Comments received on poems by camille



Love Is Jagged.
Unsub said:

Camille,

oh yes! Poetically sublime!

Unsub.

November 24th, 2019 15:27

La Petit Morte.
Neville said:

deliciously underdone but decidedly well writ and thoroughly enjoyed....

Neville

September 19th, 2019 10:38

My Forgotten Life.
Neville said:

a well constructed and powerful argument against some of the more arcane and barbaric practices that continue to be practiced in the name of gastronomy... Neville

June 17th, 2019 11:14

My Forgotten Life.
dusk arising said:

Very powerful writing. Enough to make every reader thoughful about what they are consuming.
Thoughts of veal calf and cruel production of pate de fois immediately spring to mind but. How many unseen malpractices are the day to day manufacturing and processing of our killer appetite for animal parts concealing.
Very very disturbing and thought provoking.
You have done your job very well in presenting this so powerfully.

June 17th, 2019 10:00

Breath Of A Soul.
Goldfinch60 said:

WE come from the Spirit and return top the Spirit after our brief life on earth. The Spirit is always with us.

May 7th, 2019 00:25

Breath Of A Soul.
Fay Slimm. said:

These reflections on birth and death are written in clear and understandable language and draw attention by the well described comparison of the first and last breath. A thoughtful write Camille.

May 6th, 2019 10:56

Beneath The Rowan Tree.
Goldfinch60 said:

Enlightened indeed in your words.

March 17th, 2019 01:45

Beneath The Rowan Tree.
Nicholas Browning said:

I got the image of a biology professor attending a hippie festival.

March 16th, 2019 14:42

This Mortal Life.
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes we will all be joined with the Spirit that runs through us all.

November 9th, 2018 01:38

Archives.
Crystal Hope said:

wow
so incredibly written.

August 13th, 2018 12:13

La Petit Morte.
orchidee said:

Ooh what they up to here? Tell that voyeur to put those binoculars away! heehee.

July 27th, 2018 02:54

La Petit Morte.
JasmineUK said:

Taken swiftly to an irresistible plane,
A personal obsession to never wane. 😆😆😆

July 26th, 2018 15:37

The Orgasm.
Carmine Branco said:

What a crescendo! You can feel the pleasure building and the reader awaits the release. Very good.

June 20th, 2018 06:20

Let It Go.
Lorna said:

The elements of nature stand beside me...my foot soldiers, guardians.
A reminder that I am not alone... you are echoing some lessons I have learned myself...... I just love this one Camille.........

June 7th, 2018 06:27

Beyond My World.
Michael Edwards said:

Great shortie Camille.

June 5th, 2018 01:03

Beyond My World.
Goldfinch60 said:

Super emotive write.

June 5th, 2018 00:23

Beyond My World.
FineB said:

A beautiful poem. Camille.

Sad and poignant too.

Keep writing
FineB

June 4th, 2018 15:29

Beyond My World.
Lorna said:

So sad and such a perfect little poem..........

June 4th, 2018 07:26

Footsteps.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI CAMILLE ~ Thanks for a very elegantly written & presented \"free verse\" poem ! It ripples with rhythm ~ which makes it a delight to read & recite ~ hallmarks of a \"good poem\". The content is captivating & deja vu ~ In our dreams we often digrees back to our childhood and \"nakedness\" is a sign of vulnerability. In my experience such a dream is cathartic ! Yours speaks of childhood oppression and your consequent liberation when you realise the significance of the DREAM ~ You finally become released from a painful past which has haunted your sub-conscious mind. \"MY HOME SHALL BE WITHOUT WALLS AND ENDLESS AS THE OCEAN BEFORE ME\" ~ A perfect ending ~ Thanks for sharing ~ yours BRIAN Please check my OCTOPUS POEM ~ thanks B !

May 23rd, 2018 13:12

Unshackled.
dusk arising said:

This is quite beautiful. I share this vision of lifes journey and respect for fellow travellers we encounter along the way.
Youve really captured my feelings here and this has to go into my favourites.
Truly excellent.

May 12th, 2018 09:11

Unshackled.
Lorna said:

I love the freedom message in this poem C......

May 12th, 2018 05:37

999.
Goldfinch60 said:

That bell may toll but it can be silenced with love.

March 17th, 2018 01:16

The Temptress.
marlenawood said:

Wow very intense an beautiful

March 16th, 2018 09:49

999.
marlenawood said:

Not ever dear! I enjoyed this throughly ❤️

March 16th, 2018 08:05

999.
RiverJordan said:

Hope you didn\'t really crash!

March 16th, 2018 04:53

999.
RiverJordan said:

Love till\' the end!

March 16th, 2018 04:52

Unconnected.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very sad emotive write, I do hope that the anguish disappears and you come out from your loneliness, writing can help with this as you can lose yourself in the words.

March 16th, 2018 01:23

Unconnected.
camille said:

Thanks so much for your comments C x

March 15th, 2018 06:03

Unconnected.
Lorna said:

I have felt like this and it is indeed frightening....... I\'ve walked alone in a deep forest also and nothing makes you feel more alone than that .... so the picture is perfect for the feeling......

March 15th, 2018 05:39

Unconnected.
camille said:

Thank you for reading. C x

March 15th, 2018 05:39

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