Comments received on poems by camille
Unconnected.
Caring dove said:
loneliness can feel horrible and scary .. .. good piece of writing camile :-)
inside I am crying an ocean.\'\'
wow, so many tears, i can feel the overwhelming amount of pain within this write
March 15th, 2018 05:38
Caring dove said:
loneliness can feel horrible and scary .. .. good piece of writing camile :-)
inside I am crying an ocean.\'\'
wow, so many tears, i can feel the overwhelming amount of pain within this write
March 15th, 2018 05:38
Endurance.
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always endeavour to scale the mountain of our lives. Good write.
March 15th, 2018 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always endeavour to scale the mountain of our lives. Good write.
March 15th, 2018 01:19
The Enchanted Garden Of Solitude.
Lorna said:
We have to close out a lot of the world - not in a way that shows no caring - but to weed out what is important and what isn\'t.... so much of what comes at us is false! Gardens of the earth or words are wonderful places to go!
March 4th, 2018 07:26
Lorna said:
We have to close out a lot of the world - not in a way that shows no caring - but to weed out what is important and what isn\'t.... so much of what comes at us is false! Gardens of the earth or words are wonderful places to go!
March 4th, 2018 07:26
The Enchanted Garden Of Solitude.
Caring dove said:
great poem ) really lovely and so true...we all need to break away from the painful distractions in this world, time out to come back to ourselves
March 4th, 2018 04:42
Caring dove said:
great poem ) really lovely and so true...we all need to break away from the painful distractions in this world, time out to come back to ourselves
March 4th, 2018 04:42
The Enchanted Garden Of Solitude.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Silence is so wondrous and its impact can be so loud.
March 4th, 2018 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Silence is so wondrous and its impact can be so loud.
March 4th, 2018 01:28
The Temptress.
Carmine Branco said:
Mind blowing perfection. The build up is amazing and the apice is excellent. No premonition on what becomes the centre piece of the poem. Lustfull and pure at the same time. Rich with desire and passion. Worthy of the classics. I am in awe!
March 3rd, 2018 14:53
Carmine Branco said:
Mind blowing perfection. The build up is amazing and the apice is excellent. No premonition on what becomes the centre piece of the poem. Lustfull and pure at the same time. Rich with desire and passion. Worthy of the classics. I am in awe!
March 3rd, 2018 14:53
The Enchanted Garden Of Solitude.
Resa71 said:
Beautifully written truth!
I find , when things are going in the
Wrong direction in my life, I’m starting to lose it.
A day to myself, in my room is definitely the cure.
Gives you time to look at the things
That really matter.
Great poem!
Loved reading it :)
March 3rd, 2018 12:06
Resa71 said:
Beautifully written truth!
I find , when things are going in the
Wrong direction in my life, I’m starting to lose it.
A day to myself, in my room is definitely the cure.
Gives you time to look at the things
That really matter.
Great poem!
Loved reading it :)
March 3rd, 2018 12:06
The Enchanted Garden Of Solitude.
Laura🌻 said:
A brilliant write with a gem of a message, Camille!
I enjoyed the poem in its entirety...especially, the conclusion!
The strength is within us.
We are our own healers!
~Laura~
March 3rd, 2018 10:03
Laura🌻 said:
A brilliant write with a gem of a message, Camille!
I enjoyed the poem in its entirety...especially, the conclusion!
The strength is within us.
We are our own healers!
~Laura~
March 3rd, 2018 10:03
Destination nothingness
Caring dove said:
is the shining silvery iridescence the moon? i love how you have ended this piece on a very positive note !
i love your reference to the train , the caged animals , the prison and the leafless trees \'\' reaching out dead fingers as if to mock me \'\'
so much pain throughout this , so powerfully expressed but i love how you ended this with hope and a sense of light ! completely amazing .. i love your style of writing x
February 25th, 2018 14:38
Caring dove said:
is the shining silvery iridescence the moon? i love how you have ended this piece on a very positive note !
i love your reference to the train , the caged animals , the prison and the leafless trees \'\' reaching out dead fingers as if to mock me \'\'
so much pain throughout this , so powerfully expressed but i love how you ended this with hope and a sense of light ! completely amazing .. i love your style of writing x
February 25th, 2018 14:38
Lonely road.
Caring dove said:
hey camile, you expressed this so well . it is a very strong and powerful piece of writing .. depression is such a hard thing to deal with and it certainly can push our loved ones away from us ..
a bubbling pan , a black dog on your heel , a rolling current and a predator .. very strong ways to describe depression and its terrible effects
well done , so well expressed.. sorry if you are feeling this way , its not nice or fair
February 25th, 2018 14:31
Caring dove said:
hey camile, you expressed this so well . it is a very strong and powerful piece of writing .. depression is such a hard thing to deal with and it certainly can push our loved ones away from us ..
a bubbling pan , a black dog on your heel , a rolling current and a predator .. very strong ways to describe depression and its terrible effects
well done , so well expressed.. sorry if you are feeling this way , its not nice or fair
February 25th, 2018 14:31
Wake up world...
Caring dove said:
so well expressed ! and such a strong ending ! i love it ! i love the idea of the enemy and the bad people , the evil .. being like a bird pecking at the eyes feasting on the good . very clever x
February 25th, 2018 14:26
Caring dove said:
so well expressed ! and such a strong ending ! i love it ! i love the idea of the enemy and the bad people , the evil .. being like a bird pecking at the eyes feasting on the good . very clever x
February 25th, 2018 14:26
Pilgrimage of despair.
Caring dove said:
such a powerful ending camile ..
For every flower in full bloom
As It basks in its exquisiteness
Awaits a curtain call of sepia edges
Giving way to browns and greys
Then black..\'\'
the slow decaying of a fully bloomed and alive flower losing its colours and turning to black .. i love how you have brought in the idea of a flower
a seemingly well thought out and clever poem
February 25th, 2018 14:12
Caring dove said:
such a powerful ending camile ..
For every flower in full bloom
As It basks in its exquisiteness
Awaits a curtain call of sepia edges
Giving way to browns and greys
Then black..\'\'
the slow decaying of a fully bloomed and alive flower losing its colours and turning to black .. i love how you have brought in the idea of a flower
a seemingly well thought out and clever poem
February 25th, 2018 14:12
Encounter.
Caring dove said:
such a great piece of writing ... these lines really stood out for me ..
\'\'As with all ailments we seek to find a cure.
A way of negotiating this ugly world in which we find ourselves.
A protection..a talisman from the horror that surrounds us.
So hope is born...\'\'
powerful lines camile ! without hope , any hope at all , we find ourselves sinking even further down and i know because i have been in places with no hope and its agonising to feel no hope , to see no way out , to see no future ..
a truly enjoyable piece of writing ..
February 25th, 2018 14:04
Caring dove said:
such a great piece of writing ... these lines really stood out for me ..
\'\'As with all ailments we seek to find a cure.
A way of negotiating this ugly world in which we find ourselves.
A protection..a talisman from the horror that surrounds us.
So hope is born...\'\'
powerful lines camile ! without hope , any hope at all , we find ourselves sinking even further down and i know because i have been in places with no hope and its agonising to feel no hope , to see no way out , to see no future ..
a truly enjoyable piece of writing ..
February 25th, 2018 14:04
The Awakening.
camille said:
Thank you Tony. You always take the time to read my work.
December 4th, 2017 19:56
camille said:
Thank you Tony. You always take the time to read my work.
December 4th, 2017 19:56
The Awakening.
camille said:
“ a moments sunlight fading in the grass”.. so aptly beautiful... C x
December 4th, 2017 05:05
camille said:
“ a moments sunlight fading in the grass”.. so aptly beautiful... C x
December 4th, 2017 05:05
The Awakening.
Emile Dubois said:
Great job..in its simplicity, it\'s only about taming the mind and allowing the soul to be, yet the world does not allow one to stand and ponder this realisation. In the words of the song, \'We are but a moment\'s sunlight. Fading in the grass\'
December 4th, 2017 04:58
Emile Dubois said:
Great job..in its simplicity, it\'s only about taming the mind and allowing the soul to be, yet the world does not allow one to stand and ponder this realisation. In the words of the song, \'We are but a moment\'s sunlight. Fading in the grass\'
December 4th, 2017 04:58
Shadowlands.
WL Schuett said:
I like this poem a lot , loved the humor in it
November 14th, 2017 14:20
WL Schuett said:
I like this poem a lot , loved the humor in it
November 14th, 2017 14:20
Burial Of The Self.
burning-embers said:
Very sad write but so well written and with mystery too.... As pets we are already on the road less travelled
August 19th, 2017 22:32
burning-embers said:
Very sad write but so well written and with mystery too.... As pets we are already on the road less travelled
August 19th, 2017 22:32
Burial Of The Self.
Emile Dubois said:
And yet ones life is often overshadowed by the limitations one sets oneself..compare yourself to nobody, live in nobody\'s shadow...the path to individuation maybe rocky but the arrival compares to nothing or no one in this world..for you are unique.
Beautiful write x
August 19th, 2017 15:59
Emile Dubois said:
And yet ones life is often overshadowed by the limitations one sets oneself..compare yourself to nobody, live in nobody\'s shadow...the path to individuation maybe rocky but the arrival compares to nothing or no one in this world..for you are unique.
Beautiful write x
August 19th, 2017 15:59
Pilgrimage of despair.
kevin browne said:
you have captured the imagination well. I love it camille x
June 18th, 2017 09:19
kevin browne said:
you have captured the imagination well. I love it camille x
June 18th, 2017 09:19
The reunion.
Louis Gibbs said:
Kudos on this deep expression of self in an interesting poetic form, Camille!
June 16th, 2017 10:27
Louis Gibbs said:
Kudos on this deep expression of self in an interesting poetic form, Camille!
June 16th, 2017 10:27
Lost in a dream.
swingline said:
Must step out into the light of hope now to grow .
June 15th, 2017 08:49
swingline said:
Must step out into the light of hope now to grow .
June 15th, 2017 08:49
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