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मुक़द्दर
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this hit me hard…there’s a deep ache in this, like something sacred has been worn down over time. The way you return to loyalty and what it used to mean…that stays with me. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
मैं चाहता हूँ कि तुम जानो, मैं तुम्हें देखता हूँ और तुम्हारी कद्र करता हूँ, मेरे दोस्त।🌹💜 — ट्रिस्टन
April 17th, 2026 10:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this hit me hard…there’s a deep ache in this, like something sacred has been worn down over time. The way you return to loyalty and what it used to mean…that stays with me. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
मैं चाहता हूँ कि तुम जानो, मैं तुम्हें देखता हूँ और तुम्हारी कद्र करता हूँ, मेरे दोस्त।🌹💜 — ट्रिस्टन
April 17th, 2026 10:46
मुक़द्दर
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of pain speaks as slyly as a serpent with a forked tongue. The message slithers and coils in the words ready to strike. A deadly poem slyly hisses at the offender. Very nicely worded it bites and expels its venom in worded fangs. A fave
April 17th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of pain speaks as slyly as a serpent with a forked tongue. The message slithers and coils in the words ready to strike. A deadly poem slyly hisses at the offender. Very nicely worded it bites and expels its venom in worded fangs. A fave
April 17th, 2026 04:22
कहीं रोशनी मुझे दिखती है आज
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this feels quietly hopeful…like light pushing through without needing to force it. There’s a calm confidence here that really lands. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this feels quietly hopeful…like light pushing through without needing to force it. There’s a calm confidence here that really lands. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:07
पलकों से बातें
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, there’s a softness here that pulls you in and doesn’t let go…like a night you wish would never end, even knowing it has to. The small details…the tear, the breath, the closeness…they make it feel real, not just remembered but lived. It’s tender, a little haunting, and it stays with you. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, there’s a softness here that pulls you in and doesn’t let go…like a night you wish would never end, even knowing it has to. The small details…the tear, the breath, the closeness…they make it feel real, not just remembered but lived. It’s tender, a little haunting, and it stays with you. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:25
कहीं रोशनी मुझे दिखती है आज
Priya Tomar said:
Hope whispers softly in this poem .
Beautifully written .
April 16th, 2026 08:31
Priya Tomar said:
Hope whispers softly in this poem .
Beautifully written .
April 16th, 2026 08:31
कहीं रोशनी मुझे दिखती है आज
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems metaphoric in its view of light as knowledge of vision. Nicely done
April 16th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems metaphoric in its view of light as knowledge of vision. Nicely done
April 16th, 2026 04:13
पलकों से बातें
sorenbarrett said:
Here the past, present and future are woven into a single thread and intimacy, love, tenderness and the physical are blended. Nicely done
April 15th, 2026 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Here the past, present and future are woven into a single thread and intimacy, love, tenderness and the physical are blended. Nicely done
April 15th, 2026 04:49
पलकों से बातें
Priya Tomar said:
These lyrical lines softly touched my heart .
Beautiful expression of the nostalgic feelings in romantic tone .
Nicely done .
April 15th, 2026 03:09
Priya Tomar said:
These lyrical lines softly touched my heart .
Beautiful expression of the nostalgic feelings in romantic tone .
Nicely done .
April 15th, 2026 03:09
माँ तुम कितनी अच्छी हो
Tristan Robert Lange said:
विमल… यह दिल को छू जाता है…इतना सच्चा और सीधा भाव है इसमें। माँ के लिए जो प्रेम है, वो हर पंक्ति में महसूस होता है। बहुत सुंदर रचना, मेरे मित्र। 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Vimal… this touches the heart…there’s such a sincere and direct feeling in it. The love for a mother is felt in every line. Very beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
विमल… यह दिल को छू जाता है…इतना सच्चा और सीधा भाव है इसमें। माँ के लिए जो प्रेम है, वो हर पंक्ति में महसूस होता है। बहुत सुंदर रचना, मेरे मित्र। 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Vimal… this touches the heart…there’s such a sincere and direct feeling in it. The love for a mother is felt in every line. Very beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 08:47
माँ तुम कितनी अच्छी हो
sorenbarrett said:
Love of a mother expressed in this love tribute. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Love of a mother expressed in this love tribute. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 04:29
माँ तुम कितनी अच्छी हो
Priya Tomar said:
An offering to mother .
Nicely done .
April 14th, 2026 02:31
Priya Tomar said:
An offering to mother .
Nicely done .
April 14th, 2026 02:31
कैसे???
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal... it hits straight to the heart... there\'s a true fire in it that can\'t be ignored. Voices like these are important. A powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
विमल…यह सीधा दिल पर लगता है, एक सच्ची आग है इसमें जो नज़रअंदाज़ नहीं होती। ऐसी आवाज़ें ज़रूरी होती हैं। बहुत मजबूत रचना, मेरे मित्र। 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal... it hits straight to the heart... there\'s a true fire in it that can\'t be ignored. Voices like these are important. A powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
विमल…यह सीधा दिल पर लगता है, एक सच्ची आग है इसमें जो नज़रअंदाज़ नहीं होती। ऐसी आवाज़ें ज़रूरी होती हैं। बहुत मजबूत रचना, मेरे मित्र। 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:34
कैसे???
sorenbarrett said:
These verses ring out as reproaches against those that allow injustice. Well written
April 13th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
These verses ring out as reproaches against those that allow injustice. Well written
April 13th, 2026 04:24
… तुम रो लेना !
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, that image of the lamp burning until the oil is gone really caught me. It’s simple, but it carries so much weight…love tied to time, to inevitability. The fading isn’t sudden, it’s lived through. That detail lingers. Well done, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 12th, 2026 10:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, that image of the lamp burning until the oil is gone really caught me. It’s simple, but it carries so much weight…love tied to time, to inevitability. The fading isn’t sudden, it’s lived through. That detail lingers. Well done, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 12th, 2026 10:11
… तुम रो लेना !
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries an eastern feel in its wording. A nicely crafted work of relationship and time.
April 12th, 2026 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries an eastern feel in its wording. A nicely crafted work of relationship and time.
April 12th, 2026 05:38
शिकायत
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this carries that steady, unshaken energy…like no matter what comes, you’ve already decided how you’re going to stand in it. Letting go, even to the point of nothingness, becomes its own kind of strength here. That shift away from pride into something quieter really works. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this carries that steady, unshaken energy…like no matter what comes, you’ve already decided how you’re going to stand in it. Letting go, even to the point of nothingness, becomes its own kind of strength here. That shift away from pride into something quieter really works. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:55
शिकायत
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful description of that dreaded ailment. Well done
April 11th, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful description of that dreaded ailment. Well done
April 11th, 2026 04:56
कसक
Friendship said:
Your poem is a call to awaken the moral consciousness of the nation, urging a return to the values of respect and reverence for women, who are portrayed as divine figures deserving of honor.
April 10th, 2026 08:58
Friendship said:
Your poem is a call to awaken the moral consciousness of the nation, urging a return to the values of respect and reverence for women, who are portrayed as divine figures deserving of honor.
April 10th, 2026 08:58
कसक
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this is powerful in its refusal to soften anything…you hold both grief and accusation at the same time. The way you call out the violence while invoking something higher gives it a moral weight that doesn’t let the reader look away. It stays with you…uneasy, but necessary. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
I have had the privilege of visiting India on a cross-cultural trip, where I attended a lecture on the ongoing struggle for women’s rights. My heart goes out to all victims of senseless, hateful violence.
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विमल, यह रचना अपनी कठोर सच्चाई को बिना नरम किए प्रस्तुत करती है…आपने शोक और आरोप दोनों को एक साथ संभाला है। जिस तरह आप हिंसा को उजागर करते हुए किसी उच्च नैतिक शक्ति का आह्वान करते हैं, वह इस कविता को ऐसा नैतिक भार देता है कि पाठक उससे नज़र नहीं हटा सकता। यह मन में रह जाती है…असहज, पर आवश्यक। 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
मुझे भारत की एक सांस्कृतिक यात्रा पर जाने का अवसर मिला, जहाँ मैंने महिलाओं के अधिकारों के संघर्ष पर एक व्याख्यान भी सुना। मेरा हृदय उन सभी पीड़ितों के साथ है जो निरर्थक और घृणित हिंसा का शिकार हुए हैं।
April 10th, 2026 08:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this is powerful in its refusal to soften anything…you hold both grief and accusation at the same time. The way you call out the violence while invoking something higher gives it a moral weight that doesn’t let the reader look away. It stays with you…uneasy, but necessary. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
I have had the privilege of visiting India on a cross-cultural trip, where I attended a lecture on the ongoing struggle for women’s rights. My heart goes out to all victims of senseless, hateful violence.
______________
विमल, यह रचना अपनी कठोर सच्चाई को बिना नरम किए प्रस्तुत करती है…आपने शोक और आरोप दोनों को एक साथ संभाला है। जिस तरह आप हिंसा को उजागर करते हुए किसी उच्च नैतिक शक्ति का आह्वान करते हैं, वह इस कविता को ऐसा नैतिक भार देता है कि पाठक उससे नज़र नहीं हटा सकता। यह मन में रह जाती है…असहज, पर आवश्यक। 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
मुझे भारत की एक सांस्कृतिक यात्रा पर जाने का अवसर मिला, जहाँ मैंने महिलाओं के अधिकारों के संघर्ष पर एक व्याख्यान भी सुना। मेरा हृदय उन सभी पीड़ितों के साथ है जो निरर्थक और घृणित हिंसा का शिकार हुए हैं।
April 10th, 2026 08:52
इतना चाहूँगा
Priya Tomar said:
I wonder if a man like this really exists .
Good poem .
April 10th, 2026 02:16
Priya Tomar said:
I wonder if a man like this really exists .
Good poem .
April 10th, 2026 02:16
कसक
sorenbarrett said:
I hear pain in this poem of disrespect and shame for men that have no shame and for whom respect means nothing. What good are laws for the lawless and what good is wisdom for fools. You can not fix the stupid and even in an advanced, dignified, intelligent nation there are a few ignorant and perverted that are ruled by impulse and nature of the beast.
April 10th, 2026 01:09
sorenbarrett said:
I hear pain in this poem of disrespect and shame for men that have no shame and for whom respect means nothing. What good are laws for the lawless and what good is wisdom for fools. You can not fix the stupid and even in an advanced, dignified, intelligent nation there are a few ignorant and perverted that are ruled by impulse and nature of the beast.
April 10th, 2026 01:09
तुम गुनगुनाओ भवरों का संगीत बने
sorenbarrett said:
There are several thoughts here following one after the other. Nicely done
April 8th, 2026 16:57
sorenbarrett said:
There are several thoughts here following one after the other. Nicely done
April 8th, 2026 16:57
तुम गुनगुनाओ भवरों का संगीत बने
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this feels tender in a quiet way…there’s a longing here that doesn’t rush, it just waits and reaches. It lands gently. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this feels tender in a quiet way…there’s a longing here that doesn’t rush, it just waits and reaches. It lands gently. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 08:12
तुम गुनगुनाओ भवरों का संगीत बने
Priya Tomar said:
First two lines are my fave .
Nicely done .
April 8th, 2026 06:37
Priya Tomar said:
First two lines are my fave .
Nicely done .
April 8th, 2026 06:37
ख़ुशियाँ तू पैसे में मिलती तो मैं तुझको ले आता
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this really lands…that deep search, especially in the way you ask where happiness lives and how it might be found or held. It feels worn by time, but still reaching. There’s something very real in that. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 7th, 2026 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, this really lands…that deep search, especially in the way you ask where happiness lives and how it might be found or held. It feels worn by time, but still reaching. There’s something very real in that. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 7th, 2026 08:44
ख़ुशियाँ तू पैसे में मिलती तो मैं तुझको ले आता
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of searching and quest. Nicely written it feels epic but ends hard
April 7th, 2026 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of searching and quest. Nicely written it feels epic but ends hard
April 7th, 2026 07:46
दोस्त कोई एक लफ़्ज़ नही
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, I resonate with that realization…when closeness doesn’t always mean trust, and you have to learn that the hard way. That feeling comes through clearly here. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vimal, I resonate with that realization…when closeness doesn’t always mean trust, and you have to learn that the hard way. That feeling comes through clearly here. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:54
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