Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler



Studio (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful therapy is always there when going back to that place where you love to be.

Andy

March 6th, 2021 01:37

Studio (An Acrostic)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, A.S. Studios are a wonderful place for sure.

March 5th, 2021 08:17

Studio (An Acrostic)
orchidee said:

Have to swoon at this at the end! lol. Me imaginary dog, Fido, won\'t let me have much \'excitement\'. heehee.

March 5th, 2021 06:35

In Sleep, I Will Trust
Poetic Dan said:

I am so chuffed to read your words as they truly rung out and grounded me back to earth!

Fantastic work

March 3rd, 2021 16:04

In Sleep, I Will Trust
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Ben, we can struggle with a regular sleep pattern but in my case I seem to have found a rhythm to my sleep and dream all day.😂

Andy

February 28th, 2021 01:40

In Sleep, I Will Trust
dusk arising said:

As a reader whose body clock is malfunctioning through lockdown\'s lack of activity, I am with you all the way through this.
Falling asleep in a chair and unable to sleep in bed are situations i find myself in very often.....
..... oh for a return to normal... -... whatever that was.

February 27th, 2021 11:11

In Sleep, I Will Trust
AlitaOpal said:

Sleep is something our body thanks us for,.. I really enjoyed reading.. 🌹

Fellow dreamer Alita

February 27th, 2021 10:14

In Sleep, I Will Trust
orchidee said:

Good write Auburn.
If we nap too much in the day or evening, we may find we are wide awake when we go to bed. Doh!

February 27th, 2021 02:51

Of Shoots and Man
L. B. Mek said:

some poetry transcends words and flow, it resides deep in those corridors we seldom prioritise, maybe a glimpsed sway of yellow petals - that tease Winter\'s ensuing surrender..
some will, look - hardly register and move busily along, while other\'s, like you dear Poet
will sing that moment a song, reminding us all: we too once took note of Nature\'s venerable majesty..
a brilliant and Important write!
thank you for sharing

February 16th, 2021 06:04

Of Shoots and Man
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true words Ben, to make this world work we must work with each other and with Nature.

Andy

February 16th, 2021 02:23

Of Shoots and Man
FredPeyer said:

Well said, AS!

February 15th, 2021 20:03

Of Shoots and Man
dusk arising said:

Yep! I do wish everyone could see it like that too.

February 15th, 2021 16:22

\"Tom Moore\" (An Acrostic in Honour of Sir Captain (Colonel) Tom Moore)
L. B. Mek said:

what a wonderful dedication!
thank you for sharing dear Poet

February 5th, 2021 04:49


\"Tom Moore\" (An Acrostic in Honour of Sir Captain (Colonel) Tom Moore)
orchidee said:

A fine tribute Tom.
Whoops, a former Vicar of ours had been in the military. Fairly young, but visions of little old ladies marching and standing to attention! With an old \'war wound\' he sadly lost a leg about 40 years later.

February 4th, 2021 06:25

\"Saturday Night on the Facebook\" (A Song in Lockdown)
Goldfinch60 said:

I have video chats with friends and they can be great fun, I have one this morning, Sunday, that happens every couple of weeks with a group from my local U3A, they are always good.

Andy

January 31st, 2021 01:47

\"Saturday Night on the Facebook\" (A Song in Lockdown)
orchidee said:

Hooray! Britain\'s Got Talent has been cancelled! What more could we want? Well, better telly on Saturday evenings for a start. We will be punished with more Ant & Dec, I bet.

January 30th, 2021 05:24

A Walk in Lockdown
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Ben, those walks can bring back so many wonderful memories, I too walk most days, normally next to My River, the River Avon.
When I was working I used to go to Newark Council occasionally to sort out their computers.

Andy

January 30th, 2021 01:56

A Walk in Lockdown
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read AS. Walks are inspirational for me as well.

January 29th, 2021 10:14

A Walk in Lockdown
orchidee said:

Good write AS.
Me own walking poem was a bit less historical: \'I passed the site of a former Co-op and Red Lion...\' Well, it may have been an old pub! lol.

January 29th, 2021 09:58

Horizon
L. B. Mek said:

fantastic!
grounded in all things depressingly real, while managing
to depict that solace glint in our horizon of hope...
such a wonderful read, really brightened my dreary Friday morning,
what a timely write as well,
thank you for sharing dear Poet

January 29th, 2021 04:37

Horizon
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Ben, lets hope that we \"don\'t re-write this pain.\"

Andy

January 29th, 2021 01:21

Horizon
FredPeyer said:

Well said AS!

January 28th, 2021 11:40

Horizon
Jerry Reynolds said:

You as well AS Stay safe. Enjoyed your writing.

January 28th, 2021 10:29

Horizon
orchidee said:

Good write AS.

January 28th, 2021 06:31

Resolution (An Acrostic)
orchidee said:

A good write Ben.
I ain\'t opening that door much this weather though! lol.

January 6th, 2021 02:53

Resolution (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good acrostic Ben, that smile will always be with us.

Andy

January 6th, 2021 01:51

Resolution (An Acrostic)
Robert Southwick Richmond said:

Neat acrostic. It might be more easily read if you left-aligned the poem, rather than using MyPoeticSide\'s default middle axis. It\'s always a bit of a chore to get it to do that, but it can be done.

January 5th, 2021 15:45

Resolution (An Acrostic)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Sound advise and a good read.

January 5th, 2021 15:42

Could We Start Again Please? (A Poem at New Year\'s)
orchidee said:

Yes, that counts! Don\'t leave \'em longer than Jan 6th, or it\'s bad luck - if I believed in \'luck\' which I don\'t. Do shut up now Orchi. lol.

January 5th, 2021 08:45



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