Comments received on poems by marissa
A boy “loves” you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa, I’ve seen how voices can linger…how they echo long after the person is gone. The way you frame that struggle…trying to reclaim self from someone else’s imprint…that’s real, and you speak it plainly. Powerful piece, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa, I’ve seen how voices can linger…how they echo long after the person is gone. The way you frame that struggle…trying to reclaim self from someone else’s imprint…that’s real, and you speak it plainly. Powerful piece, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:12
Generational gum
Doggerel Dave said:
\'And a woman having to grow older
trying every minute
to understand her life\' - from your Personal Profile.
Your poem plus your \'Comment from author\' here clearly shows you are on your way.
April 1st, 2026 03:48
Doggerel Dave said:
\'And a woman having to grow older
trying every minute
to understand her life\' - from your Personal Profile.
Your poem plus your \'Comment from author\' here clearly shows you are on your way.
April 1st, 2026 03:48
A boy “loves” you
Vipassana said:
Life,hidden by the noise
If this is what means to be boys
I will always need some hoist
For me that\'s the heart and soul of the poem.
March 31st, 2026 20:58
Vipassana said:
Life,hidden by the noise
If this is what means to be boys
I will always need some hoist
For me that\'s the heart and soul of the poem.
March 31st, 2026 20:58
A boy “loves” you
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that distinguishes between sexual desire and love for indeed with love one will raise and do all for sex it is only the moment. Well said
March 31st, 2026 15:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that distinguishes between sexual desire and love for indeed with love one will raise and do all for sex it is only the moment. Well said
March 31st, 2026 15:50
Generational gum
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa, that idea you mention about trauma looping through generations is something many people wrestle with. Your poem captures that tension well…acknowledging what was passed down while still pointing toward the possibility of choosing a different path. That honesty gives the piece real weight. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa, that idea you mention about trauma looping through generations is something many people wrestle with. Your poem captures that tension well…acknowledging what was passed down while still pointing toward the possibility of choosing a different path. That honesty gives the piece real weight. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 08:26
Generational gum
sorenbarrett said:
So sad when this happens and inadequate and inappropriate parenting skills are passed on
March 8th, 2026 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
So sad when this happens and inadequate and inappropriate parenting skills are passed on
March 8th, 2026 14:42
Childhood Chained Coward
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“The questions i ask-when you slam the door” is the hinge for me. That image of the door in your face captures rejection and power imbalance in one motion. Then “you damned apparition” turns the person into something haunting and draining. Strong poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 10:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“The questions i ask-when you slam the door” is the hinge for me. That image of the door in your face captures rejection and power imbalance in one motion. Then “you damned apparition” turns the person into something haunting and draining. Strong poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 10:47
Childhood Chained Coward
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
I do like questions... but maybe some are left best unanswered. Great poem as always Marissa
February 26th, 2026 20:29
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
I do like questions... but maybe some are left best unanswered. Great poem as always Marissa
February 26th, 2026 20:29
Childhood Chained Coward
sorenbarrett said:
This poem voices well the end of a relation that one has found draining. It is raw and emotional. Well written
February 26th, 2026 16:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem voices well the end of a relation that one has found draining. It is raw and emotional. Well written
February 26th, 2026 16:53
The journey of the plant
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa, this feels like a turning point on paper/screen…raw, reflective, and determined. The metaphor carries the emotion clearly without overcomplicating it. And that final line, “I know in time and nourishment, i will live in high vibration.”, feels hopeful and earned. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 25th, 2026 19:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa, this feels like a turning point on paper/screen…raw, reflective, and determined. The metaphor carries the emotion clearly without overcomplicating it. And that final line, “I know in time and nourishment, i will live in high vibration.”, feels hopeful and earned. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 25th, 2026 19:11
The journey of the plant
sorenbarrett said:
A plant has its needs as do we and thrives by a balanced amount of what it needs. Nicely written
February 25th, 2026 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
A plant has its needs as do we and thrives by a balanced amount of what it needs. Nicely written
February 25th, 2026 12:41
The journey of the plant
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores the growth and nourishment of thoughts and ideas through the metaphor of a plant\'s journey. The central idea revolves around the necessity of proper care—whether it be through water (inspiration) or soil (environment)—for both plants and thoughts to thrive. It emphasizes the importance of seeking better conditions for growth and the inevitability of change when one is in a stifling or detrimental environment.
February 25th, 2026 11:22
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores the growth and nourishment of thoughts and ideas through the metaphor of a plant\'s journey. The central idea revolves around the necessity of proper care—whether it be through water (inspiration) or soil (environment)—for both plants and thoughts to thrive. It emphasizes the importance of seeking better conditions for growth and the inevitability of change when one is in a stifling or detrimental environment.
February 25th, 2026 11:22
The eyes of the sun
NafisaSB said:
nice to turn your face towards the sunshine, but remember that too much of it, and there is the possibility of being burnt, so beware...
February 24th, 2026 00:36
NafisaSB said:
nice to turn your face towards the sunshine, but remember that too much of it, and there is the possibility of being burnt, so beware...
February 24th, 2026 00:36
The sacred tounge spell
Tristan Robert Lange said:
marissa, this comes in hot and unapologetic. There’s no hesitation in the voice…it stands its ground. “My tongue is sacred i speak upon what i mean” feels like a declaration, not a defense. The conviction is clear. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
marissa, this comes in hot and unapologetic. There’s no hesitation in the voice…it stands its ground. “My tongue is sacred i speak upon what i mean” feels like a declaration, not a defense. The conviction is clear. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:59
The sacred tounge spell
Goldfinch60 said:
May your peaceful world be forever with you Marissa.
Andy
February 23rd, 2026 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
May your peaceful world be forever with you Marissa.
Andy
February 23rd, 2026 02:02
The sacred tounge spell
Paul Bell said:
Everybody has an opinion.
Sadly they speak it.
February 22nd, 2026 16:35
Paul Bell said:
Everybody has an opinion.
Sadly they speak it.
February 22nd, 2026 16:35
The sacred tounge spell
Lorenz said:
Avoid of getting lost !n too broad an audience as this leads to a form of sycophancy !
February 22nd, 2026 13:53
Lorenz said:
Avoid of getting lost !n too broad an audience as this leads to a form of sycophancy !
February 22nd, 2026 13:53
The sacred tounge spell
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
I am a fan, you\'re using words I got to pull out the dictionary for, and very effortlessly as well. Great poem
February 22nd, 2026 12:16
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
I am a fan, you\'re using words I got to pull out the dictionary for, and very effortlessly as well. Great poem
February 22nd, 2026 12:16
The sacred tounge spell
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes it is best to say nothing at all. I was told that old saying by my mother that if you have nothing good to say say nothing at all. Well said in this poem
February 22nd, 2026 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes it is best to say nothing at all. I was told that old saying by my mother that if you have nothing good to say say nothing at all. Well said in this poem
February 22nd, 2026 10:39
Appreciate you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa… I resonate with that call to remember our ghosts and stay mindful of the past. There’s maturity in that. And the way you end it, “Seek balmy days when the air is grey” feels like choosing hope on purpose. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 19th, 2026 13:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa… I resonate with that call to remember our ghosts and stay mindful of the past. There’s maturity in that. And the way you end it, “Seek balmy days when the air is grey” feels like choosing hope on purpose. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 19th, 2026 13:30
Appreciate you
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A lovely poem. Full of positivity.
February 19th, 2026 06:33
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A lovely poem. Full of positivity.
February 19th, 2026 06:33
Appreciate you
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with a lovely and wise message a fave
February 18th, 2026 17:41
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with a lovely and wise message a fave
February 18th, 2026 17:41
The eyes of the sun
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa, this burns with longing. It feels desperate in a beautiful way…like reaching straight into light without flinching. There’s a hunger here that feels both physical and spiritual. The repetition at the end seals it. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 17th, 2026 20:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa, this burns with longing. It feels desperate in a beautiful way…like reaching straight into light without flinching. There’s a hunger here that feels both physical and spiritual. The repetition at the end seals it. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 17th, 2026 20:19
The eyes of the sun
Paul Bell said:
The sun, that bright thing in the sky that Britain has made redundant.
Oh, please come back, I\'m bloody freezing.
February 17th, 2026 13:59
Paul Bell said:
The sun, that bright thing in the sky that Britain has made redundant.
Oh, please come back, I\'m bloody freezing.
February 17th, 2026 13:59
The eyes of the sun
sorenbarrett said:
A most metaphoric write that speaks to me in understanding the light of truth. Nice
February 17th, 2026 11:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most metaphoric write that speaks to me in understanding the light of truth. Nice
February 17th, 2026 11:54
The eyes of the sun
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The want has been expressed in a kinetic way (don\'t know if that is the right wird). It has a quiet dignified energy. Loved it!
February 17th, 2026 11:51
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The want has been expressed in a kinetic way (don\'t know if that is the right wird). It has a quiet dignified energy. Loved it!
February 17th, 2026 11:51
The eyes of the sun
Lorenz said:
Protect yourself from these solar passions that burn hearts .
February 17th, 2026 11:41
Lorenz said:
Protect yourself from these solar passions that burn hearts .
February 17th, 2026 11:41
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