Comments received on poems by Allie561
Love me not
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, what makes this poem work so powerfully is its restraint. The imagery stays soft, intimate, almost comforting…the moon, moss, rust, coffee…until that final line suddenly reframes every comparison before it. It turns the poem from a love confession into quiet heartbreak in an instant. Beautiful and devastating piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 12:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, what makes this poem work so powerfully is its restraint. The imagery stays soft, intimate, almost comforting…the moon, moss, rust, coffee…until that final line suddenly reframes every comparison before it. It turns the poem from a love confession into quiet heartbreak in an instant. Beautiful and devastating piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 12:25
Love me not
sorenbarrett said:
Here are several definitions of love all connected. Nicely done
May 12th, 2026 23:20
sorenbarrett said:
Here are several definitions of love all connected. Nicely done
May 12th, 2026 23:20
Potato soup
RSM0812 said:
Life is a blessing for sure. Nice comparison with soup. Savour every bite. :)
April 25th, 2026 04:18
RSM0812 said:
Life is a blessing for sure. Nice comparison with soup. Savour every bite. :)
April 25th, 2026 04:18
Use it before it’s gone
Demar Desu said:
I feel like nothing is what I should be doing, then again I did enroll into classes an entire new subject for me.
April 24th, 2026 14:26
Demar Desu said:
I feel like nothing is what I should be doing, then again I did enroll into classes an entire new subject for me.
April 24th, 2026 14:26
Use it before it’s gone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this carries that spark of choosing life on purpose…doing what once felt off-limits, leaning into the moment instead of holding back. There’s freedom in that shift, and you let it come through simply and clearly. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this carries that spark of choosing life on purpose…doing what once felt off-limits, leaning into the moment instead of holding back. There’s freedom in that shift, and you let it come through simply and clearly. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:19
Use it before it’s gone
sorenbarrett said:
There is that old saying \"Try it you might like it\" that seems to be the meaning of this poem set in good rhyme.
April 24th, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
There is that old saying \"Try it you might like it\" that seems to be the meaning of this poem set in good rhyme.
April 24th, 2026 04:28
Desire
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this carries that sharp edge of wanting without restraint…drawn in, reaching, not satisfied with distance or delay. That desire to have it all right now…that’s real. I’ve felt that pull too. You kept it simple and let it speak for itself. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this carries that sharp edge of wanting without restraint…drawn in, reaching, not satisfied with distance or delay. That desire to have it all right now…that’s real. I’ve felt that pull too. You kept it simple and let it speak for itself. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:41
Desire
sorenbarrett said:
It is always best to never let the controlled become satiated a manufactures and Machiavellian code.
April 23rd, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
It is always best to never let the controlled become satiated a manufactures and Machiavellian code.
April 23rd, 2026 04:20
A sun full of secrets
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this pulled me in right away…there’s something so natural about that back-and-forth, like a conversation you don’t really want to be having. It feels light on the surface, but there’s more underneath. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this pulled me in right away…there’s something so natural about that back-and-forth, like a conversation you don’t really want to be having. It feels light on the surface, but there’s more underneath. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:03
A sun full of secrets
sorenbarrett said:
Secrets always a problem if more than one knows it, it is no longer a secret. Well written
April 21st, 2026 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
Secrets always a problem if more than one knows it, it is no longer a secret. Well written
April 21st, 2026 11:53
He’s just a dog
sorenbarrett said:
A understandable write in reality but in metaphor we often blame others for things that they do not know or are capable of knowing. Well written
April 14th, 2026 19:28
sorenbarrett said:
A understandable write in reality but in metaphor we often blame others for things that they do not know or are capable of knowing. Well written
April 14th, 2026 19:28
Thank you to the poets
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this feels real in that quiet, worn-down kind of way…like you’re still pushing forward even when it’s a lot. And then to land on gratitude for poetry and the people behind it…that shift really works. It’s simple, honest, and it stays with you. Beautiful piece, my friend. And, yup, right there with you...thank you too. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this feels real in that quiet, worn-down kind of way…like you’re still pushing forward even when it’s a lot. And then to land on gratitude for poetry and the people behind it…that shift really works. It’s simple, honest, and it stays with you. Beautiful piece, my friend. And, yup, right there with you...thank you too. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:50
Thank you to the poets
sorenbarrett said:
I love this short piece that says it all in a few words
April 11th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
I love this short piece that says it all in a few words
April 11th, 2026 04:48
Thank you to the poets
Demar Desu said:
It is national poetry month 🤟🏽♾️❤️🩹 thank you as well for creating this art
April 10th, 2026 23:44
Demar Desu said:
It is national poetry month 🤟🏽♾️❤️🩹 thank you as well for creating this art
April 10th, 2026 23:44
To Alice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this is really sweet…there’s a softness to it that just feels genuine. It reads like something quietly meant, not overworked. That lands, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this is really sweet…there’s a softness to it that just feels genuine. It reads like something quietly meant, not overworked. That lands, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 08:42
To Alice
sorenbarrett said:
I like the metaphor here with a wonderland and tea nicely written
April 9th, 2026 11:32
sorenbarrett said:
I like the metaphor here with a wonderland and tea nicely written
April 9th, 2026 11:32
What once was
NafisaSB said:
Change is inevitable and strangers and friends pass us by like shops in the dark.
April 7th, 2026 03:28
NafisaSB said:
Change is inevitable and strangers and friends pass us by like shops in the dark.
April 7th, 2026 03:28
The mask I wear
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, that return to the face not being your own…that’s what anchors the whole piece. Everything builds around it and keeps the weight right there. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, that return to the face not being your own…that’s what anchors the whole piece. Everything builds around it and keeps the weight right there. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:18
The mask I wear
Demar Desu said:
As empathic as you are your beauty radiates through any mask! Great poem!
April 5th, 2026 18:38
Demar Desu said:
As empathic as you are your beauty radiates through any mask! Great poem!
April 5th, 2026 18:38
The mask I wear
Abdullah123 said:
I feel like this poem is universal in its subject, and relatable to everyone in one way or another... a sad reality we live in. Great write
April 5th, 2026 16:08
Abdullah123 said:
I feel like this poem is universal in its subject, and relatable to everyone in one way or another... a sad reality we live in. Great write
April 5th, 2026 16:08
The mask I wear
sorenbarrett said:
Sad it speaks of lack of confidence and shame. It is a poem of existential loss. Well written
April 5th, 2026 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
Sad it speaks of lack of confidence and shame. It is a poem of existential loss. Well written
April 5th, 2026 16:03
If I were a worm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, there’s a nice balance here…light, familiar, almost humorous on the surface, but rooted in something more vulnerable underneath. That moment where the question turns inward gives it depth, and the ending keeps it honest. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, there’s a nice balance here…light, familiar, almost humorous on the surface, but rooted in something more vulnerable underneath. That moment where the question turns inward gives it depth, and the ending keeps it honest. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:26
If I were a worm
sorenbarrett said:
Under this clever light hearted cover is a deep question of security that is explored through silly questions. Too sensitive to be touched directly it is tested through playful questions. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
Under this clever light hearted cover is a deep question of security that is explored through silly questions. Too sensitive to be touched directly it is tested through playful questions. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 03:36
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