Comments received on poems by Waiting for Silence
सच्चा मन का, बदक़िस्मत है
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this reads like a heartfelt confession shaped by loss, tenderness, and emotional exhaustion. Broken dreams, helplessness before fate, misunderstood depth, and enduring affection all flow together into something intimate and quietly heartbreaking. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this reads like a heartfelt confession shaped by loss, tenderness, and emotional exhaustion. Broken dreams, helplessness before fate, misunderstood depth, and enduring affection all flow together into something intimate and quietly heartbreaking. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:19
सच्चा मन का, बदक़िस्मत है
sorenbarrett said:
More wisdom in a poem. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
More wisdom in a poem. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:33
नेताओं से
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, the combination of poem and reflection creates something far bigger than political commentary alone. It becomes a portrait of collective fatigue…leaders rising and falling while ordinary people remain hungry, unheard, and emotionally worn down by promises that never fully arrive. Powerful and deeply human work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, the combination of poem and reflection creates something far bigger than political commentary alone. It becomes a portrait of collective fatigue…leaders rising and falling while ordinary people remain hungry, unheard, and emotionally worn down by promises that never fully arrive. Powerful and deeply human work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:28
नेताओं से
sorenbarrett said:
Political, historical, it speaks to the needs of the people and if reduced to an individual the needs are the same, air, water, food, shelter the primary needs that must be addressed before others can be. A lovely write
May 14th, 2026 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
Political, historical, it speaks to the needs of the people and if reduced to an individual the needs are the same, air, water, food, shelter the primary needs that must be addressed before others can be. A lovely write
May 14th, 2026 08:20
नेताओं से
rakhi semwal said:
बहुत बढिया.... नेताओं की आँखें खोलने वाली कविता है..गरीबी हमने हटाई...
गरीबी तुम्हारी हटी....
वाह....दिल जीत लिया आपने...
🌹
May 14th, 2026 06:53
rakhi semwal said:
बहुत बढिया.... नेताओं की आँखें खोलने वाली कविता है..गरीबी हमने हटाई...
गरीबी तुम्हारी हटी....
वाह....दिल जीत लिया आपने...
🌹
May 14th, 2026 06:53
बस यूँ ही
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this really moved me. Every stanza carries the same quiet truth…that joy, beauty, love, and even poetry itself gain their depth through struggle and longing. The lotus rising from mud and the final line about the broken heart becoming the poet both land hard. There’s tenderness and realism woven together beautifully here. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 10:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this really moved me. Every stanza carries the same quiet truth…that joy, beauty, love, and even poetry itself gain their depth through struggle and longing. The lotus rising from mud and the final line about the broken heart becoming the poet both land hard. There’s tenderness and realism woven together beautifully here. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 10:11
बस यूँ ही
sorenbarrett said:
The necessities of opposites for the existence of either. Well written and a fave
May 12th, 2026 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
The necessities of opposites for the existence of either. Well written and a fave
May 12th, 2026 05:26
अकेला मगर मैं बहुत खुश हूँ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this is deeply affecting work. The poem moves through loneliness, exhaustion, fate, even death itself…yet somehow still arrives at a strange kind of dignity. Not naïve happiness…something steadier and harder won than that. The heartbeat imagery especially stayed with me. Truly powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this is deeply affecting work. The poem moves through loneliness, exhaustion, fate, even death itself…yet somehow still arrives at a strange kind of dignity. Not naïve happiness…something steadier and harder won than that. The heartbeat imagery especially stayed with me. Truly powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:49
अकेला मगर मैं बहुत खुश हूँ
sorenbarrett said:
A set of sayings that leads us back to the beginning in the end. Well done
May 9th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
A set of sayings that leads us back to the beginning in the end. Well done
May 9th, 2026 04:45
अकेला नहीं हूँ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this really moved me. There’s such determination running through this...not just for yourself, but for everyone walking beside you. The hope here feels earned, not naïve, and that gives the poem real strength. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 15:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this really moved me. There’s such determination running through this...not just for yourself, but for everyone walking beside you. The hope here feels earned, not naïve, and that gives the poem real strength. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 15:35
ज़िद्दी
rakhi semwal said:
वाह....कितनी करुण प्रार्थना है,कि प्रभु के सामने दिल चीर के रख दिया...। पढकर वो ईश्वर भी रोया तो जरूर होगा..🌹
May 8th, 2026 09:42
rakhi semwal said:
वाह....कितनी करुण प्रार्थना है,कि प्रभु के सामने दिल चीर के रख दिया...। पढकर वो ईश्वर भी रोया तो जरूर होगा..🌹
May 8th, 2026 09:42
अकेला नहीं हूँ
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of a shared path in life. Nicely written
May 8th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of a shared path in life. Nicely written
May 8th, 2026 04:12
ज़िद्दी
sorenbarrett said:
There is self flagellation and immolation in this poem that has become a plea to a god. Well written
May 7th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
There is self flagellation and immolation in this poem that has become a plea to a god. Well written
May 7th, 2026 04:19
खुश मैं रहता हूँ
Priya Tomar said:
A lovely lyric that revolves around love , pain and hope .
Nicely done
May 6th, 2026 23:11
Priya Tomar said:
A lovely lyric that revolves around love , pain and hope .
Nicely done
May 6th, 2026 23:11
खुश मैं रहता हूँ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“इक बार कभी तो देखोगी / ये सोच के खुश मैं रहता हूँ” carries such gentle ache, Vimal. That hope of simply being seen one day gives the ending a very human warmth. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“इक बार कभी तो देखोगी / ये सोच के खुश मैं रहता हूँ” carries such gentle ache, Vimal. That hope of simply being seen one day gives the ending a very human warmth. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 07:57
खुश मैं रहता हूँ
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of things remembered that one loves in another. Nicely worded
May 6th, 2026 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of things remembered that one loves in another. Nicely worded
May 6th, 2026 04:52
दोस्त
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this really moved me…the sincerity of it, especially in how forgiveness is held differently between those close to us and those outside. It feels gentle but grounded in truth…like a quiet call back to trust and connection. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 09:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this really moved me…the sincerity of it, especially in how forgiveness is held differently between those close to us and those outside. It feels gentle but grounded in truth…like a quiet call back to trust and connection. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 09:54
दोस्त
sorenbarrett said:
Trust and forgiveness are principle parts of this poem related to family and friends. Nicely done
May 5th, 2026 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Trust and forgiveness are principle parts of this poem related to family and friends. Nicely done
May 5th, 2026 03:39
मेरी वफ़ा की देवी क्यूँ चुप चाप खड़ी है ?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this holds a strong emotional pull…love, pain, and that need to be seen all woven together. The way it moves between longing and devotion…yeah, that lingers. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this holds a strong emotional pull…love, pain, and that need to be seen all woven together. The way it moves between longing and devotion…yeah, that lingers. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:38
मेरी वफ़ा की देवी क्यूँ चुप चाप खड़ी है ?
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks in questions unanswered that torment the narrator. Questions of lack of attention in the face of love. Well done
May 4th, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks in questions unanswered that torment the narrator. Questions of lack of attention in the face of love. Well done
May 4th, 2026 03:47
मेरी वफ़ा की देवी क्यूँ चुप चाप खड़ी है ?
Priya Tomar said:
a nice monologue emerged as the reaction against silent treatment .
well done .
May 4th, 2026 03:35
Priya Tomar said:
a nice monologue emerged as the reaction against silent treatment .
well done .
May 4th, 2026 03:35
ऐसा कि टूटने पाए ना
Priya Tomar said:
The poem describes beloved as goddess and carries the theme of devotional love .
Nicely done
May 3rd, 2026 21:28
Priya Tomar said:
The poem describes beloved as goddess and carries the theme of devotional love .
Nicely done
May 3rd, 2026 21:28
ऐसा कि टूटने पाए ना
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, I’ve felt that kind of longing and hope intertwined before… holding onto something delicate and wanting it to last. This spoke to that space in a real way. I appreciate this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, I’ve felt that kind of longing and hope intertwined before… holding onto something delicate and wanting it to last. This spoke to that space in a real way. I appreciate this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:14
ऐसा कि टूटने पाए ना
sorenbarrett said:
Trust, dependence fill this piece. It has an exotic feel. Well done
May 3rd, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Trust, dependence fill this piece. It has an exotic feel. Well done
May 3rd, 2026 04:29
क़सूर
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this is a beautiful piece…what stands out is the softness paired with that underlying ache. The imagery draws you in, but it’s that final question that stays with you…unanswered, lingering. It’s simple, but it carries weight. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this is a beautiful piece…what stands out is the softness paired with that underlying ache. The imagery draws you in, but it’s that final question that stays with you…unanswered, lingering. It’s simple, but it carries weight. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:13
प्रतीक्षा
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This carries real strength, Vimal…a steady voice pushing forward even through the weight of it all. It doesn’t waver…just keeps calling toward light. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This carries real strength, Vimal…a steady voice pushing forward even through the weight of it all. It doesn’t waver…just keeps calling toward light. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 08:00
प्रतीक्षा
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pleading and of hope an affirmation of belief. Well worded
May 1st, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pleading and of hope an affirmation of belief. Well worded
May 1st, 2026 04:05
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