Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
A Smile in the Dark
Aryal Allen said:
I had to read the joke over to understand it. And though I did not smile or laugh at the joke, your apology made me smile. So, thank you. :-)
November 3rd, 2020 08:41
Aryal Allen said:
I had to read the joke over to understand it. And though I did not smile or laugh at the joke, your apology made me smile. So, thank you. :-)
November 3rd, 2020 08:41
Cleaning (A \"Twentet\" of a Thought)
Goldfinch60 said:
Thought provoking write Ben.
We all ask these questions of our selves but in my case I found the place within me many years ago and apart from the occasional \'tweak\' I am happy in my own mind.
Andy
November 3rd, 2020 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Thought provoking write Ben.
We all ask these questions of our selves but in my case I found the place within me many years ago and apart from the occasional \'tweak\' I am happy in my own mind.
Andy
November 3rd, 2020 02:05
Silent as the Grave (A Poem on the Dourest of Halloweens (2020))
Goldfinch60 said:
The sweets and fruit were ready for the witches and wizards when they knocked on the door but nobody knocked this year.
Good to see you back
Andy
November 2nd, 2020 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
The sweets and fruit were ready for the witches and wizards when they knocked on the door but nobody knocked this year.
Good to see you back
Andy
November 2nd, 2020 01:52
Silent as the Grave (A Poem on the Dourest of Halloweens (2020))
jarcher54 said:
tart it up--we don\'t say it that way in the USA but I laughed. I wonder how many horror movies they\'ll make based on the pandemic theme?
November 1st, 2020 08:40
jarcher54 said:
tart it up--we don\'t say it that way in the USA but I laughed. I wonder how many horror movies they\'ll make based on the pandemic theme?
November 1st, 2020 08:40
Garden (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking with flowers is so uplifting in our lives Ben.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking with flowers is so uplifting in our lives Ben.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 01:05
Garden (An Acrostic)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hi BEN - ANGELA here !
*You are nearer GODS HEART in a Garden
Than anywhereelse on Earth - AMEN !*
In my esperience that is very very true ! I can pray & medidtate much better in a GARDEN (especially in Spring / Summer) than in an old musty Church. Brian & I have been married 3 Months and have just bought our First House. It had a overgrown & neglected Garden. Brian is on *Lockdown* so he has spent a lot of time restoring the Garden and installing a Waterfall on the Patio Pond ! Im at work (Physiotherapist) so Im working with ORTHOPEADIC Patients not COVID 19. Thanks for sharing your lovely elegant Poem - very uplifting ! Please check Brians Poem *COFFEE MORNING OPEN* Thanks !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian !
June 25th, 2020 15:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hi BEN - ANGELA here !
*You are nearer GODS HEART in a Garden
Than anywhereelse on Earth - AMEN !*
In my esperience that is very very true ! I can pray & medidtate much better in a GARDEN (especially in Spring / Summer) than in an old musty Church. Brian & I have been married 3 Months and have just bought our First House. It had a overgrown & neglected Garden. Brian is on *Lockdown* so he has spent a lot of time restoring the Garden and installing a Waterfall on the Patio Pond ! Im at work (Physiotherapist) so Im working with ORTHOPEADIC Patients not COVID 19. Thanks for sharing your lovely elegant Poem - very uplifting ! Please check Brians Poem *COFFEE MORNING OPEN* Thanks !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian !
June 25th, 2020 15:04
Lockdown Blues (A Song)
Goldfinch60 said:
All I need for that is to hear it sung in a bar somewhere and me with a pint in my hand.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
All I need for that is to hear it sung in a bar somewhere and me with a pint in my hand.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 00:49
Lockdown Blues (A Song)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening AS - Thanks for a really classic Poem / Song ! You have won the *Lockdown Poem of the Week* Great Rhyme Pattern for a Singing Blues (x a a a) (x b b b) etc plus a chorus E e E e
V 1. One advantage of LD is spending more time in BED
V 2. Lots of New Faces on TV *Boris\' Boys & Girls*
V 3. Everything gets *Clapped Out* in the end !
V 4. WE dont want anymore T Roll stockpiling ! !
Thnaks for we have enjoyed singng it - could be a hit
Blessings & Love to You & Yours
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat
Please check out site ~ Thanks !
May 29th, 2020 17:54
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening AS - Thanks for a really classic Poem / Song ! You have won the *Lockdown Poem of the Week* Great Rhyme Pattern for a Singing Blues (x a a a) (x b b b) etc plus a chorus E e E e
V 1. One advantage of LD is spending more time in BED
V 2. Lots of New Faces on TV *Boris\' Boys & Girls*
V 3. Everything gets *Clapped Out* in the end !
V 4. WE dont want anymore T Roll stockpiling ! !
Thnaks for we have enjoyed singng it - could be a hit
Blessings & Love to You & Yours
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat
Please check out site ~ Thanks !
May 29th, 2020 17:54
Flicking
Goldfinch60 said:
But your flicking and clicking is combining with thinking and writing giving living in writing into my being.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
But your flicking and clicking is combining with thinking and writing giving living in writing into my being.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 01:35
New Friends in Lockdown
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write Ben, I totally agree with you, those new things we have found are so important at this time and should be treasured when normality returns.
Andy
May 23rd, 2020 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write Ben, I totally agree with you, those new things we have found are so important at this time and should be treasured when normality returns.
Andy
May 23rd, 2020 00:35
Right Around the Corner
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben, I do hope your scene will be intact, my scene seems to have improved, Nature\'s beauty seems to have been enhanced by the cleaner air, I do hope that continues when \'normality\' returns.
Andy
May 22nd, 2020 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben, I do hope your scene will be intact, my scene seems to have improved, Nature\'s beauty seems to have been enhanced by the cleaner air, I do hope that continues when \'normality\' returns.
Andy
May 22nd, 2020 00:06
Sleeping Sword – (in honour of all the armed forces, and emergency services for VE Day 75)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben and so true.
Andy
May 9th, 2020 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben and so true.
Andy
May 9th, 2020 00:26
Sleeping Sword – (in honour of all the armed forces, and emergency services for VE Day 75)
orchidee said:
A fine write Auburn.
May 8th, 2020 07:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Auburn.
May 8th, 2020 07:58
Emeralds and Sapphires
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, I love that first line \'inside my outside treasury\' that is the way I feel when I walk with My River. A treasure trove for free.
Andy
May 6th, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, I love that first line \'inside my outside treasury\' that is the way I feel when I walk with My River. A treasure trove for free.
Andy
May 6th, 2020 00:27
Solitary
Goldfinch60 said:
Being an \'old codger\' I am inside nearly all the time but I do go out for for a two mile speed walk in the morning and am able to get food from the shops.
Andy
April 26th, 2020 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Being an \'old codger\' I am inside nearly all the time but I do go out for for a two mile speed walk in the morning and am able to get food from the shops.
Andy
April 26th, 2020 00:20
Sober, An Acrostic
Thoughts In Time said:
Yes the show that we direct and watch unfold via choices we make ..🌹
October 12th, 2019 14:02
Thoughts In Time said:
Yes the show that we direct and watch unfold via choices we make ..🌹
October 12th, 2019 14:02
Ear Candy
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and I fully understand where you are coming from. Music in my life is so very important and can bring me a world of peace and love.
June 18th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and I fully understand where you are coming from. Music in my life is so very important and can bring me a world of peace and love.
June 18th, 2019 00:20
Mr. Men Song
Poetic Dan said:
More than enjoyed my friend, it was fantastically inspirational.
Top form, good show
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
May 28th, 2019 09:24
Poetic Dan said:
More than enjoyed my friend, it was fantastically inspirational.
Top form, good show
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
May 28th, 2019 09:24
And...(Yosser)
Edthepoet said:
Brilliant poetry Ben. Expertly written. And always choose the Tavern.
September 13th, 2018 08:18
Edthepoet said:
Brilliant poetry Ben. Expertly written. And always choose the Tavern.
September 13th, 2018 08:18
Butterfly
Syd said:
Hi there, this poem sounded a bit like an acid trip. Great write though.
Enjoyed - Syd
August 23rd, 2018 11:32
Syd said:
Hi there, this poem sounded a bit like an acid trip. Great write though.
Enjoyed - Syd
August 23rd, 2018 11:32
Burn Baby, Burn, Blighty Inferno!
Lorna said:
Spooky poem shadowing climate change!
July 31st, 2018 07:10
Lorna said:
Spooky poem shadowing climate change!
July 31st, 2018 07:10
The Adrenalin of Anthophila
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, bees are a blessing in our world.
June 13th, 2018 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, bees are a blessing in our world.
June 13th, 2018 00:47
The Adrenalin of Anthophila
willyweed said:
very clever write well done and insightful. ww
June 12th, 2018 09:14
willyweed said:
very clever write well done and insightful. ww
June 12th, 2018 09:14
The Desperate Man
Lorna said:
Very touching and sad....... I got a new slant on the homeless and down and out when I was commuting by train..... and so often they were such polite and lovely souls. The men were always the ones who would step aside for the ladies while the \"businessmen\" would bash their way through. My heart cried for them. They always seemed so grateful for a smile.
February 15th, 2018 09:01
Lorna said:
Very touching and sad....... I got a new slant on the homeless and down and out when I was commuting by train..... and so often they were such polite and lovely souls. The men were always the ones who would step aside for the ladies while the \"businessmen\" would bash their way through. My heart cried for them. They always seemed so grateful for a smile.
February 15th, 2018 09:01
The Loving Eight (The Kind Ghost)
Lorna said:
Thanks - consoling to think of love continuing........
February 7th, 2018 07:01
Lorna said:
Thanks - consoling to think of love continuing........
February 7th, 2018 07:01
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