Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Lockdown Blues (A Song)
Goldfinch60 said:
All I need for that is to hear it sung in a bar somewhere and me with a pint in my hand.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
All I need for that is to hear it sung in a bar somewhere and me with a pint in my hand.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 00:49
Lockdown Blues (A Song)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening AS - Thanks for a really classic Poem / Song ! You have won the *Lockdown Poem of the Week* Great Rhyme Pattern for a Singing Blues (x a a a) (x b b b) etc plus a chorus E e E e
V 1. One advantage of LD is spending more time in BED
V 2. Lots of New Faces on TV *Boris\' Boys & Girls*
V 3. Everything gets *Clapped Out* in the end !
V 4. WE dont want anymore T Roll stockpiling ! !
Thnaks for we have enjoyed singng it - could be a hit
Blessings & Love to You & Yours
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat
Please check out site ~ Thanks !
May 29th, 2020 17:54
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening AS - Thanks for a really classic Poem / Song ! You have won the *Lockdown Poem of the Week* Great Rhyme Pattern for a Singing Blues (x a a a) (x b b b) etc plus a chorus E e E e
V 1. One advantage of LD is spending more time in BED
V 2. Lots of New Faces on TV *Boris\' Boys & Girls*
V 3. Everything gets *Clapped Out* in the end !
V 4. WE dont want anymore T Roll stockpiling ! !
Thnaks for we have enjoyed singng it - could be a hit
Blessings & Love to You & Yours
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat
Please check out site ~ Thanks !
May 29th, 2020 17:54
Flicking
Goldfinch60 said:
But your flicking and clicking is combining with thinking and writing giving living in writing into my being.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
But your flicking and clicking is combining with thinking and writing giving living in writing into my being.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 01:35
New Friends in Lockdown
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write Ben, I totally agree with you, those new things we have found are so important at this time and should be treasured when normality returns.
Andy
May 23rd, 2020 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write Ben, I totally agree with you, those new things we have found are so important at this time and should be treasured when normality returns.
Andy
May 23rd, 2020 00:35
Right Around the Corner
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben, I do hope your scene will be intact, my scene seems to have improved, Nature\'s beauty seems to have been enhanced by the cleaner air, I do hope that continues when \'normality\' returns.
Andy
May 22nd, 2020 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben, I do hope your scene will be intact, my scene seems to have improved, Nature\'s beauty seems to have been enhanced by the cleaner air, I do hope that continues when \'normality\' returns.
Andy
May 22nd, 2020 00:06
Sleeping Sword – (in honour of all the armed forces, and emergency services for VE Day 75)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben and so true.
Andy
May 9th, 2020 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben and so true.
Andy
May 9th, 2020 00:26
Sleeping Sword – (in honour of all the armed forces, and emergency services for VE Day 75)
orchidee said:
A fine write Auburn.
May 8th, 2020 07:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Auburn.
May 8th, 2020 07:58
Emeralds and Sapphires
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, I love that first line \'inside my outside treasury\' that is the way I feel when I walk with My River. A treasure trove for free.
Andy
May 6th, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, I love that first line \'inside my outside treasury\' that is the way I feel when I walk with My River. A treasure trove for free.
Andy
May 6th, 2020 00:27
Solitary
Goldfinch60 said:
Being an \'old codger\' I am inside nearly all the time but I do go out for for a two mile speed walk in the morning and am able to get food from the shops.
Andy
April 26th, 2020 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Being an \'old codger\' I am inside nearly all the time but I do go out for for a two mile speed walk in the morning and am able to get food from the shops.
Andy
April 26th, 2020 00:20
Sober, An Acrostic
Thoughts In Time said:
Yes the show that we direct and watch unfold via choices we make ..🌹
October 12th, 2019 14:02
Thoughts In Time said:
Yes the show that we direct and watch unfold via choices we make ..🌹
October 12th, 2019 14:02
Ear Candy
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and I fully understand where you are coming from. Music in my life is so very important and can bring me a world of peace and love.
June 18th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and I fully understand where you are coming from. Music in my life is so very important and can bring me a world of peace and love.
June 18th, 2019 00:20
Mr. Men Song
Poetic Dan said:
More than enjoyed my friend, it was fantastically inspirational.
Top form, good show
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
May 28th, 2019 09:24
Poetic Dan said:
More than enjoyed my friend, it was fantastically inspirational.
Top form, good show
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
May 28th, 2019 09:24
And...(Yosser)
Edthepoet said:
Brilliant poetry Ben. Expertly written. And always choose the Tavern.
September 13th, 2018 08:18
Edthepoet said:
Brilliant poetry Ben. Expertly written. And always choose the Tavern.
September 13th, 2018 08:18
Butterfly
Syd said:
Hi there, this poem sounded a bit like an acid trip. Great write though.
Enjoyed - Syd
August 23rd, 2018 11:32
Syd said:
Hi there, this poem sounded a bit like an acid trip. Great write though.
Enjoyed - Syd
August 23rd, 2018 11:32
Burn Baby, Burn, Blighty Inferno!
Lorna said:
Spooky poem shadowing climate change!
July 31st, 2018 07:10
Lorna said:
Spooky poem shadowing climate change!
July 31st, 2018 07:10
The Adrenalin of Anthophila
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, bees are a blessing in our world.
June 13th, 2018 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, bees are a blessing in our world.
June 13th, 2018 00:47
The Adrenalin of Anthophila
willyweed said:
very clever write well done and insightful. ww
June 12th, 2018 09:14
willyweed said:
very clever write well done and insightful. ww
June 12th, 2018 09:14
The Desperate Man
Lorna said:
Very touching and sad....... I got a new slant on the homeless and down and out when I was commuting by train..... and so often they were such polite and lovely souls. The men were always the ones who would step aside for the ladies while the \"businessmen\" would bash their way through. My heart cried for them. They always seemed so grateful for a smile.
February 15th, 2018 09:01
Lorna said:
Very touching and sad....... I got a new slant on the homeless and down and out when I was commuting by train..... and so often they were such polite and lovely souls. The men were always the ones who would step aside for the ladies while the \"businessmen\" would bash their way through. My heart cried for them. They always seemed so grateful for a smile.
February 15th, 2018 09:01
The Loving Eight (The Kind Ghost)
Lorna said:
Thanks - consoling to think of love continuing........
February 7th, 2018 07:01
Lorna said:
Thanks - consoling to think of love continuing........
February 7th, 2018 07:01
The Youngest Old Man You’ll Ever Meet
Goldfinch60 said:
Age can be a myth, getting old happens to the body but in the mind youth is still the way for many people. Good write.
January 17th, 2018 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Age can be a myth, getting old happens to the body but in the mind youth is still the way for many people. Good write.
January 17th, 2018 02:05
The Youngest Old Man You’ll Ever Meet
Syd said:
I know a few young old men and vice versa. Really enjoyed reading this.
- Syd
January 16th, 2018 13:51
Syd said:
I know a few young old men and vice versa. Really enjoyed reading this.
- Syd
January 16th, 2018 13:51
The Youngest Old Man You’ll Ever Meet
Louis Gibbs said:
Some never \'age\', they just grow older and hopefully wiser. Your poem hits the nail on the head, A-S.
January 16th, 2018 11:18
Louis Gibbs said:
Some never \'age\', they just grow older and hopefully wiser. Your poem hits the nail on the head, A-S.
January 16th, 2018 11:18
The Choir in the Corridor
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and very true. Now she gives Hunt even more power by being responsible for social care, what does he know about it!!
January 15th, 2018 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and very true. Now she gives Hunt even more power by being responsible for social care, what does he know about it!!
January 15th, 2018 00:43
The Choir in the Corridor
Michael Edwards said:
A powerful write so well expressed and yet to have an NHS is still a blessing for all it\'s shortfalls and shortfalls in funding.
January 14th, 2018 12:00
Michael Edwards said:
A powerful write so well expressed and yet to have an NHS is still a blessing for all it\'s shortfalls and shortfalls in funding.
January 14th, 2018 12:00
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