Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Show in the Sky (Written on Samhain/Halloween/Bonfire Night Time 2025)
sorenbarrett said:
Being sensitive to others and their needs comes through in this read and the insensitivity that most have through their lives. A good read
November 2nd, 2025 13:10
sorenbarrett said:
Being sensitive to others and their needs comes through in this read and the insensitivity that most have through their lives. A good read
November 2nd, 2025 13:10
Echo; in Sweet Bucket (Written on Samhain/Halloween 2025)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben.
Andy
November 1st, 2025 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben.
Andy
November 1st, 2025 03:01
Echo; in Sweet Bucket (Written on Samhain/Halloween 2025)
sorenbarrett said:
A sweet tale or a tale of sweets. A poem meant for the season and just in time too. Well done
October 31st, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
A sweet tale or a tale of sweets. A poem meant for the season and just in time too. Well done
October 31st, 2025 15:05
Tall Hat Man (Written on Samhain/Halloween 2025)
Goldfinch60 said:
One day it may happen that love comes to all in the world and it becomes a wonderful place Ben.
Andy
October 31st, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
One day it may happen that love comes to all in the world and it becomes a wonderful place Ben.
Andy
October 31st, 2025 02:43
Tall Hat Man (Written on Samhain/Halloween 2025)
sorenbarrett said:
It is most interesting that certain objects evoke a more spooky feel like a tall hat that is out of style and brings Jack the Ripper to mind although no one ever saw him to say he wore one he was always depicted that way. Nicely written and very Halloween like.
October 30th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
It is most interesting that certain objects evoke a more spooky feel like a tall hat that is out of style and brings Jack the Ripper to mind although no one ever saw him to say he wore one he was always depicted that way. Nicely written and very Halloween like.
October 30th, 2025 14:22
Auto-Ghoul or 300,007 Years Bad Luck (Written at Samhain/Halloween 2025)
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Ben about this time in our world.
Andy
October 29th, 2025 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Ben about this time in our world.
Andy
October 29th, 2025 02:50
Auto-Ghoul or 300,007 Years Bad Luck (Written at Samhain/Halloween 2025)
sorenbarrett said:
Most every stanza a reference to the fright domain. Nicely done
October 28th, 2025 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
Most every stanza a reference to the fright domain. Nicely done
October 28th, 2025 12:10
A Sonnet from the Gutter
Goldfinch60 said:
I had my last cigarette on 16th October 1982. Fine words Ben.
I hope all is well with you.
Andy
October 22nd, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
I had my last cigarette on 16th October 1982. Fine words Ben.
I hope all is well with you.
Andy
October 22nd, 2025 01:14
A Sonnet from the Gutter
sorenbarrett said:
A personification of a cigarette speaking to a person (but I take it society) that we have not the wisdom to do what is best for us and in fact do exactly what will be the end of us. A warning and caution to be more cognizant of what we do.
October 21st, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
A personification of a cigarette speaking to a person (but I take it society) that we have not the wisdom to do what is best for us and in fact do exactly what will be the end of us. A warning and caution to be more cognizant of what we do.
October 21st, 2025 09:46
Wheels in Heaven (A Homage to Neil Wainwright, Rest in Peace)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Ben.
Good to see you back, I hope all is okay.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Ben.
Good to see you back, I hope all is okay.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:52
Wheels in Heaven (A Homage to Neil Wainwright, Rest in Peace)
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to a lost friend who is already missed. Nicely worded and penned
October 9th, 2025 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to a lost friend who is already missed. Nicely worded and penned
October 9th, 2025 09:01
Garden-Blade
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of nature and that nature will always be if you choose to use it, just like a friend, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 12:13
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of nature and that nature will always be if you choose to use it, just like a friend, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 12:13
Garden-Blade
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that cuts to the heart of nature and all its magnificence. Very nicely worded with some clever ending rhymes. Loved it a fave
August 15th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that cuts to the heart of nature and all its magnificence. Very nicely worded with some clever ending rhymes. Loved it a fave
August 15th, 2025 10:38
Crick the Cliq
Goldfinch60 said:
Cliq away Ben, it brings new life to us all.
Andy
August 15th, 2025 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Cliq away Ben, it brings new life to us all.
Andy
August 15th, 2025 01:10
Crick the Cliq
Poetic Licence said:
I like the thought behind this and it well though out and crafted, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 12:43
Poetic Licence said:
I like the thought behind this and it well though out and crafted, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 12:43
Crick the Cliq
sorenbarrett said:
A clever manipulation of words and use of metaphor nicely done
August 14th, 2025 10:59
sorenbarrett said:
A clever manipulation of words and use of metaphor nicely done
August 14th, 2025 10:59
Sober Sun (A Town Shanty)
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating with a lovely refrain which caught me up short in concluding. Raised to be teetotalers, and my forays into that realm proving it dissatisfactory, memories of what I\'ve been told about others suffice in its place. Lovely and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Good to see you posting.
August 13th, 2025 19:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating with a lovely refrain which caught me up short in concluding. Raised to be teetotalers, and my forays into that realm proving it dissatisfactory, memories of what I\'ve been told about others suffice in its place. Lovely and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Good to see you posting.
August 13th, 2025 19:50
Sober Sun (A Town Shanty)
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write of both sides to our human nature, the good and bad. As the author mentions I think there is more reality in our drunken behaviour, certainly thats when people clear all those issues that have been stacking up, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 12:34
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write of both sides to our human nature, the good and bad. As the author mentions I think there is more reality in our drunken behaviour, certainly thats when people clear all those issues that have been stacking up, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 12:34
Sober Sun (A Town Shanty)
sorenbarrett said:
Two sides to our nature as a species we choose which we wish to embrace. Lovely
August 4th, 2025 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
Two sides to our nature as a species we choose which we wish to embrace. Lovely
August 4th, 2025 12:10
Coke Can
Poetic Licence said:
Entertainly written but with a serious message, start looking after the planet and people, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 13:24
Poetic Licence said:
Entertainly written but with a serious message, start looking after the planet and people, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 13:24
Coke Can
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem that sends a great message. Why the human race is so messy is unbelievable. A little clean up would never hurt. A great write
June 25th, 2025 12:20
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem that sends a great message. Why the human race is so messy is unbelievable. A little clean up would never hurt. A great write
June 25th, 2025 12:20
Coke Can
2781 said:
Don\'t kick a coke can! You can get a ten cent refund (down under) if the bar code is readable.
June 25th, 2025 10:00
2781 said:
Don\'t kick a coke can! You can get a ten cent refund (down under) if the bar code is readable.
June 25th, 2025 10:00
Ego-Friendly
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Ben, this world is in a hell of a state!
Andy
June 24th, 2025 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Ben, this world is in a hell of a state!
Andy
June 24th, 2025 01:30
Ego-Friendly
sorenbarrett said:
Eco friendly is a most interesting concept in that if nature has created all in it then we are just a part of its chance and eco friendly is just a what we want to maintain of nature as we desire it. Nicely done
June 23rd, 2025 16:40
sorenbarrett said:
Eco friendly is a most interesting concept in that if nature has created all in it then we are just a part of its chance and eco friendly is just a what we want to maintain of nature as we desire it. Nicely done
June 23rd, 2025 16:40
Ego-Friendly
Teddy.15 said:
Write from the soul, no need to promise upbeat, what you write is superb always. 🌹
June 23rd, 2025 16:19
Teddy.15 said:
Write from the soul, no need to promise upbeat, what you write is superb always. 🌹
June 23rd, 2025 16:19
A Place Called Home
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben and so true in life today but at least we have a home and home is where the heart is.
Andy
June 17th, 2025 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben and so true in life today but at least we have a home and home is where the heart is.
Andy
June 17th, 2025 01:07
A Place Called Home
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely write, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 08:39
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely write, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 08:39
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