Comments received on poems by Allie561
A sun full of secrets
sorenbarrett said:
Secrets always a problem if more than one knows it, it is no longer a secret. Well written
April 21st, 2026 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
Secrets always a problem if more than one knows it, it is no longer a secret. Well written
April 21st, 2026 11:53
He’s just a dog
sorenbarrett said:
A understandable write in reality but in metaphor we often blame others for things that they do not know or are capable of knowing. Well written
April 14th, 2026 19:28
sorenbarrett said:
A understandable write in reality but in metaphor we often blame others for things that they do not know or are capable of knowing. Well written
April 14th, 2026 19:28
Thank you to the poets
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this feels real in that quiet, worn-down kind of way…like you’re still pushing forward even when it’s a lot. And then to land on gratitude for poetry and the people behind it…that shift really works. It’s simple, honest, and it stays with you. Beautiful piece, my friend. And, yup, right there with you...thank you too. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this feels real in that quiet, worn-down kind of way…like you’re still pushing forward even when it’s a lot. And then to land on gratitude for poetry and the people behind it…that shift really works. It’s simple, honest, and it stays with you. Beautiful piece, my friend. And, yup, right there with you...thank you too. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:50
Thank you to the poets
sorenbarrett said:
I love this short piece that says it all in a few words
April 11th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
I love this short piece that says it all in a few words
April 11th, 2026 04:48
Thank you to the poets
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
It is national poetry month 🤟🏽♾️❤️🩹 thank you as well for creating this art
April 10th, 2026 23:44
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
It is national poetry month 🤟🏽♾️❤️🩹 thank you as well for creating this art
April 10th, 2026 23:44
To Alice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this is really sweet…there’s a softness to it that just feels genuine. It reads like something quietly meant, not overworked. That lands, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this is really sweet…there’s a softness to it that just feels genuine. It reads like something quietly meant, not overworked. That lands, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 08:42
To Alice
sorenbarrett said:
I like the metaphor here with a wonderland and tea nicely written
April 9th, 2026 11:32
sorenbarrett said:
I like the metaphor here with a wonderland and tea nicely written
April 9th, 2026 11:32
Potato soup
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Ah! I’ll take two big ladles of soup! Great poem
April 8th, 2026 21:22
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Ah! I’ll take two big ladles of soup! Great poem
April 8th, 2026 21:22
What once was
NafisaSB said:
Change is inevitable and strangers and friends pass us by like shops in the dark.
April 7th, 2026 03:28
NafisaSB said:
Change is inevitable and strangers and friends pass us by like shops in the dark.
April 7th, 2026 03:28
The mask I wear
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, that return to the face not being your own…that’s what anchors the whole piece. Everything builds around it and keeps the weight right there. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, that return to the face not being your own…that’s what anchors the whole piece. Everything builds around it and keeps the weight right there. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:18
The mask I wear
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
As empathic as you are your beauty radiates through any mask! Great poem!
April 5th, 2026 18:38
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
As empathic as you are your beauty radiates through any mask! Great poem!
April 5th, 2026 18:38
The mask I wear
Abdullah123 said:
I feel like this poem is universal in its subject, and relatable to everyone in one way or another... a sad reality we live in. Great write
April 5th, 2026 16:08
Abdullah123 said:
I feel like this poem is universal in its subject, and relatable to everyone in one way or another... a sad reality we live in. Great write
April 5th, 2026 16:08
The mask I wear
sorenbarrett said:
Sad it speaks of lack of confidence and shame. It is a poem of existential loss. Well written
April 5th, 2026 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
Sad it speaks of lack of confidence and shame. It is a poem of existential loss. Well written
April 5th, 2026 16:03
If I were a worm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, there’s a nice balance here…light, familiar, almost humorous on the surface, but rooted in something more vulnerable underneath. That moment where the question turns inward gives it depth, and the ending keeps it honest. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, there’s a nice balance here…light, familiar, almost humorous on the surface, but rooted in something more vulnerable underneath. That moment where the question turns inward gives it depth, and the ending keeps it honest. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:26
If I were a worm
sorenbarrett said:
Under this clever light hearted cover is a deep question of security that is explored through silly questions. Too sensitive to be touched directly it is tested through playful questions. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
Under this clever light hearted cover is a deep question of security that is explored through silly questions. Too sensitive to be touched directly it is tested through playful questions. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 03:36
What once was
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Great poem A… ahh the past and present. Isn’t it a bitter sweet feeling how change can be
April 4th, 2026 10:09
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Great poem A… ahh the past and present. Isn’t it a bitter sweet feeling how change can be
April 4th, 2026 10:09
What once was
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet unraveling here that just keeps tightening. Each turn lands a little heavier than the last. That shift from what was to what is…that stays. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet unraveling here that just keeps tightening. Each turn lands a little heavier than the last. That shift from what was to what is…that stays. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:48
What once was
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of discovered deception. Well written in such nice poetic form.
April 2nd, 2026 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of discovered deception. Well written in such nice poetic form.
April 2nd, 2026 18:36
What once was
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem reflects on relationships, memories, and the inevitability of change. It contrasts vibrant, lively images with their current desolate states, focusing on the emotional weight of these transformations.
April 2nd, 2026 18:29
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem reflects on relationships, memories, and the inevitability of change. It contrasts vibrant, lively images with their current desolate states, focusing on the emotional weight of these transformations.
April 2nd, 2026 18:29
Through a photograph
ann hegg said:
Everything is temporary 😌 ,nothing stays long enough for you to embrace it.
April 2nd, 2026 09:20
ann hegg said:
Everything is temporary 😌 ,nothing stays long enough for you to embrace it.
April 2nd, 2026 09:20
Through a photograph
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, there’s a weight in this that stays with me… especially in how the view slowly disappears under dust and time. It feels like watching memory fade in real time… not dramatic, just inevitable. That quiet ending doesn’t shout…it just lingers. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, there’s a weight in this that stays with me… especially in how the view slowly disappears under dust and time. It feels like watching memory fade in real time… not dramatic, just inevitable. That quiet ending doesn’t shout…it just lingers. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 08:49
Through a photograph
sorenbarrett said:
Old photos taken and forgotten in a drawer, neglected memories. I have thousands that I have never looked at. Well written it seems metaphoric where we put certain memories in a drawer as well.
April 1st, 2026 17:51
sorenbarrett said:
Old photos taken and forgotten in a drawer, neglected memories. I have thousands that I have never looked at. Well written it seems metaphoric where we put certain memories in a drawer as well.
April 1st, 2026 17:51
Through a photograph
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
A lot of visualization in this poem… what inspired you A?
April 1st, 2026 17:31
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
A lot of visualization in this poem… what inspired you A?
April 1st, 2026 17:31
You can do it
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, I’ve had days like this…where you just need someone to remind you that it’s not the end of the story. The way you write this feels like that voice…steady, patient, not going anywhere. That means more than anything flashy ever could. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, I’ve had days like this…where you just need someone to remind you that it’s not the end of the story. The way you write this feels like that voice…steady, patient, not going anywhere. That means more than anything flashy ever could. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:11
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