Comments received on poems by Allie561
You choose what you want to hear
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully ominous, Allie...I love how something as gentle as wind becomes an unreliable seducer here, offering comfort and familiarity while quietly leading somewhere dangerous. That final turn toward being “meant to fall” leaves quite the chill behind. Powerful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully ominous, Allie...I love how something as gentle as wind becomes an unreliable seducer here, offering comfort and familiarity while quietly leading somewhere dangerous. That final turn toward being “meant to fall” leaves quite the chill behind. Powerful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:28
You choose what you want to hear
sorenbarrett said:
There are voices in all things if one listens carefully enough. A lovely write nicely rhymed and metered.
August 9th, 2026 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
There are voices in all things if one listens carefully enough. A lovely write nicely rhymed and metered.
August 9th, 2026 12:58
You choose what you want to hear
Fränz Müller said:
Great poem…really enjoyed this one. Well done!
August 9th, 2026 11:57
Fränz Müller said:
Great poem…really enjoyed this one. Well done!
August 9th, 2026 11:57
Nothing’s changed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Allie...I can relate. Sometimes the hardest cages to recognize are the ones built from ordinary days repeated until we suddenly realize we’re desperate for something to change. I love the determination that emerges by the end. Keep reaching for that freedom, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 9th, 2026 05:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Allie...I can relate. Sometimes the hardest cages to recognize are the ones built from ordinary days repeated until we suddenly realize we’re desperate for something to change. I love the determination that emerges by the end. Keep reaching for that freedom, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 9th, 2026 05:44
Nothing’s changed
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings well expressed in this poem of rebellion from the norm. Nicely said.
August 9th, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings well expressed in this poem of rebellion from the norm. Nicely said.
August 9th, 2026 03:47
The fixer-upper
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a heartfelt piece, Allie. The everyday simplicity of the first aid kit makes the emotional turn feel all the more powerful. We can patch up so many physical hurts, yet the ones we can’t see often take the longest to mend. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a heartfelt piece, Allie. The everyday simplicity of the first aid kit makes the emotional turn feel all the more powerful. We can patch up so many physical hurts, yet the ones we can’t see often take the longest to mend. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:32
The fixer-upper
sorenbarrett said:
Clever a poem of metaphor where the real is mended to the metaphorical.
July 15th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
Clever a poem of metaphor where the real is mended to the metaphorical.
July 15th, 2026 03:43
Secrets uncovered
Demar Desu said:
Today I bought a journal to write my ideas for business and my self… whatever version of you wrote that note led to this great poem… Allie now is awesome
July 13th, 2026 22:54
Demar Desu said:
Today I bought a journal to write my ideas for business and my self… whatever version of you wrote that note led to this great poem… Allie now is awesome
July 13th, 2026 22:54
Secrets uncovered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this really touched me. There\'s such a quiet tenderness in this...like discovering a forgotten piece of yourself and realizing it still has something to say. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 15:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this really touched me. There\'s such a quiet tenderness in this...like discovering a forgotten piece of yourself and realizing it still has something to say. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 15:30
Secrets uncovered
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write reminiscent of a recent write of mine. It holds a sweet nostalgia and calls to the reader fondly. A fave
July 13th, 2026 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write reminiscent of a recent write of mine. It holds a sweet nostalgia and calls to the reader fondly. A fave
July 13th, 2026 14:22
My birthday
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this gave me a smile. It\'s short, lighthearted, and so easy to relate to...especially that realization that another birthday somehow comes with a few extra creaks. Happy Birthday, my friend, and wonderful write! 🎂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 21:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this gave me a smile. It\'s short, lighthearted, and so easy to relate to...especially that realization that another birthday somehow comes with a few extra creaks. Happy Birthday, my friend, and wonderful write! 🎂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 21:03
My birthday
sorenbarrett said:
With every passing year I feel this like a bullet. Well written
July 8th, 2026 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
With every passing year I feel this like a bullet. Well written
July 8th, 2026 12:39
The moon’s agony
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, what a beautiful poem. I love how you give the moon its own quiet voice while exploring what it means to be alone. It\'s delicate, reflective, and leaves the reader with a lingering sense of calm melancholy. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 14:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, what a beautiful poem. I love how you give the moon its own quiet voice while exploring what it means to be alone. It\'s delicate, reflective, and leaves the reader with a lingering sense of calm melancholy. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 14:52
The moon’s agony
NafisaSB said:
The moon has been the subject of so many poems - enjoyed this one too
July 6th, 2026 12:03
NafisaSB said:
The moon has been the subject of so many poems - enjoyed this one too
July 6th, 2026 12:03
The moon’s agony
Doggerel Dave said:
Won\'t be long before the moon will crave a little solitude as humans crawl all over her.
July 5th, 2026 22:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Won\'t be long before the moon will crave a little solitude as humans crawl all over her.
July 5th, 2026 22:52
The moon’s agony
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem with personification and good rhyme. Well written
July 5th, 2026 19:11
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem with personification and good rhyme. Well written
July 5th, 2026 19:11
Train tracks
Demar Desu said:
Movement with intentions! Is there anything sexier than consciousness? Great poem Allie… I wish the world were more aware and maybe we won’t have any trolly problems to begin with…
June 17th, 2026 10:24
Demar Desu said:
Movement with intentions! Is there anything sexier than consciousness? Great poem Allie… I wish the world were more aware and maybe we won’t have any trolly problems to begin with…
June 17th, 2026 10:24
Train tracks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this really took me somewhere, my friend. I could almost hear the whistle and feel the weight of the work behind it all. There is a quiet respect woven through these lines that I very much appreciated. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this really took me somewhere, my friend. I could almost hear the whistle and feel the weight of the work behind it all. There is a quiet respect woven through these lines that I very much appreciated. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:17
Train tracks
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days, tired eyes, early to arise, steam engines, laying track with a spike mall, yes I\'m that old.
June 15th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days, tired eyes, early to arise, steam engines, laying track with a spike mall, yes I\'m that old.
June 15th, 2026 03:52
Unruly nature
sorenbarrett said:
This is a beautiful write with much wisdom in its lines. It is the last line that is the deepest and has various interpretations as options depending upon the reader. Well done and a fave
June 11th, 2026 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
This is a beautiful write with much wisdom in its lines. It is the last line that is the deepest and has various interpretations as options depending upon the reader. Well done and a fave
June 11th, 2026 16:31
Candles
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor that may be seen different ways. Nicely written
May 18th, 2026 20:13
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor that may be seen different ways. Nicely written
May 18th, 2026 20:13
What the room knows
sorenbarrett said:
Emotions portrayed as surrounding objects in this poem of depression. It is dark and lacking energy. Well done
May 16th, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
Emotions portrayed as surrounding objects in this poem of depression. It is dark and lacking energy. Well done
May 16th, 2026 13:29
How inopportune
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this has a haunting inevitability to it. Snow, missed interviews, suspicion, overlooked words…everything circles around timing, consequence, and the painful awareness that tiny moments can reshape entire lives. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this has a haunting inevitability to it. Snow, missed interviews, suspicion, overlooked words…everything circles around timing, consequence, and the painful awareness that tiny moments can reshape entire lives. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:14
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