To… (written on a train to Nottingham)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME AUBURN ~Wonderful first poem ~ great rhythm. As I read it I was on the train with you to Nottingham a great City ! Great rhyme pattern (in most verses) abab cdcd etc ~ which added to the rhythm. Great choice of words many of them train journey related (observe ~ swerve ~ slow ~ haste ~ station ~ eat ~ drink ~ travel etc). The train really was your muse in rhyme ~ rhythm ~ vocabulary etc. I love this poem ~ Thanks for sharing ~ more please. BRIAN

July 5th, 2016 10:44