Comments received on poems by camille
Stormy waters.
willyweed said:
this is good nice rhyme scheme and flow and it conveys hope which is a good thing. nice ww
August 15th, 2016 06:30
willyweed said:
this is good nice rhyme scheme and flow and it conveys hope which is a good thing. nice ww
August 15th, 2016 06:30
Drowning in me.
willyweed said:
This is good Camille! dark and mysterious good work. ww
August 1st, 2016 14:18
willyweed said:
This is good Camille! dark and mysterious good work. ww
August 1st, 2016 14:18
Drowning in me.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CAMILLE a very dramatic poem ~ A "Death worse than Fate" perhaps ? I can empathise ~ I almost drowned in a Lady once but fortunately I was wearing a life jacket so I swam free ! Yours swimmingly BRIAN
August 1st, 2016 10:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CAMILLE a very dramatic poem ~ A "Death worse than Fate" perhaps ? I can empathise ~ I almost drowned in a Lady once but fortunately I was wearing a life jacket so I swam free ! Yours swimmingly BRIAN
August 1st, 2016 10:43
Cold slumber.
avigail said:
the end is a new beginning. energy is here to stay:)
August 1st, 2016 10:05
avigail said:
the end is a new beginning. energy is here to stay:)
August 1st, 2016 10:05
Seeds of change.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing CAMILLE ! As we pass through life we pass through a series of chrysali and metamorphose into the next stage. We are reborn and if we grasp all the opportunities (and forget the past) our "rebirth" can be as sensational as the transition from caterpillar to butterfly ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my fun poem an ALIGATOR ~ BRIAN
July 30th, 2016 10:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing CAMILLE ! As we pass through life we pass through a series of chrysali and metamorphose into the next stage. We are reborn and if we grasp all the opportunities (and forget the past) our "rebirth" can be as sensational as the transition from caterpillar to butterfly ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my fun poem an ALIGATOR ~ BRIAN
July 30th, 2016 10:04
Cold slumber.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A very salutary poem CAMILLE ~ thanks for sharing. In today's generation we all hope to live to be 100 and stay active to the end. I value my mind and I hope when the end comes my mind is still functioning and I'm still writing poetry ! Thanka BRIAN
July 29th, 2016 12:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A very salutary poem CAMILLE ~ thanks for sharing. In today's generation we all hope to live to be 100 and stay active to the end. I value my mind and I hope when the end comes my mind is still functioning and I'm still writing poetry ! Thanka BRIAN
July 29th, 2016 12:04
Resting place.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL CAMILLE ~ A very important and genuine wish. I hope in 50 (or more) years time ~ your dream will come true ! In the UK we have rural & peaceful and burial places ! Yours BRIAN.
July 22nd, 2016 12:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL CAMILLE ~ A very important and genuine wish. I hope in 50 (or more) years time ~ your dream will come true ! In the UK we have rural & peaceful and burial places ! Yours BRIAN.
July 22nd, 2016 12:07
Hiding from the light.
willyweed said:
nice flow and serious rhyme.
good job Camille! ww
July 19th, 2016 19:42
willyweed said:
nice flow and serious rhyme.
good job Camille! ww
July 19th, 2016 19:42
Hiding from the light.
lysistrata said:
Camille,
Thamks for your comment about my Lullaby.I like both the structure & your language.
Just remember these wise words by Thoreau:
"Things do not change; we change."
July 19th, 2016 15:57
lysistrata said:
Camille,
Thamks for your comment about my Lullaby.I like both the structure & your language.
Just remember these wise words by Thoreau:
"Things do not change; we change."
July 19th, 2016 15:57
The voyage.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CAMILLE for another beautiful poem in both structure and subject. In today's hectic and scary World it is increasingly easy to wallow in a shallow stagnant pool. We all need to heed your call to vacate the pool and soar like a bird and be free ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yous BRIAN
July 18th, 2016 14:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CAMILLE for another beautiful poem in both structure and subject. In today's hectic and scary World it is increasingly easy to wallow in a shallow stagnant pool. We all need to heed your call to vacate the pool and soar like a bird and be free ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yous BRIAN
July 18th, 2016 14:44
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