Comments received on poems by camille
Father.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing CAMILLE ~ a very challenging poem. When we are growing up sometimes the ambitions and control of our parents can be quite controlling and stifling. Even causing our true gifts and ambition to be stiffed. Today in the UK (due to high rents and house prices) young people are having to live at home longer ~ even when they have been liberated (to be themselves) at University. Carpe Diem ~ spread your wings and BE FREE ! Your friend BRIAN
July 16th, 2016 15:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing CAMILLE ~ a very challenging poem. When we are growing up sometimes the ambitions and control of our parents can be quite controlling and stifling. Even causing our true gifts and ambition to be stiffed. Today in the UK (due to high rents and house prices) young people are having to live at home longer ~ even when they have been liberated (to be themselves) at University. Carpe Diem ~ spread your wings and BE FREE ! Your friend BRIAN
July 16th, 2016 15:19
Demon suitor.
camille said:
It was a bit different to my usual style but I'm pleased you liked it .\\ thank you 😊
July 14th, 2016 14:43
camille said:
It was a bit different to my usual style but I'm pleased you liked it .\\ thank you 😊
July 14th, 2016 14:43
If I could...
lysistrata said:
One of your best.One day I hope you'd add photos etc and create an e - book. I'd definately download it,my friend.
July 13th, 2016 15:46
lysistrata said:
One of your best.One day I hope you'd add photos etc and create an e - book. I'd definately download it,my friend.
July 13th, 2016 15:46
Silent scream.
willyweed said:
It looks like Brian has said it all'
it is a sad and mad world we live in
but there is always hope so dream the good dream. WW
July 13th, 2016 11:37
willyweed said:
It looks like Brian has said it all'
it is a sad and mad world we live in
but there is always hope so dream the good dream. WW
July 13th, 2016 11:37
Silent scream.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CAMILLE ~ As always a beautifully presented poem. Neat quatrains and a consistent xaxa xbxb rhyming pattern which gives it great flow and rhythm. However the elegance of the structure is overshadowed by the stark truth of the message. Even sadder still it is so so true. We live on a divided and shattered Planet seething with political ~ economic ~ racial and ritual tension. "The horror of mankind laid bare # My madness ~ my sadness ~ my desolation # My fading fabric of care. However my feeling is that by being an encourager ~ I can make a difference ~ and if I pray about the inhumanity of Man to Man ~ I can be even more effective. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN.
July 13th, 2016 10:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CAMILLE ~ As always a beautifully presented poem. Neat quatrains and a consistent xaxa xbxb rhyming pattern which gives it great flow and rhythm. However the elegance of the structure is overshadowed by the stark truth of the message. Even sadder still it is so so true. We live on a divided and shattered Planet seething with political ~ economic ~ racial and ritual tension. "The horror of mankind laid bare # My madness ~ my sadness ~ my desolation # My fading fabric of care. However my feeling is that by being an encourager ~ I can make a difference ~ and if I pray about the inhumanity of Man to Man ~ I can be even more effective. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN.
July 13th, 2016 10:37
Lonely road.
willyweed said:
depression is a killer. I hope there is not to much truth for yourself in this write. It's very well expressed and written. ww
July 11th, 2016 12:13
willyweed said:
depression is a killer. I hope there is not to much truth for yourself in this write. It's very well expressed and written. ww
July 11th, 2016 12:13
If I could...
Skye Marlene said:
Your poem is absolutely beautiful. I can relate and invision it so well in my mind. Its truly a wounderful poem.
July 10th, 2016 16:14
Skye Marlene said:
Your poem is absolutely beautiful. I can relate and invision it so well in my mind. Its truly a wounderful poem.
July 10th, 2016 16:14
The soul thief.
Daniel said:
Fantastic poem, I loved the line " It is greed, it is control it is a relentless machine" I loved reading it
July 8th, 2016 00:14
Daniel said:
Fantastic poem, I loved the line " It is greed, it is control it is a relentless machine" I loved reading it
July 8th, 2016 00:14
Tears by moonlight.
lysistrata said:
You nailed this warm beating tired heart... then you moved to the soul...And I am curious what's next?
Or better which part comes next?!
July 7th, 2016 15:50
lysistrata said:
You nailed this warm beating tired heart... then you moved to the soul...And I am curious what's next?
Or better which part comes next?!
July 7th, 2016 15:50
The soul thief.
camille said:
Exactly .. We must nurture our souls as they are essential to a fulfilling life
July 7th, 2016 09:52
camille said:
Exactly .. We must nurture our souls as they are essential to a fulfilling life
July 7th, 2016 09:52
The soul thief.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS CAMILLE ~ The Good Book says "What shall it profit a Man if he gains the whole World and loses his own Soul ~ or what shall a Man give in exchang for his Soul ?" When we cease to give heed to our inner Soul (conscience) we die spiritually and sell our Souls to the World ~ the Flesh ~ the Devil. I try to listen to mine its still beeping despite everything ! Thanks for caring BRIAN
July 7th, 2016 09:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS CAMILLE ~ The Good Book says "What shall it profit a Man if he gains the whole World and loses his own Soul ~ or what shall a Man give in exchang for his Soul ?" When we cease to give heed to our inner Soul (conscience) we die spiritually and sell our Souls to the World ~ the Flesh ~ the Devil. I try to listen to mine its still beeping despite everything ! Thanks for caring BRIAN
July 7th, 2016 09:50
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