Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Garden-Blade
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of nature and that nature will always be if you choose to use it, just like a friend, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 12:13
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of nature and that nature will always be if you choose to use it, just like a friend, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 12:13
Garden-Blade
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that cuts to the heart of nature and all its magnificence. Very nicely worded with some clever ending rhymes. Loved it a fave
August 15th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that cuts to the heart of nature and all its magnificence. Very nicely worded with some clever ending rhymes. Loved it a fave
August 15th, 2025 10:38
Crick the Cliq
Goldfinch60 said:
Cliq away Ben, it brings new life to us all.
Andy
August 15th, 2025 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Cliq away Ben, it brings new life to us all.
Andy
August 15th, 2025 01:10
Crick the Cliq
Poetic Licence said:
I like the thought behind this and it well though out and crafted, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 12:43
Poetic Licence said:
I like the thought behind this and it well though out and crafted, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 12:43
Crick the Cliq
sorenbarrett said:
A clever manipulation of words and use of metaphor nicely done
August 14th, 2025 10:59
sorenbarrett said:
A clever manipulation of words and use of metaphor nicely done
August 14th, 2025 10:59
Sober Sun (A Town Shanty)
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating with a lovely refrain which caught me up short in concluding. Raised to be teetotalers, and my forays into that realm proving it dissatisfactory, memories of what I\'ve been told about others suffice in its place. Lovely and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Good to see you posting.
August 13th, 2025 19:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating with a lovely refrain which caught me up short in concluding. Raised to be teetotalers, and my forays into that realm proving it dissatisfactory, memories of what I\'ve been told about others suffice in its place. Lovely and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Good to see you posting.
August 13th, 2025 19:50
Sober Sun (A Town Shanty)
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write of both sides to our human nature, the good and bad. As the author mentions I think there is more reality in our drunken behaviour, certainly thats when people clear all those issues that have been stacking up, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 12:34
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write of both sides to our human nature, the good and bad. As the author mentions I think there is more reality in our drunken behaviour, certainly thats when people clear all those issues that have been stacking up, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 12:34
Sober Sun (A Town Shanty)
sorenbarrett said:
Two sides to our nature as a species we choose which we wish to embrace. Lovely
August 4th, 2025 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
Two sides to our nature as a species we choose which we wish to embrace. Lovely
August 4th, 2025 12:10
Coke Can
Poetic Licence said:
Entertainly written but with a serious message, start looking after the planet and people, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 13:24
Poetic Licence said:
Entertainly written but with a serious message, start looking after the planet and people, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 13:24
Coke Can
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem that sends a great message. Why the human race is so messy is unbelievable. A little clean up would never hurt. A great write
June 25th, 2025 12:20
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem that sends a great message. Why the human race is so messy is unbelievable. A little clean up would never hurt. A great write
June 25th, 2025 12:20
Coke Can
2781 said:
Don\'t kick a coke can! You can get a ten cent refund (down under) if the bar code is readable.
June 25th, 2025 10:00
2781 said:
Don\'t kick a coke can! You can get a ten cent refund (down under) if the bar code is readable.
June 25th, 2025 10:00
Ego-Friendly
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Ben, this world is in a hell of a state!
Andy
June 24th, 2025 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Ben, this world is in a hell of a state!
Andy
June 24th, 2025 01:30
Ego-Friendly
sorenbarrett said:
Eco friendly is a most interesting concept in that if nature has created all in it then we are just a part of its chance and eco friendly is just a what we want to maintain of nature as we desire it. Nicely done
June 23rd, 2025 16:40
sorenbarrett said:
Eco friendly is a most interesting concept in that if nature has created all in it then we are just a part of its chance and eco friendly is just a what we want to maintain of nature as we desire it. Nicely done
June 23rd, 2025 16:40
Ego-Friendly
Teddy.15 said:
Write from the soul, no need to promise upbeat, what you write is superb always. 🌹
June 23rd, 2025 16:19
Teddy.15 said:
Write from the soul, no need to promise upbeat, what you write is superb always. 🌹
June 23rd, 2025 16:19
A Place Called Home
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben and so true in life today but at least we have a home and home is where the heart is.
Andy
June 17th, 2025 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben and so true in life today but at least we have a home and home is where the heart is.
Andy
June 17th, 2025 01:07
A Place Called Home
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely write, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 08:39
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely write, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 08:39
A Place Called Home
sorenbarrett said:
So many the places called home yet home only resides within one not outside. A most lovely piece
June 16th, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
So many the places called home yet home only resides within one not outside. A most lovely piece
June 16th, 2025 08:28
For Andy McKay (Rest in Peace)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful homage to your friend Ben, he will be playing for you from the stars above.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful homage to your friend Ben, he will be playing for you from the stars above.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:22
For Andy McKay (Rest in Peace)
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful dedication and tribute to a loved friend, am sure he will be smiling at that, nicely expressed and written
April 8th, 2025 07:19
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful dedication and tribute to a loved friend, am sure he will be smiling at that, nicely expressed and written
April 8th, 2025 07:19
For Andy McKay (Rest in Peace)
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to an honored friend and person who brightened the way for those around him. Well done
April 8th, 2025 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to an honored friend and person who brightened the way for those around him. Well done
April 8th, 2025 07:08
Him, That\'s in the Fog
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write of the confusion of the mind, where your thoughts are hard to define and can take you to a dark and frightening place, which is incredibly difficult to get out off, nicely expressed and written, wish you well
April 8th, 2025 01:12
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write of the confusion of the mind, where your thoughts are hard to define and can take you to a dark and frightening place, which is incredibly difficult to get out off, nicely expressed and written, wish you well
April 8th, 2025 01:12
Him, That\'s in the Fog
sorenbarrett said:
Confusion, blurred thoughts that break and come and go. A frightening and dark poem of what many experience to greater or lesser degrees. Nicek
April 7th, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
Confusion, blurred thoughts that break and come and go. A frightening and dark poem of what many experience to greater or lesser degrees. Nicek
April 7th, 2025 14:26
I\'m a Little Flower; and Lily is my Name (a poem at New Year\'s)
Bella Shepard said:
The little lily must endure all that comes its way. Being a thing of nature, just as we are, it has no choice. Unfortunately we have become the most unnatural of beings which is the sadness of our existence. Your misgivings are wholly justified in this illuminating poem. A very Happy New Year to you my friend, may we be ever more mindful.
January 1st, 2025 12:07
Bella Shepard said:
The little lily must endure all that comes its way. Being a thing of nature, just as we are, it has no choice. Unfortunately we have become the most unnatural of beings which is the sadness of our existence. Your misgivings are wholly justified in this illuminating poem. A very Happy New Year to you my friend, may we be ever more mindful.
January 1st, 2025 12:07
A Duo of Christmas Card Wishes (The Ghost of Christmas Presence and Christmas Is...)
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed both, delivering a positive message to one and all, written very nicely
December 28th, 2024 12:29
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed both, delivering a positive message to one and all, written very nicely
December 28th, 2024 12:29
A Duo of Christmas Card Wishes (The Ghost of Christmas Presence and Christmas Is...)
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
December 28th, 2024 11:58
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
December 28th, 2024 11:58
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