Comments received on poems by camille
Angel slut.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CAMILLE for a very interesting erotic poem ! There are Light and Dark Angels depending which Spiritual Dimension they emanate from ! Angel Slut ~ Poicon Ivy to a passer by. Her victims (like most weak Men) are more than willing ! Fierce coupling the lioness retreats ~ The Angel Slut is satiated. I didn't realise a Human could satiate an AngeL perhaps she self pleasured. ? I will have to consult my mentor Sylvia Browne ! Thanks for sharing ~ much thought for food. Please check my Angel Poem and my Fusion Poem ~ DO YOU BELIEVE IN ANGELS ? Yours ~ BRIAN
September 19th, 2016 18:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CAMILLE for a very interesting erotic poem ! There are Light and Dark Angels depending which Spiritual Dimension they emanate from ! Angel Slut ~ Poicon Ivy to a passer by. Her victims (like most weak Men) are more than willing ! Fierce coupling the lioness retreats ~ The Angel Slut is satiated. I didn't realise a Human could satiate an AngeL perhaps she self pleasured. ? I will have to consult my mentor Sylvia Browne ! Thanks for sharing ~ much thought for food. Please check my Angel Poem and my Fusion Poem ~ DO YOU BELIEVE IN ANGELS ? Yours ~ BRIAN
September 19th, 2016 18:06
Fading.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you CAMILLE for another well structured poem. You are an excellent and inspiring poet ~ BRIAN.
September 15th, 2016 17:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you CAMILLE for another well structured poem. You are an excellent and inspiring poet ~ BRIAN.
September 15th, 2016 17:35
The invitation.
Emile Dubois said:
Got to have Gaia now.
If mother earth was ever incarnated I'm sure this is how she'd appear, the sweet vision of a flower opening to the world, giving herself completely without fear, guilt or trepidation. The bees gather her nectar under a cloak of darkness, the light emitting from within, she yields to everything making men weak in her presence, she is a goddess in waiting, her beauty is her openness. Heart stopping eroticism yet juxtaposed with pure innocence.
September 14th, 2016 11:27
Emile Dubois said:
Got to have Gaia now.
If mother earth was ever incarnated I'm sure this is how she'd appear, the sweet vision of a flower opening to the world, giving herself completely without fear, guilt or trepidation. The bees gather her nectar under a cloak of darkness, the light emitting from within, she yields to everything making men weak in her presence, she is a goddess in waiting, her beauty is her openness. Heart stopping eroticism yet juxtaposed with pure innocence.
September 14th, 2016 11:27
The invitation.
Augustus said:
"Continent to explore". This must be about Christopher Columbus or Marco Polo. Right?
Just teasing. Marked as a favorite.
September 13th, 2016 16:15
Augustus said:
"Continent to explore". This must be about Christopher Columbus or Marco Polo. Right?
Just teasing. Marked as a favorite.
September 13th, 2016 16:15
The invitation.
camille said:
thank you .. I appreciate your comments .. As for Brian.. Was a genuine response to what was , after all an erotic and suggestive poem xx
September 13th, 2016 09:48
camille said:
thank you .. I appreciate your comments .. As for Brian.. Was a genuine response to what was , after all an erotic and suggestive poem xx
September 13th, 2016 09:48
The invitation.
lysistrata said:
Camille,
I know that when you publish a Poem,you have spend time and have paid Attention to detail...and you are one of the few that I enjoy reading...and Brian is a J...k with his comment,but you are polite...😉
September 13th, 2016 09:34
lysistrata said:
Camille,
I know that when you publish a Poem,you have spend time and have paid Attention to detail...and you are one of the few that I enjoy reading...and Brian is a J...k with his comment,but you are polite...😉
September 13th, 2016 09:34
The invitation.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
This is beautiful CAMILLE and of itself ~ libido raising ~ Thank you for caring and sharing. As always a beautifully crafted poem with an equally sensuous message. Making Love is always a journey and you describe it perfectly ! The perfection and sensuality of the female form ~ inside and out ~ the touch the kisses ........... "My body a continent ripe for exploration" ~ I love that. My freedom is his aphrodisiac ~ I sigh ~ our journey is just beginning ~ so so erotic. I love making love to a sensually mature woman ~ so slow ~ so so deep ~ so so so satisfying a Journey which involves all our senses ! I love you Camille ~ BRIAN XOX
September 13th, 2016 07:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
This is beautiful CAMILLE and of itself ~ libido raising ~ Thank you for caring and sharing. As always a beautifully crafted poem with an equally sensuous message. Making Love is always a journey and you describe it perfectly ! The perfection and sensuality of the female form ~ inside and out ~ the touch the kisses ........... "My body a continent ripe for exploration" ~ I love that. My freedom is his aphrodisiac ~ I sigh ~ our journey is just beginning ~ so so erotic. I love making love to a sensually mature woman ~ so slow ~ so so deep ~ so so so satisfying a Journey which involves all our senses ! I love you Camille ~ BRIAN XOX
September 13th, 2016 07:56
Release.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh CAMILLE ~ My heart aches with you ~ my heart aches for you. My prayer is always ~ That the water WILL be dredged and set free ~ that you WILL lie dreaming on the riverbank (love that image of you !) ~ you fears WILL drift away ~ your soul WILL be set free and your river WILL swell to an ocean ! I saw some hope in this last stanza ~ BUT ~ the rest was despair ! I'll be your Horse ~ Spade ~ Owner ~ Glove and pray for your RELEASE 24/7. My latest poem is HAPPINESS ~ please check it may help to lift your Spirits ~ you are too young and full of life to be restrained ~ please please press the release button NOW ! Yours with bear hugs ~ BRIAN
September 1st, 2016 04:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh CAMILLE ~ My heart aches with you ~ my heart aches for you. My prayer is always ~ That the water WILL be dredged and set free ~ that you WILL lie dreaming on the riverbank (love that image of you !) ~ you fears WILL drift away ~ your soul WILL be set free and your river WILL swell to an ocean ! I saw some hope in this last stanza ~ BUT ~ the rest was despair ! I'll be your Horse ~ Spade ~ Owner ~ Glove and pray for your RELEASE 24/7. My latest poem is HAPPINESS ~ please check it may help to lift your Spirits ~ you are too young and full of life to be restrained ~ please please press the release button NOW ! Yours with bear hugs ~ BRIAN
September 1st, 2016 04:22
I\'m here.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES CAMILLE ~ I do see love ~ behind you sad and beautiful eyes and beneath your silky skin ! Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN
August 31st, 2016 08:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES CAMILLE ~ I do see love ~ behind you sad and beautiful eyes and beneath your silky skin ! Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN
August 31st, 2016 08:26
Fairground
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CAMILLE your poem is a thrilling roundabout ~ challenging. I'd love to ride with you Cam ~ up up and up ~ Loving you is a challenge but a rewarding one ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love BRIAN Please check my latest poem LIGHT A CANDLE ~ Thanks.
August 30th, 2016 13:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CAMILLE your poem is a thrilling roundabout ~ challenging. I'd love to ride with you Cam ~ up up and up ~ Loving you is a challenge but a rewarding one ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love BRIAN Please check my latest poem LIGHT A CANDLE ~ Thanks.
August 30th, 2016 13:30
The edge....
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love your poems CAMILLE they always contain a challenge. I have never OD'd (I've been close !) but I have friends who did. Some died for some it was just a cri de coeur and (thankfully) they survived. One I found (extended Family) dialed 999 and he is still alive. He thanked me and has turned his life round ! You describe so graphically the sensation of hovering between life and death and the salvation of 999 and release from DEATH back to LIFE again. To DIE or not to DIE ? To LIVE or not to LIVE ? That really is the QUESTION. Thanks for sharing so so graphically ~ Yours BRIAN
August 20th, 2016 11:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love your poems CAMILLE they always contain a challenge. I have never OD'd (I've been close !) but I have friends who did. Some died for some it was just a cri de coeur and (thankfully) they survived. One I found (extended Family) dialed 999 and he is still alive. He thanked me and has turned his life round ! You describe so graphically the sensation of hovering between life and death and the salvation of 999 and release from DEATH back to LIFE again. To DIE or not to DIE ? To LIVE or not to LIVE ? That really is the QUESTION. Thanks for sharing so so graphically ~ Yours BRIAN
August 20th, 2016 11:24
Hollow lives.
daniel dawes said:
Really enjoyed it and good use of words to capture the mind of the reader. Thanks for sharing.
August 18th, 2016 08:39
daniel dawes said:
Really enjoyed it and good use of words to capture the mind of the reader. Thanks for sharing.
August 18th, 2016 08:39
Hollow lives.
Tony36 said:
Thank you for bringing to light this dark spot of society. May it come to end some day
August 18th, 2016 08:16
Tony36 said:
Thank you for bringing to light this dark spot of society. May it come to end some day
August 18th, 2016 08:16
Hollow lives.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring CAMILLE and it is repeated millions of times over. Not just in the "so called" Third World but increasingly in the UK and the US. I've never been hungry or homeless and I am single with no kids (that i know of !). The least i can do is to contribute to the local FOOD BANK ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
August 18th, 2016 06:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring CAMILLE and it is repeated millions of times over. Not just in the "so called" Third World but increasingly in the UK and the US. I've never been hungry or homeless and I am single with no kids (that i know of !). The least i can do is to contribute to the local FOOD BANK ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
August 18th, 2016 06:46
Changing of the old guard.
camille said:
That's amazing you think so .. Thank you for reading.
August 17th, 2016 10:34
camille said:
That's amazing you think so .. Thank you for reading.
August 17th, 2016 10:34
Changing of the old guard.
rrodriguez said:
This is how I see the political scene today and for any years, too. Your poem carries a strong message for many to read.
August 17th, 2016 10:17
rrodriguez said:
This is how I see the political scene today and for any years, too. Your poem carries a strong message for many to read.
August 17th, 2016 10:17
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