Comments received on poems by Allie561



Reasons
NafisaSB said:

that\'s a good question - what do we get up for ?
to me - it means to se another day to live life as its meant to be lived...

April 1st, 2026 00:18

You can do it
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of encouragement and brightening the day nicely written

March 31st, 2026 12:02

Off to the dentist I go
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Allie, this made me smile…there’s such a light, honest humor running through it. It doesn’t try to be anything more than what it is, and that’s exactly why it works. That little spiral from disbelief to acceptance feels so real. Fun piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

March 31st, 2026 09:27

Off to the dentist I go
Doggerel Dave said:

No bad news for the dentist...

March 30th, 2026 18:01

Off to the dentist I go
sorenbarrett said:

Cute and full of bad memories of the dentist. A fun read written so well in a playful manner. Loved it

March 30th, 2026 15:39

More please
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Been there, done that! 🤣 Well done on this my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

March 30th, 2026 09:12

More please
Vanna said:

So pretty

March 29th, 2026 20:59

More please
Doggerel Dave said:

Nothing wrong with being possessed of a warm dreamy glow when the chair is comfortable and the environment safe.

March 29th, 2026 19:49

More please
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:

I hope your break isn’t to long, this poem was great. These days I’m taking three drinks and I’m passing out

March 29th, 2026 14:25

More please
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of the contentment of being served ambrosia of the gods

March 29th, 2026 14:05

Reasons
Vanna said:

This is so beautiful and true. I love it it’s such a beautiful poem.

March 28th, 2026 11:59

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Allie, this hits with that blunt, quiet emptiness…like you’re staring straight through everything and not finding a reason to care. It doesn’t try to dress itself up, and that honesty makes it land harder. That final question just hangs there. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

March 28th, 2026 11:15

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Durdica Porobija said:

I understand this poem as metapoetic, questioning the purpose of writing poetry. Poetry is often shown to be purposeless, but that doesn\'t mean it doesn\'t have value - in sharing experiences, in connecting people, and in finding intellectual and artistic kin. Poetry also has a therapeutic effect.

March 28th, 2026 07:00

Bruises left on my heart
ann hegg said:

When you realize that you love but dont have future . Its really hard. Reminds me of 2521.

March 28th, 2026 00:13

Reasons
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:

Shit ain’t nothing else to do LOL, great poem

March 27th, 2026 20:14

Reasons
Friendship said:

Well said,

March 27th, 2026 19:17

Reasons
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting reflection over days activities upon arising. Nicely written

March 27th, 2026 18:34

Bruises left on my heart
Vanna said:

So real. A true testament to pain of a heart break. Love it

March 27th, 2026 17:04

Chess
Doggerel Dave said:

I have a vague notion of chess, however if I concentrate, I think I get the message, and believe you have it about right...
Keep \'em popping up!

PS: I felt the need to dodge around your current post... matters of the heart... apologies...

March 27th, 2026 14:58

Bruises left on my heart
sorenbarrett said:

This poem speaks of an ongoing attraction that is called love but acts like something else. Well written

March 27th, 2026 03:47

Lies I’ve believed
ann hegg said:

Wow , its amazing and one of a kind . i never thought of fire this way

March 26th, 2026 06:45

Mr. Unknown
Vanna said:

So real I love this so much it’s so beautiful keep writing it’s amazing

March 25th, 2026 19:14

Career
Vanna said:

Real I wish I could just live my life sometimes

March 25th, 2026 19:12

What ever can we do?
Vanna said:

I love it so much it’s so pretty

March 25th, 2026 19:10

An envelope
NafisaSB said:

that is so sad - and so well described in such few words

March 24th, 2026 00:59

Chess
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Allie, this hits quick and clean…there’s a sharp edge to it that sticks. It feels like a question that doesn’t really let you dodge it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

March 23rd, 2026 09:19

What is love?
Vanna said:

Such a pretty poem

March 23rd, 2026 07:02

Take those risks
Vanna said:

So beautiful and real

March 23rd, 2026 06:58

Chess
sorenbarrett said:

A good metaphor used well with the different pieces. We are all pawns.

March 23rd, 2026 03:38

Spring
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Allie, this feels warm right away…simple, light, and just full of presence. It doesn’t try too hard…it just lets the moment breathe. That ease really comes through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

March 22nd, 2026 09:34

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