytales and music together the only thing lacking in this symphony is percussion. But I\'ll beat the drum for it and give it a fave.
January 30th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem with good rhyme and meter blending fairytales and music together the only thing lacking in this symphony is percussion. But I\'ll beat the drum for it and give it a fave.
January 30th, 2026 04:08
A safe place
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful scene painted in this poem of a beach. It is vivid in its images that all bring beach views and memories. Very nicely done
January 27th, 2026 02:37
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful scene painted in this poem of a beach. It is vivid in its images that all bring beach views and memories. Very nicely done
January 27th, 2026 02:37
Sunday
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a typical traditional US Sunday. Nicely written
January 25th, 2026 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a typical traditional US Sunday. Nicely written
January 25th, 2026 13:35
Questions
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write regarding the evolution of relationships in an evolving world. The trend seems to be downhill. A good write
January 23rd, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write regarding the evolution of relationships in an evolving world. The trend seems to be downhill. A good write
January 23rd, 2026 03:45
Tacos
sorenbarrett said:
Love Tacos and true Mexican tacos with shredded beef are the best. Many Americans put on lettuce, tomato, cheese, olives, sour cream and although good it is not needed maybe a little jalapeno.
January 18th, 2026 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
Love Tacos and true Mexican tacos with shredded beef are the best. Many Americans put on lettuce, tomato, cheese, olives, sour cream and although good it is not needed maybe a little jalapeno.
January 18th, 2026 12:41
Promises
Katie B. said:
Heavy heartfelt poem on pain and loss. Nicely presented. Keep writing my friend.
January 17th, 2026 08:02
Katie B. said:
Heavy heartfelt poem on pain and loss. Nicely presented. Keep writing my friend.
January 17th, 2026 08:02
Promises
sorenbarrett said:
I love the juxtaposition of the alternating lines and their polar opposites that lead to the last one in conclusion. Nicely formatted and planned with meaning. A fave
January 17th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
I love the juxtaposition of the alternating lines and their polar opposites that lead to the last one in conclusion. Nicely formatted and planned with meaning. A fave
January 17th, 2026 04:09
Why do we do the things we do?
sorenbarrett said:
The race with time and all that needs to be done. A lovely write with good rhyme and great flow
January 16th, 2026 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
The race with time and all that needs to be done. A lovely write with good rhyme and great flow
January 16th, 2026 12:09
To write is to be held
sorenbarrett said:
Distancing in this poem that speaks of needing space from a certain person. Well written
January 16th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Distancing in this poem that speaks of needing space from a certain person. Well written
January 16th, 2026 06:30
To that one person who didn’t know
sorenbarrett said:
The what if poem. A titillating poem of romance that never was. Lovely
January 14th, 2026 21:32
sorenbarrett said:
The what if poem. A titillating poem of romance that never was. Lovely
January 14th, 2026 21:32
Why do you keep coming back?
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of an early memory transposed in a dream of a relationship that never developed. Sad but well written
January 11th, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of an early memory transposed in a dream of a relationship that never developed. Sad but well written
January 11th, 2026 03:47
What if I ran away?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that projects the virtue of nature and rejoining it. A pristine and idyllic quest hardly possible in todays world yet fraught with difficulties as well. The poem\'s dichotomy presents it as black and white well done
January 9th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that projects the virtue of nature and rejoining it. A pristine and idyllic quest hardly possible in todays world yet fraught with difficulties as well. The poem\'s dichotomy presents it as black and white well done
January 9th, 2026 04:09
A dogs life
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read looking at the brite side of a dog\'s life
January 7th, 2026 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read looking at the brite side of a dog\'s life
January 7th, 2026 11:34
What we can’t see
sorenbarrett said:
All so true, we are all lax to see our own deficits and so quick to point out others. A lovely write
January 6th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
All so true, we are all lax to see our own deficits and so quick to point out others. A lovely write
January 6th, 2026 03:59
A face in crowd
sorenbarrett said:
Every face different yet unlike names that are easily forgotten it is hard to forget a face. Well written
December 27th, 2025 18:29
sorenbarrett said:
Every face different yet unlike names that are easily forgotten it is hard to forget a face. Well written
December 27th, 2025 18:29
Beneath the trees lies a world
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful descriptive poem that expounds on nature\'s beauty. Well done
December 26th, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful descriptive poem that expounds on nature\'s beauty. Well done
December 26th, 2025 13:37
Missing your face
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the fear of loss in this poem the loss of a friendship or relationship that could have been and once was but no longer is. Well written. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the fear of loss in this poem the loss of a friendship or relationship that could have been and once was but no longer is. Well written. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:08
Ode to dad
sorenbarrett said:
A write about a father that is seen as inconsistent in words and deeds. A common view that many children share. In this case it has created an opposite approach in parenting. Well written.
December 20th, 2025 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
A write about a father that is seen as inconsistent in words and deeds. A common view that many children share. In this case it has created an opposite approach in parenting. Well written.
December 20th, 2025 15:40
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