Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Unwanted
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts of 99.9% of people will agree with these words, unfortunately the 0.01% in our word will not listen and they are the troublemakers.
March 24th, 2017 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts of 99.9% of people will agree with these words, unfortunately the 0.01% in our word will not listen and they are the troublemakers.
March 24th, 2017 01:23
A Promenade by the Trent
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I often write about My River and mine is The Avon in Evesham. I compare My River to My Spirit as being the same or at the least interchangeable.
March 22nd, 2017 11:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I often write about My River and mine is The Avon in Evesham. I compare My River to My Spirit as being the same or at the least interchangeable.
March 22nd, 2017 11:51
Weather Dictates
PoeticSisi0705 said:
Yes i dont like rain and cant go nowhere wen it does. Lol i love this poem
March 21st, 2017 09:35
PoeticSisi0705 said:
Yes i dont like rain and cant go nowhere wen it does. Lol i love this poem
March 21st, 2017 09:35
Three in a Beer Garden
willyweed said:
here here I\'ll drink to that...er this!
good poem
March 13th, 2017 14:14
willyweed said:
here here I\'ll drink to that...er this!
good poem
March 13th, 2017 14:14
Three in a Beer Garden
Michael Edwards said:
Brill - and now time for another round?
March 13th, 2017 13:56
Michael Edwards said:
Brill - and now time for another round?
March 13th, 2017 13:56
Three in a Beer Garden
Dakotah Lavender said:
Very short and sweet, nice work!
March 13th, 2017 13:02
Dakotah Lavender said:
Very short and sweet, nice work!
March 13th, 2017 13:02
Down the Strait and Narrow in Spring (written in Lincoln)
Augustus said:
I read that about the Magna Carta. Only 4 copies of the original and one there in Lincoln. We don\'t have any cobble stone streets in the USA. I love the looks, but pity the guy in a wheelchair. Nicely done.
March 11th, 2017 16:27
Augustus said:
I read that about the Magna Carta. Only 4 copies of the original and one there in Lincoln. We don\'t have any cobble stone streets in the USA. I love the looks, but pity the guy in a wheelchair. Nicely done.
March 11th, 2017 16:27
Down the Strait and Narrow in Spring (written in Lincoln)
Tony36 said:
Great write
March 11th, 2017 08:16
Tony36 said:
Great write
March 11th, 2017 08:16
Up the Strait and Narrow in Spring (written in Lincoln)
Augustus said:
Unlike Cities in the USA those of England have histories of thousands of years. Is the uphill crowd still the wealthy? Sounds like an enjoyable visit. Great write.
March 10th, 2017 13:44
Augustus said:
Unlike Cities in the USA those of England have histories of thousands of years. Is the uphill crowd still the wealthy? Sounds like an enjoyable visit. Great write.
March 10th, 2017 13:44
Up the Strait and Narrow in Spring (written in Lincoln)
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
March 10th, 2017 10:08
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
March 10th, 2017 10:08
Up the Strait and Narrow in Spring (written in Lincoln)
willyweed said:
what goes up must come down I hate a good hangover! nice work. WW
March 10th, 2017 10:04
willyweed said:
what goes up must come down I hate a good hangover! nice work. WW
March 10th, 2017 10:04
(“Forget Me Notts”) Leaving on a Steel Worm
willyweed said:
well thought out with good flow and structure a well done poem indeed! ww
July 8th, 2016 15:45
willyweed said:
well thought out with good flow and structure a well done poem indeed! ww
July 8th, 2016 15:45
To… (written on a train to Nottingham)
lysistrata said:
To Tony,To Las Palmas
To Crete,To my Brother
To M.Olympus,for a night
To Cyclades,for a wedding party
To Pink Martini
To Steve Aoki
To Patti Smith
To Imam Baildi..
Thank you, Great Idea & Rhythm..
Enjoy your Brexit summer?!
July 5th, 2016 16:07
lysistrata said:
To Tony,To Las Palmas
To Crete,To my Brother
To M.Olympus,for a night
To Cyclades,for a wedding party
To Pink Martini
To Steve Aoki
To Patti Smith
To Imam Baildi..
Thank you, Great Idea & Rhythm..
Enjoy your Brexit summer?!
July 5th, 2016 16:07
To… (written on a train to Nottingham)
Tony36 said:
Great write, really enjoyed reading it
July 5th, 2016 11:24
Tony36 said:
Great write, really enjoyed reading it
July 5th, 2016 11:24
To… (written on a train to Nottingham)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AUBURN ~Wonderful first poem ~ great rhythm. As I read it I was on the train with you to Nottingham a great City ! Great rhyme pattern (in most verses) abab cdcd etc ~ which added to the rhythm. Great choice of words many of them train journey related (observe ~ swerve ~ slow ~ haste ~ station ~ eat ~ drink ~ travel etc). The train really was your muse in rhyme ~ rhythm ~ vocabulary etc. I love this poem ~ Thanks for sharing ~ more please. BRIAN
July 5th, 2016 10:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AUBURN ~Wonderful first poem ~ great rhythm. As I read it I was on the train with you to Nottingham a great City ! Great rhyme pattern (in most verses) abab cdcd etc ~ which added to the rhythm. Great choice of words many of them train journey related (observe ~ swerve ~ slow ~ haste ~ station ~ eat ~ drink ~ travel etc). The train really was your muse in rhyme ~ rhythm ~ vocabulary etc. I love this poem ~ Thanks for sharing ~ more please. BRIAN
July 5th, 2016 10:44
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