Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler



Pride (An Acrostic, written in June, “Pride Month”)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Brave write, A.S.
Standing on the roof
Hand in hand, we jump
Children in the wind

June 16th, 2021 08:18

Pride (An Acrostic, written in June, “Pride Month”)
Saxon Crow said:

Nice one buddy and congrats on becoming you!

June 16th, 2021 07:51

Pride (An Acrostic, written in June, “Pride Month”)
Doggerel Dave said:

It was, I suspect AS, a long hard road and it’s great you have now reached a happy destination. You take care of yourself.
Your cheer and happiness comes through in your post.


June 16th, 2021 07:01

Pride (An Acrostic, written in June, “Pride Month”)
dusk arising said:

Live and let live.

June 16th, 2021 06:44

Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
L. B. Mek said:

a memento postcard, in a poem
wonderfully worded: crisp clear, in vivid imagery
thanks for sharing

June 15th, 2021 04:28

Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
Goldfinch60 said:

Blimey Ben, that took me back to the days when I went up the pub regularly, and that scene you have created witt those words took me back to those days, thank you.

Andy

June 15th, 2021 00:47

Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
Doggerel Dave said:

Greatly enjoyed, AS. Atmospheric picture of a British pub. Nice recharge as memory fades slightly....
Apart from you and the barman there weren\'t any blokes. Had they deserted?

June 14th, 2021 20:08

Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, A.S.
Dogs in the bar is getting very popular. Really good wing men.

June 14th, 2021 16:11

Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
Saxon Crow said:

Lovely read AS. Most enjoyable

June 14th, 2021 13:54

Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
Fay Slimm. said:

Could just imagine the rumpus when doggie owners gathered for liquid and chatter - your poetic-docu. is clearly a fun-raiser to read next time you join that throng. Great write.

June 14th, 2021 13:47

Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
orchidee said:

Good write AS.

June 14th, 2021 12:14

Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
dusk arising said:

My sister once took me to a pub in Aslockton with her dawg. Big surprise to me was the landlord though. Serving me a pint was John Robertson ex Nottingham Forest left winger.
Served a good aqua for the dawg too.
Worrisit baat Notts pubs\'s meks em so wam. Taint Shippos no more!

June 14th, 2021 11:40

Upon Bingham Market Square
Saxon Crow said:

Life goes on no matter what which is the point if this poem. Wonderful reminder

June 13th, 2021 00:51

Upon Bingham Market Square
Doggerel Dave said:


I probably listen and watch far too much news and political commentary. And you know where that can lead...To watch others just in the midst of their ordinary apparently carefree lives must be something of a restorative.
Thanks for a nicely framed picture, AS.

June 12th, 2021 20:34

Upon Bingham Market Square
dusk arising said:

It is good to reject negativity, it hacks at one\'s vitality of life.

I know that square. My brother lived in Bingham and later at Sheldon. Very busy on a saturday I remember.

June 12th, 2021 16:11

Upon Bingham Market Square
Goldfinch60 said:

Keep nourishing your spirit Ben and wonderful words like these will flow over all of us.

Andy

June 12th, 2021 12:40

Upon Bingham Market Square
orchidee said:

A fine write AS.

June 12th, 2021 10:35

“Roll Around” (A Song, coming out of Lockdown)
L. B. Mek said:

\'Both in love, and in bleeding,\'..
\'in\' - bleeding?
yikes, that\'s a hard no for me... lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing dear poet

May 28th, 2021 03:49

“Roll Around” (A Song, coming out of Lockdown)
Goldfinch60 said:

See you in the pub Ben - the first round is on me.

Andy

May 28th, 2021 00:26

“Roll Around” (A Song, coming out of Lockdown)
orchidee said:

And now the next hymn in the Service: No.473: \'I like to kick the table\'. heehee.
They\'ll boot us out if we kick the Communion table/altar!

May 27th, 2021 08:31

NG24
Goldfinch60 said:

I now how you feel, I was brought up in Rochester in Kent but it is so changed now to the way it was when I moved to the Midlands 22 years ago.

Andy

May 15th, 2021 00:48

NG24
orchidee said:

Good write AS.

May 14th, 2021 13:39

NG24
dusk arising said:

Newark on Trent the lovely market town where my parents spent their late years. Indeed I grew up a little further up the river in the big bad city itself.
I appreciate your words as one who too strayed away and sees with different eyes on returning.

Your rock, your springboard.

May 14th, 2021 12:30

Haemorrhoid Cream
Doggerel Dave said:

AS: Little do I understand (or for that matter care) about the electoral vote in the UK. However I can relate to the observation that the relationship between the yobbos, of what ever stripe, the media and the pollies there as here, is a right royal pain in the arse......lol.

May 11th, 2021 05:04

Haemorrhoid Cream
L. B. Mek said:

and \'they\' say Anarchy - is dead, too...
some choice wording, for sure, lol
\'this is when a quick Pint in your local
makes the difference, between
ranting and raving, all night
and a grunted exhale, as acceptance
so as: to prevail...

May 11th, 2021 04:30

Haemorrhoid Cream
Goldfinch60 said:

I have some Ben but it is nearly run out, I will have to get some more.

Andy

May 11th, 2021 00:27

Mane
L. B. Mek said:

\'I hope that you and your hair are \"getting on\"\'..
sets the tone, for what is just a fun-tastic read, you supreme inker of wit
thanks for the soul nourishing smiles
to match our rejuvenating cloudless sky;
a read: match-made
within that harmonious symphony of Spring! lol

April 29th, 2021 04:44

Mane
Goldfinch60 said:

Great words Ben, my hair was the same, I had gone back to my seventies look. I wasn\'t bothered about it and I certainly was not going to queue at a barbers, but on Monday I was walking in town and saw that my barbers was empty so I went in and had my hair cut. Went to croquet the following day and they charged me a fiver as new player😂😂😂.

Andy

April 29th, 2021 00:43

Mane
Doggerel Dave said:

At a time of my life when the choice was between do something about the hole in the seat of my trousers or get a haircut, I chose to cut it myself using scissors which had seen better days. In retrospect I should have followed the example you set in your entertaining piece, but it was a time when everyone was doing it and my contrarian kicked in….

April 28th, 2021 20:45

Mane
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write AS.

April 28th, 2021 13:48



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