Comments received on poems by Thornspell.Mick



Addicted to escape
sorenbarrett said:

When the world is that bad that one needs to numb oneself one knows that one must watch what one does. Substances like sleep itself only postpones what is there. Well done

October 21st, 2026 12:34

The pain of love
arqios said:

To be loved back is meant to be the normal standard. Hope it gets better 🙏🏻🕊️

October 17th, 2026 08:44

Unwanted hunger
sorenbarrett said:

Damn shame that the modern world puts pressure on one to have a certain body form, suppresses opportunity for exercise, offers tainted foods and water, disrupts sleep patterns and increases chronic anxieties. Sure appetite will be affected. Good write

October 17th, 2026 07:52

Hurtful Disdain
sorenbarrett said:

Betrayal in a poem that speaks now of the damage it has done to them. Well written it can be felt in the poem. Nicely worded

October 14th, 2026 04:40

Hurtful Disdain
Paul Bell said:

Love, should come with a health warning.
Score her name out and move on.
Girls are like buses, they come in threes.

October 14th, 2026 03:54

The pain of love
sandyyyyyyana said:

this is just so good and powering and should be heard

October 8th, 2026 10:50

The pain of love
sorenbarrett said:

A lack of trust voiced in this write of betrayal

October 8th, 2026 09:41

the thought that stayed
sorenbarrett said:

I hear the pain of fear and guilt that won\'t give one peace in this piece. Nicely done

September 22nd, 2026 03:55

please let me sleep
Jamiano said:

Robert Frost said that before one rests, one must will the mind to dream.This has helped me. May you be safe when rest. Thank you for sharing.

September 14th, 2026 14:05

please let me sleep
sorenbarrett said:

Fear one of the great motivators and so common. Nicely written

September 14th, 2026 12:16

My mind won\'t let me rest
sorenbarrett said:

Overthinking can be a difficult obstacle to overcome. Nicely written.

September 13th, 2026 15:52

The need for love
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of desired love and affection. Nicely written as a plea for closeness. Well done

September 12th, 2026 11:10

I wasn\'t looking
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write that sparks feeling and memories. Nicely done

August 31st, 2026 10:24

I don\'t know how to trust anymore
sorenbarrett said:

Trust such a difficult thing to acquire after being let down. Well written

August 30th, 2026 14:37