Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
I\'m Safest When I\'m Sleeping
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, but being safest when sleeping can bring dreams of anxiety to the mind so I believe the finest thing about sleeping is waking the next day as I have this morning.
Andy
February 11th, 2026 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, but being safest when sleeping can bring dreams of anxiety to the mind so I believe the finest thing about sleeping is waking the next day as I have this morning.
Andy
February 11th, 2026 02:12
I\'m Safest When I\'m Sleeping
sorenbarrett said:
It is far safer when everyone is sleeping. The species that we think is superior (judged by ourselves) has been here such a brief time and the real judge nature is thinking what to tell us about her decision. Over confident we raise our hands in victory but the judgement is not in. A great write that well could be a song
February 10th, 2026 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
It is far safer when everyone is sleeping. The species that we think is superior (judged by ourselves) has been here such a brief time and the real judge nature is thinking what to tell us about her decision. Over confident we raise our hands in victory but the judgement is not in. A great write that well could be a song
February 10th, 2026 08:58
Bottle of Pop
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine, fun words Ben. So many questions remain unanswered in this ever complex world we now live in, may be it will be fixed in time.
Hope you are well.
Andy
February 9th, 2026 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine, fun words Ben. So many questions remain unanswered in this ever complex world we now live in, may be it will be fixed in time.
Hope you are well.
Andy
February 9th, 2026 02:52
Bottle of Pop
sorenbarrett said:
Herd mentality all for acceptance widely known to be in effect we are a social species that leaves us open to so many wrongs and injustices yet on we go with no thought. I being a rebel and comfortable alone feel it less but still there is a magnetic force that pulls on us all. A lovely write
February 8th, 2026 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
Herd mentality all for acceptance widely known to be in effect we are a social species that leaves us open to so many wrongs and injustices yet on we go with no thought. I being a rebel and comfortable alone feel it less but still there is a magnetic force that pulls on us all. A lovely write
February 8th, 2026 08:38
Sid the Snail
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, I endeavor not to harm anything in life.
Andy
February 7th, 2026 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, I endeavor not to harm anything in life.
Andy
February 7th, 2026 02:21
Sid the Snail
Doggerel Dave said:
The tale of Sid the Snail , a good nursery rhyme story may teach something. Enjoyed the piece very much
February 6th, 2026 23:34
Doggerel Dave said:
The tale of Sid the Snail , a good nursery rhyme story may teach something. Enjoyed the piece very much
February 6th, 2026 23:34
Sid the Snail
sorenbarrett said:
A fable in a poem so well told with great rhyme and good meter tells its tale of being careful where we step. In this fast passed world we often neglect to see the consequences of our actions for others and ourself. Nicely done my friend
February 6th, 2026 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
A fable in a poem so well told with great rhyme and good meter tells its tale of being careful where we step. In this fast passed world we often neglect to see the consequences of our actions for others and ourself. Nicely done my friend
February 6th, 2026 11:37
Here and There
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, may the world improve in time, it has to happen one day.
Andy
February 6th, 2026 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, may the world improve in time, it has to happen one day.
Andy
February 6th, 2026 02:43
Here and There
sorenbarrett said:
Here and there are separated by nothing. This poem takes both to the table. Nicely done
February 5th, 2026 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
Here and there are separated by nothing. This poem takes both to the table. Nicely done
February 5th, 2026 13:12
Double Standards and Hypocrisies (Written on New Year’s 2025)
orchidee said:
Why yes. We say Happy New Year to each new year, then 12 months later bid it good riddance. Doh! We don\'t know what we do want.
January 4th, 2026 14:48
orchidee said:
Why yes. We say Happy New Year to each new year, then 12 months later bid it good riddance. Doh! We don\'t know what we do want.
January 4th, 2026 14:48
Double Standards and Hypocrisies (Written on New Year’s 2025)
sorenbarrett said:
Choices seem an element in this poem and as time runs out on the year the choices narrow. Well written
January 4th, 2026 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Choices seem an element in this poem and as time runs out on the year the choices narrow. Well written
January 4th, 2026 12:57
The Green and Red Monster (Written at Christmas 2025)
Katie B. said:
Well done!!
December 29th, 2025 17:58
Katie B. said:
Well done!!
December 29th, 2025 17:58
The Green and Red Monster (Written at Christmas 2025)
sorenbarrett said:
The most seasonal porn that seems to bear the mark most children would like to hear one of fantasy end of adventure. Lovely.
December 29th, 2025 14:14
sorenbarrett said:
The most seasonal porn that seems to bear the mark most children would like to hear one of fantasy end of adventure. Lovely.
December 29th, 2025 14:14
The Green and Red Monster (Written at Christmas 2025)
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the contrasts of joy and sorrow, love and materialism, particularly during the holiday season, specifically Christmas. It reflects on the complexities of adult life, the innocence of childhood, and the true meaning of giving and connection amidst commercialism.
December 29th, 2025 12:01
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the contrasts of joy and sorrow, love and materialism, particularly during the holiday season, specifically Christmas. It reflects on the complexities of adult life, the innocence of childhood, and the true meaning of giving and connection amidst commercialism.
December 29th, 2025 12:01
Garden-Blade
Eugene S. said:
As a gardener myself, this caught my attention. A relationship with pampas and some of its kin can be \'scarlet\' in nature. Respect is earned in the process. Enjoyed the poetic journey!
December 5th, 2025 05:13
Eugene S. said:
As a gardener myself, this caught my attention. A relationship with pampas and some of its kin can be \'scarlet\' in nature. Respect is earned in the process. Enjoyed the poetic journey!
December 5th, 2025 05:13
Show in the Sky (Written on Samhain/Halloween/Bonfire Night Time 2025)
orchidee said:
Good write A. Erm, Happy Birthday? US format 11/4? In which case its 11th April! Or is it UK format 4/11?
November 4th, 2025 04:53
orchidee said:
Good write A. Erm, Happy Birthday? US format 11/4? In which case its 11th April! Or is it UK format 4/11?
November 4th, 2025 04:53
Show in the Sky (Written on Samhain/Halloween/Bonfire Night Time 2025)
sorenbarrett said:
Being sensitive to others and their needs comes through in this read and the insensitivity that most have through their lives. A good read
November 2nd, 2025 13:10
sorenbarrett said:
Being sensitive to others and their needs comes through in this read and the insensitivity that most have through their lives. A good read
November 2nd, 2025 13:10
Echo; in Sweet Bucket (Written on Samhain/Halloween 2025)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben.
Andy
November 1st, 2025 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben.
Andy
November 1st, 2025 03:01
Echo; in Sweet Bucket (Written on Samhain/Halloween 2025)
sorenbarrett said:
A sweet tale or a tale of sweets. A poem meant for the season and just in time too. Well done
October 31st, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
A sweet tale or a tale of sweets. A poem meant for the season and just in time too. Well done
October 31st, 2025 15:05
Tall Hat Man (Written on Samhain/Halloween 2025)
Goldfinch60 said:
One day it may happen that love comes to all in the world and it becomes a wonderful place Ben.
Andy
October 31st, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
One day it may happen that love comes to all in the world and it becomes a wonderful place Ben.
Andy
October 31st, 2025 02:43
Tall Hat Man (Written on Samhain/Halloween 2025)
sorenbarrett said:
It is most interesting that certain objects evoke a more spooky feel like a tall hat that is out of style and brings Jack the Ripper to mind although no one ever saw him to say he wore one he was always depicted that way. Nicely written and very Halloween like.
October 30th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
It is most interesting that certain objects evoke a more spooky feel like a tall hat that is out of style and brings Jack the Ripper to mind although no one ever saw him to say he wore one he was always depicted that way. Nicely written and very Halloween like.
October 30th, 2025 14:22
Auto-Ghoul or 300,007 Years Bad Luck (Written at Samhain/Halloween 2025)
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Ben about this time in our world.
Andy
October 29th, 2025 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Ben about this time in our world.
Andy
October 29th, 2025 02:50
Auto-Ghoul or 300,007 Years Bad Luck (Written at Samhain/Halloween 2025)
sorenbarrett said:
Most every stanza a reference to the fright domain. Nicely done
October 28th, 2025 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
Most every stanza a reference to the fright domain. Nicely done
October 28th, 2025 12:10
A Sonnet from the Gutter
Goldfinch60 said:
I had my last cigarette on 16th October 1982. Fine words Ben.
I hope all is well with you.
Andy
October 22nd, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
I had my last cigarette on 16th October 1982. Fine words Ben.
I hope all is well with you.
Andy
October 22nd, 2025 01:14
A Sonnet from the Gutter
sorenbarrett said:
A personification of a cigarette speaking to a person (but I take it society) that we have not the wisdom to do what is best for us and in fact do exactly what will be the end of us. A warning and caution to be more cognizant of what we do.
October 21st, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
A personification of a cigarette speaking to a person (but I take it society) that we have not the wisdom to do what is best for us and in fact do exactly what will be the end of us. A warning and caution to be more cognizant of what we do.
October 21st, 2025 09:46
Wheels in Heaven (A Homage to Neil Wainwright, Rest in Peace)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Ben.
Good to see you back, I hope all is okay.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Ben.
Good to see you back, I hope all is okay.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:52
Wheels in Heaven (A Homage to Neil Wainwright, Rest in Peace)
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to a lost friend who is already missed. Nicely worded and penned
October 9th, 2025 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to a lost friend who is already missed. Nicely worded and penned
October 9th, 2025 09:01
Garden-Blade
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of nature and that nature will always be if you choose to use it, just like a friend, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 12:13
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of nature and that nature will always be if you choose to use it, just like a friend, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 12:13
Garden-Blade
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that cuts to the heart of nature and all its magnificence. Very nicely worded with some clever ending rhymes. Loved it a fave
August 15th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that cuts to the heart of nature and all its magnificence. Very nicely worded with some clever ending rhymes. Loved it a fave
August 15th, 2025 10:38
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