Comments received on poems by Allie561
Mr. Unknown
Vanna said:
So real I love this so much it’s so beautiful keep writing it’s amazing
March 25th, 2026 19:14
Vanna said:
So real I love this so much it’s so beautiful keep writing it’s amazing
March 25th, 2026 19:14
An envelope
NafisaSB said:
that is so sad - and so well described in such few words
March 24th, 2026 00:59
NafisaSB said:
that is so sad - and so well described in such few words
March 24th, 2026 00:59
Chess
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this hits quick and clean…there’s a sharp edge to it that sticks. It feels like a question that doesn’t really let you dodge it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this hits quick and clean…there’s a sharp edge to it that sticks. It feels like a question that doesn’t really let you dodge it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:19
Chess
sorenbarrett said:
A good metaphor used well with the different pieces. We are all pawns.
March 23rd, 2026 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
A good metaphor used well with the different pieces. We are all pawns.
March 23rd, 2026 03:38
Spring
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this feels warm right away…simple, light, and just full of presence. It doesn’t try too hard…it just lets the moment breathe. That ease really comes through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this feels warm right away…simple, light, and just full of presence. It doesn’t try too hard…it just lets the moment breathe. That ease really comes through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:34
Spring
Doggerel Dave said:
Spring is sprung.... but if it is anything like where I live that day was spring (in my case autumn) and you\'ve had it...
Did get the feeling though.
March 21st, 2026 22:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Spring is sprung.... but if it is anything like where I live that day was spring (in my case autumn) and you\'ve had it...
Did get the feeling though.
March 21st, 2026 22:02
Spring
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful use of images and nature to create a feeling of refreshing energy. Well written
March 21st, 2026 19:57
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful use of images and nature to create a feeling of refreshing energy. Well written
March 21st, 2026 19:57
An envelope
Prachi Dalvi said:
Nicely framed and described in just few lines!!
March 20th, 2026 23:35
Prachi Dalvi said:
Nicely framed and described in just few lines!!
March 20th, 2026 23:35
An envelope
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this is quietly heartbreaking…there’s something about how simple it is that makes it land even harder. That feeling of something left unsaid just lingers. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Allie, this is quietly heartbreaking…there’s something about how simple it is that makes it land even harder. That feeling of something left unsaid just lingers. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 10:16
Breaking the rules
Doggerel Dave said:
Beyond my capacity to achieve most of those acts of defiance, but I sure as hell get the sentiment.
March 19th, 2026 16:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Beyond my capacity to achieve most of those acts of defiance, but I sure as hell get the sentiment.
March 19th, 2026 16:42
Breaking the rules
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of not only rebellion but being oneself just for the sake of doing what one wants and enjoys this is emphasized in the subtle ending where the whole poem rhymes wonderfully and the expectation of a rhyme on the last line is not fulfilled. This reflects the feelings of many including myself and is a fave
March 19th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of not only rebellion but being oneself just for the sake of doing what one wants and enjoys this is emphasized in the subtle ending where the whole poem rhymes wonderfully and the expectation of a rhyme on the last line is not fulfilled. This reflects the feelings of many including myself and is a fave
March 19th, 2026 09:45
Take those risks
Doggerel Dave said:
Wish I had received that advice (and acted upon it) when I was young....
Straightforward truth.
March 18th, 2026 17:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Wish I had received that advice (and acted upon it) when I was young....
Straightforward truth.
March 18th, 2026 17:33
Take those risks
Demar Desu said:
I know the feeling… I also know the feeling of rejection. Great poem A
March 18th, 2026 15:21
Demar Desu said:
I know the feeling… I also know the feeling of rejection. Great poem A
March 18th, 2026 15:21
Take those risks
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great statement. How many times have we all failed to ask and regret it later. Well done
March 18th, 2026 14:41
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great statement. How many times have we all failed to ask and regret it later. Well done
March 18th, 2026 14:41
Career
sorenbarrett said:
So short but communicates so much. Work is nature\'s and society\'s way of making one subservient to demands. A most lovely write
March 12th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
So short but communicates so much. Work is nature\'s and society\'s way of making one subservient to demands. A most lovely write
March 12th, 2026 04:06
Sounds of life
sorenbarrett said:
Familiar sounds that reassure the noises of comfort and joy. A lovely write about how sounds are so reassuring and make one at home. Lovely
March 10th, 2026 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
Familiar sounds that reassure the noises of comfort and joy. A lovely write about how sounds are so reassuring and make one at home. Lovely
March 10th, 2026 08:35
Things to be grateful for
Doggerel Dave said:
You are moody in the poem, and then sunshine in your comments; which are yer? LOL
March 10th, 2026 06:25
Doggerel Dave said:
You are moody in the poem, and then sunshine in your comments; which are yer? LOL
March 10th, 2026 06:25
Things to be grateful for
sorenbarrett said:
It is all in a point of view that mood forms. Nicely written and so identifiable. Assuming that all things happen for the best keeps my attitude on track.
March 10th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
It is all in a point of view that mood forms. Nicely written and so identifiable. Assuming that all things happen for the best keeps my attitude on track.
March 10th, 2026 03:45
Depersonalization
sorenbarrett said:
There was a time that I identified with that sentiment, then I grew older and all vanity went away. It is the defects that give character to a person or any object of value. My poem today is coincidentally about just that. This poem capitalizes on rhyme and meter to emphasize the point and is a fave
March 8th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
There was a time that I identified with that sentiment, then I grew older and all vanity went away. It is the defects that give character to a person or any object of value. My poem today is coincidentally about just that. This poem capitalizes on rhyme and meter to emphasize the point and is a fave
March 8th, 2026 04:09
Depersonalization
Doggerel Dave said:
Snot that bad - I blow my nose regularly ...
March 8th, 2026 02:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Snot that bad - I blow my nose regularly ...
March 8th, 2026 02:58
Depersonalization
Caring dove said:
Yeah I’m sure it is hard to get older . But I can relate to the looking in the mirror and sometimes not seeing me .. sometimes I experience that or feel like a stranger is staring back at me but maybe that’s partly my dissociation
March 8th, 2026 02:20
Caring dove said:
Yeah I’m sure it is hard to get older . But I can relate to the looking in the mirror and sometimes not seeing me .. sometimes I experience that or feel like a stranger is staring back at me but maybe that’s partly my dissociation
March 8th, 2026 02:20
Straws
sorenbarrett said:
To draw the short straw has always had a set meaning and here in this poem the straws are getting shorter.
March 7th, 2026 21:04
sorenbarrett said:
To draw the short straw has always had a set meaning and here in this poem the straws are getting shorter.
March 7th, 2026 21:04
To put myself together
sorenbarrett said:
So nice bits and pieces of all that different people have of good. Picked and chosen borrowed to make yourself better. A lovely write
March 4th, 2026 19:01
sorenbarrett said:
So nice bits and pieces of all that different people have of good. Picked and chosen borrowed to make yourself better. A lovely write
March 4th, 2026 19:01
What is love?
sorenbarrett said:
A pet peeve of mine the definition of love in the English language. It is used for everything from passion to a favorite object. Love to me is far deeper it is that way we look at someone that means more than words and a lasting feeling that does not die even when we can not live with them anymore it is eternal. A wonderful write
March 3rd, 2026 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
A pet peeve of mine the definition of love in the English language. It is used for everything from passion to a favorite object. Love to me is far deeper it is that way we look at someone that means more than words and a lasting feeling that does not die even when we can not live with them anymore it is eternal. A wonderful write
March 3rd, 2026 09:58
What is love?
Lorenz said:
Useless question relative to some animal sensations...
March 3rd, 2026 09:44
Lorenz said:
Useless question relative to some animal sensations...
March 3rd, 2026 09:44
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