Comments received on poems by Allie561
Just give me something
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written a split in one self. Well done.
August 22nd, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written a split in one self. Well done.
August 22nd, 2026 13:03
Just give me something
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a deeply affecting piece, Allie. Beneath all the uncertainty is someone yearning to be understood without knowing how to make themselves understandable. Raw, honest, and beautifully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 12:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a deeply affecting piece, Allie. Beneath all the uncertainty is someone yearning to be understood without knowing how to make themselves understandable. Raw, honest, and beautifully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 12:14
How the world sounds at 2 AM
NafisaSB said:
you have truly captured the essence of 2 am sights...
August 21st, 2026 02:00
NafisaSB said:
you have truly captured the essence of 2 am sights...
August 21st, 2026 02:00
Has it really left?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, what a powerful portrayal of fear surviving beyond the event that created it. Everyone else declares safety, yet the speaker remains trapped between memory, instinct, and doubt. This connected deeply, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 19:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, what a powerful portrayal of fear surviving beyond the event that created it. Everyone else declares safety, yet the speaker remains trapped between memory, instinct, and doubt. This connected deeply, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 19:04
I am not a house
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, the displacement of personal value by someone else’s image is devastating. That moment reveals how thoroughly another person can overwrite what does not belong to them. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, the displacement of personal value by someone else’s image is devastating. That moment reveals how thoroughly another person can overwrite what does not belong to them. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:49
Has it really left?
sorenbarrett said:
Well said whether metaphor for emotional storm or literal it makes sense. Well done
August 17th, 2026 13:26
sorenbarrett said:
Well said whether metaphor for emotional storm or literal it makes sense. Well done
August 17th, 2026 13:26
I am not a house
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the metaphor and the images used in this poem nicely done a fave
August 16th, 2026 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the metaphor and the images used in this poem nicely done a fave
August 16th, 2026 13:07
Is there anything I can own?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Allie...this is simple, vulnerable, and thoughtful. There’s loss in it, but also a quiet determination to find something that cannot be taken away. Really moving, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Allie...this is simple, vulnerable, and thoughtful. There’s loss in it, but also a quiet determination to find something that cannot be taken away. Really moving, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:23
Is there anything I can own?
Demar Desu said:
Ah but I see your majesty has the time to give us such a prosperous poem…
I love how you opened the poem such a declaration that unites us all… great work A
August 15th, 2026 18:19
Demar Desu said:
Ah but I see your majesty has the time to give us such a prosperous poem…
I love how you opened the poem such a declaration that unites us all… great work A
August 15th, 2026 18:19
Is there anything I can own?
Fränz Müller said:
A powerful choice is to use one’s voice, as you did here. Bravo!
August 15th, 2026 15:51
Fränz Müller said:
A powerful choice is to use one’s voice, as you did here. Bravo!
August 15th, 2026 15:51
Is there anything I can own?
sorenbarrett said:
Choices are an invaluable ally keep them open. Nicely done
August 15th, 2026 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
Choices are an invaluable ally keep them open. Nicely done
August 15th, 2026 11:43
How the world sounds at 2 AM
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, I connect with this deeply...there’s something almost sacred about those late-night hours when everything feels suspended and the world seems briefly emptied of urgency. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 07:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, I connect with this deeply...there’s something almost sacred about those late-night hours when everything feels suspended and the world seems briefly emptied of urgency. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 07:53
How the world sounds at 2 AM
Fränz Müller said:
That’s the usual time I get out of bed and have a snack 😁
Whether I was asleep before or not is a different matter…
Great work!
August 14th, 2026 15:40
Fränz Müller said:
That’s the usual time I get out of bed and have a snack 😁
Whether I was asleep before or not is a different matter…
Great work!
August 14th, 2026 15:40
How the world sounds at 2 AM
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write it is those quite hours that I value most. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write it is those quite hours that I value most. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 13:08
Things you whispered while asleep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Allie…this is so gentle and intimate. There’s something deeply touching about affection showing itself when someone isn’t even fully awake…unguarded, instinctive, and completely human. Beautifully done, my friend. I agree with Fränz on this. The ending is perfect as is.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Allie…this is so gentle and intimate. There’s something deeply touching about affection showing itself when someone isn’t even fully awake…unguarded, instinctive, and completely human. Beautifully done, my friend. I agree with Fränz on this. The ending is perfect as is.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:56
Things you whispered while asleep
sorenbarrett said:
Tender and sweet and whether a lover or a small child it is all the same. Lovely
August 13th, 2026 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
Tender and sweet and whether a lover or a small child it is all the same. Lovely
August 13th, 2026 13:05
Things you whispered while asleep
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely love poem rhymed nicely sweet. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
August 13th, 2026 12:42
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely love poem rhymed nicely sweet. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
August 13th, 2026 12:42
Things you whispered while asleep
Fränz Müller said:
I think the ending is perfect as it is. A very sweet poem.
August 13th, 2026 12:32
Fränz Müller said:
I think the ending is perfect as it is. A very sweet poem.
August 13th, 2026 12:32
A shoplifted heart
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the whole idea of hearts becoming scarce because people keep taking them from one another really got me. That’s clever as hell…funny on the surface and rather sad underneath. Beautifully done, Allie. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the whole idea of hearts becoming scarce because people keep taking them from one another really got me. That’s clever as hell…funny on the surface and rather sad underneath. Beautifully done, Allie. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:42
A shoplifted heart
sorenbarrett said:
Clever association of images make this poem very nice. Loved it especially the last lines. Well done.
August 12th, 2026 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
Clever association of images make this poem very nice. Loved it especially the last lines. Well done.
August 12th, 2026 11:46
When I was afraid
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, what a powerful journey through fear. What begins as protection gradually becomes imprisonment…until the cost of hiding finally becomes greater than the fear of stepping outside. That question of whether safety is worth sacrificing life itself really lands, my friend. Wonderful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, what a powerful journey through fear. What begins as protection gradually becomes imprisonment…until the cost of hiding finally becomes greater than the fear of stepping outside. That question of whether safety is worth sacrificing life itself really lands, my friend. Wonderful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:39
Alphabet Soup
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this is such a sweet, hopeful little piece. I love the idea of possibility being served up one letter at a time…with compassion right there alongside success and motivation. Lovely write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this is such a sweet, hopeful little piece. I love the idea of possibility being served up one letter at a time…with compassion right there alongside success and motivation. Lovely write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:20
When I was afraid
Demar Desu said:
Great poem and what a way to challenge yourself good job
August 11th, 2026 20:07
Demar Desu said:
Great poem and what a way to challenge yourself good job
August 11th, 2026 20:07
When I was afraid
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in rhyme with good flow. Well done
August 11th, 2026 14:05
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in rhyme with good flow. Well done
August 11th, 2026 14:05
Alphabet Soup
Demar Desu said:
A= Awsome
L= Lovely
L=Linguistic
I= Intelligent
E=2.718
August 11th, 2026 07:15
Demar Desu said:
A= Awsome
L= Lovely
L=Linguistic
I= Intelligent
E=2.718
August 11th, 2026 07:15
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