Comments received on poems by marissa
The sacred tounge spell
Tristan Robert Lange said:
marissa, this comes in hot and unapologetic. There’s no hesitation in the voice…it stands its ground. “My tongue is sacred i speak upon what i mean” feels like a declaration, not a defense. The conviction is clear. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
marissa, this comes in hot and unapologetic. There’s no hesitation in the voice…it stands its ground. “My tongue is sacred i speak upon what i mean” feels like a declaration, not a defense. The conviction is clear. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:59
The sacred tounge spell
Goldfinch60 said:
May your peaceful world be forever with you Marissa.
Andy
February 23rd, 2026 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
May your peaceful world be forever with you Marissa.
Andy
February 23rd, 2026 02:02
The sacred tounge spell
Paul Bell said:
Everybody has an opinion.
Sadly they speak it.
February 22nd, 2026 16:35
Paul Bell said:
Everybody has an opinion.
Sadly they speak it.
February 22nd, 2026 16:35
The sacred tounge spell
Lorenz said:
Avoid of getting lost !n too broad an audience as this leads to a form of sycophancy !
February 22nd, 2026 13:53
Lorenz said:
Avoid of getting lost !n too broad an audience as this leads to a form of sycophancy !
February 22nd, 2026 13:53
The sacred tounge spell
Demar Desu said:
I am a fan, you\'re using words I got to pull out the dictionary for, and very effortlessly as well. Great poem
February 22nd, 2026 12:16
Demar Desu said:
I am a fan, you\'re using words I got to pull out the dictionary for, and very effortlessly as well. Great poem
February 22nd, 2026 12:16
The sacred tounge spell
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes it is best to say nothing at all. I was told that old saying by my mother that if you have nothing good to say say nothing at all. Well said in this poem
February 22nd, 2026 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes it is best to say nothing at all. I was told that old saying by my mother that if you have nothing good to say say nothing at all. Well said in this poem
February 22nd, 2026 10:39
Appreciate you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa… I resonate with that call to remember our ghosts and stay mindful of the past. There’s maturity in that. And the way you end it, “Seek balmy days when the air is grey” feels like choosing hope on purpose. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 19th, 2026 13:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa… I resonate with that call to remember our ghosts and stay mindful of the past. There’s maturity in that. And the way you end it, “Seek balmy days when the air is grey” feels like choosing hope on purpose. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 19th, 2026 13:30
Appreciate you
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A lovely poem. Full of positivity.
February 19th, 2026 06:33
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A lovely poem. Full of positivity.
February 19th, 2026 06:33
Appreciate you
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with a lovely and wise message a fave
February 18th, 2026 17:41
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with a lovely and wise message a fave
February 18th, 2026 17:41
The eyes of the sun
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa, this burns with longing. It feels desperate in a beautiful way…like reaching straight into light without flinching. There’s a hunger here that feels both physical and spiritual. The repetition at the end seals it. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 17th, 2026 20:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marissa, this burns with longing. It feels desperate in a beautiful way…like reaching straight into light without flinching. There’s a hunger here that feels both physical and spiritual. The repetition at the end seals it. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 17th, 2026 20:19
The eyes of the sun
Paul Bell said:
The sun, that bright thing in the sky that Britain has made redundant.
Oh, please come back, I\'m bloody freezing.
February 17th, 2026 13:59
Paul Bell said:
The sun, that bright thing in the sky that Britain has made redundant.
Oh, please come back, I\'m bloody freezing.
February 17th, 2026 13:59
The eyes of the sun
sorenbarrett said:
A most metaphoric write that speaks to me in understanding the light of truth. Nice
February 17th, 2026 11:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most metaphoric write that speaks to me in understanding the light of truth. Nice
February 17th, 2026 11:54
The eyes of the sun
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The want has been expressed in a kinetic way (don\'t know if that is the right wird). It has a quiet dignified energy. Loved it!
February 17th, 2026 11:51
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The want has been expressed in a kinetic way (don\'t know if that is the right wird). It has a quiet dignified energy. Loved it!
February 17th, 2026 11:51
The eyes of the sun
Lorenz said:
Protect yourself from these solar passions that burn hearts .
February 17th, 2026 11:41
Lorenz said:
Protect yourself from these solar passions that burn hearts .
February 17th, 2026 11:41
High on time
Demar Desu said:
your flow is nice and easy to read, and the poem deff is deeper than just wasting time at least to me. great job
February 16th, 2026 17:55
Demar Desu said:
your flow is nice and easy to read, and the poem deff is deeper than just wasting time at least to me. great job
February 16th, 2026 17:55
High on time
Paul Bell said:
Wasting time is the new doing something.
In saying that, she just said she\'s wasting her time being with me, bloody women.
February 16th, 2026 14:33
Paul Bell said:
Wasting time is the new doing something.
In saying that, she just said she\'s wasting her time being with me, bloody women.
February 16th, 2026 14:33
High on time
sorenbarrett said:
There are rhyming lines that remind me of how my mind wanders. Nicely written
February 16th, 2026 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
There are rhyming lines that remind me of how my mind wanders. Nicely written
February 16th, 2026 13:39
My,my,my dream
sorenbarrett said:
Like looking for keys where the light is good one needs to look where one left them and so it is with identity. A good write
February 6th, 2026 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
Like looking for keys where the light is good one needs to look where one left them and so it is with identity. A good write
February 6th, 2026 16:21
Needle in my gum
Paul Bell said:
Strange how a needle can save you or kill you.
I self harm watching my football team, wondering why I put myself through the pain.
February 5th, 2026 08:52
Paul Bell said:
Strange how a needle can save you or kill you.
I self harm watching my football team, wondering why I put myself through the pain.
February 5th, 2026 08:52
Needle in my gum
sorenbarrett said:
I personally hate needles but many perforate themselves for decoration, health, to get a high, to feel the pain and know they are still alive, self punishment. A poem that hurts. Well written
February 5th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
I personally hate needles but many perforate themselves for decoration, health, to get a high, to feel the pain and know they are still alive, self punishment. A poem that hurts. Well written
February 5th, 2026 04:17
The wrong therapist
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of emotional pain, familial relationships, and the impact of another person\'s actions on mental health. The poet grapples with feelings of shame and emptiness, ultimately pointing to a toxic relationship with a person named Cooper, who is revealed to be the son of her therapist. Yet expresses feelings of frustration, isolation, and a search for understanding about her mental health. The poet seeks to understand her feelings and possibly confront the underlying issues related to her depression, specifically in relation to Cooper and the impact he has on her life. The question posed at the end highlights her desire for acknowledgment and understanding of her suffering.
February 3rd, 2026 17:16
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of emotional pain, familial relationships, and the impact of another person\'s actions on mental health. The poet grapples with feelings of shame and emptiness, ultimately pointing to a toxic relationship with a person named Cooper, who is revealed to be the son of her therapist. Yet expresses feelings of frustration, isolation, and a search for understanding about her mental health. The poet seeks to understand her feelings and possibly confront the underlying issues related to her depression, specifically in relation to Cooper and the impact he has on her life. The question posed at the end highlights her desire for acknowledgment and understanding of her suffering.
February 3rd, 2026 17:16
The wrong therapist
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you need to amputate the problem, or at least cut it below the knees.
As for the father, well.
February 3rd, 2026 17:10
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you need to amputate the problem, or at least cut it below the knees.
As for the father, well.
February 3rd, 2026 17:10
The wrong therapist
sorenbarrett said:
It can be quite confusing and this poem states it so. Well written it offers the tools to overcome the problem by confronting the issue and in overcoming it the depression will soon abate. Very nicely written.
February 3rd, 2026 15:20
sorenbarrett said:
It can be quite confusing and this poem states it so. Well written it offers the tools to overcome the problem by confronting the issue and in overcoming it the depression will soon abate. Very nicely written.
February 3rd, 2026 15:20
The darkness in you shines in me
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS. This is a frightening warning as a poem when one recognizes that one is being held back and destroyed by another then one must make a decision of staying or leaving. Well written.
February 3rd, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS. This is a frightening warning as a poem when one recognizes that one is being held back and destroyed by another then one must make a decision of staying or leaving. Well written.
February 3rd, 2026 04:11
