Comments received on poems by Waiting for Silence
जिसका सजदा किया वो ख़ुदा ही न था
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, I\'ve known seasons where certainty slipped through my fingers and things I trusted turned out to be far less solid than I believed. This speaks to that experience with remarkable honesty. Beneath the sorrow, I also hear someone wrestling fiercely with truth, and that gave the poem real weight for me. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 21:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, I\'ve known seasons where certainty slipped through my fingers and things I trusted turned out to be far less solid than I believed. This speaks to that experience with remarkable honesty. Beneath the sorrow, I also hear someone wrestling fiercely with truth, and that gave the poem real weight for me. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 21:30
जिसका सजदा किया वो ख़ुदा ही न था
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, I\'ve known seasons where certainty slipped through my fingers and things I trusted turned out to be far less solid than I believed. This speaks to that experience with remarkable honesty. Beneath the sorrow, I also hear someone wrestling fiercely with truth, and that gave the poem real weight for me. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 21:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, I\'ve known seasons where certainty slipped through my fingers and things I trusted turned out to be far less solid than I believed. This speaks to that experience with remarkable honesty. Beneath the sorrow, I also hear someone wrestling fiercely with truth, and that gave the poem real weight for me. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 21:30
जिसका सजदा किया वो ख़ुदा ही न था
sorenbarrett said:
Couplets of duality where there appears conflict sometimes finding resolution and often not. Well done Vimal
June 2nd, 2026 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
Couplets of duality where there appears conflict sometimes finding resolution and often not. Well done Vimal
June 2nd, 2026 05:20
होली है.....
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love how welcoming this feels. The playful chasing, the sweets, the colors, the laughter…and then the gentle challenge to those standing apart to come join the celebration. It captures not just a festival, but a spirit of community. Lovely work, Vimal. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love how welcoming this feels. The playful chasing, the sweets, the colors, the laughter…and then the gentle challenge to those standing apart to come join the celebration. It captures not just a festival, but a spirit of community. Lovely work, Vimal. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:27
होली है.....
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of cultural foods and tradition even the wording is most traditional of the land. I loved this piece and its presentation itself was poetic a fave
May 28th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of cultural foods and tradition even the wording is most traditional of the land. I loved this piece and its presentation itself was poetic a fave
May 28th, 2026 03:49
कुत्ते वालों से
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this is a sharp, layered, and deeply provocative social critique. The repeated phrase “कुत्ते वाले” becomes more than a literal reference...it transforms into a symbol of class signaling, performative modernity, and distorted social priorities. What gives the poem its real force, though, is that beneath the satire is genuine grief for abandoned children, hunger, illiteracy, and forgotten people. And your author’s note clarifies beautifully that the poem is not anti-animal, but rather a painful question about what societies visibly reward while other suffering remains unseen. “क्या इंसान इतना गिर गया है / या कुत्ता इतना उठ गया है?” is especially haunting because it refuses easy answers. Courageous and deeply thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 21:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this is a sharp, layered, and deeply provocative social critique. The repeated phrase “कुत्ते वाले” becomes more than a literal reference...it transforms into a symbol of class signaling, performative modernity, and distorted social priorities. What gives the poem its real force, though, is that beneath the satire is genuine grief for abandoned children, hunger, illiteracy, and forgotten people. And your author’s note clarifies beautifully that the poem is not anti-animal, but rather a painful question about what societies visibly reward while other suffering remains unseen. “क्या इंसान इतना गिर गया है / या कुत्ता इतना उठ गया है?” is especially haunting because it refuses easy answers. Courageous and deeply thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 21:53
कुत्ते वालों से
sorenbarrett said:
I love how you use discomfort to present a message and cause thought. I have been a dog owner and I love dogs but even there I have no room for all the stray dogs that live around. I love individuals (I can not say society) I can not take care of all the poor around me. Yet to say one loves but not demonstrate it is a hypocrisy. My wife gives to both people and dogs she is the true lover taking care of all living things around her.
May 27th, 2026 07:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love how you use discomfort to present a message and cause thought. I have been a dog owner and I love dogs but even there I have no room for all the stray dogs that live around. I love individuals (I can not say society) I can not take care of all the poor around me. Yet to say one loves but not demonstrate it is a hypocrisy. My wife gives to both people and dogs she is the true lover taking care of all living things around her.
May 27th, 2026 07:30
रौशनी की ओर
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal…this carries such fierce resilience through the pain. Even after betrayal, burial, cruelty, and isolation, the poem keeps moving toward light instead of surrendering to darkness. “सामने मुझको अब रौशनी दिख रही है” lands beautifully after everything before it. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 26th, 2026 20:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal…this carries such fierce resilience through the pain. Even after betrayal, burial, cruelty, and isolation, the poem keeps moving toward light instead of surrendering to darkness. “सामने मुझको अब रौशनी दिख रही है” lands beautifully after everything before it. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 26th, 2026 20:09
रौशनी की ओर
sorenbarrett said:
This appears a prayer of defiance and at the same time asking for support very nicely worded
May 26th, 2026 03:15
sorenbarrett said:
This appears a prayer of defiance and at the same time asking for support very nicely worded
May 26th, 2026 03:15
तोहफ़ा
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, wow…there’s such quiet devastation in this, my friend. The poem carries that painful tension where connection exists emotionally even when life never fully allows it to become what the heart wanted. It feels restrained, but deeply wounded underneath. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, wow…there’s such quiet devastation in this, my friend. The poem carries that painful tension where connection exists emotionally even when life never fully allows it to become what the heart wanted. It feels restrained, but deeply wounded underneath. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:09
तोहफ़ा
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to break time into pieces and question a relationship. Nicely written
May 25th, 2026 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to break time into pieces and question a relationship. Nicely written
May 25th, 2026 06:36
फ़ना
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal…this feels devastatingly theatrical in the best way possible…like love itself being dragged into the public square and sacrificed before witnesses who do nothing but watch. The repeated return to “कि चौराहे पे…” gives the poem the feeling of a mournful procession. Deeply moving work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal…this feels devastatingly theatrical in the best way possible…like love itself being dragged into the public square and sacrificed before witnesses who do nothing but watch. The repeated return to “कि चौराहे पे…” gives the poem the feeling of a mournful procession. Deeply moving work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:11
फ़ना
sorenbarrett said:
Giving seems to be a theme in this poem the giving of oneself or the selling. Nicely written
May 24th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Giving seems to be a theme in this poem the giving of oneself or the selling. Nicely written
May 24th, 2026 04:09
वर्षा ऋतु
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely painted this poem has the feel of India or places close by. It is so nicely composed and has a rejuvenated and happy feeling. Well done
May 22nd, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely painted this poem has the feel of India or places close by. It is so nicely composed and has a rejuvenated and happy feeling. Well done
May 22nd, 2026 03:41
वर्षा ऋतु
Priya Tomar said:
the poem describes pleasant changes of rainy season .
so beautifful .
May 22nd, 2026 03:07
Priya Tomar said:
the poem describes pleasant changes of rainy season .
so beautifful .
May 22nd, 2026 03:07
यार, यारों से कभी नाराज़ नहीं होता
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this is beautiful, my friend. The sincerity in this flows so naturally...not forced, not ornamental...just heartfelt truth about friendship and forgiveness. The emotional warmth carries all the way through. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 20th, 2026 13:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this is beautiful, my friend. The sincerity in this flows so naturally...not forced, not ornamental...just heartfelt truth about friendship and forgiveness. The emotional warmth carries all the way through. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 20th, 2026 13:28
यार, यारों से कभी नाराज़ नहीं होता
sorenbarrett said:
Remarkable control is spoken of. Anger comes to most with friends and family yet here it is under control. Well written
May 20th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Remarkable control is spoken of. Anger comes to most with friends and family yet here it is under control. Well written
May 20th, 2026 04:13
राष्ट्रमंदिर
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, I appreciated how this approaches faith, identity, and nationhood through shared humanity rather than separation. The poem keeps returning to compassion, coexistence, and mutual care instead of rivalry, and that gives it a real warmth throughout. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 20:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, I appreciated how this approaches faith, identity, and nationhood through shared humanity rather than separation. The poem keeps returning to compassion, coexistence, and mutual care instead of rivalry, and that gives it a real warmth throughout. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 20:09
राष्ट्रमंदिर
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message in poetic form well said. We are all the same and all one yet over greed and prejudice we fight. A fave
May 19th, 2026 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message in poetic form well said. We are all the same and all one yet over greed and prejudice we fight. A fave
May 19th, 2026 03:34
अपनी पीड़ा समझा दो तुम
rakhi semwal said:
बहुत मार्मिक है....अपने दुखों मे घिरा इंसान अपने साथी के भी आँसू मांग रहा है...आज के समय मे किस्मत वाला ही होगा जिसे ऐसा साथी मिला होगा...
May 18th, 2026 19:39
rakhi semwal said:
बहुत मार्मिक है....अपने दुखों मे घिरा इंसान अपने साथी के भी आँसू मांग रहा है...आज के समय मे किस्मत वाला ही होगा जिसे ऐसा साथी मिला होगा...
May 18th, 2026 19:39
ये सपने बहुत अधूरे हैं
rakhi semwal said:
ओह....बेहद खूबसूरत कविता है...गंगाजल की तरह पवित्र मन से उपजी प्रेममयी कविता। बहुत शुभकामनाएं आपकी लेखनी को...
May 18th, 2026 19:36
rakhi semwal said:
ओह....बेहद खूबसूरत कविता है...गंगाजल की तरह पवित्र मन से उपजी प्रेममयी कविता। बहुत शुभकामनाएं आपकी लेखनी को...
May 18th, 2026 19:36
अपनी पीड़ा समझा दो तुम
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this really moved me. The tenderness running through these lines feels deeply compassionate…not trying to fix someone’s pain, but simply asking to share its weight. That emotional sincerity gives the poem tremendous warmth. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this really moved me. The tenderness running through these lines feels deeply compassionate…not trying to fix someone’s pain, but simply asking to share its weight. That emotional sincerity gives the poem tremendous warmth. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:37
ये सपने बहुत अधूरे हैं
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this is filled with such aching devotion. The longing here feels restrained yet overwhelming at the same time…like love pushed beyond possession into sacrifice and worship. There’s real emotional gravity in these lines. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this is filled with such aching devotion. The longing here feels restrained yet overwhelming at the same time…like love pushed beyond possession into sacrifice and worship. There’s real emotional gravity in these lines. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:36
अपनी पीड़ा समझा दो तुम
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for confidence that asks another to share their pain. Well penned
May 18th, 2026 02:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for confidence that asks another to share their pain. Well penned
May 18th, 2026 02:33
ये सपने बहुत अधूरे हैं
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from a Hindu culture as a plea for love and offers worship as a pledge. Nicely written
May 18th, 2026 02:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from a Hindu culture as a plea for love and offers worship as a pledge. Nicely written
May 18th, 2026 02:20
सच्चा मन का, बदक़िस्मत है
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this reads like a heartfelt confession shaped by loss, tenderness, and emotional exhaustion. Broken dreams, helplessness before fate, misunderstood depth, and enduring affection all flow together into something intimate and quietly heartbreaking. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this reads like a heartfelt confession shaped by loss, tenderness, and emotional exhaustion. Broken dreams, helplessness before fate, misunderstood depth, and enduring affection all flow together into something intimate and quietly heartbreaking. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:19
सच्चा मन का, बदक़िस्मत है
sorenbarrett said:
More wisdom in a poem. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
More wisdom in a poem. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:33
नेताओं से
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, the combination of poem and reflection creates something far bigger than political commentary alone. It becomes a portrait of collective fatigue…leaders rising and falling while ordinary people remain hungry, unheard, and emotionally worn down by promises that never fully arrive. Powerful and deeply human work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, the combination of poem and reflection creates something far bigger than political commentary alone. It becomes a portrait of collective fatigue…leaders rising and falling while ordinary people remain hungry, unheard, and emotionally worn down by promises that never fully arrive. Powerful and deeply human work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:28
नेताओं से
sorenbarrett said:
Political, historical, it speaks to the needs of the people and if reduced to an individual the needs are the same, air, water, food, shelter the primary needs that must be addressed before others can be. A lovely write
May 14th, 2026 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
Political, historical, it speaks to the needs of the people and if reduced to an individual the needs are the same, air, water, food, shelter the primary needs that must be addressed before others can be. A lovely write
May 14th, 2026 08:20
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