Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Up the Strait and Narrow in Spring (written in Lincoln)
Augustus said:
Unlike Cities in the USA those of England have histories of thousands of years. Is the uphill crowd still the wealthy? Sounds like an enjoyable visit. Great write.
March 10th, 2017 13:44
Augustus said:
Unlike Cities in the USA those of England have histories of thousands of years. Is the uphill crowd still the wealthy? Sounds like an enjoyable visit. Great write.
March 10th, 2017 13:44
Up the Strait and Narrow in Spring (written in Lincoln)
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
March 10th, 2017 10:08
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
March 10th, 2017 10:08
Up the Strait and Narrow in Spring (written in Lincoln)
willyweed said:
what goes up must come down I hate a good hangover! nice work. WW
March 10th, 2017 10:04
willyweed said:
what goes up must come down I hate a good hangover! nice work. WW
March 10th, 2017 10:04
(“Forget Me Notts”) Leaving on a Steel Worm
willyweed said:
well thought out with good flow and structure a well done poem indeed! ww
July 8th, 2016 15:45
willyweed said:
well thought out with good flow and structure a well done poem indeed! ww
July 8th, 2016 15:45
To… (written on a train to Nottingham)
lysistrata said:
To Tony,To Las Palmas
To Crete,To my Brother
To M.Olympus,for a night
To Cyclades,for a wedding party
To Pink Martini
To Steve Aoki
To Patti Smith
To Imam Baildi..
Thank you, Great Idea & Rhythm..
Enjoy your Brexit summer?!
July 5th, 2016 16:07
lysistrata said:
To Tony,To Las Palmas
To Crete,To my Brother
To M.Olympus,for a night
To Cyclades,for a wedding party
To Pink Martini
To Steve Aoki
To Patti Smith
To Imam Baildi..
Thank you, Great Idea & Rhythm..
Enjoy your Brexit summer?!
July 5th, 2016 16:07
To… (written on a train to Nottingham)
Tony36 said:
Great write, really enjoyed reading it
July 5th, 2016 11:24
Tony36 said:
Great write, really enjoyed reading it
July 5th, 2016 11:24
To… (written on a train to Nottingham)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AUBURN ~Wonderful first poem ~ great rhythm. As I read it I was on the train with you to Nottingham a great City ! Great rhyme pattern (in most verses) abab cdcd etc ~ which added to the rhythm. Great choice of words many of them train journey related (observe ~ swerve ~ slow ~ haste ~ station ~ eat ~ drink ~ travel etc). The train really was your muse in rhyme ~ rhythm ~ vocabulary etc. I love this poem ~ Thanks for sharing ~ more please. BRIAN
July 5th, 2016 10:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AUBURN ~Wonderful first poem ~ great rhythm. As I read it I was on the train with you to Nottingham a great City ! Great rhyme pattern (in most verses) abab cdcd etc ~ which added to the rhythm. Great choice of words many of them train journey related (observe ~ swerve ~ slow ~ haste ~ station ~ eat ~ drink ~ travel etc). The train really was your muse in rhyme ~ rhythm ~ vocabulary etc. I love this poem ~ Thanks for sharing ~ more please. BRIAN
July 5th, 2016 10:44
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