Comments received on poems by Allie561
What ever can we do?
sorenbarrett said:
Life is a battle and we don\'t always win. A great writ cleverly done
February 19th, 2026 18:52
sorenbarrett said:
Life is a battle and we don\'t always win. A great writ cleverly done
February 19th, 2026 18:52
Mr. Unknown
Doggerel Dave said:
This turned up on one of those tails to something else...
So after all that how are you faring?
Many moons ago I explored this general topic... Hopefully only part is relevant to you:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895
February 19th, 2026 03:48
Doggerel Dave said:
This turned up on one of those tails to something else...
So after all that how are you faring?
Many moons ago I explored this general topic... Hopefully only part is relevant to you:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895
February 19th, 2026 03:48
Personality of a butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
This is a well imaged poem of one of nature\'s creations. A good write
February 18th, 2026 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
This is a well imaged poem of one of nature\'s creations. A good write
February 18th, 2026 20:10
Running out of days
Doggerel Dave said:
Change into what? Your running shoes (or whatever they are called.?.) Anyway, objective first.......................................🙃
February 18th, 2026 01:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Change into what? Your running shoes (or whatever they are called.?.) Anyway, objective first.......................................🙃
February 18th, 2026 01:10
Running out of days
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of procrastination mankind\'s favorite past time. Nicely set up and worded.
February 17th, 2026 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of procrastination mankind\'s favorite past time. Nicely set up and worded.
February 17th, 2026 10:39
Slowly it kills
Demar Desu said:
I hate to be cliche but whew, the truth surely will set you breathe? hahaha great poem
February 16th, 2026 17:57
Demar Desu said:
I hate to be cliche but whew, the truth surely will set you breathe? hahaha great poem
February 16th, 2026 17:57
Slowly it kills
sorenbarrett said:
Lies taste so sweet when uttered but soon turn bitter in the stomach of confrontation and the intestines of guilt A lovely poem well written
February 16th, 2026 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
Lies taste so sweet when uttered but soon turn bitter in the stomach of confrontation and the intestines of guilt A lovely poem well written
February 16th, 2026 15:29
Slowly it kills
Caring dove said:
Some people do lie but maybe sometimes they need help with it..
February 16th, 2026 14:03
Caring dove said:
Some people do lie but maybe sometimes they need help with it..
February 16th, 2026 14:03
Baseball
sorenbarrett said:
A great read of how excitement and experience is often worth as much as seeing what is happening. Nicely done most lovely
February 15th, 2026 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
A great read of how excitement and experience is often worth as much as seeing what is happening. Nicely done most lovely
February 15th, 2026 14:43
Once a star falls
Doggerel Dave said:
I have to guess you live in the northern hemisphere if you can distinguish an individual star. Down south I doubt you would make it, unless astronomer when spoiled for choice...
What I find so mind bending is the thought that the actual event (disappearance) may have occurred (depending on distance) way before life on earth.
February 13th, 2026 19:23
Doggerel Dave said:
I have to guess you live in the northern hemisphere if you can distinguish an individual star. Down south I doubt you would make it, unless astronomer when spoiled for choice...
What I find so mind bending is the thought that the actual event (disappearance) may have occurred (depending on distance) way before life on earth.
February 13th, 2026 19:23
Once a star falls
sorenbarrett said:
What we think immortal has its time as well. Even the stars have lives and we can not depend upon them forever. Nicely written
February 13th, 2026 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
What we think immortal has its time as well. Even the stars have lives and we can not depend upon them forever. Nicely written
February 13th, 2026 10:17
Lies I’ve believed
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that speaks of the two aspects of fire the blending of colors. It speaks of the hypnotic force of fire. It speaks of its destructive and creative properties and lastly how it calls to us all like a siren. It also may be seen as a metaphor for passion. A fave
February 12th, 2026 21:05
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that speaks of the two aspects of fire the blending of colors. It speaks of the hypnotic force of fire. It speaks of its destructive and creative properties and lastly how it calls to us all like a siren. It also may be seen as a metaphor for passion. A fave
February 12th, 2026 21:05
Our words can take what’s not ours
Doggerel Dave said:
Many parrots in the world, several species, each of which have their own specific squawk. (Sometimes though it is less of a squawk, than a whisper or even something they just retain in their heads)
Beyond the question of who told told them this lie in the first place and why, Is the question of their refusal to even attempt to…..
Interesting analogy.
February 10th, 2026 16:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Many parrots in the world, several species, each of which have their own specific squawk. (Sometimes though it is less of a squawk, than a whisper or even something they just retain in their heads)
Beyond the question of who told told them this lie in the first place and why, Is the question of their refusal to even attempt to…..
Interesting analogy.
February 10th, 2026 16:40
Our words can take what’s not ours
sorenbarrett said:
Beware what is said around anyone that can repeat it. Had a neighbor as a child that had a parrot and the people from the church could never come over because it was foul mouthed pun intended.
February 10th, 2026 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
Beware what is said around anyone that can repeat it. Had a neighbor as a child that had a parrot and the people from the church could never come over because it was foul mouthed pun intended.
February 10th, 2026 10:35
If things were understood
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording, rhyme and meter make this a fun read and one that makes a great deal of sense as it builds from smaller to larger. Well written and a fave
February 9th, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording, rhyme and meter make this a fun read and one that makes a great deal of sense as it builds from smaller to larger. Well written and a fave
February 9th, 2026 03:44
Mr. Unknown
sorenbarrett said:
Creative this poem treats aspects of thought, emotion, the existential, time as a person and resolves it in the enjoyment of life itself. Nicely done
February 1st, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Creative this poem treats aspects of thought, emotion, the existential, time as a person and resolves it in the enjoyment of life itself. Nicely done
February 1st, 2026 03:41
Music
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem with good rhyme and meter blending fairytales and music together the only thing lacking in this symphony is percussion. But I\'ll beat the drum for it and give it a fave.
January 30th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem with good rhyme and meter blending fairytales and music together the only thing lacking in this symphony is percussion. But I\'ll beat the drum for it and give it a fave.
January 30th, 2026 04:08
A safe place
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful scene painted in this poem of a beach. It is vivid in its images that all bring beach views and memories. Very nicely done
January 27th, 2026 02:37
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful scene painted in this poem of a beach. It is vivid in its images that all bring beach views and memories. Very nicely done
January 27th, 2026 02:37
Sunday
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a typical traditional US Sunday. Nicely written
January 25th, 2026 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a typical traditional US Sunday. Nicely written
January 25th, 2026 13:35
Questions
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write regarding the evolution of relationships in an evolving world. The trend seems to be downhill. A good write
January 23rd, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write regarding the evolution of relationships in an evolving world. The trend seems to be downhill. A good write
January 23rd, 2026 03:45
Tacos
sorenbarrett said:
Love Tacos and true Mexican tacos with shredded beef are the best. Many Americans put on lettuce, tomato, cheese, olives, sour cream and although good it is not needed maybe a little jalapeno.
January 18th, 2026 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
Love Tacos and true Mexican tacos with shredded beef are the best. Many Americans put on lettuce, tomato, cheese, olives, sour cream and although good it is not needed maybe a little jalapeno.
January 18th, 2026 12:41
Promises
Katie B. said:
Heavy heartfelt poem on pain and loss. Nicely presented. Keep writing my friend.
January 17th, 2026 08:02
Katie B. said:
Heavy heartfelt poem on pain and loss. Nicely presented. Keep writing my friend.
January 17th, 2026 08:02
Promises
sorenbarrett said:
I love the juxtaposition of the alternating lines and their polar opposites that lead to the last one in conclusion. Nicely formatted and planned with meaning. A fave
January 17th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
I love the juxtaposition of the alternating lines and their polar opposites that lead to the last one in conclusion. Nicely formatted and planned with meaning. A fave
January 17th, 2026 04:09
Why do we do the things we do?
sorenbarrett said:
The race with time and all that needs to be done. A lovely write with good rhyme and great flow
January 16th, 2026 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
The race with time and all that needs to be done. A lovely write with good rhyme and great flow
January 16th, 2026 12:09
To write is to be held
sorenbarrett said:
Distancing in this poem that speaks of needing space from a certain person. Well written
January 16th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Distancing in this poem that speaks of needing space from a certain person. Well written
January 16th, 2026 06:30
To that one person who didn’t know
sorenbarrett said:
The what if poem. A titillating poem of romance that never was. Lovely
January 14th, 2026 21:32
sorenbarrett said:
The what if poem. A titillating poem of romance that never was. Lovely
January 14th, 2026 21:32
Why do you keep coming back?
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of an early memory transposed in a dream of a relationship that never developed. Sad but well written
January 11th, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of an early memory transposed in a dream of a relationship that never developed. Sad but well written
January 11th, 2026 03:47
What if I ran away?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that projects the virtue of nature and rejoining it. A pristine and idyllic quest hardly possible in todays world yet fraught with difficulties as well. The poem\'s dichotomy presents it as black and white well done
January 9th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that projects the virtue of nature and rejoining it. A pristine and idyllic quest hardly possible in todays world yet fraught with difficulties as well. The poem\'s dichotomy presents it as black and white well done
January 9th, 2026 04:09
A dogs life
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read looking at the brite side of a dog\'s life
January 7th, 2026 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read looking at the brite side of a dog\'s life
January 7th, 2026 11:34
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