Comments received on poems by Eeva
Shadows
willyweed said:
we all have to see our self at some point, problem is some people refuse to look. I like your poem. more please.ww
July 6th, 2016 08:35
willyweed said:
we all have to see our self at some point, problem is some people refuse to look. I like your poem. more please.ww
July 6th, 2016 08:35
In the Garden
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful EVA ~ I am still single so I do make choices between the beautiful flowers in my sphere and community ! Some are as beautiful as Roses but come with thorns ~ some are as plain as Daisies but are never prickly ! Your poem paints a beautiful picture of the people we meet day by day and the choices we must make. Perhaps I want a wife just like my Mum who is a pom-pom Dahlia ! Thanks for a beautifully written poem with an intriguing message ~ Yours BRIAN
July 5th, 2016 14:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful EVA ~ I am still single so I do make choices between the beautiful flowers in my sphere and community ! Some are as beautiful as Roses but come with thorns ~ some are as plain as Daisies but are never prickly ! Your poem paints a beautiful picture of the people we meet day by day and the choices we must make. Perhaps I want a wife just like my Mum who is a pom-pom Dahlia ! Thanks for a beautifully written poem with an intriguing message ~ Yours BRIAN
July 5th, 2016 14:14
I Do Wonder
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh EEVA ~ I was sad when I read your poem. You are lovely and your poems are lovely and I am your Friend even though I am not registered as such. LYSISTRA and TROPICANA have also sent an encouraging comment so we are three people on MPS who would miss you ! You are unique ~ special and very very precious in your own Community and as a Member of MPS "If you were gone ~ we would be depressed and lonely ~ and SAD that you had left". I just called to say I CARE ~ Yours BRIAN
June 29th, 2016 14:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh EEVA ~ I was sad when I read your poem. You are lovely and your poems are lovely and I am your Friend even though I am not registered as such. LYSISTRA and TROPICANA have also sent an encouraging comment so we are three people on MPS who would miss you ! You are unique ~ special and very very precious in your own Community and as a Member of MPS "If you were gone ~ we would be depressed and lonely ~ and SAD that you had left". I just called to say I CARE ~ Yours BRIAN
June 29th, 2016 14:15
Good vs. Evil
willyweed said:
nice poem, good flow and subject
enjoyed reading.
beware ye floret's of Eden
for thine heart and soul be frail
n'er eat the fruit found in the garden
beyond the serpents trail
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June 29th, 2016 13:15
willyweed said:
nice poem, good flow and subject
enjoyed reading.
beware ye floret's of Eden
for thine heart and soul be frail
n'er eat the fruit found in the garden
beyond the serpents trail
ww
June 29th, 2016 13:15
I Do Wonder
Tropicana said:
this is meaningful and relatable, I guess we have some work to do on our relationships ..
June 29th, 2016 12:57
Tropicana said:
this is meaningful and relatable, I guess we have some work to do on our relationships ..
June 29th, 2016 12:57
I Do Wonder
lysistrata said:
If you become a Mother, maybe you'd stop wondering...
Your child would need you.
My child needs me and keeps reminding that he needs me,and that gives me strength...
Thank you for your poem.
Everyone can relate to it.😃
June 29th, 2016 12:17
lysistrata said:
If you become a Mother, maybe you'd stop wondering...
Your child would need you.
My child needs me and keeps reminding that he needs me,and that gives me strength...
Thank you for your poem.
Everyone can relate to it.😃
June 29th, 2016 12:17
A Dead Tree
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks EEVA ~ I think that I shall never tree a thing as lovely as a TREE ! My fave is a weeping willow reflected in a a lake. Consequently for me A DEAD TREE is my worst nightmare. A well written poem ~ thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
June 26th, 2016 11:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks EEVA ~ I think that I shall never tree a thing as lovely as a TREE ! My fave is a weeping willow reflected in a a lake. Consequently for me A DEAD TREE is my worst nightmare. A well written poem ~ thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
June 26th, 2016 11:24
A Dead Tree
Dee said:
Hi Eeva,
I like the opening stanza here it gives great imagery of a dead tree to the reader and then your descripts in the second stanza are spot on. I love tree's and blessed to have a forest close by where I walk most days. I felt your emotional sadness all through to see a tree in such a state, and I am with you on this .. Well done a pleasure to read and review another who cares about our beautiful tree's...... .Dee
June 26th, 2016 08:13
Dee said:
Hi Eeva,
I like the opening stanza here it gives great imagery of a dead tree to the reader and then your descripts in the second stanza are spot on. I love tree's and blessed to have a forest close by where I walk most days. I felt your emotional sadness all through to see a tree in such a state, and I am with you on this .. Well done a pleasure to read and review another who cares about our beautiful tree's...... .Dee
June 26th, 2016 08:13
Fake
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks EVA - I am who I am and you are who you are. I write from my heart and from my own experience ~ that is the best type of poetry. Lots of the poems on MPS are from the heart and experiential so we know they are not fake. Love your poem and its sentiments. Thanks for caring - Yours BRIAN
June 13th, 2016 09:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks EVA - I am who I am and you are who you are. I write from my heart and from my own experience ~ that is the best type of poetry. Lots of the poems on MPS are from the heart and experiential so we know they are not fake. Love your poem and its sentiments. Thanks for caring - Yours BRIAN
June 13th, 2016 09:58
Good vs. Evil
williammae said:
I like this read, the line between good and evil perhaps we all stagger like a drunk while walking it no matter how straight we try to remain.
June 13th, 2016 07:54
williammae said:
I like this read, the line between good and evil perhaps we all stagger like a drunk while walking it no matter how straight we try to remain.
June 13th, 2016 07:54
Home Sweet Home
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT POEM EVA - Love the sentiment of "Home Sweet Home". I find with Americans that thay are defined by their Home State ! Texans and Iowans are from different planets. Consequently Americans often end up back in their Home State - Home Sweet Home !" I guess the same is true of Canadians ? Well structured poem full of rhyme and rhythm - Thanks for carin' an' sharin'. Yiours BRIAN
June 9th, 2016 14:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT POEM EVA - Love the sentiment of "Home Sweet Home". I find with Americans that thay are defined by their Home State ! Texans and Iowans are from different planets. Consequently Americans often end up back in their Home State - Home Sweet Home !" I guess the same is true of Canadians ? Well structured poem full of rhyme and rhythm - Thanks for carin' an' sharin'. Yiours BRIAN
June 9th, 2016 14:06
Split Worlds
SheWasTheSun said:
I have never related to a poem so much! This was the essence of me in middle school and most of high school. I'm happy to say that for me, the worlds have begun to mesh beautifully, and I am happier than ever. I know this will happen for you in time.
You are an excellent writer!
June 8th, 2016 19:35
SheWasTheSun said:
I have never related to a poem so much! This was the essence of me in middle school and most of high school. I'm happy to say that for me, the worlds have begun to mesh beautifully, and I am happier than ever. I know this will happen for you in time.
You are an excellent writer!
June 8th, 2016 19:35
Split Worlds
Severus Alexander said:
There is a duality to human nature, which emerges in the face of challenging circumstances.
If you've ever heard of glass half-full, glass half-empty, while these are intrinsically different, it serves as a good metaphor..
Many people experience two or three different mindsets, when exposed to multiple environments.
It's a trait of adaptability, and enables us to react with versatility to a variety of situations.
Both are equally real, and while you do have a choice, there's still a third option: not choosing.
Nature strives for balance, and eventually is will sort itself out.
However, my personal recommendations would be to go with whichever choice bears the most merit to you, personally.
The obvious best-case scenario would be a long, healthy, happy life.
However, it is also worth noting that, whatever it takes to achieve happiness, this will probably be the longer of two roads, and that nothing worth doing is ever all that easy.
June 8th, 2016 13:44
Severus Alexander said:
There is a duality to human nature, which emerges in the face of challenging circumstances.
If you've ever heard of glass half-full, glass half-empty, while these are intrinsically different, it serves as a good metaphor..
Many people experience two or three different mindsets, when exposed to multiple environments.
It's a trait of adaptability, and enables us to react with versatility to a variety of situations.
Both are equally real, and while you do have a choice, there's still a third option: not choosing.
Nature strives for balance, and eventually is will sort itself out.
However, my personal recommendations would be to go with whichever choice bears the most merit to you, personally.
The obvious best-case scenario would be a long, healthy, happy life.
However, it is also worth noting that, whatever it takes to achieve happiness, this will probably be the longer of two roads, and that nothing worth doing is ever all that easy.
June 8th, 2016 13:44
Behind Glass
Severus Alexander said:
Lively, a touch melancholy...
I like this poem: it speaks from the heart.
June 8th, 2016 13:31
Severus Alexander said:
Lively, a touch melancholy...
I like this poem: it speaks from the heart.
June 8th, 2016 13:31
Let Me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing EVA - Lovely poem in structure "Let me - I'm not" repetition which reinforces the message "Let me have a Friend ~ I'm not shy ~ I want to live ~ Not to die !" Through life well meaning people - Parents - Siblings - Friends - Partners etc do try to suffocate us and keep us in the nest instead of letting us try our wings ! Every blessing for the future - Canada is a very big Country ! Yours BRIAN
June 7th, 2016 15:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing EVA - Lovely poem in structure "Let me - I'm not" repetition which reinforces the message "Let me have a Friend ~ I'm not shy ~ I want to live ~ Not to die !" Through life well meaning people - Parents - Siblings - Friends - Partners etc do try to suffocate us and keep us in the nest instead of letting us try our wings ! Every blessing for the future - Canada is a very big Country ! Yours BRIAN
June 7th, 2016 15:50
Behind Glass
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME EEVA - LOVE YOUR FIRST POEM. It strikes a chord - to some extent we all live our lives (from time to time) behind glass. Often I feel a bit like a tropical fish. Freedom to swim up and down and round and round in my tank - BUT - I'm behind glass ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 7th, 2016 16:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME EEVA - LOVE YOUR FIRST POEM. It strikes a chord - to some extent we all live our lives (from time to time) behind glass. Often I feel a bit like a tropical fish. Freedom to swim up and down and round and round in my tank - BUT - I'm behind glass ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 7th, 2016 16:15
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