Comments received on poems by Waiting for Silence



मेरा जीवन – मेरा अनुभव
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this reads like a life gathered into reflection…every step, every lesson, carried forward. That sense of learning as you go…sometimes through pain, sometimes through clarity…feels grounded and true. It stays with you. Really well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 26th, 2026 09:10

मेरा जीवन – मेरा अनुभव
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Vimal, my friend, this reads like a life gathered into reflection…every step, every lesson, carried forward. That sense of learning as you go…sometimes through pain, sometimes through clarity…feels grounded and true. It stays with you. Really well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 26th, 2026 09:09

मेरा जीवन – मेरा अनुभव
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful sayings of wisdom that fall like pearls on a necklace

April 26th, 2026 00:47

पुकार
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Vimal, this comes through with a strong sense of urgency…like a call rising from deep concern and hope at the same time. It feels direct and heartfelt without holding back. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️

April 25th, 2026 06:46

पुकार
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely poem a call to action for a country and a people. Nicely done

April 25th, 2026 04:17

पुकार
Priya Tomar said:

A call to awaken the youth who hàve forgotten their responsibility .
Nicely done .

April 25th, 2026 01:06

प्रयाण गीत
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Vimal, this holds both pride and sacrifice together…a deep respect for those who give everything, carried with quiet strength. It feels ceremonial, almost like a tribute spoken from the heart. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 24th, 2026 12:24

प्रयाण गीत
sorenbarrett said:

Here is the poem that extols valor and courage in defense of one\'s motherland nicely worded

April 24th, 2026 04:57

प्रार्थना
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Vimal, that line about choosing thorns over flowers really stayed with me…there’s strength in that willingness to embrace challenge instead of comfort. It gives the whole prayer its backbone. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 23rd, 2026 08:45

प्रार्थना
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic prayer to the gods and goddesses for gifts to guide one through this life. A lovely write

April 23rd, 2026 04:49

प्रार्थना
Priya Tomar said:

A lyrical hymn.....
Nice .

April 23rd, 2026 02:46

किसान
Tristan Robert Lange said:

विमल, आशा है आपको बुरा नहीं लगेगा कि मैं इस तरह जुड़ रहा हूँ…मुझे भारत से गहरा प्रेम है। कुछ समय पहले मुझे तीन हफ्तों के एक क्रॉस-कल्चरल ट्रिप पर आने का अवसर मिला था—केरल, मैसूर, दक्षिण-मध्य भारत, फिर चेन्नई, और अंत में दिल्ली-आगरा तक…जहाँ हमने ताजमहल भी देखा। उस यात्रा ने बहुत कुछ भीतर बदल दिया। केरल की हरियाली, मसालों के बागान, चाय के बागान…सब कुछ आज भी याद है। सच कहूँ तो जहाँ मैं रहता हूँ, वहाँ की भौगोलिक अनुभूति कुछ हद तक केरल से मिलती है। यहाँ भी बहुत किसान हैं…और वे भी संघर्ष करते हैं। इसीलिए आपकी कविता ने मुझे गहराई से छुआ। यह सिर्फ एक देश की बात नहीं लगती…यह हर उस इंसान की आवाज़ है जो धरती से जुड़ा है और दूसरों के लिए जीता है। आपकी भाषा बहुत सुंदर है…सीधी, सच्ची और दिल तक पहुँचने वाली। आशा है आप बुरा नहीं मानेंगे कि मैं इस तरह अपनी भावना साझा कर रहा हूँ। सच में…तकनीक के लिए ईश्वर का धन्यवाद, जो हमें इस तरह जोड़ देती है। 🙏🌾🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 22nd, 2026 09:13

किसान
sorenbarrett said:

What a beautiful poem of tribute to the common man the farmer provider of food for a nation. Well written and a fave

April 22nd, 2026 05:41

बिल्लू सिंह
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Vimal, this is pure warmth…there’s such an innocent, playful energy running through it. It feels like a child’s world brought to life in the sweetest way. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 21st, 2026 09:07

बिल्लू सिंह
sorenbarrett said:

This poem has a soft and sweet child like feel that is tender and young hearted in its feel. Nicely done

April 21st, 2026 04:50

बिल्लू सिंह
Priya Tomar said:

This poem creates tender atmosphere .
So lovely .

April 21st, 2026 02:20

घर
sorenbarrett said:

This represents the simple actions of a normal day nicely written

April 20th, 2026 04:48

घर
Priya Tomar said:

Well written .

April 20th, 2026 03:06

पप्पा की गुडिया
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Vimal, this carries such a soft, joyful energy…like stepping into a child’s world for a moment. That moment of “रोती हूँ तो डरता है” really stands out…such a sweet, real glimpse into that bond, where even tears hold power in a loving way. It reminds me how pure and complete that kind of love feels. Beautifully done, my friend…happy birthday to your daughter. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 19th, 2026 09:10

पप्पा की गुडिया
sorenbarrett said:

This seems passing thought as if in note form to a mother. Well spoken

April 19th, 2026 04:33

मेरा देश
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Vimal, this reminds me of that feeling of belonging to something bigger than yourself…where place, history, and identity all come together. That sense of gratitude and connection comes through clearly here. It lands with sincerity. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 18th, 2026 20:53

मेरा देश
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful write from Hindu perspective reflecting the culture and religious views of reincarnation and different aspects of the gods. Nicely written in reverence of the land of India.

April 18th, 2026 05:47

मेरा देश
Priya Tomar said:

I \'m proud to be Indian .
Great poem .

April 18th, 2026 05:38

मुक़द्दर
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Vimal, this hit me hard…there’s a deep ache in this, like something sacred has been worn down over time. The way you return to loyalty and what it used to mean…that stays with me. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

मैं चाहता हूँ कि तुम जानो, मैं तुम्हें देखता हूँ और तुम्हारी कद्र करता हूँ, मेरे दोस्त।🌹💜 — ट्रिस्टन



April 17th, 2026 10:46

मुक़द्दर
Priya Tomar said:

Well written , a fave

April 17th, 2026 06:15

मुक़द्दर
sorenbarrett said:

This poem of pain speaks as slyly as a serpent with a forked tongue. The message slithers and coils in the words ready to strike. A deadly poem slyly hisses at the offender. Very nicely worded it bites and expels its venom in worded fangs. A fave

April 17th, 2026 04:22

कहीं रोशनी मुझे दिखती है आज
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Vimal, this feels quietly hopeful…like light pushing through without needing to force it. There’s a calm confidence here that really lands. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 16th, 2026 16:07

पलकों  से  बातें 
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Vimal, there’s a softness here that pulls you in and doesn’t let go…like a night you wish would never end, even knowing it has to. The small details…the tear, the breath, the closeness…they make it feel real, not just remembered but lived. It’s tender, a little haunting, and it stays with you. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 16th, 2026 15:25

कहीं रोशनी मुझे दिखती है आज
Priya Tomar said:

Hope whispers softly in this poem .
Beautifully written .

April 16th, 2026 08:31

कहीं रोशनी मुझे दिखती है आज
sorenbarrett said:

This poem seems metaphoric in its view of light as knowledge of vision. Nicely done

April 16th, 2026 04:13

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