Comments received on poems by Allie561
Why do we do the things we do?
sorenbarrett said:
The race with time and all that needs to be done. A lovely write with good rhyme and great flow
January 16th, 2026 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
The race with time and all that needs to be done. A lovely write with good rhyme and great flow
January 16th, 2026 12:09
To write is to be held
sorenbarrett said:
Distancing in this poem that speaks of needing space from a certain person. Well written
January 16th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Distancing in this poem that speaks of needing space from a certain person. Well written
January 16th, 2026 06:30
To that one person who didn’t know
sorenbarrett said:
The what if poem. A titillating poem of romance that never was. Lovely
January 14th, 2026 21:32
sorenbarrett said:
The what if poem. A titillating poem of romance that never was. Lovely
January 14th, 2026 21:32
Why do you keep coming back?
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of an early memory transposed in a dream of a relationship that never developed. Sad but well written
January 11th, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of an early memory transposed in a dream of a relationship that never developed. Sad but well written
January 11th, 2026 03:47
What if I ran away?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that projects the virtue of nature and rejoining it. A pristine and idyllic quest hardly possible in todays world yet fraught with difficulties as well. The poem\'s dichotomy presents it as black and white well done
January 9th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that projects the virtue of nature and rejoining it. A pristine and idyllic quest hardly possible in todays world yet fraught with difficulties as well. The poem\'s dichotomy presents it as black and white well done
January 9th, 2026 04:09
A dogs life
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read looking at the brite side of a dog\'s life
January 7th, 2026 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read looking at the brite side of a dog\'s life
January 7th, 2026 11:34
What we can’t see
sorenbarrett said:
All so true, we are all lax to see our own deficits and so quick to point out others. A lovely write
January 6th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
All so true, we are all lax to see our own deficits and so quick to point out others. A lovely write
January 6th, 2026 03:59
A face in crowd
sorenbarrett said:
Every face different yet unlike names that are easily forgotten it is hard to forget a face. Well written
December 27th, 2025 18:29
sorenbarrett said:
Every face different yet unlike names that are easily forgotten it is hard to forget a face. Well written
December 27th, 2025 18:29
Beneath the trees lies a world
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful descriptive poem that expounds on nature\'s beauty. Well done
December 26th, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful descriptive poem that expounds on nature\'s beauty. Well done
December 26th, 2025 13:37
Missing your face
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the fear of loss in this poem the loss of a friendship or relationship that could have been and once was but no longer is. Well written. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the fear of loss in this poem the loss of a friendship or relationship that could have been and once was but no longer is. Well written. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:08
Ode to dad
sorenbarrett said:
A write about a father that is seen as inconsistent in words and deeds. A common view that many children share. In this case it has created an opposite approach in parenting. Well written.
December 20th, 2025 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
A write about a father that is seen as inconsistent in words and deeds. A common view that many children share. In this case it has created an opposite approach in parenting. Well written.
December 20th, 2025 15:40
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