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Gift Wrap a Better Kind (St. Nick, I Cry To You)
Goldfinch60 said:
I do wish the people who can fix the world would get round to doing it Ben, that would be a wonderful present for us all.
Seasons greetings to you Ben and I hope the New Year will be full of joy.
Andy
December 20th, 2024 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
I do wish the people who can fix the world would get round to doing it Ben, that would be a wonderful present for us all.
Seasons greetings to you Ben and I hope the New Year will be full of joy.
Andy
December 20th, 2024 02:54
Gift Wrap a Better Kind (St. Nick, I Cry To You)
TobaniNataiella said:
This hits home to me in a big way, beautifully written poem reminding people it is not party and family cheers for everyone, Very enjoyable read
December 19th, 2024 14:41
TobaniNataiella said:
This hits home to me in a big way, beautifully written poem reminding people it is not party and family cheers for everyone, Very enjoyable read
December 19th, 2024 14:41
Gift Wrap a Better Kind (St. Nick, I Cry To You)
sorenbarrett said:
A Christmas greeting or wake up call to realize what Christmas is all about. Lovely lines here and the message is powerful and most appropriate
December 19th, 2024 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
A Christmas greeting or wake up call to realize what Christmas is all about. Lovely lines here and the message is powerful and most appropriate
December 19th, 2024 14:23
Birthday Card to Myself (Written on My Birthday)
NafisaSB said:
i hope your dreams about yourself bear fruit...good write
November 18th, 2024 08:55
NafisaSB said:
i hope your dreams about yourself bear fruit...good write
November 18th, 2024 08:55
Birthday Card to Myself (Written on My Birthday)
orchidee said:
Good write A. Did you write this to me, myself, and I? That\'s 3 people - eh?! lol.
November 18th, 2024 03:27
orchidee said:
Good write A. Did you write this to me, myself, and I? That\'s 3 people - eh?! lol.
November 18th, 2024 03:27
Birthday Card to Myself (Written on My Birthday)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words to yourself Ben, happy birthday to you and may the new year be much better for you.
Andy
November 18th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words to yourself Ben, happy birthday to you and may the new year be much better for you.
Andy
November 18th, 2024 02:25
Birthday Card to Myself (Written on My Birthday)
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I\'ve so missed reading your wonderful posts thanks to my own life being too topsy-turvy for hanging out like I used to. So we\'re both November babies?! And both likewise with auburn tresses, albeit yours are a tad shorter than mine? Many Happy Returns of the Day! Happy, HAPPY Birthday, dear Ben [isn\'t it? Or correct me]!!! This is too loverly and winsome, sufficient to charm the pants off anyone. Beautifully rendered with a playful poignancy and excellent details. Thank you so very much for sharing. Belated Happy Birthday again!!!
November 17th, 2024 16:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I\'ve so missed reading your wonderful posts thanks to my own life being too topsy-turvy for hanging out like I used to. So we\'re both November babies?! And both likewise with auburn tresses, albeit yours are a tad shorter than mine? Many Happy Returns of the Day! Happy, HAPPY Birthday, dear Ben [isn\'t it? Or correct me]!!! This is too loverly and winsome, sufficient to charm the pants off anyone. Beautifully rendered with a playful poignancy and excellent details. Thank you so very much for sharing. Belated Happy Birthday again!!!
November 17th, 2024 16:13
Birthday Card to Myself (Written on My Birthday)
sorenbarrett said:
And why not wish oneself a happy birthday?
November 17th, 2024 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
And why not wish oneself a happy birthday?
November 17th, 2024 14:37
Medal of Honour (An Acrostic Poem at Remembrance)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben.
Andy
https://youtu.be/_K1BdDVvV9Q?si=tdikt3X_qkMstIpS
November 11th, 2024 03:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben.
Andy
https://youtu.be/_K1BdDVvV9Q?si=tdikt3X_qkMstIpS
November 11th, 2024 03:07
Medal of Honour (An Acrostic Poem at Remembrance)
Teddy.15 said:
I give 100% respect to all our soldiers.🌺
November 10th, 2024 16:38
Teddy.15 said:
I give 100% respect to all our soldiers.🌺
November 10th, 2024 16:38
Medal of Honour (An Acrostic Poem at Remembrance)
sorenbarrett said:
So many that have fallen deserve a metal and never got one who deserve recognition, and we never recognized, who died with courage that was never seen. Those are the true valiant, the true men of honor. Very well written.
November 10th, 2024 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
So many that have fallen deserve a metal and never got one who deserve recognition, and we never recognized, who died with courage that was never seen. Those are the true valiant, the true men of honor. Very well written.
November 10th, 2024 12:14
Planchette (An Acrostic at Samhain 2024)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic Ben. I am going to a Samhain session on 31st \\November.
Andy
October 27th, 2024 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic Ben. I am going to a Samhain session on 31st \\November.
Andy
October 27th, 2024 02:53
Planchette (An Acrostic at Samhain 2024)
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and creepy with dreadful undertones in the celebration thus honored herein. Your very reference to that falsely alleged toy dredges up frightening memories of the results. Dare I say as wont, beautifully rendered? Excellently rendered. Thank you for sharing, and for your helpful notes.
October 26th, 2024 11:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and creepy with dreadful undertones in the celebration thus honored herein. Your very reference to that falsely alleged toy dredges up frightening memories of the results. Dare I say as wont, beautifully rendered? Excellently rendered. Thank you for sharing, and for your helpful notes.
October 26th, 2024 11:56
A Weeper’s Stew in Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, as we go towards winter many are struggling but hope will keep us going.
Andy
October 26th, 2024 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, as we go towards winter many are struggling but hope will keep us going.
Andy
October 26th, 2024 01:14
To Light a Candle (A Poem at Samhain 2024)
Goldfinch60 said:
That light may extinguish Ben but another will always be lit.
Andy
October 23rd, 2024 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
That light may extinguish Ben but another will always be lit.
Andy
October 23rd, 2024 01:28
Mighty Grin; That’s in the Shade (I am the…)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good meaningful words Ben, I can totally agree with them.
Andy
October 2nd, 2024 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good meaningful words Ben, I can totally agree with them.
Andy
October 2nd, 2024 01:22
Heart of England (for a Nottinghamshire Poetry Competition)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, so sorry it did not win the competition.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, so sorry it did not win the competition.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:25
Heart of England (for a Nottinghamshire Poetry Competition)
Cassie58 said:
Congratulations on being shortlisted. I’m not familiar with your part of the country, but merry men, must surely refer to Robin Hood. I enjoyed my visit. Thanks for the share.
September 27th, 2024 18:21
Cassie58 said:
Congratulations on being shortlisted. I’m not familiar with your part of the country, but merry men, must surely refer to Robin Hood. I enjoyed my visit. Thanks for the share.
September 27th, 2024 18:21
Heart of England (for a Nottinghamshire Poetry Competition)
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! Me thinks the judges didn\'t read this entry aloud as poetry is properly to be read, else why they failed to call you the winner eludes me. From the superb references to the waltzing imagery, the heartening poignancy and delightfully welcoming spirit, to the inviting end, I cannot but LOVE this! Thank you so very, very much for sharing!
September 27th, 2024 15:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! Me thinks the judges didn\'t read this entry aloud as poetry is properly to be read, else why they failed to call you the winner eludes me. From the superb references to the waltzing imagery, the heartening poignancy and delightfully welcoming spirit, to the inviting end, I cannot but LOVE this! Thank you so very, very much for sharing!
September 27th, 2024 15:13
Weird and Wonderful, Norm and Nasty
Goldfinch60 said:
To have a truly caring world would be phenomenal Ben. We can but hope.
Andy
September 24th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
To have a truly caring world would be phenomenal Ben. We can but hope.
Andy
September 24th, 2024 01:21
Weird and Wonderful, Norm and Nasty
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, you know, Ben. It\'s not fashionable. You stated the case nicely, we could enjoy it in discussion over a pot of tea with biscuits, where being kind is an item to consider. If it takes more effort to be, it\'s still worth it. Who needs applause? We truly wanted what? If our pride could be silenced we\'d be thankful for love. Now I\'ve gone rambling too much.
Beautifully rendered with a subtle poignancy and excellent details. Thank you for sharing.
September 23rd, 2024 17:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, you know, Ben. It\'s not fashionable. You stated the case nicely, we could enjoy it in discussion over a pot of tea with biscuits, where being kind is an item to consider. If it takes more effort to be, it\'s still worth it. Who needs applause? We truly wanted what? If our pride could be silenced we\'d be thankful for love. Now I\'ve gone rambling too much.
Beautifully rendered with a subtle poignancy and excellent details. Thank you for sharing.
September 23rd, 2024 17:36
The 4th Stage Stall (written when the “Tour of Britain” bike race came to town)
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re so nice, kind, and polite despite their obvious rudeness. No, me ain bicycle sits neglected, wishing I\'d use it but I take the dratted motorcar. Lovely and eloquent tribute to the event which displaces inhabitants in the name of what, precisely? Beautifully rendered with a subtle poignancy and excellent details. Thank you so much for sharing. I do so hope you\'re feeling some better, my dear chap?
September 22nd, 2024 19:29
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re so nice, kind, and polite despite their obvious rudeness. No, me ain bicycle sits neglected, wishing I\'d use it but I take the dratted motorcar. Lovely and eloquent tribute to the event which displaces inhabitants in the name of what, precisely? Beautifully rendered with a subtle poignancy and excellent details. Thank you so much for sharing. I do so hope you\'re feeling some better, my dear chap?
September 22nd, 2024 19:29
The 4th Stage Stall (written when the “Tour of Britain” bike race came to town)
Teddy.15 said:
I remember giro Italia passed through my local town here in Italy and it was so exciting and I was truly excited to see it. It\'s is a very serious sport and sometimes they do crash and fall, just like we all do. Great write 🌹
September 21st, 2024 03:20
Teddy.15 said:
I remember giro Italia passed through my local town here in Italy and it was so exciting and I was truly excited to see it. It\'s is a very serious sport and sometimes they do crash and fall, just like we all do. Great write 🌹
September 21st, 2024 03:20
The 4th Stage Stall (written when the “Tour of Britain” bike race came to town)
Goldfinch60 said:
Manners maketh man Ben, (He says hopefully).
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Manners maketh man Ben, (He says hopefully).
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:50
The 4th Stage Stall (written when the “Tour of Britain” bike race came to town)
Tony36 said:
Excellent
September 20th, 2024 13:03
Tony36 said:
Excellent
September 20th, 2024 13:03
In Search of Bands
Cheeky Missy said:
Me is dreadfully sorry you\'s suffering so, nor know I well how to tender comfort especially from across the pond, aside from the Scriptures, which methinks you do not exactly want, but you may correct me. This is nicely rendered with excellent details and a striking poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, dear chap.
September 19th, 2024 17:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Me is dreadfully sorry you\'s suffering so, nor know I well how to tender comfort especially from across the pond, aside from the Scriptures, which methinks you do not exactly want, but you may correct me. This is nicely rendered with excellent details and a striking poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, dear chap.
September 19th, 2024 17:17
Dishcloth Wisdom
Cheeky Missy said:
You don\'t truly want to know what\'s really \"going on,\" now, do you? Where I come frae tis passé more or less, and the censorship is to keep the multitudes in check lest they attempt what the wiser know to let lie.
Thank you for sharing. Beautifully rendered with excellent details and a haunting poignancy, only too perfectly completed by your helpful elucidation in the notes.
September 19th, 2024 17:12
Cheeky Missy said:
You don\'t truly want to know what\'s really \"going on,\" now, do you? Where I come frae tis passé more or less, and the censorship is to keep the multitudes in check lest they attempt what the wiser know to let lie.
Thank you for sharing. Beautifully rendered with excellent details and a haunting poignancy, only too perfectly completed by your helpful elucidation in the notes.
September 19th, 2024 17:12
In Search of Bands
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame about your bad times Ben but I sincerely hope that tings are getting better.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame about your bad times Ben but I sincerely hope that tings are getting better.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 01:59
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