Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Got the Message?
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Ben, talking with others is an integral part of our life that should never be stopped.
Andy
September 16th, 2026 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Ben, talking with others is an integral part of our life that should never be stopped.
Andy
September 16th, 2026 01:23
Got the Message?
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write that makes it clear through metaphor the connection and the strangeness of its means. Well done
September 15th, 2026 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write that makes it clear through metaphor the connection and the strangeness of its means. Well done
September 15th, 2026 10:57
If the Gods Are Real, Then Lady Fortuna and Aphrodite Deserve Raping!
sorenbarrett said:
The gods are on vacation. Nicely written
September 14th, 2026 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
The gods are on vacation. Nicely written
September 14th, 2026 09:01
To Be the Lone, Good, Black Sheep
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all walk our own path Ben, I have just put on a poem reflecting that.
Andy
September 11th, 2026 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all walk our own path Ben, I have just put on a poem reflecting that.
Andy
September 11th, 2026 01:04
To Be the Lone, Good, Black Sheep
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of protest against the majority that define the rules of acceptance. Well done my friend
September 10th, 2026 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of protest against the majority that define the rules of acceptance. Well done my friend
September 10th, 2026 08:16
To the Popularist:
sorenbarrett said:
A mix of actions and values in this poem of modern culture. Well done
September 9th, 2026 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
A mix of actions and values in this poem of modern culture. Well done
September 9th, 2026 11:45
Balaclavas End
Kevin Hulme said:
And some of these Kids move at such a Speed.
No Safety Helmet either.
Well written. 👍
September 2nd, 2026 20:29
Kevin Hulme said:
And some of these Kids move at such a Speed.
No Safety Helmet either.
Well written. 👍
September 2nd, 2026 20:29
I Enjoy a Thunderstorm
sorenbarrett said:
The human control and power is nothing in the view of nature. Well written and we should all be humble.
September 2nd, 2026 10:27
sorenbarrett said:
The human control and power is nothing in the view of nature. Well written and we should all be humble.
September 2nd, 2026 10:27
Squirrel Shit on Tea Cosy
Syd said:
Ha ha brilliant 👏
It\'s very Me this poem. Thoroughly enjoyed 😉
- Syd 🍄
August 29th, 2026 10:48
Syd said:
Ha ha brilliant 👏
It\'s very Me this poem. Thoroughly enjoyed 😉
- Syd 🍄
August 29th, 2026 10:48
Balaclavas End
Syd said:
Hi Auburn,
I really enjoyed this write. It sums up the mentality of those idiots perfectly. I\'m from the North East, not too far from where these feral louts have been burning cars out. I think some \"pure cold rage\" should be called for.
- Syd 🍄
August 29th, 2026 10:42
Syd said:
Hi Auburn,
I really enjoyed this write. It sums up the mentality of those idiots perfectly. I\'m from the North East, not too far from where these feral louts have been burning cars out. I think some \"pure cold rage\" should be called for.
- Syd 🍄
August 29th, 2026 10:42
Balaclavas End
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of youthful rebellion, the consequences of reckless behavior, and the harsh realities of street life. I like how you paint a vivid picture of a group of young individuals who engage in petty crime and vandalism, only to meet a violent end when they confront a more dangerous figure.
August 29th, 2026 10:33
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of youthful rebellion, the consequences of reckless behavior, and the harsh realities of street life. I like how you paint a vivid picture of a group of young individuals who engage in petty crime and vandalism, only to meet a violent end when they confront a more dangerous figure.
August 29th, 2026 10:33
Balaclavas End
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that ends with the final line. Well done
August 29th, 2026 07:31
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that ends with the final line. Well done
August 29th, 2026 07:31
Children (An Acrostic)
orchidee said:
All generations are the same, I say, including \'the good old times\' and \'the bad old times\' of each generation.
August 26th, 2026 13:04
orchidee said:
All generations are the same, I say, including \'the good old times\' and \'the bad old times\' of each generation.
August 26th, 2026 13:04
Children (An Acrostic)
sorenbarrett said:
I think that each generation as they get older take this view. I remember my grandparents talking about my parents who would promptly say time to go. I remember my parents talking about my generation and how the hippie generation wouldn\'t amount to anything and didn\'t know anything about making it, my parents having grown up in the depression and gone though WWII. I said it of my generation and they are saying it of my grand children\'s generation. I used to think it was all an issue of parenting but then with four kids I raised all the same some did better than others and I see the same of other families too. I\'m starting to believe that a lot of it is genetic with some parenting issues and latter friends. Good write.
August 26th, 2026 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
I think that each generation as they get older take this view. I remember my grandparents talking about my parents who would promptly say time to go. I remember my parents talking about my generation and how the hippie generation wouldn\'t amount to anything and didn\'t know anything about making it, my parents having grown up in the depression and gone though WWII. I said it of my generation and they are saying it of my grand children\'s generation. I used to think it was all an issue of parenting but then with four kids I raised all the same some did better than others and I see the same of other families too. I\'m starting to believe that a lot of it is genetic with some parenting issues and latter friends. Good write.
August 26th, 2026 10:05
The Alphabet Exercise (ABC, Easy as…?)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever write Ben, well done.
Andy
August 15th, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever write Ben, well done.
Andy
August 15th, 2026 01:47
The Alphabet Exercise (ABC, Easy as…?)
sorenbarrett said:
I too once in a while surrender to one of these challenges and this seems a fun but most challenging one indeed. Well done
August 14th, 2026 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
I too once in a while surrender to one of these challenges and this seems a fun but most challenging one indeed. Well done
August 14th, 2026 09:50
Wine; in Park
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, I would always join you in that place. Mine is a Rioja, LOL.
Andy
August 14th, 2026 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, I would always join you in that place. Mine is a Rioja, LOL.
Andy
August 14th, 2026 01:09
Wine; in Park
sorenbarrett said:
I identify with the feeling of this poem and often do the same going out into the forest or even just sit on my porch and look to the surrounding trees and nature listening to the birds and smelling the orange blossoms sipping on a glass of wine or a cold beer enjoying what surrounds me. Nicely done
August 13th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
I identify with the feeling of this poem and often do the same going out into the forest or even just sit on my porch and look to the surrounding trees and nature listening to the birds and smelling the orange blossoms sipping on a glass of wine or a cold beer enjoying what surrounds me. Nicely done
August 13th, 2026 06:48
Choice (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Ben, I hope we can all make the right choices in our lives.
Andy
August 12th, 2026 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Ben, I hope we can all make the right choices in our lives.
Andy
August 12th, 2026 01:16
Choice (An Acrostic)
sorenbarrett said:
Choice a great topic and well written. Nicely done
August 11th, 2026 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
Choice a great topic and well written. Nicely done
August 11th, 2026 10:01
Squirrel Shit on Tea Cosy
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with good rhyme that is entertaining.
August 10th, 2026 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with good rhyme that is entertaining.
August 10th, 2026 12:45
Hope at the Bottom of a Wheelie Bin
sorenbarrett said:
There is physical trash and waste from the environment we spoil and also emotional trash that we must dispose of. Well written
July 31st, 2026 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
There is physical trash and waste from the environment we spoil and also emotional trash that we must dispose of. Well written
July 31st, 2026 08:03
Hope at the Bottom of a Wheelie Bin
Paul Bell said:
Strangely enough, wheelie bins are great for putting dead people into.
Yes, at the moment the world has gone to hell, and the explosion hasn\'t even happened yet.
July 31st, 2026 07:19
Paul Bell said:
Strangely enough, wheelie bins are great for putting dead people into.
Yes, at the moment the world has gone to hell, and the explosion hasn\'t even happened yet.
July 31st, 2026 07:19
A Good Day, For a Civil War
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Ben, will we ever have a good life in our country again?
Andy
July 12th, 2026 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Ben, will we ever have a good life in our country again?
Andy
July 12th, 2026 01:07
A Good Day, For a Civil War
sorenbarrett said:
Politics, history and social conflict all in one poem well written with good flow and rhyme. Nicely done
July 11th, 2026 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
Politics, history and social conflict all in one poem well written with good flow and rhyme. Nicely done
July 11th, 2026 07:54
I Get Angry, When I Sneeze
sorenbarrett said:
A tongue in cheek write of self inflicted harm from being human in sneeze, cough or stubbing of a toe. Whether reflex or negligence self blame is what we all do. Well written
July 8th, 2026 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
A tongue in cheek write of self inflicted harm from being human in sneeze, cough or stubbing of a toe. Whether reflex or negligence self blame is what we all do. Well written
July 8th, 2026 12:02
It’s Hard to Shine, in Their Shadow
Goldfinch60 said:
Suh very true words Ben, respect for others seems to have been kicked from our world.
Andy
July 4th, 2026 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Suh very true words Ben, respect for others seems to have been kicked from our world.
Andy
July 4th, 2026 01:20
It’s Hard to Shine, in Their Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
We like to think that it used to be better but it has always been the same. Well written
July 3rd, 2026 18:02
sorenbarrett said:
We like to think that it used to be better but it has always been the same. Well written
July 3rd, 2026 18:02
Trolling (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine acrostic Ben showing that there are so many depraved people out there.
Andy
June 27th, 2026 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine acrostic Ben showing that there are so many depraved people out there.
Andy
June 27th, 2026 02:06
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