Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Centurion
Brimelow said:
Delightful! Love a tightly structured poem with meaning, and this definitely fits the bill. Thanks for sharing.
March 18th, 2021 17:25
Brimelow said:
Delightful! Love a tightly structured poem with meaning, and this definitely fits the bill. Thanks for sharing.
March 18th, 2021 17:25
Centurion
L. B. Mek said:
\'thus, please; continue to play, but do not be caught,
have it in your mind, that at least you have fought,
fought for your right, to wear an enduring smile,
to have loved, and been loved; for a little while.”..
Brilliant!
happy hundredth dear poet! 🍾🥂🙌
March 18th, 2021 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'thus, please; continue to play, but do not be caught,
have it in your mind, that at least you have fought,
fought for your right, to wear an enduring smile,
to have loved, and been loved; for a little while.”..
Brilliant!
happy hundredth dear poet! 🍾🥂🙌
March 18th, 2021 05:25
Centurion
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with reasons for retaining our inner-child this well-rhymed write made me shine up my armour and stand a bit taller - many thanks Ben for sharing the benefits from Centurion action.
March 18th, 2021 03:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with reasons for retaining our inner-child this well-rhymed write made me shine up my armour and stand a bit taller - many thanks Ben for sharing the benefits from Centurion action.
March 18th, 2021 03:53
Centurion
Goldfinch60 said:
Strength instilled into children will help to show them the right way in their lives.
Andy
March 18th, 2021 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Strength instilled into children will help to show them the right way in their lives.
Andy
March 18th, 2021 01:34
Peepers
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t hesitate Auburn S - the relief (albeit temporary) from irritation and soreness makes even the repetitive nature of the exercise worthwhile.
Take care, of both yourself and those eyes....
March 17th, 2021 18:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t hesitate Auburn S - the relief (albeit temporary) from irritation and soreness makes even the repetitive nature of the exercise worthwhile.
Take care, of both yourself and those eyes....
March 17th, 2021 18:00
Peepers
Doggerel Dave said:
Drops every couple of hours...heavier grade oil at night..wish I could weep for the world\'s sorrows - but I can\'t.
You have that one covered - Thanks.
March 13th, 2021 19:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Drops every couple of hours...heavier grade oil at night..wish I could weep for the world\'s sorrows - but I can\'t.
You have that one covered - Thanks.
March 13th, 2021 19:46
Peepers
L. B. Mek said:
a timely and important write, in my humble opinion
thank you for sharing dear poet
March 12th, 2021 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
a timely and important write, in my humble opinion
thank you for sharing dear poet
March 12th, 2021 05:54
Peepers
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, we must take care of \"them there eyes\". At my last eye test the optician told me that my eyes were in a better state than they were the previous year - that surprised me.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, we must take care of \"them there eyes\". At my last eye test the optician told me that my eyes were in a better state than they were the previous year - that surprised me.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 02:59
Studio (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful therapy is always there when going back to that place where you love to be.
Andy
March 6th, 2021 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful therapy is always there when going back to that place where you love to be.
Andy
March 6th, 2021 01:37
Studio (An Acrostic)
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, A.S. Studios are a wonderful place for sure.
March 5th, 2021 08:17
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, A.S. Studios are a wonderful place for sure.
March 5th, 2021 08:17
Studio (An Acrostic)
orchidee said:
Have to swoon at this at the end! lol. Me imaginary dog, Fido, won\'t let me have much \'excitement\'. heehee.
March 5th, 2021 06:35
orchidee said:
Have to swoon at this at the end! lol. Me imaginary dog, Fido, won\'t let me have much \'excitement\'. heehee.
March 5th, 2021 06:35
In Sleep, I Will Trust
Poetic Dan said:
I am so chuffed to read your words as they truly rung out and grounded me back to earth!
Fantastic work
March 3rd, 2021 16:04
Poetic Dan said:
I am so chuffed to read your words as they truly rung out and grounded me back to earth!
Fantastic work
March 3rd, 2021 16:04
In Sleep, I Will Trust
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, we can struggle with a regular sleep pattern but in my case I seem to have found a rhythm to my sleep and dream all day.😂
Andy
February 28th, 2021 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, we can struggle with a regular sleep pattern but in my case I seem to have found a rhythm to my sleep and dream all day.😂
Andy
February 28th, 2021 01:40
In Sleep, I Will Trust
dusk arising said:
As a reader whose body clock is malfunctioning through lockdown\'s lack of activity, I am with you all the way through this.
Falling asleep in a chair and unable to sleep in bed are situations i find myself in very often.....
..... oh for a return to normal... -... whatever that was.
February 27th, 2021 11:11
dusk arising said:
As a reader whose body clock is malfunctioning through lockdown\'s lack of activity, I am with you all the way through this.
Falling asleep in a chair and unable to sleep in bed are situations i find myself in very often.....
..... oh for a return to normal... -... whatever that was.
February 27th, 2021 11:11
In Sleep, I Will Trust
AlitaOpal said:
Sleep is something our body thanks us for,.. I really enjoyed reading.. 🌹
Fellow dreamer Alita
February 27th, 2021 10:14
AlitaOpal said:
Sleep is something our body thanks us for,.. I really enjoyed reading.. 🌹
Fellow dreamer Alita
February 27th, 2021 10:14
In Sleep, I Will Trust
orchidee said:
Good write Auburn.
If we nap too much in the day or evening, we may find we are wide awake when we go to bed. Doh!
February 27th, 2021 02:51
orchidee said:
Good write Auburn.
If we nap too much in the day or evening, we may find we are wide awake when we go to bed. Doh!
February 27th, 2021 02:51
Of Shoots and Man
L. B. Mek said:
some poetry transcends words and flow, it resides deep in those corridors we seldom prioritise, maybe a glimpsed sway of yellow petals - that tease Winter\'s ensuing surrender..
some will, look - hardly register and move busily along, while other\'s, like you dear Poet
will sing that moment a song, reminding us all: we too once took note of Nature\'s venerable majesty..
a brilliant and Important write!
thank you for sharing
February 16th, 2021 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
some poetry transcends words and flow, it resides deep in those corridors we seldom prioritise, maybe a glimpsed sway of yellow petals - that tease Winter\'s ensuing surrender..
some will, look - hardly register and move busily along, while other\'s, like you dear Poet
will sing that moment a song, reminding us all: we too once took note of Nature\'s venerable majesty..
a brilliant and Important write!
thank you for sharing
February 16th, 2021 06:04
Of Shoots and Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Ben, to make this world work we must work with each other and with Nature.
Andy
February 16th, 2021 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Ben, to make this world work we must work with each other and with Nature.
Andy
February 16th, 2021 02:23
Of Shoots and Man
dusk arising said:
Yep! I do wish everyone could see it like that too.
February 15th, 2021 16:22
dusk arising said:
Yep! I do wish everyone could see it like that too.
February 15th, 2021 16:22
\"Tom Moore\" (An Acrostic in Honour of Sir Captain (Colonel) Tom Moore)
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful dedication!
thank you for sharing dear Poet
February 5th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful dedication!
thank you for sharing dear Poet
February 5th, 2021 04:49
\"Tom Moore\" (An Acrostic in Honour of Sir Captain (Colonel) Tom Moore)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good tribute Ben.
Andy
February 5th, 2021 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Good tribute Ben.
Andy
February 5th, 2021 01:20
\"Tom Moore\" (An Acrostic in Honour of Sir Captain (Colonel) Tom Moore)
orchidee said:
A fine tribute Tom.
Whoops, a former Vicar of ours had been in the military. Fairly young, but visions of little old ladies marching and standing to attention! With an old \'war wound\' he sadly lost a leg about 40 years later.
February 4th, 2021 06:25
orchidee said:
A fine tribute Tom.
Whoops, a former Vicar of ours had been in the military. Fairly young, but visions of little old ladies marching and standing to attention! With an old \'war wound\' he sadly lost a leg about 40 years later.
February 4th, 2021 06:25
\"Saturday Night on the Facebook\" (A Song in Lockdown)
Goldfinch60 said:
I have video chats with friends and they can be great fun, I have one this morning, Sunday, that happens every couple of weeks with a group from my local U3A, they are always good.
Andy
January 31st, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
I have video chats with friends and they can be great fun, I have one this morning, Sunday, that happens every couple of weeks with a group from my local U3A, they are always good.
Andy
January 31st, 2021 01:47
\"Saturday Night on the Facebook\" (A Song in Lockdown)
orchidee said:
Hooray! Britain\'s Got Talent has been cancelled! What more could we want? Well, better telly on Saturday evenings for a start. We will be punished with more Ant & Dec, I bet.
January 30th, 2021 05:24
orchidee said:
Hooray! Britain\'s Got Talent has been cancelled! What more could we want? Well, better telly on Saturday evenings for a start. We will be punished with more Ant & Dec, I bet.
January 30th, 2021 05:24
A Walk in Lockdown
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, those walks can bring back so many wonderful memories, I too walk most days, normally next to My River, the River Avon.
When I was working I used to go to Newark Council occasionally to sort out their computers.
Andy
January 30th, 2021 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, those walks can bring back so many wonderful memories, I too walk most days, normally next to My River, the River Avon.
When I was working I used to go to Newark Council occasionally to sort out their computers.
Andy
January 30th, 2021 01:56
A Walk in Lockdown
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read AS. Walks are inspirational for me as well.
January 29th, 2021 10:14
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read AS. Walks are inspirational for me as well.
January 29th, 2021 10:14
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