Comments received on poems by Allie561
The mask I wear
Demar Desu said:
As empathic as you are your beauty radiates through any mask! Great poem!
April 5th, 2026 18:38
Demar Desu said:
As empathic as you are your beauty radiates through any mask! Great poem!
April 5th, 2026 18:38
The mask I wear
Abdullah123 said:
I feel like this poem is universal in its subject, and relatable to everyone in one way or another... a sad reality we live in. Great write
April 5th, 2026 16:08
Abdullah123 said:
I feel like this poem is universal in its subject, and relatable to everyone in one way or another... a sad reality we live in. Great write
April 5th, 2026 16:08
The mask I wear
sorenbarrett said:
Sad it speaks of lack of confidence and shame. It is a poem of existential loss. Well written
April 5th, 2026 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
Sad it speaks of lack of confidence and shame. It is a poem of existential loss. Well written
April 5th, 2026 16:03
If I were a worm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, there’s a nice balance here…light, familiar, almost humorous on the surface, but rooted in something more vulnerable underneath. That moment where the question turns inward gives it depth, and the ending keeps it honest. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, there’s a nice balance here…light, familiar, almost humorous on the surface, but rooted in something more vulnerable underneath. That moment where the question turns inward gives it depth, and the ending keeps it honest. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:26
If I were a worm
sorenbarrett said:
Under this clever light hearted cover is a deep question of security that is explored through silly questions. Too sensitive to be touched directly it is tested through playful questions. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
Under this clever light hearted cover is a deep question of security that is explored through silly questions. Too sensitive to be touched directly it is tested through playful questions. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 03:36
What once was
Demar Desu said:
Great poem A… ahh the past and present. Isn’t it a bitter sweet feeling how change can be
April 4th, 2026 10:09
Demar Desu said:
Great poem A… ahh the past and present. Isn’t it a bitter sweet feeling how change can be
April 4th, 2026 10:09
What once was
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet unraveling here that just keeps tightening. Each turn lands a little heavier than the last. That shift from what was to what is…that stays. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet unraveling here that just keeps tightening. Each turn lands a little heavier than the last. That shift from what was to what is…that stays. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:48
What once was
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of discovered deception. Well written in such nice poetic form.
April 2nd, 2026 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of discovered deception. Well written in such nice poetic form.
April 2nd, 2026 18:36
What once was
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem reflects on relationships, memories, and the inevitability of change. It contrasts vibrant, lively images with their current desolate states, focusing on the emotional weight of these transformations.
April 2nd, 2026 18:29
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem reflects on relationships, memories, and the inevitability of change. It contrasts vibrant, lively images with their current desolate states, focusing on the emotional weight of these transformations.
April 2nd, 2026 18:29
Through a photograph
ann hegg said:
Everything is temporary 😌 ,nothing stays long enough for you to embrace it.
April 2nd, 2026 09:20
ann hegg said:
Everything is temporary 😌 ,nothing stays long enough for you to embrace it.
April 2nd, 2026 09:20
Through a photograph
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, there’s a weight in this that stays with me… especially in how the view slowly disappears under dust and time. It feels like watching memory fade in real time… not dramatic, just inevitable. That quiet ending doesn’t shout…it just lingers. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, there’s a weight in this that stays with me… especially in how the view slowly disappears under dust and time. It feels like watching memory fade in real time… not dramatic, just inevitable. That quiet ending doesn’t shout…it just lingers. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 08:49
Through a photograph
sorenbarrett said:
Old photos taken and forgotten in a drawer, neglected memories. I have thousands that I have never looked at. Well written it seems metaphoric where we put certain memories in a drawer as well.
April 1st, 2026 17:51
sorenbarrett said:
Old photos taken and forgotten in a drawer, neglected memories. I have thousands that I have never looked at. Well written it seems metaphoric where we put certain memories in a drawer as well.
April 1st, 2026 17:51
Through a photograph
Demar Desu said:
A lot of visualization in this poem… what inspired you A?
April 1st, 2026 17:31
Demar Desu said:
A lot of visualization in this poem… what inspired you A?
April 1st, 2026 17:31
You can do it
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, I’ve had days like this…where you just need someone to remind you that it’s not the end of the story. The way you write this feels like that voice…steady, patient, not going anywhere. That means more than anything flashy ever could. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, I’ve had days like this…where you just need someone to remind you that it’s not the end of the story. The way you write this feels like that voice…steady, patient, not going anywhere. That means more than anything flashy ever could. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:11
Reasons
NafisaSB said:
that\'s a good question - what do we get up for ?
to me - it means to se another day to live life as its meant to be lived...
April 1st, 2026 00:18
NafisaSB said:
that\'s a good question - what do we get up for ?
to me - it means to se another day to live life as its meant to be lived...
April 1st, 2026 00:18
You can do it
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement and brightening the day nicely written
March 31st, 2026 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement and brightening the day nicely written
March 31st, 2026 12:02
Off to the dentist I go
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this made me smile…there’s such a light, honest humor running through it. It doesn’t try to be anything more than what it is, and that’s exactly why it works. That little spiral from disbelief to acceptance feels so real. Fun piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 31st, 2026 09:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this made me smile…there’s such a light, honest humor running through it. It doesn’t try to be anything more than what it is, and that’s exactly why it works. That little spiral from disbelief to acceptance feels so real. Fun piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 31st, 2026 09:27
Off to the dentist I go
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and full of bad memories of the dentist. A fun read written so well in a playful manner. Loved it
March 30th, 2026 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and full of bad memories of the dentist. A fun read written so well in a playful manner. Loved it
March 30th, 2026 15:39
More please
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Been there, done that! 🤣 Well done on this my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Been there, done that! 🤣 Well done on this my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:12
More please
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing wrong with being possessed of a warm dreamy glow when the chair is comfortable and the environment safe.
March 29th, 2026 19:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing wrong with being possessed of a warm dreamy glow when the chair is comfortable and the environment safe.
March 29th, 2026 19:49
More please
Demar Desu said:
I hope your break isn’t to long, this poem was great. These days I’m taking three drinks and I’m passing out
March 29th, 2026 14:25
Demar Desu said:
I hope your break isn’t to long, this poem was great. These days I’m taking three drinks and I’m passing out
March 29th, 2026 14:25
More please
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the contentment of being served ambrosia of the gods
March 29th, 2026 14:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the contentment of being served ambrosia of the gods
March 29th, 2026 14:05
Reasons
Vanna said:
This is so beautiful and true. I love it it’s such a beautiful poem.
March 28th, 2026 11:59
Vanna said:
This is so beautiful and true. I love it it’s such a beautiful poem.
March 28th, 2026 11:59
Reasons
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this hits with that blunt, quiet emptiness…like you’re staring straight through everything and not finding a reason to care. It doesn’t try to dress itself up, and that honesty makes it land harder. That final question just hangs there. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this hits with that blunt, quiet emptiness…like you’re staring straight through everything and not finding a reason to care. It doesn’t try to dress itself up, and that honesty makes it land harder. That final question just hangs there. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:15
Reasons
Durdica Porobija said:
I understand this poem as metapoetic, questioning the purpose of writing poetry. Poetry is often shown to be purposeless, but that doesn\'t mean it doesn\'t have value - in sharing experiences, in connecting people, and in finding intellectual and artistic kin. Poetry also has a therapeutic effect.
March 28th, 2026 07:00
Durdica Porobija said:
I understand this poem as metapoetic, questioning the purpose of writing poetry. Poetry is often shown to be purposeless, but that doesn\'t mean it doesn\'t have value - in sharing experiences, in connecting people, and in finding intellectual and artistic kin. Poetry also has a therapeutic effect.
March 28th, 2026 07:00
Bruises left on my heart
ann hegg said:
When you realize that you love but dont have future . Its really hard. Reminds me of 2521.
March 28th, 2026 00:13
ann hegg said:
When you realize that you love but dont have future . Its really hard. Reminds me of 2521.
March 28th, 2026 00:13
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